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Signomi August 5th, 2005 9:56 AM

Pokémon Fire Red | Leaf Green: Continued - Current: A Past Experience
 
DISCLAIMER: Pokémon is not owned by me. Nor do I claim the games or any edited graphics. The only thing I own is this comic, plus certain sprites I have made myself.

Ze Cover

Yup, I changed the cover...again.. You like?

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/4692/cover32mm.gif

My first attempt on a Comic. Go easy on me now ^_~; Well yeah.

NOTE #1 Rated [PG-13] There will be some mild language in some of the comics, normally from Green's potty mouth. And some scenes in which may NOT be suitible for younger members.

NOTE #2 The Comic is based on after you've finished the journey in which you would've played in Fire Red/Leaf Green if you've played as Blue...or as some people would call her...the FR/LG Girl. So don't expect to see Red in it at all.

NOTE #3 'Why do you put so much text underneath one panel?' Is normally what I get asked. FR/LG Continued /was/ going to be a fanfic. But I thought it would be nicer to have little sprite pictures along with the 'fanfic' so people could get an idea on where everything is set. Basically, it's not exactly a proper Sprite Comic. But it still falls under it's category.

But that doesn't mean any of you truely have to copy my 'comic' style because I've done it on this one o_O; You ought to make your comic seem like a proper one. Not like mine XD I'll tell you again,. FR/LG:C is not a proper sprite comic.

NOTE #4 Please, DO NOT ASK TO BE IN THE COMIC. I've just had to cope with a couple of people asking. Sorry but I don't intend to add yourself into the comic, I'm not even allowed to add myself in it either. I plan to go all out on OCs and having PC members in a comic is rather cliche and it ruins the comic if you ask me. So please, don't ever ask me.

The Plot...

The population of Kanto pokemon steadily decreases, many Kanto citizens wonder what could be the cause of this. Ordered by Prof.Oak, Blue and Green play the investigators of this strange situation. They soon find strange pokemon appearing in the patches of grass, which are said not to be of this region. Soon after, they begin to realise this strange conundrum as they run into Katrelle and many more criminals, who are said to all be members of the Quatra: their goal is to eradicate every single pokemon naturally born into Kanto so Pokemon of high levels can sweep the land and rid it of any obstacles, so they could take over the region and use the large land mass to build a tower which can transmit brain waves to the remaining regions which only Pokemon can pick up, therefore brainwashing them to grant every command by the group. The minions are led by admins, 5 males and 1 female, they are known as the Quatra Circle, each wielding a Pokemon naturally born into Hoenn and trained at very high levels. Things start getting worse for the two champions from Pallet Town as they are both caught in the middle of their brilliant scheme. How are they going to survive? Can they defeat the Quatras and restore Kanto to what it formally was?

Characters
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    Blue
    Kind, thoughtful, Intelligent, she can get easy confused, Blue cares more about helping others than helping herself. During her former journey she was known as the female heroine. Now her goal, with the help of Green, is to restore Kanto to what it was formally. She lived a horrible childhood and never knew her actual parents, besides her foster mother living in Pallet, because of this, she is very fragile and sensitive, also prone to any sort of mental attack that could remind her of her past, or warn her of her future...
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    Green
    Sarcastic, arrogant, tempermental, he can be a real pain in the neck. Green is the exact opposite of Blue. Formally her rival, now her partner in their goal of restoring Kanto to what it formally was. Green was known formally as the Champion, after being beaten by Blue, he started gaining more respect for her than before. He is also hot headed and a very uneasy person to reason with. He starts growing concerned about Blue as she soon starts getting caught up in horrifically vivid day dreams. But unknowingly looks at Blue at a more different perspective, as if she needs him to keep her out of her misery.
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    Conor
    A friend of the Old Man in Viridian City. First appeared when ambushed by Katrelle. Conor is secretly spying on the Quatra group of their evil schemes. He's a peculiar person who is normally used to being alone. But is quite intelligent and can be pretty charming. Sooner or later he accompanies Green and Blue on their goal of stopping the Quatras. He seemed to have had a very unfortunate history with Damien. As a teenager, Conor was very much like Green. Sarcastic, pushy and rather childish for his age, but as he learnt more about Damien's misfortunate relationship with his father, he began to mature, and thus later on(now) dedicated his life to stopping the Quatras no matter what.
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    The Viridian City Old Man
    A very eccentric man who spent most of his recent days loafing around indoors. Much long ago this man was a dedicated rock collector who hunted for rare rocks and fossils. "Too old for more rock huntin' youngin'!" is normally his excuse for not pursuing his former enjoyment, but only recently he wanted to walk about a bit, only to discover hidden Gems scattered underneath a huge rock. Excited about his discovery, he informed his young friend, Conor of his sudden finding, but unfortunetely, a grunt of the Quatra minions overheard their conversation....
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    Katrelle
    The beautiful Antagonist who cares only about beauty, violence and riches. She is one of many minions of the Quatra. Katrelle also plays the apprentice of the Quatra Circle, being the only one of the group of minions to have some sort of abusive yet passionate relationship with a certain male of the Quatra Circle, which brings very negative thoughts in mind...
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    Damien
    The son of a member of the Quatra circle, Damien spent most of his life silently training in despair in the Hoenn Region after his father and the Quatra members had removed him from the group. His childhood contained nothing but his father's torment, abuse and violence, picking up from that, he is the now psychotic man who wishes to carry out his hidden pain in sheer malevolence to the ones who had hurt him the most.
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    Quatra Member(s)
    There are many of these grunts surrounding Kanto and the Sevii Islands, causing havoc on the grasslands and killing every single pokemon they sight. Carrying orders from their masters, the Quatra circle, they don't normally put up a challenge, but it tends to be irritating how there are a vast amount of them around.
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    Skye
    Damien's "loving" father and a member of the Quatra Circle. Skye has a very sour attitude and is used to beating down his Quatra members with his whip whenever they get on his nerves. Long ago, he had gone through a lustful situation, between himself and an unknown woman, thus led to the result of Damien, the son he had struggled to get. He only wanted a son to toy with, so he spent most of his son's childhood abusing his innocence and good nature, which left Damien bitter and scarred for life(and not just the scars of whip marks on his back). Skye seemed annoyed until now that Damien had gained such a Diplomatic and Nosy friend, Conor, ever since they both became friends, Skye found it slightly more difficult to torment his son, considering the thought that Damien might blab to Conor and he would go snitch to others. Threatening Damien, he remarked that if he were to say anything to Conor about what he does to him, then he'd kill him. Damien unfortunetely abides by that remark and started living his life in fear. After he sends Damien to an unknown island in another region, he lurks around Kanto and picks up a woman by the name of Katrelle, and started using her as a toy of lust and Vengeance.

As the comic progresses, there shall be more characters to add onto the list.

Credits
  • Credit to Polar Koala and Sapphire_Dragon of The Spriters Resource for the Pokémon Sprites ^_^
  • Credit to Mario Gamer and Yoshi Clone of The Spriters Resource for the little sparkles and Pokemon Logo on the Cover ^_^
  • Any extra Pokemon overworld sprites are credited to Coronis of Serebiiforums.

The Sections and Chapters

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{{Our Current Mission Is....?}}

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http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5374/anisprite33ar.gifChapter 1 part 2http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/9325/anisprite44oi.gif
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6343/anisprite20sq.gifChapter 2 part 1http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6343/anisprite20sq.gif
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2776/anisprite50ib.gifChapter 2 part 2http://img272.imageshack.us/img272/520/anisprite67bd.gif
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6235/anisprite19mn.gifChapter 2 part 3http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6235/anisprite19mn.gif
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5374/anisprite33ar.gifChapter 3 part 1http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/9325/anisprite44oi.gif
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6343/anisprite20sq.gifChapter 3 part 2http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6343/anisprite20sq.gif
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2776/anisprite50ib.gifChapter 4 part 1http://img272.imageshack.us/img272/520/anisprite67bd.gif
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/553/katrelleani4au.gifChapter 4 part 2http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/553/katrelleani4au.gif
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6235/anisprite19mn.gifChapter 4 part 3http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6235/anisprite19mn.gif
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5374/anisprite33ar.gifChapter 5 part 1http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/9325/anisprite44oi.gif
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6343/anisprite20sq.gifChapter 5 part 2http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6343/anisprite20sq.gif
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2776/anisprite50ib.gifChapter 5 part 3http://img272.imageshack.us/img272/520/anisprite67bd.gif
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6235/anisprite19mn.gifChapter 5 part 4http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6235/anisprite19mn.gif

Illusion Confusion?:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 3 Extended
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 8 Extended
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13

SAGA FINALE -Conor vs Damien:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8

A Past Experience:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 3 Extended
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
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Miscellaneous Images

Images by Signomi:

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Image(s) by Cookie luvs Green:

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Images by TyranitarDragonMaster:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/Sigehfanart.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/Tara.gif
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/AlternateReality.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/GirlConor.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/TeddySkye.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/Conor.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/Blueswim.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/BikiniTara.gif
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/Beach.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/Champ.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/ImNotCrazy.gif
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/sprites/Ganonskyepiccy.png

Images by MulteonDX

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b230/MulteonDX/Damiencameolink.png

Adam_148 August 6th, 2005 11:45 AM

this is really good and when I say really good I mean it, keep going I want to know what happens next

Signomi August 6th, 2005 10:58 PM

Oh. Thank you ^^' I thought no one was going to comment on it. Ehehehe ^.~

Gohan August 7th, 2005 8:12 AM

I like this! Maybe use speech bubles, but your people talking are longer than you would want for speech bubles. You wouldn't be able to see the pictures! Can't wait to see what Green tries murder, and if he kills Prof. Oak!

Signomi August 7th, 2005 8:41 AM

Hm. .-. Yeah, I kinda do put more speech than pictures into the comic don't I? ^o~; But heh, any other layout for sprite comics I've seen so far are pretty annoying in my opinion, so I just go with a picture ontop and a speech box at the bottom. o_o So yeah.


AAAnnnd, first and second part of Chapter 2 is up ^_^ Part 3 will be coming soon aswell.

Note about Part two of Chapter 2. Don't ask where I got the idea of Green shoving Blue in a Pokéball. I was hyper o_o

DarkPegasus August 9th, 2005 2:32 AM

Looks nice, funny, can't wait to see what next metod will he use to put blue into the pokeball!

Adam_148 August 9th, 2005 4:33 AM

I have one question, where the hell is Red?

Signomi August 9th, 2005 4:46 AM

Oh. Red doesn't appear o_o Sorry to disappoint you in anyway. This comic is based on after you 'almost' completed (which means you still have to work on your Pokédex) the game and if you played as Blue. Inwhich I did all that. So this is where this comes from ^_~

Jarman August 9th, 2005 4:56 AM

It was OK. It wasn't funny, though.

Adam_148 August 9th, 2005 5:06 AM

okay, I was wondering, so, do you have anymore new funny bits to add cos this is cool.

Signomi August 9th, 2005 5:07 AM

Well atleast it was OK...Right? ^_^; -goes to work on Part 3- Oh and I'm going to try and make it adventurous and funny at the same time >.>

Gohan August 9th, 2005 7:48 AM

Woohoo! Just read both the new ones. Can't wait to see the next stupidness. Actually, the characters mean stupid, which means funny. Sometimes. Stupidness! Can't wait for the next part.

Signomi August 9th, 2005 9:39 AM

Hehe. Wait no more. Part 3 of Chapter 2 is done ^___^

Adam_148 August 9th, 2005 10:26 AM

can't wait for the next part.

Signomi August 9th, 2005 10:29 AM

Me too. When I'm actually bothered ofcourse >.< Got kinda lazy with Part 3.

Allstories August 9th, 2005 10:51 AM

http://www.3dmm.net/image/whoamgpkmn.PNG


...


Oh, dear. That's certainly something of a visual double entendre. :o

Signomi August 9th, 2005 10:58 AM

Oh um.. -giggles nervously- Never seen it that way o_o

mistywishmaker August 9th, 2005 9:17 PM

It's so awesome! I hope you post more & continue it soon! Tell me when you do ^_~ XD

Cookie luvs Green August 9th, 2005 10:00 PM

I think the comic is funny so far =3 Its great! =D
..
Shoving a person to the pokeball XDDD rofl xD

Can't wait for more =3

Ninetales9 August 9th, 2005 10:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jarman
It was OK. It wasn't funny, though.

You poor thing, you have no idea of what humor is don't you? -_-

Of course it was funny XD, I was just rolling when he tried to put her into the pokeball XD, just keep doing your thing men, it's really good, and for a first attemp it's awesome ^_^

pokemon_gal1993 August 10th, 2005 7:40 AM

I liked your comics!!They were so funny!

Signomi August 10th, 2005 8:07 AM

Thank you all for your comments ^^ It brightened up my day

I've got Chapter 3 part 1 finished. I'm about to put it up. Took quite a while longer to do than my other ones. It's not all that funny either, just to tell you.

Plus, you may be wondering why the font is a little funny on Chapter 3 part one, well I had to try and make the font a little smaller for the Status Bars, so that explains why it's a bit dodgy. Plus you may also be wondering why at the last little image, Green and Shiftry are in the wrong positions, probably because no Back Sprite for Green exists, plus I wish not to make one myself, you'd think I'd actually even bother? Lol. So I just had to switch the positions around.

Also if you noticed, Suicune's surf image isn't exactly a 'surf image' I couldn't insert a proper Surf attack and I couldn't find one on the net, so I had to make it myself.

obelisk-kun August 10th, 2005 11:28 AM

these are awesome I can't wait for part two of chapter 3

Signomi August 10th, 2005 9:24 PM

Thanks obelisk-kun ^^ I'll put up part 2 as soon as possible.

-bounces off to Paint-

Cookie luvs Green August 10th, 2005 11:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Plus you may also be wondering why at the last little image, Green and Shiftry are in the wrong positions, probably because no Back Sprite for Green exists, plus I wish not to make one myself, you'd think I'd actually even bother? Lol. So I just had to switch the positions around.

It kind of make sence of putting Green in the wrong position. Blue said "Behind you" and when Green looked back, you view Green as Shiftry. I guess xD;;

Anyways, its great so far! Can't wait for Chap. 3 Part 2! =3

Signomi August 10th, 2005 11:16 PM

Lol. Sure, let's go with that XD Yup, just done up Blue's sprite. NOW I am going to do part 3 ^_^; -bounces off to paint...again-

EDIT: Part 2 is done ^_^; Took me some time to do but yeah.

Granite Fish August 11th, 2005 10:05 AM

Quite amusing. Blue seems a bit quiet, compared.

Cookie luvs Green August 11th, 2005 11:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Lol. Sure, let's go with that XD Yup, just done up Blue's sprite. NOW I am going to do part 3 ^_^; -bounces off to paint...again-

EDIT: Part 2 is done ^_^; Took me some time to do but yeah.

Lol xD

It's getting interesting so far =D
Hmm I'm kind of confused why the high leveled pokemon in the wild though xD
*is now sitting and waiting for Ch. 3 Part 3* xD

Signomi August 12th, 2005 9:32 AM

Well, as the story progresses, you'll find out Cookie dearie =3 I'll start on Part 3 tomorrow/ Right now...eh, I'm just gazing at the new cover. It's not all that good I know..but if you ask me, it was better than the other one o_o

EDIT- Actually, Chapter 4 part 1 is done =3 and I actually bothered to make Green's backsprite o.o; I must be really mad.....

Datriot August 13th, 2005 7:00 AM

oh, I love you comics, they're bril, I can't wait for more!:D

Clow August 13th, 2005 8:54 AM

not bad man i give it a B+ and trust me I’ve probably read about 100 sprite comics yours is nice piece work

Jaybob August 13th, 2005 10:04 AM

oooo i want more comics i thik they r gunna end up going out with eachother

Kamahi August 13th, 2005 6:46 PM

What can i say... AWESOME!! ^__^;;
i wrote a couple of fanfics but none as good as urs
keep up da good work

Rukari0 August 13th, 2005 7:12 PM

Fantastic! Where'd you get the attack animations? i'm doing to need some soon

Cookie luvs Green August 13th, 2005 9:03 PM

Chapter 4 is exciting! =D This is getting really interesting =3
The back pose of Green looks cool! You did a great job on it ^^

jambo August 14th, 2005 1:44 AM

fantastic comic could use a bit more humour 9/10

Signomi August 14th, 2005 4:27 AM

datriot: Thank you ^^
Clow: Wow, I'm honoured, thank you ^__~
squall: Woah there partner, going out with each other? =3 I haven't decided on romance yet x3 should I have romance?
Kamahi: Thank you! ^o^
Cookie: Well, I'm going to make it exciting as possible ^_^
jambo: Well, thank you ^^ But Humour is only the side Genré of this comic. Whole, it's Adventure/Humour ^__~

Anyway, I've added a character section and a plot section, now you know where I shall be going with this comic. I've also made Chapter 4 part 2. So stay tuned ^_~;;;

Kurayami August 14th, 2005 8:37 PM

Ha-ha. x3


I like your comic. I can't edit sprites like you. ^^; I like that Green and Blue are in this. <3


The only thing I'm not wild about is that Green seems really OOC. o.o It looks like it's more of Shigeru's personality and not Greens. ^^;


But overall I like it. x3 Can't wait until you post more~


EDIT://

And yes, you should add romance! >D

Cookie luvs Green August 14th, 2005 9:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Cookie: Well, I'm going to make it exciting as possible ^_^

Anyway, I've added a character section and a plot section, now you know where I shall be going with this comic. I've also made Chapter 4 part 2. So stay tuned ^_~;;;

Chapter 4 Part 2 was great! It kept me thinking. =D zD
For some reason, the last part of it reminded me of some tower you can find in Johto xD

The intro revamp looks spiffy! =3 It's all neat! ^^

Bliksem August 14th, 2005 10:37 PM

I read this at 1:30 in the morning. I'll have to read it when I'm sane and don't have allerygy issues, but from what I can see...


This is horribly funny... I chuckled, snickered, and giggled, and I normally don't! Green is... Green XD

Datriot August 15th, 2005 8:16 AM

I think this comic is getting really excting! I thing Green's so cool!:D

Signomi August 15th, 2005 9:34 AM

Thanks people ^_^;

Kurayami, I'm sorry about that. But I made Green like that for a reason, he's the main source of the humour in the comic XD So you could say he's another Shigeru...but the FR/LG Green is more or less Shigeru anyway so I did right...right? =D

And Cookie, I'm thinking that you're thinking of the Burned Tower in Johto XD

Anyway. Yes, I'll add romance sometime later on in the comic series...obviously BluexGreen. Unless any of you don't want that to happen...and some of you want that to happen o_o I ought to open a poll.

Anyway. I drew pictures of Blue and Green on the first post. Can you tell me how I did on them? XD It took quite a while to do both. Anyway, stay tuned ^_^

~Zero~ August 15th, 2005 10:18 AM

Nice comic so far! I'm looking forward to more!

Signomi August 15th, 2005 10:46 AM

Hehe, I'm sure you are Shane ^_~; Plus I think it's going to be a bit more complicated for now on when making these comics....

Hydraconis Requiseq-Hrael August 15th, 2005 7:47 PM

http://*.com/alnnkp.png RAVEN: This comic is ingenious, compared to some comics nowadays; and they're published. You should never stop writing, Signomi; your work is phantastic. But there is a problem, besides the grammar errors. I must admit, nothing could have ended Chapter 4: Part 3 better than that last word, but it is disgusting and vile; and it makes you look like a slob with a careless humor about you. I mean no offense, though. Nevertheless, your writing could make many idiots writing, today, pity themselves.

http://*.com/alntdl.png ROC: Signomi, never stop writing; you have too much potential. With hard work, you could make the pathetic morons, like Danielle Steel and Dean Coontz, cry in havoc. And if anyone tells you that one of your words is distusting and vile, you have every right to crush their sorry [*****]!

http://*.com/alnnkp.png RAVEN: Roc, I truly hate you right now, but we thank you for your words of encouragement.

Kurayami August 15th, 2005 7:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Kurayami, I'm sorry about that. But I made Green like that for a reason, he's the main source of the humour in the comic XD So you could say he's another Shigeru...but the FR/LG Green is more or less Shigeru anyway so I did right...right? =D

Actually, your totally right! xD I hadn't thought about that. Everytime Green would come up to me in my game it'd be a Shigeru. So I guess your sorta in a way *not* making him OOC. o__O;

And I like your pixel art. ^^b I love you shading. I can't shade for my life. x-X;

Bliksem August 15th, 2005 10:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Anyway. Yes, I'll add romance sometime later on in the comic series...obviously BluexGreen. Unless any of you don't want that to happen...and some of you want that to happen o_o I ought to open a poll.

Romance? *thinks* Nah... it'd take away from the funny.

Tsukasa August 16th, 2005 2:32 AM

Hey great comic so far,im really enjoying it i would give you a 10/10 cant wait to read more

Kurayami August 16th, 2005 7:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bliksem
Romance? *thinks* Nah... it'd take away from the funny.


What if were humor-romance? x3 Then Oldrivalshipping fans and humor-hungry people can get what they want. o_O;

Signomi August 16th, 2005 9:24 PM

Well Raven, I modified the last word to a different word XD I was a bit...eh, about it anyway o_O I was near falling asleep when I did that part.

Well, on the Romance subject, I've added a poll, it will close in 5 days. If the yes option has the most votes, there will be SOME romance in the comic, now as for me, I'd love to experience having some romance in the comic...so I voted yes, but my vote doesn't count XD only yours will, so vote ^_^

Anyway. Chapter 5 part 1 is done, and meet the new character, Conor XD

Cookie luvs Green August 16th, 2005 11:36 PM

LOL I'm not a romance type, so I voted no sorry xD
But it doesn't keep me away if there would be ^^ I like the comic a lot so far!

LOL Zapdos electrocuting Green highly reminded me of Ash's Charizard XD
Chapter 5 Part 1 was funny xD

Signomi August 17th, 2005 8:01 AM

I was a teeny iddy bit hyper when I wrote Chapter 5 part 1 XD Well, Chapter 5 part 2 is up, and don't think I forgot about Blue and her new problem....

Kurayami August 17th, 2005 8:29 AM

xD I liked it a lot. Does this mean Blue likes Conor & Green will get jellous?! >3 I hope so. o_O; That would be cute. x3

~Zero~ August 17th, 2005 9:21 AM

that would be cute. i can't wait for the next ones.

Signomi August 17th, 2005 9:59 AM

Hehe. It would. But sadly it's not. If you looked at both Blue and Green's character Bios on the first post of the thread you'd know what I mean by her 'problem' XD

Bliksem August 17th, 2005 10:08 AM

Eww, romance... *sigh* Oh well, it can't be helped I suppose. Lovely job with the chapters!

Signomi August 17th, 2005 11:49 AM

Thanks ^^; Yes...by the looks of things there will be some romance in the comic. But not the kind of romance you may be thinking of ^_^ There surely won't be no 'lovey-dovey-kissy-kissy-bang-bang' romance in it XD That would be quite...eck..

pokemon_gal1993 August 17th, 2005 7:08 PM

Your doin very good^_^keep going at it!can't wait till' the next parts

Cookie luvs Green August 17th, 2005 10:15 PM

Chapter 5 Part 2 Was mysterious. I wonder what happend in Blue's past?
Going great!!! ^^ *drinks a humongus sport drink while waiting for more* xD

Hydraconis Requiseq-Hrael August 18th, 2005 1:53 AM

http://*.com/aontox.png HEL: Blue is a very troubled soul. In spite of everything, she will never forget her terrible past. Blue was raised as an orphan, having been separated from her parents in Pallet Town when she was very young; all that she remembers of the disaster is being abducted by a giant bird. Deep inside her is a search for veangence on this monster, and one day she will capture it.
Supposedly, her future pet will be the legendary Ho-oh.

Taken from the very early volumes of the Pokemon Adventures manga series

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Signomi August 18th, 2005 3:43 AM

Wel yes ^^ Though, I'm going to change a few things, for her past in this comic, her parents actually died when trying to prevent Ho-oh from grabbing Blue, and before that they were happily settled in Ecruteak in Johto.

Now, Chapter 5 part 3 is done, but I got kinda lazy with it so there's much in it XD Psh, Green is just so pushy...

~Zero~ August 18th, 2005 9:26 AM

Compelling. pretty good plot so far.

Hydraconis Requiseq-Hrael August 18th, 2005 2:14 PM

http://*.com/apch79.png DOPPELGAENGER: Do you mean to tell me that the legendary hero of Pallet Town, Blue, is not from Pallet Town!? Absurd. That is the one detail about Blue that absolutely cannot be changed, and you changed it? How could you even mention Ecruteak?

pokemon_gal1993 August 18th, 2005 6:24 PM

It's getting intresting now,can't wait till the next ones^_^

Signomi August 19th, 2005 11:39 AM

Well, I don't have to change anything if you don't want me to ^_^ It was more or less just a thought.

Right. Chapter 5 part 4 is up! ^_^

Smarties-chan August 19th, 2005 11:54 AM

This is the best sprite comic I've seen so far. I have been reading this comic ever since you started the thread but I don't understand why I haven't posted here. I just want to say that your comic is the best in the pokecommunity keep up the good work and make the next part fast ^^ (I can't wait to see what'll happen next)

pokemon_gal1993 August 19th, 2005 1:01 PM

me too^_^keep goin' at it~_^

Gohan August 19th, 2005 11:51 PM

*stares* ... AWESOME!
I love the edited pictures of Gary and whatshernamenotincolors! The one in your sig, the other one.... this is certainly the longest comic so far, except for Goatman's Lickatung, series, but those are only four-panel.
Can't wait to see more....
I'm getting home from vacation tomorrow! So I'll be on more once school starts!{wierd, I know....}

Cookie luvs Green August 20th, 2005 12:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by smarty_arty
This is the best sprite comic I've seen so far. I have been reading this comic ever since you started the thread but I don't understand why I haven't posted here. I just want to say that your comic is the best in the pokecommunity keep up the good work and make the next part fast ^^ (I can't wait to see what'll happen next)

I agree every word you said =3 Except for the commenting part x3

I ecepcially love how you drew the full body sprites! I never saw anyone yet that is better then yours! x3

Gaah I love coming here all the time and look if you added a comic x3 Sometimes I don't have the time to comment but I do look at them x3

So far, this kept my interest up! Can't wait for the next part x3

Signomi August 20th, 2005 10:38 AM

-blushes- Your comment made my day Smarty-Arty ^o~;

Gohan: Just stick with the name FR/LG Girl ;D
pokemon_gal1993: Wait no more =D
Cooks: I'm flattered XD I shall continue my originality! -tries to pose, fails miserably- XDD

Anyway, I've divided the chapters up in Sections/Sagas/whatever you want to call them =3 Plus yes, I'm sure you realise my huge muck up, I payed no attention and used Kadabra's backsprite instead of Alakazam's. Silly me X3 Plus I made a new Blue sprite, see it in the Character Bios section of my first post. Now, I hope you like Chapter 1 part 1 of Section 2 =D

Please note that the battle parts are pretty easier looked at than done. They are quite hard to try and put together, so you can find that I shall be posting more comics later than usual.

But I promise you, that my comic shall be very long. And I shall advance in the plot a lot more.

Roy-Kun August 20th, 2005 12:54 PM

funny/romantic and cool comic! 100/10! XD

Lily August 20th, 2005 6:40 PM

Aww...the blue/green thing was well portrayed. I especially love blue, and your sprites are simply marvelous. Plot was typical but okay, although I don't know why their pokemon never gets hurt. Overall, very good. =)

If Niko was here, he would wring your head off because you contradicted his...green x yellow thing. XD

Smarties-chan August 20th, 2005 11:22 PM

Yet another great chapter thing and what's it keep the comics coming I love 'em.

Signomi August 21st, 2005 11:53 AM

Hey guys ^^; Sorry to tell you, but I'm taking a little break from making anymore parts right now, a short one though. I need to spend some time just thinking where I'm actually going to go with this comic for now on and make sure I don't screw things up >.>

LilyPichu: I'm honoured, a mod actually replied in my thread XD Anyway, Blue and Green are just facing practically grunts right now o_o and grunts aren't normally a challenge, however, when they get to battle with the "big league" things are going to get much tougher XD Yesh, we all favour our shippings ^_^ As long as Niko stays with his own shipping and I stay with mine, all is alright XD

Hydraconis Requiseq-Hrael August 21st, 2005 4:25 PM

http://*.com/awx99t.png PHEONIX: Alright, if you're completely sure about it. We don't mind waiting, and we are perfectly confident in you, Signomi. This is, after all, the best sprite comic I, at least, have seen so far.

Gohan August 22nd, 2005 6:26 AM

A-hem! No mods posting? I am a mod! *only in Gohan's mind sadly*
Yay! Sagas! Mmm, yeah fight scenes are hard, especially because you like to do double battles!

Signomi August 22nd, 2005 6:32 AM

Yes! They are hard! I prefer making them really short X_X But I've no choice but to make them long. Ohwell, keeps me busy, Ne?

Anyway, I've added a new section, Miscellaneous Images. If any of you do any fanart or I do any extra pixel art, they go in that section, I made one image for it ^_^ You like it? It's Blue in a depression.

Gohan August 22nd, 2005 11:43 AM

Yeah, okay! I'll draw Fanart of Green and Blue arguing, or I could just get a Green picture out of my room *I'm sure it's somewhere...* copy it and give him a cape. Although I'm not sure how I could draw both of them getting along unless... *big eyes* THAT'S IT!
Man, the keyboards sticky 'cause I've been eating apples while I'm on again.

Signomi August 23rd, 2005 6:11 AM

Arguing yes XD I'd hate to think I put up this new section for no reason.

I did that numerous times, yup, I was eating an icelolly that was practically melting in my hands, whenever I typed, the keys would stick to my finger tips XD

Argh, I hate knowing that I've spent yet another day not putting one more part up -_-; though..it's only been yesterday and today XD But I've got an idea on what the next part could be, but I have to be a bit careful, this idea could make me pretty much reckless >.> I'll post the next part sometime tomorrow or the next day

Here's a little hint: Green and Blue aren't leaving One Island just yet...atleast not for the time being >3

EDIT - Green's just been given a slightly new look on the first post XD He looks a little cat like with that tooth sticking out. Anyway, I'm still working on the next part and I'm still sorta stuck..buuuuut it will be finished soon...if I /can/ finish it x.X

Arrghhhh, I've been putting this off too much >_<; Tomorrow for sure I'm going to post the next part, if I don't, you may have my head =O

Kurayami August 23rd, 2005 4:23 PM

xD Green dun got drunk!! lol. That gave me a real laugh. ^^;

I love the pixel arts. <33 Can't wait until the next part! :holds a lit light blulb over your head to try and help you think of ideas: o.o;

Maybe you could create like side comics. Meaning as just some random stuff with the same characters, but not the same plot. Not that many, just some to keep people busy 'till you think of more plot for the main comic? o.o

halfling2 August 24th, 2005 8:22 AM

Those are awesome sprites.

Makoto August 24th, 2005 12:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Arrghhhh, I've been putting this off too much >_<; Tomorrow for sure I'm going to post the next part, if I don't, you may have my head =O

oh signomi! don't worry, i won't hurt ya!

*mysteriously large axe is seen behind me, and I have my hands behind my back*
ehehe...... :nervous:

Foxâ™  August 24th, 2005 12:48 PM

this is pure genius(unlike my spelling, as you can see :p) it's so fresh and original, admittinly I'm only on chapter one, but man am i enjoying it, keep it up

Signomi August 25th, 2005 4:43 AM

Finally. I've finished Chapter 1 part 2. Though it's not exactly much, and it's not that good... so sorry o_o I've been putting my comic aside too many times that I forgot what to put in it >.< -gets hit by pancake- Well.. atleast I keep my head! ^_^ Erm..right? o.O -hides from FR/LG Master- XD

Thanks halfling2 and Vaati XD And Side comics? I'll take note of that Kurayami XD Though...I wouldn't even bother to do Side comics anyway XD

Adam_148 August 25th, 2005 5:44 AM

I've just read the new part and I want to read more please please pplease make more It keeps getting more interesting

Makoto August 25th, 2005 11:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Finally. I've finished Chapter 1 part 2. Though it's not exactly much, and it's not that good... so sorry o_o I've been putting my comic aside too many times that I forgot what to put in it >.< -gets hit by pancake- Well.. atleast I keep my head! ^_^ Erm..right? o.O -hides from FR/LG Master- XD

Thanks halfling2 and Vaati XD And Side comics? I'll take note of that Kurayami XD Though...I wouldn't even bother to do Side comics anyway XD

yes....you need your head to cotinue making comics....just let me know when you're done so i can eat your brain , I.... i mean congratulate you! Ehehe......

Hydraconis Requiseq-Hrael August 25th, 2005 7:12 PM

Ugh, now we're back where we started, with Blue and Green at each others throats. The next time they meet, a will feel truly sorry for them. They are really off to a bad start, what with hecatomb on the islands, and- Green being captured by a madman and his phantom-pidgeon.... Oh no, phantom-pidgeon? Blue is so dead....

Signomi August 26th, 2005 7:56 AM

Hm...well Chapter 1 part 3 is up. Though again it's not all that good -_- But not to worry, I'll make sure part 4 is much longer than part 3

Smarties-chan August 26th, 2005 9:44 AM

Once again great work signomi I just love your comic and I hope you'll make alot more of that stuff because it's great. That is all for now but, once again keep up the good work.

Makoto August 26th, 2005 11:56 AM

good job. i shall spare your brain......for now.

Signomi August 26th, 2005 12:13 PM

Thanks. I have an extension for Chapter 1 part 3.

Hydraconis Requiseq-Hrael August 26th, 2005 1:11 PM

Amazing, you work so hard, Signomi; how do you manage it? Also, have you played Diablo II, because that is what the river of blood reminds me of. You just need to add an escape scene somewhere in this comic; I simply adore escape scenes. They are, usually, my favorite part of every video game and comic/show; collapsing buildings, exploding mountains, crashing planes, time limits, et cetera.

http://*.com/b6zlh5.jpg http://*.com/b6zmvq.jpg http://*.com/b6zn7n.jpg

Bliksem August 26th, 2005 2:31 PM

Eww... escape scenes... those are just stressful...

Anyways, that madman scares me. I feel for Green XD

Dragon-Chan August 26th, 2005 3:38 PM

Hmm, there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with this. They're really good! Keep up the good work. (i've been dared: reason for the quote at the end of my post)
Quote:

I don't offend easily UNLESS YOU SHOW ME A FRIGGIN VIDEO OF A CAT GETTING ITS HEAD CHOPPED OFF

Signomi August 27th, 2005 3:53 AM

How do I manage it? That's what I'd like to know aswell....and I just got the 'river of blood' idea by an accident, when I got a little careless with a bottle of ketchup o_O

Yes, an escape scene I'll add ^^ Though it's going to take some time before I'm going to make an escape scene, chapter 1 is going to be a looong chapter. Anyway...Chapter 1 part 4 is up though it's not very long...or as interesing..sorry -_-

And I've changed the cover once again.

Smarties-chan August 27th, 2005 11:09 PM

Like you said chapter 1 part 4 isn't very long or interesting but, the whole palace thingy would be kinda pointless without traps and I'm sure that part of your comic will leed to something interesting. Just keep the comic coming.

Signomi August 28th, 2005 10:10 AM

Well, I only improved a slight bit in this part. Though it would've been much better if my computer didn't freeze and I lost a whole finished part >_<; And I was about to save it too. I got so frustrated and angry I left the whole 'to do' part 6 hours later.

Makoto August 28th, 2005 11:28 AM

no matter what you say about it, it's still good ^_^

i've given up on your brain. you need it more than me, Signomi. You got a comic to write. to others reading this post: other peoples' brains are still up for grabs. that means YOU!

Hydraconis Requiseq-Hrael August 28th, 2005 1:40 PM


The comic is getting very good, Signomi; and as for you, FR/LG master, you had better watch your step because you are not the only one with a(n) axe/scythe/knife/dagger/claymore/guillotine/scimitar/trident/fish fork/pair of scissors/other sharp, pointy object (that can take off someone's head).


Gohan August 28th, 2005 5:24 PM

Eheheheh... I liked him better with the tooth out. But of course that's just me. Wow, can't wait to find out what twisted fantasies that guy has. And if you don't know: You cop out!
Well, I can't wait to see another chapter. I'm so glad my computer will work again! It's still against me but it's gone into "Nuetral Evil Mode" right now!


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