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YungKnowledge June 5th, 2011 12:26 AM

My Fantasy
 
Ds in hand.

Going into Fantasyland.

Leaving this world

And enjoying another

The time seem to be forgotten

and realizes I don't want to leave this

place I have created for my self.

Don't want the real world to come

calling and take me away.

From this Fantasy.

That is just mine.

TJgamer June 5th, 2011 1:16 PM

Nothing great. But nothing bad either. A mediocre poem.
It's pattern and rhyming scheme doesn't seem to work quite right.
I do like it's concept though. It's very nice and imaginative.
There's not much else I can say here, but, I'll give it a thumbs up. Good job!


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