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Desgardes December 21st, 2004 9:55 PM

Sora's story (a sprite comic)
 
hi, i made this comic, and i just wanna show it to everyone.

the issue links are shown below.

issue 1: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/desgardes/Comic.png

issue 2: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/desgardes/Comic2.png

issue 3: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/desgardes/Comic3.png

issue 4: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/desgardes/comic4.png

issue 5: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/desgardes/comic5.png

enjoy! plz post what you think afterwards.

Sawyer December 21st, 2004 9:59 PM

lol, i love the 3rd one! XD he falls into Sonic land! make the 4th one, make the 4th one!

Desgardes December 21st, 2004 10:02 PM

lol, dont worry, i will tommorow ill keep making for a while!

Sawyer December 21st, 2004 10:02 PM

yay! that's really awesome XD also a good idea. ^^,

Desgardes December 21st, 2004 10:03 PM

thanx for the comment. i appreciate it.

Suz December 22nd, 2004 9:35 AM

wow! thouse are great!
make more soon!!!!

(and have cheese in them! or hunny, Pooh likes hunny)

Sawyer December 22nd, 2004 10:20 AM

oooooo ooooo oooo put a cheese monster in, and make eggman appear XD

Lizzie December 22nd, 2004 10:30 AM

LOL the one iwth pooh is funny XD XD XD great job!

Desgardes December 22nd, 2004 1:39 PM

issue 4 is now posted.

enjoy!

PokemonChampion2K4 December 22nd, 2004 1:49 PM

thr forth one is funny 2000 rings LOL

Desgardes December 22nd, 2004 1:55 PM

thanx for the comment.

appreciate it.

Sawyer December 22nd, 2004 4:54 PM

w00t, that's awesome! XD make another one!

O December 22nd, 2004 9:19 PM

Hmmm... a quite good comic, you used text boxes and such. I'll give you a 8.5/10.

!Verb December 23rd, 2004 4:31 PM

LOL! I love #1, 3, 4 funny as hell. You know you should make a website with your latest releases etc... I've seen dozens of sites like that and some are good but some... eh..

Well anyways funny as hell whens the next?

Desgardes December 23rd, 2004 6:24 PM

yea thanx!

i dunno when the next when will be,

but it wont to be too long!

Shadow December 23rd, 2004 9:23 PM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png Now for another edition of 'Screw These Comics: PC Edition.' Today we're reviewing Sora's Story.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png No duh. We're reviewing another comic in the Sora's Story thread.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png -.- Anywas, a reminder first. This is just to review, point out errors, and help you make better comics. Critique is the word.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png So what we have here is a Kingdom Hearts-related sprite comic with Chain of Memories sprites.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordershadchaos.png Yup. The same game you and our backgrounds are from.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png SILENCE! What do we comment on first again?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png Going in STC fashion (which we're parodying, not copying >.>), sprites are first.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Rips from Chain of Memories and Sonic Advance.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordershadchaos.png The Pooh edit is small, but sweet.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png The sprites are used well, but bittages are mixed. Tails is from the Advance series, but the Tornado is from the Genesis era.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png And you are one to talk about mixed bittages... Sprites get a 5. Nothing too special, nothing too bad, just average. Now for backgrounds I supposed.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordershadchaos.png The first two have no backgrounds and the last two have backgrounds from Sonic.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png From Sonic 3 & Knuckles and Sonic Advance. Ending Movie from S3&K and Neo Green Hill Zone I believe...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordershadchaos.png Why is the sky flipped upside down in panels 3 and 4 in comic 3?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Because the sky is falling. Now go tell Ducky Lucky.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordershadchaos.png *runs off to find Ducky Lucky*
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png I can't beleive it worked. For background being only existant in half of the issues, they get half of the highest score. 5
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png For the story we have Sora not wanting to work with Disney (who owns his copyright and came up with the idea of Kingdom Hearts ironically) and running off to the Sonic world. Then some unseen voice sends Agent Pooh...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Mr. Sora. Welcome back. We missed you.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png ...Agent Pooh to get Sora back. Not that bad of a storyline so far. Not much has developed, but seeing as it's only the fourth issue, we can't expect too much. 8
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Special effect time! As always, there is none.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png There are those extra life icons in the corner when they're in the Sonic world...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Fine, it gets a 3. Characters. Sora hates Disney, Riku is jealous and ignored, Pooh is from the Matrix, Sonic is greedy, and Tails is also ignored.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png Once again, it is only the fourth comic so not much about the characters has been revealed. 6 Now for humor.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png There's some humor in there, but not enough to make you fall out of your chair laughing or anything. 5
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png *turns into the grammar police*
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png Time for spelling. Spelling isn't too bad. There's a misplaced apostrophe in the word isn't in comic 3, panel 6. Capitlization errors all around though,
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Looks like you on AIM. B...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png SILENCE YOUR PRATTLING! Spelling is mine! The bad capitalization gets a zero. Big fat zero.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Isn't that a bit harsh?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png *reverts back to normal self*
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png Uggh where am I?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png You were here, about to give spelling a 4.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png Right, a 4. Final Markings:

Sprites - 5
Pros: Decent usage
Cons: Nothing too special

Backgrounds - 5
Pros: Good backgrounds to go with the general idea of what's going on
Cons: No backgrounds in first and second issues

Story - 8
Pros: A decent storyline for only being four comics so far
Cons: Not too indepth yet

Special Effects - 3
Pros: Neat little life icons
Cons: No other effects

Characters - 6
Pros: No cliched BnG personalities yet
Cons: Not much revealed about characters yet being only 4 issues long

Humor - 5
Pros: It's funny at parts
Cons: Not too funny though

Spelling - 4
Pros: Good spelling
Cons: Bad capitalization

Overall - 5.1

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Wow, we were really leniant compared to the real STC.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png I'm surprised as well. This would be close to making it on their top ten list if we really worked there.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png Which would never happen because we're too nice, especially for being Heartless.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordershadchaos.png *walks up*
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordershadchaos.png I can't find Ducky Lucky, I forgot why I was looking for a duck with a rhyming name, and I'm hungry.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png OK, it lives with Mother Goose in an old boot, you we're looking to fight it, and lose terribly, and you can fry and eat the boot it lives in.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordershadchaos.png *runs off*
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcbordersghost.png That was fun. Wait a minute. You never answered why I can talk.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/stcborderrshad.png OK folks, that's all the time we have.

Desgardes December 23rd, 2004 10:54 PM

wow, that was a funny and good review!
(lol, ducky lucky from stinky cheese man book right?)

i hope to see you and heartless around here sumtime! lol

Purin December 23rd, 2004 11:08 PM

Those comics are funny! Loved every moment I was reading them ^^

Lonepichu December 23rd, 2004 11:35 PM

MORE MORE, I WANT MORE

Great so far ^^

Desgardes December 24th, 2004 12:07 PM

thanx guys!

ill probably finish the next issue later today!

!Verb December 24th, 2004 12:42 PM

n_n I'll be the first to criticize it lol

Desgardes December 24th, 2004 3:21 PM

The new issue, issue 5 is out!

enjoy!

Pichu1 December 24th, 2004 4:46 PM

they where so funny these comics are awsome cant wait for number 6 to come out

Desgardes December 24th, 2004 6:22 PM

yeah, #5 was more of a plot setter, i promise the next one will be funnier.

Elite Four Lance December 25th, 2004 3:24 AM

That´s cool. The third one was good. Nice pictures and all. ^^

!Verb December 25th, 2004 12:55 PM

the 5th was good but not funny (I know plotsetter) so can't wait till the 6th

Sawyer December 25th, 2004 12:59 PM

lol, issue 5 was awesome and funny. i don't know what Verb is talking about, i mean, Sonic would never hurt Knuckles XD

Suz December 25th, 2004 1:05 PM

-sits waiting for the 6th-

I'm waiting!
-continus siting-
and make a chesee monster like AC said!

!Verb December 25th, 2004 2:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ACManga
lol, issue 5 was awesome and funny. i don't know what Verb is talking about, i mean, Sonic would never hurt Knuckles XD

LOL well I mean compared to the previous ones, not really XD (no offense) I love the previous ones.


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