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@ ray.z: I've posted the main character on the sprite showcase so you can see there, and yes I will use Pokemon sprites.
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Ray wich on do i use ive finished the first eposode
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Your Answer: You use this...
[*url=http://www.linking.com]I've been Linked[/url*] Change the URL of linking.com to whatever the URL is, and change the "I've been Linked" to whatever the text you want, and then remove the "*"s Anywho, what do you think of the main char that I posted on the sprite showcase but if your lazy its here. http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/PokemonHack/SpriteComicMainCharacter.png Yes I realised on the right one that the bit of hair coming out was missing but yeah...Left is her Normal Self, Right is when shes ran over and lost her memory. |
on the right 1, the face skin color doesnt match the body
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Gah...I'll need to edit that then, thanks for pointing that out Jake, but otherwise will it do? Lol....and yeah it worked Larv.
EDIT: Wait it does Jake...I checked closely, it just has alot of darker color on her really nice stomach :P |
When she lost her money .... did she lose her clothes too :P
Well for one thing, it looks like her breasts have rapidly deflated from before she was run over (and I'm being serious). Other than that, the sprite is good, no other major problems cept that the right OW looks like she is wearing a skirt instead of short-shorts. And the colours seem alright to me ... |
Rofl, well there is a purpose behind the "Breast Deflation", and nah she didn't lose her clothes XD...I just used Shelley's tank top, and yeah with OWs is very hard to do these things, on the Normal OW, I had to use a OW that actually had a Skirt to do it XD...but oh well it will safise..
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Well it'll be interesting to see the purpose behind the "breast deflation".
heheheh But you should try and give the blu sprites shorts - it shouldn't be too hard. Actually, it should be easier than giving her a long skirt. |
lol...
Anyway you all know of me making a new comic, I'm going to show off my Main character: http://i9.*.com/40m08xj.png His name is Joey, and if you notice, yeah that's the rival from Diamond and Pearl. |
Well that's a pretty good sprite. Nothing mush to say about the OW, but the trainer's just a recoloured version of Wally (who looks like he's out of it - check out the eyes).
I think with the trainer you should try and work on shading of the shirt (or lack of really). |
Dude what happened to his hair XD...anywho i'm gonna explain the brief outline of the first episode of my new comic called Pokemon Ghastly Tales(It was Ghost Tales, but Ghastly sounds better XD)
First it shows her in the place where she'll be for most of the comic which is between the living world and the world of the dead, where shes just woken up and there is a person who the house that shes in belongs to, then its gonna show several hours earlier when she was hit by a Pokemon Movers Truck(Typical XD) but just before that shes saying how this kid was perfectic to think he could beat her (Basically shes a hot girl with a bad attitude) and anyways after she gets knocked down, she is in this mid state but she can't hear anything, and the death reaper(or something of the likes) explains that she isn't dead but she isn't living, and that she will be in a place to repent for her sins, so basically the breast reduction and such is her losing her best assets as it were XD, and also she doesn't remember anything apart from her name and her pokemon, and some other things will progress as the comic goes on. So whatcha think? |
http://i9.*.com/2u7uosp.png
i tried to fix it up a bit |
Well that story seems like it could work, it reminds me of a manga I've just recently read.
Shame about her losing her best assets. Damn shame :( :P @ Jake: Well I can see a bit of an improvement. I should've mentioned before though that the stripes on the shirt look weird. Thy should conform to his body, instead of being just a straight flat line across his chest. |
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Uhhh.
1. Too much wasted space. 2. So far has no point to it. Why do people insist on making comics like that? You should quickly establish a reason behind your story. Or think of one before you make the comic at least, cause it seems like you aren't going anywhere quickly. |
Rofl...thats pretty good so far...its not very organized but oh well, anywho heres the boy who finds our main character, if your wondering about his pose his legs are facing one way and his body turned round @[email protected]
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/PokemonHack/MainChar2Trainer.png |
Uhh, yeah.
The pose doesn't look very comfortable. You should try rotating the hips a little. |
Actually I tried the pose myself XD...just to get an idea myself, and it was fine so yeah, whatcha think of it besides that I know the head is edited off Brawly but yeah...
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Well the torso looks to small.
Try and make it taller. |
Well i've almost finished the first episode, and its looking very awesome, i've given the boy the name Joseph, I don't know about the girl, and on this episode i've moved some of the text about myself, so some parts might look weird, just gotta do one more frame...but I feel too lazy XD
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well, i cant really "start" my comic cause i broke a finger today, so i have to wait! it makes me very mad :/
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Well could you check mine out and tell me whatcha think so far?
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hmmmm ...
Is it just me, or are alot of people really edgy when it comes to sprites comics? No really, alot can't take constructive crit as it is - instead, many take it too heart and get insulted. But the thing is, there are some out there who go way over board with their comments and who are, in my belief, attempting to do more harm than good. I'm not saying that we all have to agree that a comic that we have made is crap, nor that we have to praise every comic that's made. But can we be a bit more civil? -------- And for the record, below is my first comic that I made two years ago. http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2320/megadudex01gx2.th.png Obviously I wasn't all that fly, but, as some of you may know, I have improved heaps over the past two years (damn that's along time). Moreover, I didn't even have anyone to really compare my comics too :P I dunno how I got better. But yeah, can we quit the bad vibes that I'm getting from both the authors and the audience. Jeez. |
No, I just like to have fun by being... mean. Like the rest of the forum
Yes, I know, I'm messed up, but, you can't lern anything if soeone's giving you candy for messing up, now can you? A lot of people just barge in with comics in jpeg. I looked at the good comics, read every tutorial (and post by Goatman) twice, so, why didn't they. It's not our fault, they could have read the tutorial, now couldn't they? ((I ish groupy...)) |
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