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pokemon r May 17th, 2015 7:53 AM

Pokemon ash's adventure
 
Introduction
Hi, I've been working on a hack of FireRed for a Pokemon Anime Version of the game that basically follows the same events of the anime. I see that there have been hacks like this already, so I'm not sure how good mine would be in comparison. But I started this because I wanted to make a hack which follow ash lineup, to see just how it would go.

I'm going to cover the events from each episode in the Kanto and Hoenn series. The story follows the same one as the anime, including events, etc.

Story

You are Ash Ketchum. You're about to embark on your Pokémon adventure. Unfortunately, you stayed up all night watching Pokémon matches and woke up late! With all your rivals from Pallet Town taken all the starters available,so it seen that you need to go home but you can still choose pikachu. All adventures will continue till Hoenn region end .....
Features
Cover from session 1 to session 9
-Play as Ash Ketchum
- Have the opportunity to catch all of the Pokémon Ash does
- Follows the same events as in the Anime Series and be rewarded with special events/items for carrying Ash's team
- New Tiles
- New Sprites
- New Map
- Team rocket is now more stronger
-team rocket dig plan to catch pikachu is also


Hack tools
APE
A-Text
Advance Map
OverworldEditor Rebirth Edition
UNLZ
XSE
YAPE
A-Trainer
Item Editor
NTME
TileMolestor
DayAndNight
Attack Type Editor
NSE
Hex Workshop
Fire Red Hacked Engine

Credit
Tiles:tilergirl
Pokemon-Diamond
BoOmxBiG
SL249
Alucus
xAlien95
(Bj for logo)


Fb page
https://m.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1472512633040670


Screenshots


Support:
Indian Mew
warlockopain.



Bannars


Pallat town




Route 1



VARIDIAN CITY MAP




LEAVE YOUR REVIEW DOWN
AND IDEAS FOR ADD SOME NEW THING

pokemon r May 19th, 2015 7:30 AM

Work has started

Guys post on this hack

Bobsomeness May 19th, 2015 3:42 PM

Nice screenshots! I think you should add the trainers that always follow him around in the anime trailing behind him, just like that Pikachu.

Best of luck tho!

pokemon r May 19th, 2015 11:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BobBobberson (Post 8757893)
Nice screenshots! I think you should add the trainers that always follow him around in the anime trailing behind him, just like that Pikachu.

Best of luck tho!


Thanks I will try to add Brock character to follow ash but it need a hard work on script I will try if I can.I will also try to add miatry and may character if I get a team on this hack otherwise I only add pickchu and brock character to follow ash

pokemon r May 20th, 2015 1:16 PM

Guys leave your review plz

Famon May 21st, 2015 1:11 AM

Give player a choice to date 3 girl--

---Misty

---Gisslle

---Duplica

pokemon r May 21st, 2015 2:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Famon (Post 8759850)
Give player a choice to date 3 girl--

---Misty

---Gisslle

---Duplica

No it not possible because there is no gisslle and duplica follow ash from kanto to hoenn region I just do this that misty will follow ash till jhito region end and from hoenn region may take place instead of misty and it is a game of pokemon not dating a girl so I can't do this I follow all adventure of ash from kanto to hoenn in this there is no date

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 22nd, 2015 7:37 AM

hey best of luck

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 22nd, 2015 7:43 AM

hey If you can make pikachu and Brock follow you .you can change pikachu to misty because pikachu can climb on ash's shoulder

looneyman1 May 22nd, 2015 8:42 AM

On the matter of characters following, I think that can be done, if one finds a way to emulate the coding that allows for double tag battles as seen in the 4th gen games, like with Riley at Iron Island for example. A 1st gen hack I played a while back does a scheme similar to RPG games like final fantasy and has other characters seemingly "go into" the main character where they then pop back out if a certain event requires said character. That might be worth considering as well.


The latter idea may be ideal when we factor that Pikachu needs to follow outside the pokeball, something most anime hacks have not yet been able to do since this was a mechanic that was only re-introduced in the latter part of gen 4 after years of lack of use since Yellow. Having too many characters actually following the main will more than likely slow the game down a lot or be too buggy.


EDIT: Also if you plan to stick tot he fire red game as a base, be wary that it might help to change up how EVs work or to leave them out entirely as EV training is sorta essential to a strong team even when not playing competitively. A lot of anime based games end up having quite a difficulty spike, so working to find an answer to how to EV train proper in this hack would do wonders since the EV reducing berries do not exist in any third gen game besides Emerald. I hear JPan's hacked engine has a means to rectify this, I remember someone saying one could use that to do something similar to X/Y's super training but I've never had the chance to see for myself what it entails.


Another idea to try is to ask Mr.DollSteak for support as his rom base is popular for all sorts of things. Though the rom base alone only works on vanilla fire red, to have it work to your specifications would require his direct support.

pokemon r May 22nd, 2015 10:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by INDIAN MEW (Post 8762054)
hey If you can make pikachu and Brock follow you .you can change pikachu to misty because pikachu can climb on ash's shoulder

Yes it right that pickachu always on ash shoulder but in game pikachu just follow ash I will also try to add misty character if I get team to work with me

Zehn May 22nd, 2015 1:16 PM

Don't message me to ask me to work on your hack again

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 22nd, 2015 11:30 PM

how its looking

signature

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 22nd, 2015 11:55 PM

how its going

pokemon r May 23rd, 2015 2:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by INDIAN MEW (Post 8763080)
how its going

Going good me and my team is working hard to release first alpha

Spherical Ice May 23rd, 2015 7:22 AM

These screenshots have been stolen from this hack; if you want this thread to remain open please take them down, as the owner of said hack has contacted me with proof. It's against our rules to steal the content of other hackers.

pokemon r May 24th, 2015 12:40 AM

Guys I am using new tiles which are changes from
All others games and still not used in other
Game when I releases my screen short you can saw that the new tiles are awesome and new Pokémon center interior shape and the team rocket is more power full from now in game
Thanks

Guys I forgot to tell one thing that the all gym are changed form each other

U.Flame May 24th, 2015 5:48 AM

Wait, you stole the screenshots, or the actual content? Either way, why would you?

Anexenaumoon May 24th, 2015 7:03 AM

Like the idea! But....why bother to steal screenshots?...

pokemon r May 24th, 2015 10:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anexenaumoon (Post 8764957)
Like the idea! But....why bother to steal screenshots?...

ohh brother leave it I don't slole screen short I download pic from google I don't know it belong to any thread if I know that I don't do this I just download that pic from google and put in thread till I don't able to put my own game screen short thanks from now I am sorry and please stop this and focus. On rom hacking

pokemon r May 24th, 2015 12:11 PM

Guys NOW COME BACK TO HACK I got a team work and we are working soon we uplord some interesting thing of only this game

pokemon r May 24th, 2015 1:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Team Fail (Post 8765350)
I hate to burst in here like this, but the reason why people are making a big deal of it is for a few reasons.

1. Within the first 9 words of your opening post, you state that you are working on a hack.

This means that you've made progress (Such as maps, scripts, etc). If you're using someone else's screenshots to show your progress, it's not fair on their behalf because you're essentially stealing it and passing it off as your own. Yes, finding it on Google and claiming it as your own IS stealing. No ifs, ands or buts. No exceptions of any kind.

2. If you're stealing screenshots off of Google, then what's the point of stating that it's your progress? You didn't make it. Simple as that. If you wanted to show your progress, you would have played your hack, took screenshots, uploaded them, and linked them here. Using someone else's screenshots to advertise your hack makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. Even if your images are unfinished (Such as a missing tile or two, or an early screenshot of a map), it shows that you've modified the game in some way and will attract people in that regard.

3. As Delta mentioned, and I'll chime in on this too, PMing people as you were to ask for help isn't the most professional way of going about getting team members for a hack. I got the two PMs you sent me, but I'm simply not interested that much in Rom Hacking anymore like I once was. If you're wanting help for your hack, there's a place here to ask for that. PMing people is not that place. Besides, not all members here are Rom hackers.

Now, with all that said and done, I do wish you the best of luck on your hack. Just remember to credit anything that isn't yours, be kind and respect other members, and your hack will be successful.

Thanks , lot of people think that this hack is dump
And I am not working on this hack but I will prove this that I am working soon my all adding will completed and then I will add screenshots and my own hack.from now I don't team because I already got 6 to 7 team member in my hack team in my hack team their are 2 beta tester and other are experienced hacker but I am new and I work to learn hacking 6 month and now I am ready for hacking soon I will release screenshot

Anexenaumoon May 24th, 2015 2:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8765430)
Thanks , lot of people think that this hack is dump
And I am not working on this hack but I will prove this that I am working soon my all adding will completed and then I will add screenshots and my own hack.from now I don't team because I already got 6 to 7 team member in my hack team in my hack team their are 2 beta tester and other are experienced hacker but I am new and I work to learn hacking 6 month and now I am ready for hacking soon I will release screenshot

Team Fail, nor did myself ever call your hack "dump" at all. We were just wondering why you took someone's screenshots... of a different hack in which it doesn't show any progress on your own... Good that you got team members going although, wish you luck.
~Anexenaumoon

pokemon r May 24th, 2015 2:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anexenaumoon (Post 8765461)
Team Fail, nor did myself ever call your hack "dump" at all. We were just wondering why you took someone's screenshots... of a different hack in which it doesn't show any progress on your own... Good that you got team members going although, wish you luck.
~Anexenaumoon

I don't say he call he is a nice person I said sorry for that and please from now I want to focus on my hack I said sorry for that and my own progress will show you soon

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 25th, 2015 2:05 AM

yeah page updated

http://www.facebook.com/pokemonashadventures

pokemon r May 25th, 2015 2:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8765475)
I don't say he call he is a nice person I said sorry for that and please from now I want to focus on my hack I said sorry for that and my own progress will show you soon

Good job Indian mew
Quote:

Originally Posted by INDIAN MEW (Post 8766133)


warlockopain May 25th, 2015 3:29 AM

Good lick for the hack bro !! Im always there to help u !! And finally now we have the rom hack's official fb page!! This hack is going to b a great success

pokemon r May 25th, 2015 8:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by warlockopain (Post 8766185)
Good lick for the hack bro !! Im always there to help u !! And finally now we have the rom hack's official fb page!! This hack is going to b a great success

Yeah we are working hardly to make this hack the world best anime hack

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 25th, 2015 8:19 AM

I am waiting for first screen shot and fist alpha

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 25th, 2015 9:10 AM

FB group done

https://m.facebook.com/groups/112313562434618?_e_pi_=7%2CPAGE_ID10%2C4284281054

pokemon r May 25th, 2015 1:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by INDIAN MEW (Post 8766490)
I am waiting for first screen shot and fist alpha

Your waiting will over soon as we release just little more wait then screenshot will release with new
Style
And alpha will release after I complete till
viridian forest. But first alpha will release in next month and screen shot are coming out in this month soon

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 27th, 2015 1:13 AM

I think you need to ad FB group and page with image in intro

we are going to great succsess

hey I think u need to use HTML and BB codes to do ad pics

https://scontent-lax1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xft1/v/t34.0-12/11351309_441654382673599_103026561415192239_n.jpg?_e_pi_=7%2CPAGE_ID10%2C5826048600

https://scontent-lax1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xft1/v/t34.0-12/11351309_441654382673599_103026561415192239_n.jpg?_e_pi_=7%2CPAGE_ID10%2C5826048600

post reviews to begin

Spherical Ice May 27th, 2015 1:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by INDIAN MEW (Post 8769031)

Stop flooding the thread with short, useless posts; use the edit button.

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 27th, 2015 6:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spherical Ice (Post 8769035)
Stop flooding the thread with short, useless posts; use the edit button.

OK friend

Slyarch May 27th, 2015 6:50 PM

oh wow this is old you cant compete with Pokemon ash gray and naraja its impossible im thinking you guys are some kids.... who want to make a hack sorry but that's what i feel and anyways go study kids quit this and make an actual story line take writing classes/ programming to AND STOP SENDING PMS TO EVERYONE BECAUSE NO NE WANTS TO WORK ON A STUPID HACK THAT ALREADY EXITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pokemon r May 27th, 2015 10:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UAREMAD (Post 8770152)
oh wow this is old you cant compete with Pokemon ash gray and naraja its impossible im thinking you guys are some kids.... who want to make a hack sorry but that's what i feel and anyways go study kids quit this and make an actual story line take writing classes/ programming to AND STOP SENDING PMS TO EVERYONE BECAUSE NO NE WANTS TO WORK ON A STUPID HACK THAT ALREADY EXITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

We don't ask you what to do Our hack is going good and we don't need help of yours

warlockopain May 27th, 2015 11:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UAREMAD (Post 8770152)
oh wow this is old you cant compete with Pokemon ash gray and naraja its impossible im thinking you guys are some kids.... who want to make a hack sorry but that's what i feel and anyways go study kids quit this and make an actual story line take writing classes/ programming to AND STOP SENDING PMS TO EVERYONE BECAUSE NO NE WANTS TO WORK ON A STUPID HACK THAT ALREADY EXITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


See everyone gets angry , u,me and infact everyone so. Im not a got nor a superior and even u r not a god. Bro i would like to say something to u. 1st of all u SHOULD NEVER DISCOURAGE ANYONE wether they r bigger or smaller than u. 2nd of all u should respect every person in d world. And btw if he cant compete with ashgray and naranja , then it doesnt matter, its his wish and interest. We need more people like him who are filled with innovative ideas and technologies.Bro always remember d world can develop only if u more interest/technologies. What if this hack becomes famous even more than Ash Gray? What if this hack contains more proper tiles or skins?We never know.If u keep on comparing everything then y dont u compare Liquid crystal and crystal dust? both or same ! add heart gold too even that is same.... just few more things in other hack thats it... And if u want to fight then fight in private not in public. What i want to say is thatJust stop discouraging people and u will always Succeed in your life !! :)

Im sorry if u or any one felt bad !

pokemon r May 28th, 2015 12:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by warlockopain (Post 8770451)
See everyone gets angry , u,me and infact everyone so. Im not a got nor a superior and even u r not a god. Bro i would like to say something to u. 1st of all u SHOULD NEVER DISCOURAGE ANYONE wether they r bigger or smaller than u. 2nd of all u should respect every person in d world. And btw if he cant compete with ashgray and naranja , then it doesnt matter, its his wish and interest. We need more people like him who are filled with innovative ideas and technologies.Bro always remember d world can develop only if u more interest/technologies. What if this hack becomes famous even more than Ash Gray? What if this hack contains more proper tiles or skins?We never know.If u keep on comparing everything then y dont u compare Liquid crystal and crystal dust? both or same ! add heart gold too even that is same.... just few more things in other hack thats it... And if u want to fight then fight in private not in public. What i want to say is thatJust stop discouraging people and u will always Succeed in your life !! :)

Im sorry if u or any one felt bad !

That right and we are not comparing us with ash gray and naraja because we know all of that get succeed with their hard work and if my team do hard work may be it make batter hack then other anime hack but it depend on luck so never underestimate other because god know the heart of all people and we don't need any other help and god help those who help others

Slyarch May 28th, 2015 2:46 PM

sorry....:( actaully can i help you

pokemon r May 29th, 2015 1:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UAREMAD (Post 8771408)
sorry....:( actaully can i help you

thanks but we have all resorse and members if we need help in anything i will ask you

PokéMew May 29th, 2015 12:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UAREMAD (Post 8770152)
oh wow this is old you cant compete with Pokemon ash gray and naraja its impossible im thinking you guys are some kids.... who want to make a hack sorry but that's what i feel and anyways go study kids quit this and make an actual story line take writing classes/ programming to AND STOP SENDING PMS TO EVERYONE BECAUSE NO NE WANTS TO WORK ON A STUPID HACK THAT ALREADY EXITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All beginners have to start somewhere, and pokemon r chose to start here. Maybe he wants to create a hack of the anime in his own view rather than what Ash Gray or Naranja or any of the other countless anime hacks have to offer. Besides, its not like this is the only other anime hack besides Ash Gray and Naranja, I could name countless. And, there is a possibility that the makers of this game are "kids", whatever that means, but I know numerous kids who have created great Pokémon hacks, and as I said all beginners have to start somewhere. So if you're going to post here you may as well leave positive or constructive criticism, rather than telling the creators not to make the game at all and to basically get a life which can be inferred from your post.

Anexenaumoon May 29th, 2015 1:22 PM

@UAREMAD PokeMew is correct that you can't depict a beginner, everyone has to start somewhere, and simple projects like this will help pokemon r grow. And instead of fighting with him, maybe support him and encourage him to get better at what he does? Spherical Ice, i apologize because i know that this isn't my place, but the point of this thread is to encourage the author to come up with a well structured idea to entertain the rest of the community. It's not to start little bickering like this, please save that for PM xD. Pokemon r, I'd recommend that you upload some screenshots to the fb group and don't worry about what other rude people think. But, i would take some insight from people that are polite, experienced, and willing to help! Good luck on your hack dude!
~Anex

GanguEevee May 29th, 2015 2:49 PM

So.....you gave me a message telling me to help you make your hack...And I think you send it to me without thinking 'Hmm, how much experience does this user has in hacking?', which you should have thought about. I am not a hacker. I do not make hacks for a living. At least know how much experience the user has in the things you're asking them to do. Aka, no, I am not helping you.

pokemon r May 31st, 2015 9:43 PM

New features
Hi Guys in my ROM hacking there are new tiles like
Professor osk lab pallat houses,route 1 trees where pikchu will climb and other loot
I am going to make a pokemon center interior change in anime there in pokemon center there are also rest room and cafa so I am going to make it bigger pokemon center and we are going to cove some episode event .and we have all copied the same anime map design's and I am going to release my first alpha with first 5 episode

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) May 31st, 2015 10:52 PM

I think we need to design gym as anime

and I am also waiting for screen shots

pokemon r May 31st, 2015 11:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by INDIAN MEW (Post 8776809)
I think we need to design gym as anime

and I am also waiting for screen shots

yeah I have design gym as anime
That why it is taking time me to make first apha I am redesign the tiles and making them same as anime gyms soon you get to know

pokemon r May 31st, 2015 11:41 PM

Hope you like my idea

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) June 1st, 2015 1:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8776837)
Hope you like my idea

yeah its great

pokemon r June 2nd, 2015 2:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by looneyman1 (Post 8762133)
On the matter of characters following, I think that can be done, if one finds a way to emulate the coding that allows for double tag battles as seen in the 4th gen games, like with Riley at Iron Island for example. A 1st gen hack I played a while back does a scheme similar to RPG games like final fantasy and has other characters seemingly "go into" the main character where they then pop back out if a certain event requires said character. That might be worth considering as well.


The latter idea may be ideal when we factor that Pikachu needs to follow outside the pokeball, something most anime hacks have not yet been able to do since this was a mechanic that was only re-introduced in the latter part of gen 4 after years of lack of use since Yellow. Having too many characters actually following the main will more than likely slow the game down a lot or be too buggy.


EDIT: Also if you plan to stick tot he fire red game as a base, be wary that it might help to change up how EVs work or to leave them out entirely as EV training is sorta essential to a strong team even when not playing competitively. A lot of anime based games end up having quite a difficulty spike, so working to find an answer to how to EV train proper in this hack would do wonders since the EV reducing berries do not exist in any third gen game besides Emerald. I hear JPan's hacked engine has a means to rectify this, I remember someone saying one could use that to do something similar to X/Y's super training but I've never had the chance to see for myself what it entails.


Another idea to try is to ask Mr.DollSteak for support as his rom base is popular for all sorts of things. Though the rom base alone only works on vanilla fire red, to have it work to your specifications would require his direct support.

Hey will you tell me contact of Mr.DollSteak

pokemon r June 4th, 2015 12:23 AM

Hi guys our first alpha work is completed 35% and
We are going to cover our first alpha till episode 6

pokemon r June 10th, 2015 2:59 AM

Hi! Guys I am back ,

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) June 11th, 2015 7:52 AM

I am tired by waiting of first screen shot

pokemon r June 21st, 2015 11:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by INDIAN MEW (Post 8793383)
I am tired by waiting of first screen shot

Wait because we are working and ROM hacking need time so we don't have any other option instant of waiting

Guys we are going to release some screen short today

So wait screenshot will release in some hours

Guys more screenshot will release soon because we got some bugs you can watch in 2 screenshot that the the start of script first word is missing like prof is rof and TV is only V so we will fix all bugs then release them all soon

Christos June 22nd, 2015 2:44 AM

Please stop bumping your thread every minute. Post when you actually have screenshots.

Ash team July 14th, 2015 4:18 AM

Hi fabulous hack, hope this hack can continue I think you are having problem with scripting so I can be your scripter in your hack Pm me if you want me to work with you I like to join you in your hack

No progress from 1 month ???

pokemon r July 17th, 2015 12:17 PM

Guys I am back.Screenshot from pallat town and titlescreen


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79832
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79469
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79470
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79833
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79834
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79835
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79836

BlackStorm20x July 17th, 2015 12:32 PM

Progress is coming along pretty good. I like the idea of the hack, but seasons 1-9 is A LOT to put in a hack.

pokemon r July 17th, 2015 12:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlackStorm20x (Post 8850444)
Progress is coming along pretty good. I like the idea of the hack, but seasons 1-9 is A LOT to put in a hack.

Yeah I know its long from 1 to 9 session and it contain 3 region and its also cause problem for me but we will overcome it and make it complete don't matter how much time it takes but the real enjoyment is to play anime game in combine form.

BlackStorm20x July 17th, 2015 4:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8850449)
Yeah I know its long from 1 to 9 session and it contain 3 region and its also cause problem for me but we will overcome it and make it complete don't matter how much time it takes but the real enjoyment is to play anime game in combine form.

You could just split them up into different hacks, but alright.

Banjora Marxvile July 17th, 2015 6:20 PM

Hooray, things to critique at last! Was getting worried there:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79832
Well, I can already see that you don't know how to fully title insert, which is OK to be honest, a skill a lot of us have issues with sometimes. Background is pixelated in an obvious way, the subtitle (ash adventure) has a weird blue pixel thing surrounding it which should be looked at.

Most of your text boxes seem to lack the first word of the first sentence (Prof Oak and TV, instead they are ROF and V respectively)

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79834
I'm only going to critique this screenie with respect to tiles as the rest will just be repeats. The grass seems off, the random dark spot does not seem to flow more, may want to experiment with colors to see one that blends well for that. Also is a very repetitive pattern. I also swear I have seen this style of floor with this sprite before, but meh. The tiles need a bit of work, especially the grass ones.

Chicken Fingers July 17th, 2015 7:39 PM

Not trying to be mean dude, but you need to stop being so repetitive with what you are saying and TRY to work on your English some more. I understand that English isn't you first language, but I think you could try a little bit harder so I can easily understand what you are trying to say. It takes a lot of work sometimes to figure out what you're trying to get across.

Now, that aside, to look at your screenshots.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79834

Now, the trees. They're just a little too... clean. The straight line across doesn't seem natural at all. You shouldn't make a straight line and perhaps add some bushes, different kinds of trees, or even just some flowers simply.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79835

Same thing as the trees. It's just a little too clean. Straight lines tend to not look good unless they happen to be on the border of a map.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79833

This might just be me, but something seems wrong with his skin. He looks a bit ghoulish. I think this sprite could use a Pallet Change. Something just doesn't look right.

I agree with the poster above on the grass tiles. Find something that perhaps blends more, or create some flower tiles. There needs to be more noticeable variety.

Aside from that, it doesn't look bad. Though, I happened to notice no NPCs. You should add at least two or three to Pallet Town.

Well, keep working at it. You seem to be trying to improve your hacking abilities which is nice. I wish you luck! :)

pokemon r July 17th, 2015 7:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chicken Fingers (Post 8850929)
Not trying to be mean dude, but you need to stop being so repetitive with what you are saying and TRY to work on your English some more. I understand that English isn't you first language, but I think you could try a little bit harder so I can easily understand what you are trying to say. It takes a lot of work sometimes to figure out what you're trying to get across.

Now, that aside, to look at your screenshots.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79834

Now, the trees. They're just a little too... clean. The straight line across doesn't seem natural at all. You shouldn't make a straight line and perhaps add some bushes, different kinds of trees, or even just some flowers simply.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79835

Same thing as the trees. It's just a little too clean. Straight lines tend to not look good unless they happen to be on the border of a map.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79833

This might just be me, but something seems wrong with his skin. He looks a bit ghoulish. I think this sprite could use a Pallet Change. Something just doesn't look right.

I agree with the poster above on the grass tiles. Find something that perhaps blends more, or create some flower tiles. There needs to be more noticeable variety.

Aside from that, it doesn't look bad. Though, I happened to notice no NPCs. You should add at least two or three to Pallet Town.

Well, keep working at it. You seem to be trying to improve your hacking abilities which is nice. I wish you luck! :)

Thanks but I just show you guys a little bit of my work.it is still on working so as soon as it completed I will show you that which will be improved then this but with title screen I can't do anything it will remain same.

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Originally Posted by Banjora Marxvile (Post 8850821)
Hooray, things to critique at last! Was getting worried there:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79832
Well, I can already see that you don't know how to fully title insert, which is OK to be honest, a skill a lot of us have issues with sometimes. Background is pixelated in an obvious way, the subtitle (ash adventure) has a weird blue pixel thing surrounding it which should be looked at.

Most of your text boxes seem to lack the first word of the first sentence (Prof Oak and TV, instead they are ROF and V respectively)

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=79834
I'm only going to critique this screenie with respect to tiles as the rest will just be repeats. The grass seems off, the random dark spot does not seem to flow more, may want to experiment with colors to see one that blends well for that. Also is a very repetitive pattern. I also swear I have seen this style of floor with this sprite before, but meh. The tiles need a bit of work, especially the grass ones.

Yeah it happen that TV is coverted into V yeah it is a script problem I will fix it soon and I am also fix colour of grass now

hackstar July 17th, 2015 11:03 PM

I hope graphics ofthis hack will be much better than ashgrey,
I also hope ash will be able to talk here...

BlackStorm20x July 18th, 2015 10:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hackstar (Post 8851114)
I hope graphics ofthis hack will be much better than ashgrey,
I also hope ash will be able to talk here...

Ash talks in Ash Gray. Pretty sure at least. But it would make sense that he would make Ash talk.

Banjora Marxvile July 18th, 2015 6:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8850936)
Thanks but I just show you guys a little bit of my work.it is still on working so as soon as it completed I will show you that which will be improved then this but with title screen I can't do anything it will remain same.


Yeah it happen that TV is coverted into V yeah it is a script problem I will fix it soon and I am also fix colour of grass now

OK, 2 things to note:
1. We understand it is a work in progress, we're just critiquing it to make it better, which is how a hack can truly be made better, so it's good of you to acknowledge it, but why we're saying it now is so that it can be edited a bit to make it look better instead of when you're done with it.
2. What do you mean you can't do anything about the title screen? The annoying blue things can be fixed, I'm sure, they only look like a pallette thing so even then you can just edit the pallette or something. Just a small edit in this method.

Link4799 July 18th, 2015 7:17 PM

Hey, usually I'm very supportive of all people's creations, but really this hack has already been made; and its a really good one, and I HATE ash. But the hack made him fun to play as. (I'm referring to ashgray if you dont know.) I think it'd be too much work to put into a hack, that really has already been made. Kanto has already been made, I've seen people working on johto and hoenn; but not sinnoh, unova, or kalos. So maybe try one of the latter ones? I dont know. Personally I just think its a waste to put work into something thats already been made, its like trying to reinvent the Model T xD

BlackStorm20x July 18th, 2015 8:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Link4799 (Post 8852054)
Hey, usually I'm very supportive of all people's creations, but really this hack has already been made; and its a really good one, and I HATE ash. But the hack made him fun to play as. (I'm referring to ashgray if you dont know.) I think it'd be too much work to put into a hack, that really has already been made. Kanto has already been made, I've seen people working on johto and hoenn; but not sinnoh, unova, or kalos. So maybe try one of the latter ones? I dont know. Personally I just think its a waste to put work into something thats already been made, its like trying to reinvent the Model T xD

He obviously knows that Ash Gray is a thing, but the difference between this and Ash Gray is that this is suppose to have Season 1 - Season 9, which is Kanto, Orange Islands, Johto, AND Hoenn, all in one hack. And there is a Johto hack, and Hoenn hack in progress. And I'm actually working on a Sinnoh hack right now, but really, the difference is supposed to be three regions in one, instead of one region and a set of islands.

pokemon r July 18th, 2015 9:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Banjora Marxvile (Post 8852028)
OK, 2 things to note:
1. We understand it is a work in progress, we're just critiquing it to make it better, which is how a hack can truly be made better, so it's good of you to acknowledge it, but why we're saying it now is so that it can be edited a bit to make it look better instead of when you're done with it.
2. What do you mean you can't do anything about the title screen? The annoying blue things can be fixed, I'm sure, they only look like a pallette thing so even then you can just edit the pallette or something. Just a small edit in this method.

Yeah I said that I can't do nothing but I never say it is ended I will work on it but later now I am busy with graphics and increaseing ROM space

Zero.4 August 2nd, 2015 4:40 PM

This hack looks really good, but did you put ash with the pajama? That is a good detail. Good luck with this hack!

Joexv August 3rd, 2015 3:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Banjora Marxvile (Post 8852028)
OK, 2 things to note:
2. What do you mean you can't do anything about the title screen? The annoying blue things can be fixed, I'm sure, they only look like a pallette thing so even then you can just edit the pallette or something. Just a small edit in this method.

Actually the title screen thing is just a fourth stupid image, very easily removed thoough, no hacks should have this with the amount of tutorials we have on the matter.

But I agree the title screen needs lots of work. Way too pixely, the colors dont blend well, and Ash has seen some better days before the anti-aliasing got him.

The grass is not my favorite, it needs work. You shouldn't have that one tile spread across the entire map, some grass tiles can get away with it if they blend well, but not even vanilla Fire Red uses one grass tile.
The intro sprites colors dont really stnad out either, you may what to chage that.

pokemon r August 4th, 2015 4:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by joexv (Post 8875329)
Actually the title screen thing is just a fourth stupid image, very easily removed thoough, no hacks should have this with the amount of tutorials we have on the matter.

But I agree the title screen needs lots of work. Way too pixely, the colors dont blend well, and Ash has seen some better days before the anti-aliasing got him.


The grass is not my favorite, it needs work. You shouldn't have that one tile spread across the entire map, some grass tiles can get away with it if they blend well, but not even vanilla Fire Red uses one grass tile.
The intro sprites colors dont really stnad out either, you may what to chage that.

I am done all this things agine with some grass tiles,new ash sprite and title screen is also fixed I will show soon

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zero.4 (Post 8874080)
This hack looks really good, but did you put ash with the pajama? That is a good detail. Good luck with this hack!

Yeah this hack contains ash pajama overworld

pokemon r August 4th, 2015 10:41 PM

hey guys i am showing some of my maps and if it has any problem tell me its a pallat town map


Zero.4 August 5th, 2015 3:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8877149)
hey guys i am showing some of my maps and if it has any problem tell me its a pallat town map


It's good but I think you can add some flowers or something to complement it, just that, this is a good hack keep working on it !

Xertified August 5th, 2015 5:53 AM

Awesome and Amazing! Good Luck on next BETA!

PurpleOrange August 5th, 2015 6:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8877149)
hey guys i am showing some of my maps and if it has any problem tell me its a pallat town map


the map is very bland and very square, it doesn't look very natural at all, the trees around the side should to be more than one tree wide in some places, and the corners of things should to be more rounded, the long grass next to oak's lab is also very square and doesn't look right, the triangle of "grassy things" (not exactly sure what they are) near the players house doesn't look quite right either. the trees next to oak's lab also should to be more clustered instead of one single tree. and as Zero.4 said, add flowers dotted around the map. just a few helpful hints for you :)

Xertified August 5th, 2015 7:06 AM

Nice, very nice! I will download it ASAP!

pokemon r August 5th, 2015 10:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PurpleOrange (Post 8877614)
the map is very bland and very square, it doesn't look very natural at all, the trees around the side should to be more than one tree wide in some places, and the corners of things should to be more rounded, the long grass next to oak's lab is also very square and doesn't look right, the triangle of "grassy things" (not exactly sure what they are) near the players house doesn't look quite right either. the trees next to oak's lab also should to be more clustered instead of one single tree. and as Zero.4 said, add flowers dotted around the map. just a few helpful hints for you :)

Thanks for telling me I will fix them all and it is not completed it is still on work I will also fix the thing which you tell

Infinitum August 5th, 2015 12:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8877149)
hey guys i am showing some of my maps and if it has any problem tell me its a pallat town map


Why not focus on Johto/Hoenn? It will be a difficult task to compete with Ash Gray. Would even be nicer if someone attempted the Sinnoh anime.

pokemon r August 6th, 2015 7:19 AM

pokemon anime episode 1 and the title screen buy fixed

Zero.4 August 6th, 2015 7:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8879108)
pokemon anime episode 1 and the title screen buy fixed

Wow! This is awesome, I only have two things to note: In the intro screen, are some pixels (but for me that's not importan, And the grass fifth foto, you can give more color to it, but man, good job, the ash's sprite (in the part of the name) looks really good with that change of colors,keep that good job,the hack looks really amazing!

Infinitum August 6th, 2015 11:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8879108)
pokemon anime episode 1 and the title screen buy fixed

You need to watch out for spelling/grammatical issues, they might bottleneck the gameplay. If you need help improving the dialogues, I might be able to give you some advice.

INDIAN MEW(ARAZI) August 20th, 2015 4:07 AM

every thing is going nice

Infinitum August 20th, 2015 9:14 AM

I have already stated some of the main issues of this game, but grammar/spelling will be the worst. I'm offering to help you if you need someone to help with grammatical issues, cause I don't want this to get bottlenecked by that. If this might ever get completed, it should be of the quality of Ash Gray and not the ASH QUEST quality for sure. Covering all of those episodes will be a huge amount of work...

pokemon r August 20th, 2015 11:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infinitum (Post 8897722)
I have already stated some of the main issues of this game, but grammar/spelling will be the worst. I'm offering to help you if you need someone to help with grammatical issues, cause I don't want this to get bottlenecked by that. If this might ever get completed, it should be of the quality of Ash Gray and not the ASH QUEST quality for sure. Covering all of those episodes will be a huge amount of work...

Man I have fixed all old issus with my game and there is no more reming and for grammatical issce I also fix all that so no more issue reming I will show soon

Kpokedude August 24th, 2015 8:00 PM

Hey it will be even more great if you add the sinnoh reigon

pokemon r August 25th, 2015 3:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kpokedude (Post 8903581)
Hey it will be even more great if you add the sinnoh reigon

I wish but I can't because fire red ROM don't have as much space to cover as much data.but after completing this hack I will create next three region hack.

Zero.4 August 25th, 2015 7:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8903752)
I wish but I can't because fire red ROM don't have as much space to cover as much data.but after completing this hack I will create next three region hack.

I hope you can do the sinnoh region first, because I think tha season is great and I like those pokemon, looking forward with this hack, good luck

pokemon r August 25th, 2015 7:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zero.4 (Post 8903944)
I hope you can do the sinnoh region first, because I think tha season is great and I like those pokemon, looking forward with this hack, good luck

thanks i like to make sinnoh region hack.

pokemon r August 27th, 2015 11:40 AM

Guys sorry to say but now a days my study is on peck so I am getting less time to work on it that why I am closing this thread.but I am working on this hack slowly. I will reopen it soon thanks

Spherical Ice August 27th, 2015 11:54 AM

Closed per the owner's request.

pokemon r August 31st, 2015 6:46 AM

some new screen shot
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=9696&pictureid=80147

Zero.4 September 1st, 2015 3:58 AM

Man, this is the best anime-hack I've ever seen, I hope you can finish it soon

thopkmnmaster October 14th, 2015 10:08 AM

can i help with scripting

Spherical Ice October 14th, 2015 10:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by thopkmnmaster (Post 8965465)
can i help with scripting

Please do not revive threads whose latest post is over one month old. pokemon r, if you want this thread re-opened, contact myself or Christos.

Spherical Ice October 16th, 2015 1:43 PM

Re-opened per the owner's request.

pokemon r October 16th, 2015 10:32 PM

Hi guys back after long time ,I am having exams last month that why I stopped working now the work is agine start some new update soon.

thopkmnmaster October 21st, 2015 5:33 AM

At least say no i've been waiting for your answer for long

pokemon r October 21st, 2015 12:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by thopkmnmaster (Post 8972410)
At least say no i've been waiting for your answer for long

I have send u a message read that and tell me in visitor chat

thopkmnmaster October 24th, 2015 1:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon r (Post 8972631)
I have send u a message read that and tell me in visitor chat

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asharceus November 5th, 2015 5:29 AM

i am really excited when it will be released


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