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Oh, glad to see this is back! And well, the situation there isn't going well. The parts with her mother and aggron's capture caught my attention (pun not intended). Chihiro trying to "save" Zangoose is also a pretty disturbing scene. Seems she'll run into her downfall fairly soon.
I feel there were a couple parts were the transitions were somewhat rushed. Quote:
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So Taka wants to try to find Chihiro first, huh? That should be interesting to watch. Felt like it's been a while since Taka and Mewtwo interacted. The last few lines with the LOTR reference was bittersweet.
One minor thing I want to point out. When referring to Taka, you either use his full name Ashi Taka, just his first name, or Doctor Taka. Since this is in his point of view, I would stick with one of those as it gets confusing what he thinks himself as. Otherwise, looking forward to the next chapter! |
So, the line near the beginning "Her face had turned gaunt and bony from years of skipping meals" does that mean the timeskip from Chihiro's last chapter has been years already? There's also these parts:
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Alicia's death, wow very gruesome there. Doesn't look like Chiriro is far from getting better now. Looking forward to more! |
The part where Taka says it's probably too late for them to start a relationship, aw. Makes me feel kinda bad for them.
The part with Chihiro and Mewtwo, not surprising over Chihiro's reaction there. Ouch over what happened at the end to Mewtwo, though. a part of me thought, yeah not a good idea to take out your armor there, Mewtwo. Since you mentioned this was one long chapter originally, perhaps not the last we'll see of Mewtwo? Besides that, looks like the conclusion will come pretty fast, so I'm curious how all of this will wrap up soon! |
Chapter 25, that's some showdown Chihiro and Mewtwo had there and looks like Mewtwo took uite a beating there. Huh, so he spotted Chihiro's child and the agents got to them first. I'm curious as to what Taka and Mewtwo will be doing in the meeting.
Chapter 26, well things take a crazy turn with Taka now the director. I admit at the part where Taka said to Sheldon he's incompetent I was like, "Dang." And Nora's threat to him just woah. Taka indeed better shape up there. With the recent developments in breaking pace I look forward how all of this will fall into place! |
Taka's last moments there ended in a bang there, and even more terrifying he brought down Nora and the others with him. The epilogue there is also just as unsettling with Chiriro controlling the humans there and Mewtwo doing something similar.
I feel there are still a few loose ends here and stuff I would like to see more. What are the whereabouts of Arkus? Will we know more about Chiriro's child? Is Mewtwo playing a bigger role now? Is Darkrai returning and if so in what fashion? I think you mention this universe is still expanding, so I'm sure you thought those out already. Either way, congrats on finishing another fic, this has been a blast reading! |
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