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Pikafan5 March 5th, 2016 6:39 AM

Need help with The Journey Through Kalos
 
Since I edited it. I need some help. Since the girls got a journal from Professor Oak. should I put a journal entry from both girls at the end of each chapter once they get their starters. Or should I alternate Tracy one chapter then Trisha the next? I also would like to know in the games when it says your Pokemon is trying to learn a new move but you have to delete an old move first, where dose that voice come from?

Bay March 5th, 2016 1:44 PM

I moved this thread as I think this would fit more in the Writers's Lounge.

Onto your question, I admit I haven't read that story, so I wouldn't know if a journal entry would benefit your story in the long run. It might be interesting to do, though, to see how the girls' writing styles are different. Something to consider.

Psychic March 6th, 2016 3:26 PM

I read through your fic thus far, and from what I've seen I don't think journal entries are necessary. It wouldn't really add anything to the story. The journal entries would probably just talk about what already happened in that chapter, and readers may get bored reading another account of what they just saw in the chapter. The only good thing about journal entries is that they would include what each character thought and felt during the chapter, which is good to have, but you can just include all of that in the chapter itself and save time.

Hope that helps!

~Psychic


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