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Fog
For my college course I was required to write and record two songs (I'm a music student). I uploaded these lyrics here about two months ago, they haven't changed but I finally have the recordings uploaded to YouTube. So I thought it would be nice to get some feedback on the overall song, heres the link to the song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uv7o0PNMscE
If you do listen to the song, please excuse the out of key and overly reverbed vocals, I am most definately not a singer. Fog I saw, I saw the world, And while with blinded eyes, I walked, I wandered through, Searching for my demise, I walk around in circles, Seeing the same old new sights, I’ll walk this invisible world, Until it fades with the night, I fade, I fade in and out, Just riding my carousel, Waiting for the world to turn, And to be freed from your spell, I walk around in circles, Seeing the same old new sights, I’ll walk this invisible world, Until it fades with the night, I saw, I saw the world, But it never saw me, I walked, I wandered through, Roaming but never free, I walk around in circles, Seeing the same old new sights, I’ll walk this invisible world, Until it fades with the night. ----- I also included a lyrical analysis with the song, so I'll post it here if anyone is interested. Spoiler:
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Woah. That's a pretty cool song. Sounds like something from a ghost town.
And that old style guitar music just adds to how eerie it is. I know that your singing isn't very melodic, but it's still intriguing. Very well done! |
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