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Tsukasa February 28th, 2005 7:43 PM

MegaMan Comic!
 
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Ok all comments are cool i could always use improvement but like it says this is my first ever sprite comic

Lizzie March 2nd, 2005 4:01 AM

Lol!!! It's soo funny! XD! I like the charectors and backround a lot, the intro was done with great humor, I think you might want to make the words a little bigger, it was kinda hard to read what they were saying. Anyway, amazing job! I really can't wait to see more! ^_^

Izzy March 2nd, 2005 4:38 AM

The fourth wall has already been broken... Characters need more emotion... Background is bad... humor is bad...

But sprite usage is overall good, fix those problems, and you should be a good comic maker in no time.

Lizzie March 2nd, 2005 12:49 PM

I agree, the sprites need more emotion when speaking to each other, the humor isn't that bad, anyway, yes you do need to fix the charectors emotion, bit more humor, and fix their font speeches. Other than that your comic is fine ^_^
Edited: thanks guys, i'm sorry I acted so stupid

Izzy March 2nd, 2005 2:24 PM

Seriously, though, I was giving him critism on what he should and should not do

armadilloHD March 2nd, 2005 3:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Lizzie
>_< seriously, backround doesn't matter, as long as the humor and sprites (actuely sprites don't really matter either in most cases) are okay then the comic is fine. I agree that the sprites need more emotion when speaking to each other, the humor isn't that bad, he said it was his first comic, you can't expect him to be amazing. Anyway, yes you do need to fix the charectors emotion, bit more humor, and fix their font speeches. Other than that your comic is fine ^_^

STOP WITH THE "It doesn't need background" THING! Sprite comics need to be SPRITE COMICS. Every single sprite comic to be called a sprite comic must have.

A. Sprites (Duh)
B. Backgrounds
C. Some what of effects
D. A plot/story/joke
E. Text
G. Text BOXES (Just a line drawn to text isn't enough)
H. Some kind of feel in the charactors (Emotions)
I. No stale or easily forgotten charactors (Unless for a cameo)

Without these, it is not a Sprite Comic, it is a random useless jumble of sprites with lines and text. Take these into consideration, I don't consider this a sprite comic yet...

Edit: I don't CARE if this is your first comic. Whether it's your first or your 121st I judge all comics EQUALLY

Lizzie March 3rd, 2005 4:25 AM

I'm sorry, you're right, I thought backround didn't matter because i've seen comics with amazing plots and charectors, but really bad backround. Anyway I guess you know comics better than I do, i'm sorry, I'll try to be a bit more like you and a bit less stupid XD

Enix-Zae March 3rd, 2005 12:14 PM

personally, i beleive that the background wasn't THAT bad, ive seen many worse and all it really needed was a line deviding the wall from the floor. Also, i really dont like the text, i dont know what it is but i can read it, but it just doesn't look right :(

armadilloHD March 3rd, 2005 12:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lizzie
I'm sorry, you're right, I thought backround didn't matter because i've seen comics with amazing plots and charectors, but really bad backround. Anyway I guess you know comics better than I do, i'm sorry, I'll try to be a bit more like you and a bit less stupid XD

I know what you mean...like "The primer chronicles" is a good example. But it has to have SOME kind of background. But you said it like it didn't need one

Skitty Boy March 5th, 2005 3:47 PM

Awesome job! 9/10. Keep it up.


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