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He Who Soars
Spoilers for those who haven't read the latest Wheel of Time book!
I've just finished the amazing book Towers of Midnights in the Wheel of Time Series. I rarely doing things like poetry but there was one scene that really touched my heart and it was when a wolf called Hopper died. I decided to make a tribute about the moment. The one that already was dead once And then had awoke in the world of dreams As he in the dream could fly around and bounce As the life is repeating its theme He who soars like the wind He who wants to fly like an eagle As the Slayer put on his grin As his arrow in its chest dingle From a distance as his friend saw it all His mission completed but in sorrow As his friend said his final call As his friend would be no more tomorrow As he realized his weapon wasn’t adequate He grieves the lost of his fallen master As he returned to the real world’s gate He knew he had to work faster Making a new hammer at the forge For the hammer is not only a weapon of war He decides to name it He Who Soars For his friend who’s now beyond afar He follow the tracks from where the Slayer have been And he knows that he will follow him till the end Times passes and The Last Hunt begins To avenge the death of his fallen friend |
I think I've heard of the Wheel of Time books, but never read them. So I can only critique a little on this.
The rhymes, as well as the half-rhymes, were pretty good. And I liked it's smooth flow. Wasn't the least bit difficult to read. And even though I haven't read the books, I still like the story in this poem. Very wonderful and dramatic. Sorry, but that's all I can review. Though I really hope a Wheel of Time fan comes by and reads this. :cer_smile: |
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