The PokéCommunity Forums

The PokéCommunity Forums (https://www.pokecommunity.com/index.php)
-   Art Studio (https://www.pokecommunity.com/forumdisplay.php?f=21)
-   -   Cause I can't sing or dance (https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=254361)

marcc5m June 10th, 2011 4:41 AM

Cause I can't sing or dance
 
My stuff.

Maps
Oldest to newest:
Spoiler:
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/245/a/e/obsidian_cave_by_altariaking-d2xv6s7.png
An old cave map for an old hack that I'm now remaking. That means that at some time in the future, this map will be remade. It will be bigger, less linear and overall just a lot better.

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/352/6/f/nova_town_by_altariaking-d32hxl4.png
I've already re-done this. I'm not sure why I'm posting this actually.

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/356/1/3/route_401_redone_by_altariaking-d35g6wb.png
Ditto.

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/029/0/6/random_route_by_altariaking-d38bn62.png
A random route to test some tiles. I only now realize how horrible this map is...meh.

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/047/9/e/lunar_forest_v_2_by_altariaking-d39omky.png
Other than the mountains, I actually like this. My first decent map tbh.

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/144/a/6/defying_limits_by_altariaking-d3h4fm6.png
Made it to test Game Maker. Meh. Looks decent I guess.

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/178/6/2/my_best_map_ever__o_by_altariaking-d3k53p6.png
My best map ever. 'Nuff said.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/196/2/3/route_gt8_by_altariaking-d3sgd1g.png
Made for the GT8 Map-off. Obviously crap because I got 7th place.

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/199/4/6/random_starter_town_by_altariaking-d408fb7.png
Meh. I know about the error.

http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Littleroot-Town-174360547?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=1
I guess this is all right...

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/221/f/6/route_101_by_altariaking-d461bex.png
Too much flowers, take it back.


Sprites
Sprites from old to new:
Spoiler:
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/231/9/9/trazio_region_dex_by_altariaking-d3fmtif.png
My fakedex. This will be updated when I feel like it. Please keep in mind that Hamahorn, Monana, Soupato, Fire Dragon and Rocrush were NOT sprited by me. And credit to Jesgrad07 for the dex base.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/188/6/c/first_pmd_mugshot_by_altariaking-d3lbpsb.png
A PMD mugshot. Obviously crap because it got no comments or favs and only 12 views.


Tiles
Tiles from old to new:


That's all. Click images for credits.

Lord Varion June 10th, 2011 4:49 AM

These look good!
Was the spoiler thing really nessacary -_-''
and booshu reminds me of pikachu.

And i've seen hammerhorn in your hacks alot x3

tehGDS June 10th, 2011 4:54 AM

There are some Pokemon that needs some work, I don't really like Boovet and Rojay as much, it needs more design, as well as to smoothen it out, however there are some that I like, Cloakoon and Hamahorn are obviously well thought of, and the shading of them is also not bad! I liked those, Driblick looks like it has sludge on it's toungue, and Booshu looks like a Pikachu clone, Shellter also needs a different shell, it has a huge body with a small shell, Monana's Concept is good, however, there are some still spots, and needs to be smoothen out, all and all these concepts are GREAT ^ ^ however, there are some Pokemon that need some design changing

Dorandragon June 10th, 2011 9:05 AM

you have grass fighting and water rock, but you need to make fire flying now. it completes a full cycle of types. Fighting>Rock>Flying> Fighting/Grass>Water>Fire>Grass

Cyber Gorilla June 10th, 2011 1:46 PM

cant wait to see how shelltar turns out!, a lot of your fakes needs some AAing and shading touch ups, but so far the dex is looking awesome :D

Tetra June 10th, 2011 1:55 PM

It's looking really good, keep up the good work. :)

marcc5m June 19th, 2011 7:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nintendork15 (Post 6686572)
These look good!
Was the spoiler thing really nessacary -_-''
and booshu reminds me of pikachu.

And i've seen Hamahorn in your hacks alot x3

Thanks.
It's a Pikachu clone. :P
Hamahorn was in one hack you silly billy.

Quote:

Originally Posted by tehGDS (Post 6686575)
There are some Pokemon that needs some work, I don't really like Boovet and Robay as much, it needs more design, as well as to smoothen it out, however there are some that I like, Cloakoon and Hamahorn are obviously well thought of, and the shading of them is also not bad! I liked those, Driblick looks like it has sludge on it's toungue, and Booshu looks like a Pikachu clone, Shellter also needs a different shell, it has a huge body with a small shell, Monana's Concept is good, however, there are some still spots, and needs to be smoothen out, all and all these concepts are GREAT ^ ^ however, there are some Pokemon that need some design changing

You already told me this on msn :P
It's oil, it's based on a baby that licks oil from lamps. The idea is that the oil reacts with a chemical in its saliva, which helps it grow.
It's the actual snail part I'm concerned about...xD
Monana and Soupato were done ages ago, in a different style. They are being redone. :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dorandragon (Post 6686861)
you have grass fighting and water rock, but you need to make fire flying now. it completes a full cycle of types. Fighting>Rock>Flying> Fighting/Grass>Water>Fire>Grass

I could do that, but the fire starter has to be a chinese zodiac animal. :P

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cyber Gorilla (Post 6687244)
cant wait to see how sShellter turns out!, a lot of your fakes needs some AAing and shading touch ups, but so far the dex is looking awesome :D

Thanks. :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by atif (Post 6687255)
It's looking really good, keep up the good work. :)

Thanks. :)

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/170/8/7/pumpweeeeeeeeeee_by_altariaking-d3jbhwb.png

Click it. :)

tehGDS June 19th, 2011 7:50 AM

It's a pumpkin, so it'll be a fire Grass if you evolve it, so it'll have Guts as an ability as well?

Logiedan June 20th, 2011 3:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireworks (Post 6702007)

It's not bad but the two major problems is the dull expression of its eyes, after looking at its description of looking for Pokémon to play with, I think it should have a more playful or innocent expression. Here's my edit on the eyes and mouth.

http://i55.*.com/egq1s9.png

The stub on the top should be spread out as well;it looks like the points pause around the back. The selective outlining is superb though, matches the B/W style quite easily.

Spritezorabw July 6th, 2011 5:40 PM

They're good, but I agree with Lieden

PokeDarby July 8th, 2011 2:45 AM

Looks good, cant wait to see it when more is done.

Somni July 10th, 2011 7:56 PM

really like your ghost one and your baby lickitung!

MonsterMMORPG July 17th, 2011 1:06 PM

well i think they are pretty good :)

legendarypokemon August 2nd, 2011 8:04 AM

Your fakemon are nice. I really like driblick

marcc5m September 5th, 2011 12:10 AM

Time to bring this thread...
B|
Back from the dead.

YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/243/d/f/deadly_flatulence_by_altariaking-d48f2dg.png

I'll be editing the first post with tons o' fun later today.
Oh and the Gastly isn't public but if you really want to use PM me.

Truality September 5th, 2011 11:37 AM

Now then, let's get to work:
  • SHELLTER
    • Mostly fine, but the shell needs some more detail. Like a few curves or something.
  • ERSECT
    • Very good, perhaps a little less rectified.
  • CLOAKOON
    • That's a very creative...cabbage. But as far as spriting goes it's all right.
  • BOOVET
    • It's well-sprited as it stands, but because it looks so...empty and featureless, there's a lot of room for improvement.
  • HAMAHORN
    • The main issue here is the eyes. You could make them more intense, more colorful or bigger, but as it is I get the impression that it's trying to do something nasty xD
  • SOUPATO
    • This doesn't look like a pokemon to me at all...anyway. The legs need some sorting (they're not exactly well-placed), and the soup...it makes it look too blobby. Maybe if it wasn't full, but had some space...
  • VAMBAT
    • There are some slight issues with the shading here...you could make it less blurry and interesting by playing around with the hues.
  • MONANA (no comment)
  • DRIBLICK
    • This looks like a chibi (small) version of Lickitung with dirt in its mouth lol. The sprite is fine, but it's just the concept that needs improvement.
  • BOLDENCE
    • Hoho, meet walky rocky pants It looks very 2-D to me. Add some shading and depth to it. And the eyes...why are they crossed?
  • BOOSHU
    • I...I can't bring out a comment for this. Pikachu got a tan?
  • ROBAY
    • Probably your best sprite, it looks SO WELL MADE. Apart from being a bit plain, it's really close to canon. Congratulations.
That's about it. The names you come up with are pretty funny, too.

I could make an evo for VAMBAT if you'd like me to, I have something cool in mind.

marcc5m September 7th, 2011 1:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Truality (Post 6836906)
Now then, let's get to work:
  • SHELLTER
    • Mostly fine, but the shell needs some more detail. Like a few curves or something.
  • ERSECT
    • Very good, perhaps a little less rectified.
  • CLOAKOON
    • That's a very creative...cabbage. But as far as spriting goes it's all right.
  • BOOVET
    • It's well-sprited as it stands, but because it looks so...empty and featureless, there's a lot of room for improvement.
  • HAMAHORN
    • The main issue here is the eyes. You could make them more intense, more colorful or bigger, but as it is I get the impression that it's trying to do something nasty xD
  • SOUPATO
    • This doesn't look like a pokemon to me at all...anyway. The legs need some sorting (they're not exactly well-placed), and the soup...it makes it look too blobby. Maybe if it wasn't full, but had some space...
  • VAMBAT
    • There are some slight issues with the shading here...you could make it less blurry and interesting by playing around with the hues.
  • MONANA (no comment)
  • DRIBLICK
    • This looks like a chibi (small) version of Lickitung with dirt in its mouth lol. The sprite is fine, but it's just the concept that needs improvement.
  • BOLDENCE
    • Hoho, meet walky rocky pants It looks very 2-D to me. Add some shading and depth to it. And the eyes...why are they crossed?
  • BOOSHU
    • I...I can't bring out a comment for this. Pikachu got a tan?
  • ROBAY
    • Probably your best sprite, it looks SO WELL MADE. Apart from being a bit plain, it's really close to canon. Congratulations.
That's about it. The names you come up with are pretty funny, too.

I could make an evo for VAMBAT if you'd like me to, I have something cool in mind.



CRIT!
*Does happy dance*

I really don't like Shellter. It honestly just doesn't feel like a starter to me, so I'll be remaking it or scrapping it.

Rectified?

Lol it's a leaf pile :P

I redid it a while ago but I'm too lazy to add it to the OP, even with this edit.

All right, I'll try and fix the eyes.

Soupato is being completely redone. It was originally done for a hack so it was in 3rd gen style. Not only the sprite, but also the design will be redone.

I still don't know what hue means D:

No reply.

It's oil xD
It's based on a baby that licks oil from lamps. The idea is that the oil it licks contains a chemical which reacts with another chemical in its tongue and helps it to grow. Also...don't all babies look like smaller versions of their evos? xD

See first post :P

Booshu...I don't like Booshu.

Thanks :D
I edited it a bit, see first post.

It has an evo already, but if you can make a better one, go ahead :D


Massive update! See first post.

tnguye3 September 9th, 2011 3:57 PM

Looking forward to seein the completed fakedex. ^^
Altho i might suggest that you resprite Embeno as imo the fire looks like it was done in 1 min and the overall design is plain.
I'm not sure what it is but considering its typing, I geuss its a berry with a beak on?

Leechle should also be worked on as it looks like a bent cone. Again the design is too simple so I suggest a redesign or something. :)

Bilaterus September 14th, 2011 12:18 PM

Wow I really like the cave map and your tile sets are really good! Have you taken them from black and white? Wherever there from even the ones from the other maps are really good too, obviously layout wise. Although I think for for caves and mountains if you didn't pillow so much (I know in one map you said they were a bit messed but I mean the cave one and some other ones) it might look a bit more realistic.

Great job though altogether :)

marcc5m October 16th, 2011 5:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tnguye3 (Post 6842482)
Looking forward to seein the completed fakedex. ^^
Altho i might suggest that you resprite Embeno as imo the fire looks like it was done in 1 min and the overall design is plain.
I'm not sure what it is but considering its typing, I geuss its a berry with a beak on?

Leechle should also be worked on as it looks like a bent cone. Again the design is too simple so I suggest a redesign or something. :)

It's a chilli xD
But yeah it's getting redone.

Leechle too.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bilaterus (Post 6849353)
Wow I really like the cave map and your tile sets are really good! Have you taken them from black and white? Wherever there from even the ones from the other maps are really good too, obviously layout wise. Although I think for for caves and mountains if you didn't pillow so much (I know in one map you said they were a bit messed but I mean the cave one and some other ones) it might look a bit more realistic.

Great job though altogether :)

Thanks.
Pillow out?


http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Purrloin.png
Soft kitty warm kitty little ball of fur.
Sleepy kitty happy kitty purr purr purr.

eternityMMO October 16th, 2011 12:22 PM

Wow, those maps are awesome. It's full of details, I love how you placed the trees. Also the tileset looks very good. The colors are warm... Keep up with the good work! :)

marcc5m November 10th, 2011 11:09 AM

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/314/e/d/mummy_i_want_a_balloon_by_altariaking-d4fq8p2.png

Give credit if used.
I sprite too many purple Pokemon.

zigzagame November 17th, 2011 5:48 PM

love the map!!! Good Stuff.

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ November 22nd, 2011 7:11 AM


The Drifloon looks so adorable. i really love how you did this one. the only probably with this is that if you look closely at Drifloon's cloud on it's head, it has a slight bit of purple on it. Anyways, great job and keep up the work.


:t354:TG

marcc5m November 24th, 2011 4:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 6938943)



The Drifloon looks so adorable. i really love how you did this one. the only probably with this is that if you look closely at Drifloon's cloud on it's head, it has a slight bit of purple on it. Anyways, great job and keep up the work.


:t354:TG

Thanks. The purple is intentional :)


http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/328/2/8/a_scene_thing_by_altariaking-d4h6uqu.png
Trying to branch out more.


All times are GMT -8. The time now is 7:47 PM.


Like our Facebook Page Follow us on Twitter © 2002 - 2018 The PokéCommunity™, pokecommunity.com.
Pokémon characters and images belong to The Pokémon Company International and Nintendo. This website is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Nintendo, Creatures, GAMEFREAK, The Pokémon Company or The Pokémon Company International. We just love Pokémon.
All forum styles, their images (unless noted otherwise) and site designs are © 2002 - 2016 The PokéCommunity / PokéCommunity.com.
PokéCommunity™ is a trademark of The PokéCommunity. All rights reserved. Sponsor advertisements do not imply our endorsement of that product or service. User generated content remains the property of its creator.

Acknowledgements
Use of PokéCommunity Assets
vB Optimise by DragonByte Technologies Ltd © 2023.