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:9:Not really. It's a little weird.....XD:9:
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Thank you. *bows* (message too short)
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The 1st one was funny. =D
"Um...isn't this supposed to go in...*moved*" lol |
Its alright, the jokes are average, some of the sprites dont really fit with the background (if u know what I mean) and the speach bubbles are average.
Nice try though, I hope u make another one soon ^_~ |
meh it wasnt good or bad...just average
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Thanks..I try my best. The second comic was implying how stupid Team Aqua is..
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I am not going easy on you. This comic stinks. The jokes are not even remotely funny. Wordbubbles need alot of work. Some of the sprites in the first panel are all fuzzy. The second panel with the Steven recolors looks fuzzy also. What is with the shrunken parts at the end of the page on panels one and two? I'm sorry but I didn't like it 1/10 cause atleast you had backgrounds.
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The comics don't appear to make any sort of cohesive sense at all.
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Thanks ^.^
I appreciate feedback even if it's criticism |
I liked it. Some of the recolors don't blend into the background because they have some white around them. I liked it. I love the background for the First and Third ones.
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Not very good.
It isn't funny IMO and the speech bubbles could use some more work. |
Thanks again ^^ I'll try to fix it in future comics
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They're sort of funny, and I give you some basic tips...
Work on your shading stuff, spriting, blah blah. Try not to make those white stuff on those sprites. The way to do it... is to erase the white stuff and cut it into the background... Use the Freeform thingy, and click the bottom button in the mini box. Then you should have no problem with the white stuff. Just circle around the sprite with the Freeform tool. |
Thank you, Latias Lover. ^.^ I was wondering how to do that.
I'm working on more episodes today. These next few episodes something actually happens. |
meh...they have some humor to them, but you have to look deep into it...and besides, it's like mine. Although mine never had a background, they had a little humor to them. Of course, I had little to no experience with paint to dio this, but it turned out ok. Check them out once in a while. Also, Brooks, I love Krystal as well. She rocks!
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It's ok. They jokes are average (Though the first one's funny), the background doesn't really look right, but it kinda works, and the speech bubbles are average. So overall, that's average ^_^
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The first 2 are ggod, but the rest aren't that funny or entertaining, good job, I hope you make some more comics.:)
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That was short and not funny. The text boxes and some of the graphics were weird too.
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I'm using MS Paint, so the lava (if that's what you mean) has to be drawn with a brush tool since I can't use the bucket. As for the speech bubbles, they'll be better in 'Strawberry Jam' and from there on out.
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They still don't make too much sense.
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I've stopped trying to make them terribly funny and instead just putting a story with jokes.
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can I be the attachment below
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Sure! I'd be happy to have another person in my comic.
The new episode is done! I hope you like it. |
find my pm titeled squrtle egg hatched the squirtle will be my charachterhttp://www.pokecommunity.com/private.php
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