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Yup, that's what it was based on! Thanx for the comment.
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Just a quick go at a Sprite Comic, based on a story that I never finished.
The Equilibrium Story In the beginning before creation, everything consisted of one entity, one being, one unity, one harmony... though things were not meant to stay this way, as time passed the entity broke into three smaller factions, and formed their own unity. As each unity evovled gradually over time, they changed appearence, and their intentions changed. Years had passed, and suddenly the unities engaged each other for dominion. War raged on for several thousand years, until one destined day, when the diviner beings ascended onto the plains of war. Seeing the outcome of the war that had claimed millions of lives, they created three realms, Asgard, home of the Angels, Midgard, home of Men, and finally Utgard, home of the Devils. These three realms were heavily reliant on the two opposite realms, should anything happen to one realm, the other realms would surely be affected as well. This event is known as the Equilibrium. The Equilibrium allowed for the races to live in harmony with one another, though there are those who wish to destroy the Equilibrium... #01 - Hymn of the Gods Seeing as I don't really think I'll continue it, I'll post it here in the SC Lounge |
lolz sux cuz it nut pkmn n u use spech bubels tey sux, txt betta lol u mena.
Quite frankly I like it, story line, placement etc are all good, I look forawd to seeing more. |
Yes it is very good, but when he is saying "prepare to meet your maker" shouldn't his expression be somewhat angry?
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Alright your comics aren't to great, there are grammar mistakes, a videogame crossover, been done, on Vaati's overworld his skin should be purple,Links colors and shading aren't to great, also Desgar plain has to much open space, also you didn't give credit to Avatar for using one of his overworld sprites as a base for your character. Well thats was a long sentence. Anyways a 4/10 is your grade.
Also Avatar thanks for fixing that panel. Good job, now its perfect. |
Try to avoid text-under-panels when making comics. Work on your grammar a bit. It shows promise, though.
By the way, I made a comic tutorial. Wasn't sure where to put it, so i'm putting it in the SC lounge. (note: to be mostly used for pokémon comics) Click here. |
Look, it's help with making sprite comics, and no one's perfect. And I think it would help a lot more if you bothered explaining WHY you don't like it.
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Hey I know no ones comic is perfect. Its just the fact of the bazillion pokemon comics out there. I mean when you think about it, those are the only ones that get praised. Also if your comic has to many episodes people just blow it off, cause there lazy and don't want to read it.
Dragon-Chan that is a rather good tutorial. |
Sorry for the double post, someone just deleted their posts.
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Okay...here is a first for me. Sprite Comic called The Toasted Trainer. :D
I don't know if 4 framed scenes make a Sprite Comic, but I think it qualifies as one. From the sounds of it, it sounds weird, but it is kind of amuzing...heck, I'm just saying that with no judgement. Just view it and tell me what you think. |
Man i had decided to stop with my current comic and try a new one... here's the plot:
Some say that Team Rocket was stopped 3 years ago, but some say that they keep their activities underground. For now Renato, an old competitor of the Pokémon League of 3 years ago and Kathy, another competitor, are still training their Pokémon to win the next tournament that will be in this year, but something weird happends, the Main Building of the Pokémon League that is located at Hoenn and their presidents had been taken! Some say that it was Team Rocket, other say that Team Magma was responsable but others assure that Team Aqua is behind this! Now the old competitors and some friends: Matt and Mimi must stop the team who are now trying to take over control of all the cities on Hoenn! Since the old one was for sure an extremedly long-hard comic, i decided to make a new one |
sounds really cool. i like it. are you going to make a thread? if you do i hope to see it.---Can someone rate my comic click the botton in my sig to visit.Post your ideras and suggestions.:D
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If you want, i might add characters, but no mixed Pokémon, i like only having people who make their own OW and trainer sprites. Edit: Your comic haves potential, you need to work just a bit more ^^; |
Could i be apart of your comic? If i can heres my sprite: http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/TXT.jpg http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/TS.jpg
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:D Ok ill do them later.:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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I decided to stop my old comic becouse it suked. And i have a new idea can someone tell me what they think?
PLOT: As Two brotheres and there mom stay at home there father is an agent. Before he notices he gets cought in one of his missions. They where taken by team rocket which rebuild its population. 5 years ago they where stoped and nobody seemd them recover.After that the two brothers go out to find there dad.:D What do yall think?:D |
Where will it be set in?
Sounds okay, I look forward to seeing it! |
I think im going to make it in kanto.:\ But im still working on some ajustments.:D Its kinda of a comady,adenture and dramtic comic. NOT that much much dramatic. Just at the end.
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Thats an ok idea but i dont have johto maps and prof.Oak cant live in 1567.. Thats the year im going to use. And i going to make a diffrent begiining. But good idea.:D
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