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:9:Not really. It's a little weird.....XD:9:
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Thank you. *bows* (message too short)
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The 1st one was funny. =D
"Um...isn't this supposed to go in...*moved*" lol |
Its alright, the jokes are average, some of the sprites dont really fit with the background (if u know what I mean) and the speach bubbles are average.
Nice try though, I hope u make another one soon ^_~ |
meh it wasnt good or bad...just average
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Thanks..I try my best. The second comic was implying how stupid Team Aqua is..
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I am not going easy on you. This comic stinks. The jokes are not even remotely funny. Wordbubbles need alot of work. Some of the sprites in the first panel are all fuzzy. The second panel with the Steven recolors looks fuzzy also. What is with the shrunken parts at the end of the page on panels one and two? I'm sorry but I didn't like it 1/10 cause atleast you had backgrounds.
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The comics don't appear to make any sort of cohesive sense at all.
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Thanks ^.^
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I liked it. Some of the recolors don't blend into the background because they have some white around them. I liked it. I love the background for the First and Third ones.
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Not very good.
It isn't funny IMO and the speech bubbles could use some more work. |
Thanks again ^^ I'll try to fix it in future comics
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They're sort of funny, and I give you some basic tips...
Work on your shading stuff, spriting, blah blah. Try not to make those white stuff on those sprites. The way to do it... is to erase the white stuff and cut it into the background... Use the Freeform thingy, and click the bottom button in the mini box. Then you should have no problem with the white stuff. Just circle around the sprite with the Freeform tool. |
Thank you, Latias Lover. ^.^ I was wondering how to do that.
I'm working on more episodes today. These next few episodes something actually happens. |
meh...they have some humor to them, but you have to look deep into it...and besides, it's like mine. Although mine never had a background, they had a little humor to them. Of course, I had little to no experience with paint to dio this, but it turned out ok. Check them out once in a while. Also, Brooks, I love Krystal as well. She rocks!
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It's ok. They jokes are average (Though the first one's funny), the background doesn't really look right, but it kinda works, and the speech bubbles are average. So overall, that's average ^_^
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The first 2 are ggod, but the rest aren't that funny or entertaining, good job, I hope you make some more comics.:)
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That was short and not funny. The text boxes and some of the graphics were weird too.
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I'm using MS Paint, so the lava (if that's what you mean) has to be drawn with a brush tool since I can't use the bucket. As for the speech bubbles, they'll be better in 'Strawberry Jam' and from there on out.
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They still don't make too much sense.
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I've stopped trying to make them terribly funny and instead just putting a story with jokes.
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can I be the attachment below
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Sure! I'd be happy to have another person in my comic.
The new episode is done! I hope you like it. |
find my pm titeled squrtle egg hatched the squirtle will be my charachterhttp://www.pokecommunity.com/private.php
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Ok. I'll introduce you as soon as I can think of a way to get you into the story (which i've already thought up, but your PM hasn't appeared in my inbox yet)
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Because that was a trainer sprite I made to represent myself, but now i've switched to the charizard
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Oh, geez. I'm sorry! I knew i'd forgotten someone! As soon as I can get back on the FileZilla computer...:(
EDIT: There! I put you in the last epsiode of this section. |
when is the next chapter...
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As soon as I come up with an idea, which i'm having trouble doing. But how's the Brock comic?
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Uh... you dont get trainer cards here.
Well I'm going to see the comics now. Hmmm... |
Pumpkinclaw, I don't know if you noticed this already, but this isn't the TCard forum...
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Yes, pumpkinclaw, if you want a Tcard from me, go put it on my PokeCards thread...I make both Poke and Trainer cards...
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kinda odd and i didn't really getit but the firstone was funny kinda
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Thanks. After a lot of destructive criticism I decided to quit trying to make the plots funny.
EDIT: Sorry about the long-term idea drought, i'm now back up to my usual episode-a-day (if possible) routine. Anyway, newest update. (first time i've POSTED one) There've been a lot of updates lately. It's no joke |
I forgot about this! I'm gonna check out your stuff.
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Thanks. I've done a lot of missed updates lately, so a new saga has started since you last checked. In other words, there's a lot of new stuff to read.
EDIT: Newer new saga! *dun dun dun dun* The Pokemon Letters Game First episode! |
:9:I think that Mom used Clean Your Room attack was funny.
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I've started a NEW comic, but in the same thread. It's below my PC comics. I hope you like it..
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Hooray, we've got a new character! Thanks, OK!
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EDIT:you know the magikarp I got in the miscelanius comics could you make him my sidekick |
Umm...the magikarp can appear sometime later in the comic, yes..but remember, this is a RANDOM comic, so the magikarp may not appear too soon. New comic! Hehehe, new comic.
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It'll probably appear about the same time the Charmander evolves.
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I never watch Dragonball Z. I don't have any teleision. I've hardly heard of DZ and I have no idea about the plot or characters or anything. If I really did steal it, I didn't mean to.
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Ihihihihi! New episodes in both comics! (The magikarp is here)
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Oh. I thought you meant the overview comics. I'll put the magikarp in my PC comic soon!
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Can I Join This Comic ^^ Heres My Sprite
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Ok! Thanks for joining, SL!
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Youre Welcome! Oh And By The Way, When Are You Going To Post New Comic
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As soon as possible, but right now i'm stuck on the 'thumbnail' computer and i'm going over to a friend's house today so it'll probably be done tomorrow.
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I Wonder What Will Happen In The Next Part.
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I am too lazy to update since school has started...oh the MATH! I'll update as often as possible, though.
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The 34th one was funny when the magma sang "big orange pokemorphs tied up with strings..."
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Hmmm. I still have a fan...but only one. *sigh*
Anyway, TONS of new updates. From the superhero saga: 34: Yet Another Volcanic Interference 35: Captured Again 36: Yoshi as a Weapon of War 37: Medical Magma 38: The Powers of Dragonfruit Pie 39: TRAP! 40: Reinforcements Come And the first episode of an entirely new saga (The Closet of d00m): 41: The PM 42: Closet Monsters 43: Lights Out! |
I like your series. Just so ya know, I changed my outfit.
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Hi, can I be in your comic?
My Sprites Name- Koji Dragoon Pokemon- Houndour/Houndoom aka "Pyra" Other- A few years ago, he was captured by the Neo Rockets and infused with Rayquaza DNA. He now travels the country with his Houndour. He can turn into a low-level Rayquaza at will, but he still has his hair and goggles on his Pokemon form. He also can fly and use Fire, Ice, Electric, and Dragon attacks when he is in his Pokemon form. He dislikes large crowds, is good at making friends, and likes to tell jokes, but is pretty bad at doing so. Hope I can be in! ~Ho-Oh |
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Yes, you can. You are officially in (and mostly everyone has mutant poke-powers, so hooray ^^) EDIT: I've been a bit lazy about it, so here's today's episode: 44: Perilous or not? Ho-oh, I'll have to put you in the comic when I do episode 45. Maybe you can rescue us or soemthing. :) |
Okay ^^. I can't wait for the next comic. Your comics are random, but random is usually origional. I like random...
~Ho-Oh |
Can i join? My sprites are in my sig, the Ho-ohs.
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Sorry, but I won't be able to update for a while because I have the stomach flu >>
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Awws Hope you feels better soon
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Eh, thanks...i'm better now, it's the annoying, barfing two-day bug. I was so sick the first day that I couldn't get up to the comp. The second day I was feeling better but still...barfing >> :confused:
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Sorry to know you had the Stomach Flu Dragon-chan :( I'm glad you're feeling better now ^^ Next part coming anytime soon?
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As soon as I get off the st00pid thumbnail comp (and as soon as I can think of a better idea that landing on a pile of fusions >>)
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Perhaps In Next Part They Drop On An Arena An They Meet These Killing Machines. (They Are Evil)
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I think the golden magikarp that is suppossed to be my sidekick should het in the closet and attack tdt and jhggyu becuase he thinks they're evil.
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Ne, the magikarp is just a shiny, not a fusion. It probably won't appear in the closet unless you do. ;)
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Fweeee! the next comic!....... Wait......
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The New Comic Was Great! Can't Wait For Next!
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Hey, I have an Idea for the next comic. How about my character (koji) flies down in his Rayquaza form to help battle the fusions? (And after the battle's over, he changes back into human form.)
Just an idea... ~Ho-Oh |
Me too plz (The shortness! It BURNS)
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Awsome comic(s)! I think you should keep doin em!
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I like your idea, Ho-oh. Maybe i'll do it.
EDIT: Here's te next episode. Enjoy. 46: -~0Ho-Oh0~- tries to save the day |
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Here is my new sprite if you haven't disected my T. Card yet. :) |
Ne, I never decided to dissect your Tcard. Thanks for t3h new sprite!
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Hehe, funny comic ^^
"Never fear, Ho-Oh's here!" :P Hilarious! ~Ho-Oh |
I'm going to do the next comic ASAP. My little brother is on the computer I need...M_M
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Yayness! I like your comics, they're very funny. I live for funny stuff!
Can't wait for updateses! (<-not a word...) ~Ho-Oh |
Ad now, the new episode we've all been waiting for...today's update! Couldn't get to it sooner cause my little brother was on the computer and I had to practice my clarinet >.<
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Awww I haven't appered yet! or where you not going to put me in? anyway... Nice comic! Me Likes!
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New epsiode! I've been too lazy T_T
48: Back at PokeCommunity |
Hey, if still possible, another character!
http://img24.exs.cx/img24/1504/sunflora_azumarill_fusion01.gif Her name is Sunflorazumarill. She can use any attack that either Sunflora or Azumarill can know. She also has the power to split into a regular Sunflora and Azumarill; like this: http://www.pokeschool.com/videogames/rubysapphire/sprites/337.gifhttp://www.pokeschool.com/videogames/rubysapphire/sprites/056.gif You should have her do that sometime in the comic. http://*.com/bhzhwp.png And here's her overworld and backsprites. |
Heh, I knew that your post would say that. The moment my thread said, 'sunflorazumarill', I knew that if I went in i'd find this post in my thread. Sure, you're in my comic. =D
Update. 49: Shadow Trouble |
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Very Good Comins, Dragon ´-Chan! Can't Wait For More!
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New updates! The most recent are here:
52: Alquaza's Total Spammage 53: Arcanine to the Rescue 54: Arcy Got Spammed! 55: The Danger of Spam Spores |
The 2 New Comics Are Great! I Like The 55 One. I Have So Funny Expression In It XD
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Thanks. I'm workign on the next episode even as we speak.
EDIT: Yet another episode. 56: Other Roleplay is Lost |
NOOOO! THE EVIL SPAM!!111oneone! DA HORROR!
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*Alquaza cackles in the background and I whack it on the head with a moderator-stick*
Thank you. |
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I'll join, I still call this comic average. Sheet above ^ |
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