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Umbreon's Shadow February 23rd, 2005 10:50 AM

The random adventures of the x blaziken
 
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I started these crappy comics for fun,called the random adventures of the x blaziken.I need some critics to see if can make a decent comic.Some of them dont make sence but thats the idea.

Lizzie March 2nd, 2005 12:58 PM

This comic is okay, you have the humor, now all you need is a plot, I know you want it to be random, but the comic will die that way, no one will post to see your comic anymore even if it is funny. What you could do is make a plot, and yet humorusly random, it's possible, and it's a great rutine, try it on your next strip, I think you'll get the hang of it ^_^

Umbreon's Shadow March 2nd, 2005 2:41 PM

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Yeah maybe i should start some mini plot thingy,and i have another strip done

armadilloHD March 2nd, 2005 2:56 PM

This comic is...horrible...I'm sorry

The sprites don't move! :O You know since it's an X base you should have running sprites instead of black lines. The background is horrible. For gawds sake! Go to www.bghq.com for some already! You mixed bittages when you put zubat in an 8-bit comic. If there WAS an extreme violence scene then WHY wasn't there any blood anywhere. Lastly explosions DON'T HAVE A BLACK OUTLINE!!!

I made my point...

Umbreon's Shadow March 3rd, 2005 12:42 AM

I know they suck,but i still havent done runing blaziken,but i will try using another background and other efects and you will understand why.

Enix-Zae March 3rd, 2005 12:48 AM

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Originally Posted by armadilloHD
This comic is...horrible...I'm sorry

The sprites don't move! :O You know since it's an X base you should have running sprites instead of black lines. The background is horrible. For gawds sake! Go to www.bghq.com for some already! You mixed bittages when you put zubat in an 8-bit comic. If there WAS an extreme violence scene then WHY wasn't there any blood anywhere. Lastly explosions DON'T HAVE A BLACK OUTLINE!!!

I made my point...


Uhuh, i have to agree with you 100% there, and also, thanx for the site. I needed some new backgrounds ^^

Umbreon's Shadow March 3rd, 2005 1:47 AM

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I am doing many changes to the comic,since from this comic to the future begins a real adventure,and im posting the strip of that adventure.

Enix-Zae March 3rd, 2005 2:57 AM

Its better, but you really should box your text. It is a bit hard to read in the corners when it overlaps the mountains. Other than that, you are getting a bit better :P. Practice makes perfect ^^


edit- btw, whats up with all those wird yellow squares?

Lizzie March 3rd, 2005 4:20 AM

Yay! you finally got the hang of it! ^_^ It's great that you made an opening scene, and I still love the humor! I just think you might not want to do: *devours hotdog* instead of doing that, you could actuley show him devourning a hotdog. Anyway as Aviex said, you should box the words so we know who's talking and so it's easier to read. I'm so happy that you're getting better! You'll be a pro at this in no time ^_^

armadilloHD March 3rd, 2005 1:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Lizzie
Yay! you finally got the hang of it! ^_^ It's great that you made an opening scene, and I still love the humor! I just think you might not want to do: *devours hotdog* instead of doing that, you could actuley show him devourning a hotdog. Anyway as Aviex said, you should box the words so we know who's talking and so it's easier to read. I'm so happy that you're getting better! You'll be a pro at this in no time ^_^

No you can't become a pro in no time. It takes months and even years of devotion to your comics to make them good enough for pro. Anyway, yeah you need text boxes, and you can't have random things popping up like "Devours hotdog" because, that ain't funny. And you are once again mixing bittages. STICK TO 8 BIT OR MAKE THE SPRITES BETTER!!! I say! :P

Umbreon's Shadow March 3rd, 2005 1:11 PM

Did you actually understand what i(read:that death guy) sayed in the comic?i know im mixing bittage,but thats actually the point,to make this comic as random as possible,wierd and for that im mixing all those things.In anycase thanks for rating it

Marth123 March 6th, 2005 3:14 PM

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Originally Posted by armadilloHD
No you can't become a pro in no time. It takes months and even years of devotion to your comics to make them good enough for pro. Anyway, yeah you need text boxes, and you can't have random things popping up like "Devours hotdog" because, that ain't funny. And you are once again mixing bittages. STICK TO 8 BIT OR MAKE THE SPRITES BETTER!!! I say! :P

Armadillo, there's something called 'flamming' at the pc, it's when you disagree with someone and use caps in sentences at the same time, not only have I seen you do this more than once, I've seen people try to correct you and still you don't seem to listen to them, if you don't stop flamming soon i'm going to report you.

armadilloHD March 6th, 2005 3:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Marth
Armadillo, there's something called 'flamming' at the pc, it's when you disagree with someone and use caps in sentences at the same time, not only have I seen you do this more than once, I've seen people try to correct you and still you don't seem to listen to them, if you don't stop flamming soon i'm going to report you.

What's wrong with your wording, is that I DO have a right to disagree with someone. And I type in caps because people don't seem to see my tips. I'm not afraid of report threats, because I'm not doing anything wrong. Besides, I wasn't talking in all caps. I said that sentence in all caps because I was trying to make a humorous point. So be quiet, I have a right to voice my oppinion. And I have no clue what "flamming" means but I know what "flaming" means...I'm not stupid...

On other notes. I wanna see how you improved death. It's been a while since you made a comic.

Oh and as a mod would say "Acting like a mod is just as bad as spamming"


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