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The Beta Thread (3.0)
The Beta Place! ~Relaunched~ Welcome to the Beta Place, the 3rd version of the original thread! Here, one can apply to be a beta reader - someone who reads a story before it is submitted to the Internet - or apply to get a beta reader for their fic. This system will hopefully make things easier for people willing to help others with their fic, or people who want help with their fic - whether if it's for another set of eyes to proofread, or major improvements in their fic. All previous Beta Readers will need to reapply, given nobody on it was active with beta reading. It is a relaunch after all! If you are willing to offer your services and have the time for it please apply. RULES: beyond the standard forum-wide and FF&W rules:
General advice as well:
BETA READERS: Category: Genre: Preferred method of contact: Examples of writing: Examples of reviews/beta-reports: Strengths/weaknesses (optional): Now, for what each one means... PLEASE READ! Spoiler:
Ok, now, to be a client. If you look at the list and already know who you want, and you contact them outside this thread, no worries. However, if you are undecided or want people to know you need a beta reader, use this application which should give the necessary information a beta reader may be interested in. CLIENTS: Title of Story: Fandom: Plot summary: Genre: Rating (PG, R, etc): Type of mentor needed: Writing sample of story: Other: (such as, how long you've been writing for, what you think your strengths and weaknesses in writing are - optional) Fandom refers to, for example, Pokemon, or others such as, say, Digimon. Genre - type of story - horror, Original Trainer, etc. Type of mentor needed - refers to the category section - do you want a Comprehensive beta reader, or a Proofreader, and so forth. Writing sample - please include at least a few paragraphs of the story you want beta-reading. So remember, post to apply to be a beta reader, or a client (unless you know who you want to contact here, of course). Communicate between yourselves then via PM or E-mail, and then notify me so I can update your status. Get posting people! MORE NEW BETA READERS NEEDED! CURRENT LIST OF BETA READERS: Comprehensive Beta Readers: [Mentors who are pretty good at all aspects of fiction. Best for very new writers or anyone in need of general help.] PhantomX0990 Preferred method of contact: PM Read more here psyanic - Also a Language Beta Reader/Proofreader Preferred method of contact: PM/VM Read more here Character Beta Readers: [Mentors skilled in character portrayal and development.] PhantomX0990 Preferred method of contact: PM Read more here Plot Beta Readers: [Mentors who can help with the development of plot twists, the story climax, and other problems with the storyline.] Grammar Beta Readers: [Mentors who can help with ironing out those pesky grammatical errors.] PhantomX0990 Preferred method of contact: PM Read more here Language Beta Readers: [Mentors who can help with the fine-tuning of language, including things such as description and dialogue.] PhantomX0990 Preferred method of contact: PM Read more here psyanic - Also a Comprehensive Beta Reader/Proofreader Preferred method of contact: PM/VM Read more here Proofreaders: [For the more experienced writers who need a second set of eyes and to offer a second opinion - usually aim to give a general overview of a work, but may focus on aspects the author particularly wants an opinion on or which they specialise in.] psyanic - Also a Comprehensive/Language Beta Reader Preferred method of contact: PM/VM Read more here |
CLIENTS SEEKING BETA READERS
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Title of Story: The Legend and the Apprentice
Fandom: Pokémon Plot summary: Things grow personal for this Pokémon Trainer when his Venusaur got badly injured by a Typhlosion. Genre: Journey fic Rating (PG, R, etc): T Type of mentor needed: Language, Description Writing sample of story: Quote:
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Title of Story: Pokemon: Explorers of the Shining Dawn
Fandom: Pokemon Plot summary: "Celia" the Eevee influences the minds and thoughts of various Pokemon in the Pokemon world as she tries to save them all. Genre: Mystery Dungeon Rating (PG, R, etc): K+ ! (10 year olds?) Type of mentor needed: ANY. Writing sample of story: What was I to do? State the plain truth and face execution? It was safer and easier to do when the pieces weren't in full view. I knew what this meant; I had to lie to whoever I met. How many feelings would be hurt? I'd rather hurt feelings than risk lives. They say that lying isn't a good thing. However, I like to think of it as "playing pretend," and this specific round of "pretend" could mean the demise of myself and millions if anything went wrong. Other: Stressing here that I've never written a fanfic. Yeah. |
Added to the list, the both of you!
But it's a bit moot if nobody is available to mentor you. C'mon guys! |
Title of Story: The Dark Prince
Fandom: Pokemon Plot summary: Spoiler:
Genre: Adventure...I think I am not even sure :x Rating (PG, R, etc): T according to fanfiction.net ratings Type of mentor needed: Someone who can find flaws in my story telling and point out the correct path.(They should not be fiddling with my story though,just point out the flaws) Writing sample of story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8004981/1/Romance_and_the_Pokemon_Master_Take_Two |
I'll apply to be a beta.
Category: Comprehensive, Language, Grammar, Character, all around. Genre: General, Fantasy, Adventure. (Pretty much anything) Preferred method of contact: PM/VM Examples of writing: [Taken from "Wabbajack" and "The Divine Champion"] Spoiler:
Spoiler:
Examples of reviews/beta-reports: Spoiler/links NOTE: I have A LOT more experience in this than what I've linked here. Thing is, most of it's on fanfiction.net, and I can't release it because the fics haven't been posted yet. I don't want to post someone's fic and spoil it or even get it... borrowed... DOUBLE NOTE: When I am actually someone's beta I go much further in depth than I do for the on site reviews. I work with the author, rather than just point out issues. Spoiler:
Example 2 Example 3 Strengths/weaknesses (optional): I am also a beta reader on fanfiction.net Strengths: Taught Creative Writing 2+ years; Lore (Many games, books, and genres); Combat Mechanics; Basic Grammar and Spelling; Story Planning; Character Development; Breaking Through Writer's Block I think that learning from mistakes is one of the best ways to learn. That being said I still read through material given with speed and a personal touch. I am willing to help you along with your story in any way possible, whether it be helping you with new ideas, or running over your fic with a fine grammatical comb. I am a bit laid back when it comes to my style of beta reading. I can/will curse because I just have a potty mouth like that, and I may be a bit short. It's never personal, or relating to the fic. You might catch more flies with honey, but you get better with vinegar. That made sense in my head, I swear. Examples of my beta reading - "Fang and Fox" by ShadowBlade911 Started beta reading around chapter three. Weaknesses: Time. I am 22 years old, and I work full time. I have rent and bills to pay, so if I don't respond quickly, show some respect. |
Approved! I'd just suggest adding a bit more explanation to why mistakes you find are wrong/why the fix is correct going off the examples in those two reviews, but I imagine you would do that anyway.
(And for future reference other sites reviews are fine). |
I've been meaning to be a beta reader for some time. Now's as good as any time, right?
Category: Comprehensive, language, proofreader Genre: I really like OT fics, and I can do Fantasy, Drama, Adventure, a bit of Sci-Fi if I'm up for it. These are for specific genres. Preferred method of contact: PM/VM, either one. Examples of writing: Hopping on Cloud Nine is a story I've worked on, and I'm not sure if I want to continue it at the moment. Either way, it's something. Some Stars is a story I just started. Examples of reviews/beta-reports: Here's a really long review I somehow mustered up. I think it's safe to say that's what most of my feedback will look like. Here is another review, where I'm rambling on and on, and it's fairly comprehensive. There's a touch of characters, plot, you name it. Strengths/weaknesses: I would say I'm speedy at reviewing, and I'll probably send you feedback within a week at the most, and that's when I start exams and I have to study. I suppose this is also a weakness, since I can overlook a few things, but I'll try my best. I promise. I'm online every day and that's a bonus. Also, I can help you with plots, characters, or anything else. However, grammar isn't my forte. I'm decent, but I'm not an English major or anything so I'll probably look over a few things. Overall, it's not too bad. I can catch a few mistakes here and there, but don't expect too much. |
Okay, I am accepting bigtukker's since they've already sent me their first chapter. I can accept one more so I don't over work myself.
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Added, psyanic!
And cheers for saying that, Phantom. Updates are always cool so that we don't have people left on the list for months when they might already have been taken. |
Title of Story: Night of the Red Moon
Fandom: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (EoS) Plot summary: Four months after defeating Darkrai, Team Firestorm are stunned to learn that he has returned, but Chloe's partner has to face a problem of his own. Genre: Adventure/Friendship Rating: PG-13 Type of mentor needed: Comprehensive beta reader Writing sample of story: Chloe and Chimchar climbed up the steps and started passing through the lush Treasure Town, almost everyone greeted them, Chloe and Chimchar happily greeted back with a wave. They had become rather famous and popular around here but that’s what saving the world twice does to you. Everyone in town knew their names even most of the travelling explorers who pass by. In fact a few of them asked for their autographs. Chimchar often joked that they now could be as famous as Dusknoir used to be if not more. Other:Grammer is my weakest area |
You've been added, Ashygirl!
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Ashygirl contacted me. So I'll be picking theirs up.
This means I won't be accepting any more betas for the time being. Hmmm, I need a beta reader pleeeeeaase. Title of Story: (May Change) Those That Came Before Fandom: Percy Jackson and the Olympians Plot summary: While Percy is cleaning out the Oracle's attic he finds a file labeled 1941-1945. The file contains the story of an unclaimed demigod who fought against the tide of evil in WWII. Genre: Adventure? Rating (PG, R, etc): PG-13 Type of mentor needed: Comprehensive/any Writing sample of story: Spoiler:
Other: I'd like to think that I'm an experienced writer, and this isn't my first fanfic. |
Thanks, Phantom! The list has been updated to reflect your changes.
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Hiya, I has a need for a Beta Reader
Title of Story: Pokemon: The Rest Of All Fandom: Pokemon Plot summary: What If? We've all asked ourselves this question, a simple mistake, for small it is, can lead humanity to its own doom. What if Team Galactic was never stopped? What if the Red Chain also controled Giratina? What if the world as we knew it has been reformed by Cyrus? What if there isn't any was to restore it? The Fic follows the adventures of Drew, a young boy that mysteriously woke up in Pallet Beach with no memory at all. Across his journey he will try to collect the badges from the remaining gyms of the Pokemon world... but little does he know of what Arceus has planned for him. Genre: Action with a bit of Mystery and a small bit of Comedy every now and then. A OT Fic, but with actual characters from the Pokemon World every now and then. Rating (PG, R, etc): PG-15 for bits of strong language and mild suggestive themes Type of mentor needed: Comprehensive Writing sample of story: Spoiler:
Other: English is not my first lenguage, in fact, it's Spanish, so I have grammar errors every now and then. I've been writing this in my laptop for over a year... but I'm now forced to restart since my hard drive broke and I lost every single bit of information in my computer. |
Added to the list, Vato!
Still looking for more mentors btw, guys. |
Category: Comprehensive, so basically, everything and anything.
Genre: Almost everything, really. My favorites, though, are hurt/comfort, angst, adventure, and fantasy. Preferred method of contact: PM me if you want me to beta for you and I'll give my email. :3 (In other words, email.) Examples of writing: Quote:
Strengths/weaknesses (optional): Although I don't have any particularly terrible weaknesses I do have strength in grammar and language. |
I'm open for business again.
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Updated that, PhantomX0990.
CyranoandArisu - I'm afraid we do need examples of reviews/betas for this, although note that reviews for fics can be easily made here and will do, and they don't have to come from this forum either). There's no need to rush with that either; take your time with getting those. |
Title of Story: Agents (it's a rewrite of one of my old fics.)
Fandom: Pokemon Plot summary: Joseph is just your average guy with uber-famous parents. However, when his mom and best friend are kidnapped, he and his sister step up and try to get them back. Of course, what follows next is anything but average. Genre: Adventure/Suspense. Rating (PG, R, etc): PG-13 Type of mentor needed: Comprehensive (the main problems I have are characterization and plot) Writing sample of story: Spoiler:
Other: My writing is dialogue-heavy. I'm usually good with character interactions and not much else. |
You've been added to the list, Electricmudkip.
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So, since I'm down to one beta overall I have a lot of extra time on my hands. I know I should pick an older posting, but Electricmudkip's request really interests me, and I think I can help them out best.
If Electricmudkip will have me of course! :P |
I'm looking for a Beta Reader for my new fanfic
Title of Story: Wise Guys (WIP, if aformentioned Beta Reader has a better title idea, I will consider their opinion) Fandom: Any Mafia movies, games etc.. Plot summary: This story follows the story of Francisco Botenzi, who was born to two Sicilian immigrants. Out of a job, Francisco, or Frank as he is called, is forced into finding creative ways to pay his bills, and is looking for something a bit better than the labour jobs his parents were forced into. Through connections, Francisco meets Emmanuel "Manny" Rennasino, who is a successful, business oriented wise guy. Frank has started working for Manny, in order to pay his bills and create a better life for himself then he had growing up. But Frank will come to see that it isn't easy in this business. Genre: Action, Crime Rating: M for violence, depictions of crime, coarse language, suggestive themes, alcohol references, sexual themes (nothing too hardcore) Type of mentor needed: comprehensive, plot, character Writing sample of story: Spoiler:
Other: This is my first fanfic, but I do have RP'ing experience so keep those things in mind. (Not to sound like a d!ck) I also tend to have short chapters as well |
Added to the list, WestsideConnection!
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