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Hassan_Abdillah September 3rd, 2011 8:16 PM

Rain (short poem)
 
Rain, oh rain! You chime upon the distress of the day.
Rain, oh rain! You beat about the hearts that lay decayed.
Rain, oh rain! I'm lost, betrayed! Through whispers of my lust.
Rain, oh rain! Do come again! And cast away the rust!

Rain, oh rain! The fields awake beneath your misty flow.
Rain, oh rain! The seeds alike behold your knightly glow.
Rain, oh rain! Mercy from the Lord beyond the skies!
Rain, oh rain! Do not refrain! o coolness of my eyes!

Zeffy September 8th, 2011 3:14 AM

I adore the rain, and this poem simply describes what I want rain to do. I don't want rain to stop. I want more rain, and more. The poem was well-made, but the 'Rain, oh rain!" part somehow got too consistent. I would've liked it if it was after every one line. But oh well, I did not make this poem.


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