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The Hardest Choice I’ve Ever Had To Make
Just a short little poem about choosing your starter:
__________________ Today a new world was planted around me When I awoke the sun shined so brighter I was greeted with a new world’s reign And the hardest choice I’ve ever had to make Will you ignite a fire deep inside me? Or will you be able to put it out? Will you arise a forest inside me? Or will you summon a storm to send through it? Either way we’ll find out together When we go discover a new world Over the sea and through the forests And when we climb up towards the sun. |
Nice little poem. I especially like the last line - climbing up towards the sun kind of makes me think of a plant, so I wonder if the inference is that you chose the Grass-type. In either case . . . I'd suggest giving a little more expansion to each of the ideas put forward in the second stanza. It's all a bit vague and feels a little unfulfilling. I'd elaborate more but it's past midnight, so I hope I helped with what I could salvage from this morass of a brain to splatter out across my keyboard for you.
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You make some good points about the second stanza, to be honest with you the entire purpose of that stanza was to make a reference to the three different starter types (with "summon a storm" being a reference to Pikachu) but I'll try to put a bit more imagery in there when I rewrite this. Thank you very much for taking the time to post your thoughts :) |
I got what you were going for with the second stanza, yeah. I couldn't help but feel, though, that each of those could have done with its own stanza, as they're really the focal point of the poem and that doesn't quite come through when they're all in one little block like that.
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