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mzmingle October 4th, 2011 11:04 AM

It all starts with imagination.
 
hi, welcome to my new poem and rap thread. It will mainly have poems, as it is in the poetry corner.

Poems

The Lunar Eclipse
The night is dark,
the sky is black,
but I can see something,
looks like its back.

Glowing softly,
red as copper,
I can see it clearly,
it looks improper.

Its beautiful,
the moon's not shining,
looking out,
the moon and sun are aligning.

The Night was dark,
the sky was black,
I saw something,
The lunar eclipse was back.

Raps

None yet



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darkpokeball October 21st, 2011 6:52 PM

Cool poem. I think that though you have an awesome start in poetry, you can get better. On 'the moon and sun are aligning' it kind of feels a bit...too long for the rhythm. Other than that, awesome! Keep writing!


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