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The random adventures of the x blaziken
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I started these crappy comics for fun,called the random adventures of the x blaziken.I need some critics to see if can make a decent comic.Some of them dont make sence but thats the idea.
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This comic is okay, you have the humor, now all you need is a plot, I know you want it to be random, but the comic will die that way, no one will post to see your comic anymore even if it is funny. What you could do is make a plot, and yet humorusly random, it's possible, and it's a great rutine, try it on your next strip, I think you'll get the hang of it ^_^
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Yeah maybe i should start some mini plot thingy,and i have another strip done
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This comic is...horrible...I'm sorry
The sprites don't move! :O You know since it's an X base you should have running sprites instead of black lines. The background is horrible. For gawds sake! Go to www.bghq.com for some already! You mixed bittages when you put zubat in an 8-bit comic. If there WAS an extreme violence scene then WHY wasn't there any blood anywhere. Lastly explosions DON'T HAVE A BLACK OUTLINE!!! I made my point... |
I know they suck,but i still havent done runing blaziken,but i will try using another background and other efects and you will understand why.
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Uhuh, i have to agree with you 100% there, and also, thanx for the site. I needed some new backgrounds ^^ |
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I am doing many changes to the comic,since from this comic to the future begins a real adventure,and im posting the strip of that adventure.
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Its better, but you really should box your text. It is a bit hard to read in the corners when it overlaps the mountains. Other than that, you are getting a bit better :P. Practice makes perfect ^^
edit- btw, whats up with all those wird yellow squares? |
Yay! you finally got the hang of it! ^_^ It's great that you made an opening scene, and I still love the humor! I just think you might not want to do: *devours hotdog* instead of doing that, you could actuley show him devourning a hotdog. Anyway as Aviex said, you should box the words so we know who's talking and so it's easier to read. I'm so happy that you're getting better! You'll be a pro at this in no time ^_^
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Did you actually understand what i(read:that death guy) sayed in the comic?i know im mixing bittage,but thats actually the point,to make this comic as random as possible,wierd and for that im mixing all those things.In anycase thanks for rating it
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On other notes. I wanna see how you improved death. It's been a while since you made a comic. Oh and as a mod would say "Acting like a mod is just as bad as spamming" |
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