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Ok all comments are cool i could always use improvement but like it says this is my first ever sprite comic
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Lol!!! It's soo funny! XD! I like the charectors and backround a lot, the intro was done with great humor, I think you might want to make the words a little bigger, it was kinda hard to read what they were saying. Anyway, amazing job! I really can't wait to see more! ^_^
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The fourth wall has already been broken... Characters need more emotion... Background is bad... humor is bad...
But sprite usage is overall good, fix those problems, and you should be a good comic maker in no time. |
I agree, the sprites need more emotion when speaking to each other, the humor isn't that bad, anyway, yes you do need to fix the charectors emotion, bit more humor, and fix their font speeches. Other than that your comic is fine ^_^
Edited: thanks guys, i'm sorry I acted so stupid |
Seriously, though, I was giving him critism on what he should and should not do
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A. Sprites (Duh) B. Backgrounds C. Some what of effects D. A plot/story/joke E. Text G. Text BOXES (Just a line drawn to text isn't enough) H. Some kind of feel in the charactors (Emotions) I. No stale or easily forgotten charactors (Unless for a cameo) Without these, it is not a Sprite Comic, it is a random useless jumble of sprites with lines and text. Take these into consideration, I don't consider this a sprite comic yet... Edit: I don't CARE if this is your first comic. Whether it's your first or your 121st I judge all comics EQUALLY |
I'm sorry, you're right, I thought backround didn't matter because i've seen comics with amazing plots and charectors, but really bad backround. Anyway I guess you know comics better than I do, i'm sorry, I'll try to be a bit more like you and a bit less stupid XD
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personally, i beleive that the background wasn't THAT bad, ive seen many worse and all it really needed was a line deviding the wall from the floor. Also, i really dont like the text, i dont know what it is but i can read it, but it just doesn't look right :(
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Awesome job! 9/10. Keep it up.
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