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Ageua Chronicles
Welcome to Ageua Region, full of wild life and vast plains, savanahs, and beaches. This place is comfortable and good to inhabit. It's also an island.
And in the town of Gero, there lived a trainer of Charlie and was about to get his starter choice of totodile, cydaquill, and chikorita. The Professor was Mr. Ucding. And being mild-mannered, he chose chikorita and chose to improve upon it. His mom, though, was a bit nervous about whether Charlie should go across the island alone. But lucky for Charlie, he didn't need running shoes because he had good skill with his rollerblades and was able to go to deep places except for caves because of all of the cave-ins that could happen. And his mom sent him off to go conquer the ones known as Noble Four. And the one know as Great One. Well That's some context about the roleplay and i'll make an example of how to join: Name: Charlie Age:14 Gender: Male PKMN Trainer Rank: Ex. Scientist, Ace Trainer, Biker (For Charlie, I'ts just PKMN Trainer) PKMN: Chikorita Bio: Main Charater |
I'll firstly echo what I said in the "check to see" thread: You should take a look at some other RPs to see how they present their setting, gameplay and plot. Currently, you only tell us a tiny bit about one character. Think about the setting a bit more and make sure that the players know enough to be able to create believable characters who live there! Think up a reason for the player characters to head into the plot and adventure. Is the main purpose for the players to go on a journey and catch pokémon?
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:( :( ;( Though I'm about to cry i just ask if this is good for fanfic |
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Also, I don't understand why you would cry or feel crushed by what adventure when she tried to help and give you advice. It's not really nice to treat someone who wants to help you like that. You haven't even met the harshest critics in here and I'm already trying to be polite since you are relatively new. But I'm not here to scare you, I'm here to advise you to grow a thicker hide and be able to accept criticism. This is the Internet, you have to be responsible for whatever you put out there for the world to see. If you crumble so easily, you'll only make yourself easy prey for the trolls. If you genuinely want to pursue your dreams, you need to persevere and keep doing all you can to better yourself and not be discouraged so easily. If you say you cannot, you already lost. I hope you find the help you're looking for and I hope you'll be willing to accept it. |
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This place we're currently in is for roleplays where several people write a story together, controlling one or a few characters each. |
Can someone join my roleplay its in roleplay casting, called "Glacella Reborn"
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