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Blaziken15 May 11th, 2011 1:51 PM

Chilly Spring Day
 
This song means a lot to me. It was written about a problem that happened at my school on May 5, 2011. If you want to here the story, PM me and I will tell you. But be prepared for sadness. Without further ado, here's my song, Chilly Spring Day.

Chilly Spring Day

Verse 1

I met her when I was 12 years old
I wanted to talk but my feet got cold
She knew that I had feelings for her
She didn't know who I was
She had zero intentions for love
And I had been hurt quiet enough
So I told her my feelings left
She was over filled with joy

We've been friends ever since
Oh, but I still love her
And I'm barely standing it

Chorus

My feelings started going away
Then she grabbed my hand on that freezing day
And the feelings just rushed back
A boy who's fallen madly in love
A girl who has feelings for another someone
And her love is to a good friend
Tomorrow will hurt more than it did today
'Cause I remember that one moment
On that Chilly Spring Day

Verse 2

Her crush had asked her out
But her mind wasn't made up
So she asked for my advice
I didn't know what to say
I decided to tell the truth
I told her he'd be lucky to have you
And that he's a great guy
She just smiled and told me thanks

Now they're dating 'cause of me
Oh, and my hearts broken
And this time beyond repair

Chorus 2

Walking her home in the utter darkness
Friends bothering but it didn't stop us
Yet she still didn't notice me
A boy who just wants her to see him
A girl who is clueless to what he's thinking
And all of this is killing me
Tomorrow will hurt more than it did today
'Cause I remember that one moment
On that Chilly Spring Day

Chorus 3

Writting this song begins the crying
Thinking about her starts the dying
What will she think of me
A girl who's dating the guy she wanted
A boy who gave up his chance so that she could be with him
Because her happiness comes first
Tomorrow will hurt more than it did today
"Cause I remember that one moment
On that Chilly Spring Day
Yeah that one moment
On that Chilly Spring Day

What do you think. Is it good? Please review my work.


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