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Latias Lover! April 30th, 2005 9:59 PM

The Totodile
 
My first comic, so don't go too harsh.

Enix-Zae April 30th, 2005 10:59 PM

O.o......

words really cant describe that, well they can, but ill respect your wishe's about being to harsh O.o;

Eon-Rider April 30th, 2005 11:04 PM

Ahahahaha! That was pretty funny(if it was supposed to). That was good!

Pikabloo April 30th, 2005 11:08 PM

That was quite funny... In a way...

Goatman56 May 1st, 2005 7:11 AM

I'll go easy on you and just tell you some simple things you could improve on :D. Make more than a one panel comic, don't use handrawn backgrounds, and better word bubbles. I won't rate it cause you said you didn't want me to be to harsh.

armadilloHD May 1st, 2005 7:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Goatman56
I'll go easy on you and just tell you some simple things you could improve on :D. Make more than a one panel comic, don't use handrawn backgrounds, and better word bubbles. I won't rate it cause you said you didn't want me to be to harsh.

You can use hand drawn backgrounds as long as their interesting, colorful, not two toned, and don't use default paint colors. The seint background is like that.

Goatman56 May 1st, 2005 7:18 AM

I know that but that background was nothing like Seints :\.

NiNGi's Worst Nightmare May 1st, 2005 9:47 AM

I like it! The Totodile reminds me of myself when I go on hikes.

Rhykasho May 1st, 2005 9:53 AM

I dont like one panel comics that much!!!

Anyway, its pretty funny (overall). Try to improve on your backgrounds and try some new poses.

Poke May 1st, 2005 10:38 AM

Yes it is funny (in a way) just didnt look all that good. If it was better looking it really would look good!

ChrisTom January 30th, 2010 8:45 PM

Um....

Where is the comic?

I guess my computer isn't working... :(


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