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Sorry
The rhyme scheme on this is kinda messed up, but eh.
Broken glass and bloody hands, Not even close to the answer I need, Can’t meet my own demands, Can’t give in to the beast I feed, Created by my own misdeed Penance given with these scars, So I can get to sleep at night, Crossed and broken by the stars, On my quest to make this right, Victim of their feverish light, A pale reflection of the past, Stares back into the dark, We stand apart in sharp contrast, Born by the same ill mark, Ready to disembark |
While true the rhyming scheme is a bit uneven, it's still very nice.
I really like this poem. Why? I don't know. The words are so simplistic, and yet, I can't really understand why I love them. Maybe it's the rhyming or the way everything is told. Okay, my opinion is pretty generic. But that's acceptable. There isn't too much to say about it, but, it's good. Very good! |
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