The PokéCommunity Forums

The PokéCommunity Forums (https://www.pokecommunity.com/index.php)
-   Fan Fiction & Writing (https://www.pokecommunity.com/forumdisplay.php?f=20)
-   -   Can't wake up (https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=252770)

BattleBeard May 22nd, 2011 7:16 AM

Can't wake up
 
Where am I?
The dark.
This place is so cold...
I feel forgotten.

What happened?
Don't most Pokemon just faint?
I pushed myself.
Pushed myself too hard...

Was that the last battle I'll ever fight in?
My trainer relied on me...
That gym leader should have been defeated.
I was his last resort...

I pushed and pushed.
I GAVE AND GAVE...
and I lost...I failed him...

I'm gone.

forever

BattleBeard May 22nd, 2011 9:03 AM

It's about a Pokemon dead. Can't you tell?

TJgamer May 22nd, 2011 9:14 AM

I could tell pretty easily. It's so straightforward that you can't miss it.
But maybe a little bit too straightforward. As it takes a little bit of soul from it. But, no big deal.
Personally, I think it's an excellent concept. Seriously, people don't put Pokémon dying to much thought. It's rather unbelievable, but still very interesting.
Nice work.


All times are GMT -8. The time now is 2:13 AM.


Like our Facebook Page Follow us on Twitter © 2002 - 2018 The PokéCommunity™, pokecommunity.com.
Pokémon characters and images belong to The Pokémon Company International and Nintendo. This website is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Nintendo, Creatures, GAMEFREAK, The Pokémon Company or The Pokémon Company International. We just love Pokémon.
All forum styles, their images (unless noted otherwise) and site designs are © 2002 - 2016 The PokéCommunity / PokéCommunity.com.
PokéCommunity™ is a trademark of The PokéCommunity. All rights reserved. Sponsor advertisements do not imply our endorsement of that product or service. User generated content remains the property of its creator.

Acknowledgements
Use of PokéCommunity Assets
vB Optimise by DragonByte Technologies Ltd © 2023.