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Pokémon Fire Red | Leaf Green: Continued - Current: A Past Experience
DISCLAIMER: Pokémon is not owned by me. Nor do I claim the games or any edited graphics. The only thing I own is this comic, plus certain sprites I have made myself.
Ze Cover Yup, I changed the cover...again.. You like? http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/4692/cover32mm.gif My first attempt on a Comic. Go easy on me now ^_~; Well yeah. NOTE #1 Rated [PG-13] There will be some mild language in some of the comics, normally from Green's potty mouth. And some scenes in which may NOT be suitible for younger members. NOTE #2 The Comic is based on after you've finished the journey in which you would've played in Fire Red/Leaf Green if you've played as Blue...or as some people would call her...the FR/LG Girl. So don't expect to see Red in it at all. NOTE #3 'Why do you put so much text underneath one panel?' Is normally what I get asked. FR/LG Continued /was/ going to be a fanfic. But I thought it would be nicer to have little sprite pictures along with the 'fanfic' so people could get an idea on where everything is set. Basically, it's not exactly a proper Sprite Comic. But it still falls under it's category. But that doesn't mean any of you truely have to copy my 'comic' style because I've done it on this one o_O; You ought to make your comic seem like a proper one. Not like mine XD I'll tell you again,. FR/LG:C is not a proper sprite comic. NOTE #4 Please, DO NOT ASK TO BE IN THE COMIC. I've just had to cope with a couple of people asking. Sorry but I don't intend to add yourself into the comic, I'm not even allowed to add myself in it either. I plan to go all out on OCs and having PC members in a comic is rather cliche and it ruins the comic if you ask me. So please, don't ever ask me. The Plot... The population of Kanto pokemon steadily decreases, many Kanto citizens wonder what could be the cause of this. Ordered by Prof.Oak, Blue and Green play the investigators of this strange situation. They soon find strange pokemon appearing in the patches of grass, which are said not to be of this region. Soon after, they begin to realise this strange conundrum as they run into Katrelle and many more criminals, who are said to all be members of the Quatra: their goal is to eradicate every single pokemon naturally born into Kanto so Pokemon of high levels can sweep the land and rid it of any obstacles, so they could take over the region and use the large land mass to build a tower which can transmit brain waves to the remaining regions which only Pokemon can pick up, therefore brainwashing them to grant every command by the group. The minions are led by admins, 5 males and 1 female, they are known as the Quatra Circle, each wielding a Pokemon naturally born into Hoenn and trained at very high levels. Things start getting worse for the two champions from Pallet Town as they are both caught in the middle of their brilliant scheme. How are they going to survive? Can they defeat the Quatras and restore Kanto to what it formally was? Characters
As the comic progresses, there shall be more characters to add onto the list. Credits
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this is really good and when I say really good I mean it, keep going I want to know what happens next
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Oh. Thank you ^^' I thought no one was going to comment on it. Ehehehe ^.~
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I like this! Maybe use speech bubles, but your people talking are longer than you would want for speech bubles. You wouldn't be able to see the pictures! Can't wait to see what Green tries murder, and if he kills Prof. Oak!
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Hm. .-. Yeah, I kinda do put more speech than pictures into the comic don't I? ^o~; But heh, any other layout for sprite comics I've seen so far are pretty annoying in my opinion, so I just go with a picture ontop and a speech box at the bottom. o_o So yeah.
AAAnnnd, first and second part of Chapter 2 is up ^_^ Part 3 will be coming soon aswell. Note about Part two of Chapter 2. Don't ask where I got the idea of Green shoving Blue in a Pokéball. I was hyper o_o |
Looks nice, funny, can't wait to see what next metod will he use to put blue into the pokeball!
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I have one question, where the hell is Red?
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Oh. Red doesn't appear o_o Sorry to disappoint you in anyway. This comic is based on after you 'almost' completed (which means you still have to work on your Pokédex) the game and if you played as Blue. Inwhich I did all that. So this is where this comes from ^_~
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It was OK. It wasn't funny, though.
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okay, I was wondering, so, do you have anymore new funny bits to add cos this is cool.
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Well atleast it was OK...Right? ^_^; -goes to work on Part 3- Oh and I'm going to try and make it adventurous and funny at the same time >.>
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Woohoo! Just read both the new ones. Can't wait to see the next stupidness. Actually, the characters mean stupid, which means funny. Sometimes. Stupidness! Can't wait for the next part.
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Hehe. Wait no more. Part 3 of Chapter 2 is done ^___^
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can't wait for the next part.
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Me too. When I'm actually bothered ofcourse >.< Got kinda lazy with Part 3.
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... Oh, dear. That's certainly something of a visual double entendre. :o |
Oh um.. -giggles nervously- Never seen it that way o_o
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It's so awesome! I hope you post more & continue it soon! Tell me when you do ^_~ XD
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I think the comic is funny so far =3 Its great! =D
.. Shoving a person to the pokeball XDDD rofl xD Can't wait for more =3 |
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Of course it was funny XD, I was just rolling when he tried to put her into the pokeball XD, just keep doing your thing men, it's really good, and for a first attemp it's awesome ^_^ |
I liked your comics!!They were so funny!
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Thank you all for your comments ^^ It brightened up my day
I've got Chapter 3 part 1 finished. I'm about to put it up. Took quite a while longer to do than my other ones. It's not all that funny either, just to tell you. Plus, you may be wondering why the font is a little funny on Chapter 3 part one, well I had to try and make the font a little smaller for the Status Bars, so that explains why it's a bit dodgy. Plus you may also be wondering why at the last little image, Green and Shiftry are in the wrong positions, probably because no Back Sprite for Green exists, plus I wish not to make one myself, you'd think I'd actually even bother? Lol. So I just had to switch the positions around. Also if you noticed, Suicune's surf image isn't exactly a 'surf image' I couldn't insert a proper Surf attack and I couldn't find one on the net, so I had to make it myself. |
these are awesome I can't wait for part two of chapter 3
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Thanks obelisk-kun ^^ I'll put up part 2 as soon as possible.
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Anyways, its great so far! Can't wait for Chap. 3 Part 2! =3 |
Lol. Sure, let's go with that XD Yup, just done up Blue's sprite. NOW I am going to do part 3 ^_^; -bounces off to paint...again-
EDIT: Part 2 is done ^_^; Took me some time to do but yeah. |
Quite amusing. Blue seems a bit quiet, compared.
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It's getting interesting so far =D Hmm I'm kind of confused why the high leveled pokemon in the wild though xD *is now sitting and waiting for Ch. 3 Part 3* xD |
Well, as the story progresses, you'll find out Cookie dearie =3 I'll start on Part 3 tomorrow/ Right now...eh, I'm just gazing at the new cover. It's not all that good I know..but if you ask me, it was better than the other one o_o
EDIT- Actually, Chapter 4 part 1 is done =3 and I actually bothered to make Green's backsprite o.o; I must be really mad..... |
oh, I love you comics, they're bril, I can't wait for more!:D
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not bad man i give it a B+ and trust me I’ve probably read about 100 sprite comics yours is nice piece work
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oooo i want more comics i thik they r gunna end up going out with eachother
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What can i say... AWESOME!! ^__^;;
i wrote a couple of fanfics but none as good as urs keep up da good work |
Fantastic! Where'd you get the attack animations? i'm doing to need some soon
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Chapter 4 is exciting! =D This is getting really interesting =3
The back pose of Green looks cool! You did a great job on it ^^ |
fantastic comic could use a bit more humour 9/10
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datriot: Thank you ^^
Clow: Wow, I'm honoured, thank you ^__~ squall: Woah there partner, going out with each other? =3 I haven't decided on romance yet x3 should I have romance? Kamahi: Thank you! ^o^ Cookie: Well, I'm going to make it exciting as possible ^_^ jambo: Well, thank you ^^ But Humour is only the side Genré of this comic. Whole, it's Adventure/Humour ^__~ Anyway, I've added a character section and a plot section, now you know where I shall be going with this comic. I've also made Chapter 4 part 2. So stay tuned ^_~;;; |
Ha-ha. x3
I like your comic. I can't edit sprites like you. ^^; I like that Green and Blue are in this. <3 The only thing I'm not wild about is that Green seems really OOC. o.o It looks like it's more of Shigeru's personality and not Greens. ^^; But overall I like it. x3 Can't wait until you post more~ EDIT:// And yes, you should add romance! >D |
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For some reason, the last part of it reminded me of some tower you can find in Johto xD The intro revamp looks spiffy! =3 It's all neat! ^^ |
I read this at 1:30 in the morning. I'll have to read it when I'm sane and don't have allerygy issues, but from what I can see...
This is horribly funny... I chuckled, snickered, and giggled, and I normally don't! Green is... Green XD |
I think this comic is getting really excting! I thing Green's so cool!:D
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Thanks people ^_^;
Kurayami, I'm sorry about that. But I made Green like that for a reason, he's the main source of the humour in the comic XD So you could say he's another Shigeru...but the FR/LG Green is more or less Shigeru anyway so I did right...right? =D And Cookie, I'm thinking that you're thinking of the Burned Tower in Johto XD Anyway. Yes, I'll add romance sometime later on in the comic series...obviously BluexGreen. Unless any of you don't want that to happen...and some of you want that to happen o_o I ought to open a poll. Anyway. I drew pictures of Blue and Green on the first post. Can you tell me how I did on them? XD It took quite a while to do both. Anyway, stay tuned ^_^ |
Nice comic so far! I'm looking forward to more!
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Hehe, I'm sure you are Shane ^_~; Plus I think it's going to be a bit more complicated for now on when making these comics....
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http://*.com/alnnkp.png RAVEN: This comic is ingenious, compared to some comics nowadays; and they're published. You should never stop writing, Signomi; your work is phantastic. But there is a problem, besides the grammar errors. I must admit, nothing could have ended Chapter 4: Part 3 better than that last word, but it is disgusting and vile; and it makes you look like a slob with a careless humor about you. I mean no offense, though. Nevertheless, your writing could make many idiots writing, today, pity themselves.
http://*.com/alntdl.png ROC: Signomi, never stop writing; you have too much potential. With hard work, you could make the pathetic morons, like Danielle Steel and Dean Coontz, cry in havoc. And if anyone tells you that one of your words is distusting and vile, you have every right to crush their sorry [*****]! http://*.com/alnnkp.png RAVEN: Roc, I truly hate you right now, but we thank you for your words of encouragement. |
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And I like your pixel art. ^^b I love you shading. I can't shade for my life. x-X; |
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Hey great comic so far,im really enjoying it i would give you a 10/10 cant wait to read more
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What if were humor-romance? x3 Then Oldrivalshipping fans and humor-hungry people can get what they want. o_O; |
Well Raven, I modified the last word to a different word XD I was a bit...eh, about it anyway o_O I was near falling asleep when I did that part.
Well, on the Romance subject, I've added a poll, it will close in 5 days. If the yes option has the most votes, there will be SOME romance in the comic, now as for me, I'd love to experience having some romance in the comic...so I voted yes, but my vote doesn't count XD only yours will, so vote ^_^ Anyway. Chapter 5 part 1 is done, and meet the new character, Conor XD |
LOL I'm not a romance type, so I voted no sorry xD
But it doesn't keep me away if there would be ^^ I like the comic a lot so far! LOL Zapdos electrocuting Green highly reminded me of Ash's Charizard XD Chapter 5 Part 1 was funny xD |
I was a teeny iddy bit hyper when I wrote Chapter 5 part 1 XD Well, Chapter 5 part 2 is up, and don't think I forgot about Blue and her new problem....
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xD I liked it a lot. Does this mean Blue likes Conor & Green will get jellous?! >3 I hope so. o_O; That would be cute. x3
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that would be cute. i can't wait for the next ones.
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Hehe. It would. But sadly it's not. If you looked at both Blue and Green's character Bios on the first post of the thread you'd know what I mean by her 'problem' XD
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Eww, romance... *sigh* Oh well, it can't be helped I suppose. Lovely job with the chapters!
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Thanks ^^; Yes...by the looks of things there will be some romance in the comic. But not the kind of romance you may be thinking of ^_^ There surely won't be no 'lovey-dovey-kissy-kissy-bang-bang' romance in it XD That would be quite...eck..
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Your doin very good^_^keep going at it!can't wait till' the next parts
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Chapter 5 Part 2 Was mysterious. I wonder what happend in Blue's past?
Going great!!! ^^ *drinks a humongus sport drink while waiting for more* xD |
http://*.com/aontox.png HEL: Blue is a very troubled soul. In spite of everything, she will never forget her terrible past. Blue was raised as an orphan, having been separated from her parents in Pallet Town when she was very young; all that she remembers of the disaster is being abducted by a giant bird. Deep inside her is a search for veangence on this monster, and one day she will capture it.
Supposedly, her future pet will be the legendary Ho-oh. Taken from the very early volumes of the Pokemon Adventures manga series - - |
Wel yes ^^ Though, I'm going to change a few things, for her past in this comic, her parents actually died when trying to prevent Ho-oh from grabbing Blue, and before that they were happily settled in Ecruteak in Johto.
Now, Chapter 5 part 3 is done, but I got kinda lazy with it so there's much in it XD Psh, Green is just so pushy... |
Compelling. pretty good plot so far.
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http://*.com/apch79.png DOPPELGAENGER: Do you mean to tell me that the legendary hero of Pallet Town, Blue, is not from Pallet Town!? Absurd. That is the one detail about Blue that absolutely cannot be changed, and you changed it? How could you even mention Ecruteak?
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It's getting intresting now,can't wait till the next ones^_^
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Well, I don't have to change anything if you don't want me to ^_^ It was more or less just a thought.
Right. Chapter 5 part 4 is up! ^_^ |
This is the best sprite comic I've seen so far. I have been reading this comic ever since you started the thread but I don't understand why I haven't posted here. I just want to say that your comic is the best in the pokecommunity keep up the good work and make the next part fast ^^ (I can't wait to see what'll happen next)
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me too^_^keep goin' at it~_^
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*stares* ... AWESOME!
I love the edited pictures of Gary and whatshernamenotincolors! The one in your sig, the other one.... this is certainly the longest comic so far, except for Goatman's Lickatung, series, but those are only four-panel. Can't wait to see more.... I'm getting home from vacation tomorrow! So I'll be on more once school starts!{wierd, I know....} |
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I ecepcially love how you drew the full body sprites! I never saw anyone yet that is better then yours! x3 Gaah I love coming here all the time and look if you added a comic x3 Sometimes I don't have the time to comment but I do look at them x3 So far, this kept my interest up! Can't wait for the next part x3 |
-blushes- Your comment made my day Smarty-Arty ^o~;
Gohan: Just stick with the name FR/LG Girl ;D pokemon_gal1993: Wait no more =D Cooks: I'm flattered XD I shall continue my originality! -tries to pose, fails miserably- XDD Anyway, I've divided the chapters up in Sections/Sagas/whatever you want to call them =3 Plus yes, I'm sure you realise my huge muck up, I payed no attention and used Kadabra's backsprite instead of Alakazam's. Silly me X3 Plus I made a new Blue sprite, see it in the Character Bios section of my first post. Now, I hope you like Chapter 1 part 1 of Section 2 =D Please note that the battle parts are pretty easier looked at than done. They are quite hard to try and put together, so you can find that I shall be posting more comics later than usual. But I promise you, that my comic shall be very long. And I shall advance in the plot a lot more. |
funny/romantic and cool comic! 100/10! XD
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Aww...the blue/green thing was well portrayed. I especially love blue, and your sprites are simply marvelous. Plot was typical but okay, although I don't know why their pokemon never gets hurt. Overall, very good. =)
If Niko was here, he would wring your head off because you contradicted his...green x yellow thing. XD |
Yet another great chapter thing and what's it keep the comics coming I love 'em.
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Hey guys ^^; Sorry to tell you, but I'm taking a little break from making anymore parts right now, a short one though. I need to spend some time just thinking where I'm actually going to go with this comic for now on and make sure I don't screw things up >.>
LilyPichu: I'm honoured, a mod actually replied in my thread XD Anyway, Blue and Green are just facing practically grunts right now o_o and grunts aren't normally a challenge, however, when they get to battle with the "big league" things are going to get much tougher XD Yesh, we all favour our shippings ^_^ As long as Niko stays with his own shipping and I stay with mine, all is alright XD |
http://*.com/awx99t.png PHEONIX: Alright, if you're completely sure about it. We don't mind waiting, and we are perfectly confident in you, Signomi. This is, after all, the best sprite comic I, at least, have seen so far.
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A-hem! No mods posting? I am a mod! *only in Gohan's mind sadly*
Yay! Sagas! Mmm, yeah fight scenes are hard, especially because you like to do double battles! |
Yes! They are hard! I prefer making them really short X_X But I've no choice but to make them long. Ohwell, keeps me busy, Ne?
Anyway, I've added a new section, Miscellaneous Images. If any of you do any fanart or I do any extra pixel art, they go in that section, I made one image for it ^_^ You like it? It's Blue in a depression. |
Yeah, okay! I'll draw Fanart of Green and Blue arguing, or I could just get a Green picture out of my room *I'm sure it's somewhere...* copy it and give him a cape. Although I'm not sure how I could draw both of them getting along unless... *big eyes* THAT'S IT!
Man, the keyboards sticky 'cause I've been eating apples while I'm on again. |
Arguing yes XD I'd hate to think I put up this new section for no reason.
I did that numerous times, yup, I was eating an icelolly that was practically melting in my hands, whenever I typed, the keys would stick to my finger tips XD Argh, I hate knowing that I've spent yet another day not putting one more part up -_-; though..it's only been yesterday and today XD But I've got an idea on what the next part could be, but I have to be a bit careful, this idea could make me pretty much reckless >.> I'll post the next part sometime tomorrow or the next day Here's a little hint: Green and Blue aren't leaving One Island just yet...atleast not for the time being >3 EDIT - Green's just been given a slightly new look on the first post XD He looks a little cat like with that tooth sticking out. Anyway, I'm still working on the next part and I'm still sorta stuck..buuuuut it will be finished soon...if I /can/ finish it x.X Arrghhhh, I've been putting this off too much >_<; Tomorrow for sure I'm going to post the next part, if I don't, you may have my head =O |
xD Green dun got drunk!! lol. That gave me a real laugh. ^^;
I love the pixel arts. <33 Can't wait until the next part! :holds a lit light blulb over your head to try and help you think of ideas: o.o; Maybe you could create like side comics. Meaning as just some random stuff with the same characters, but not the same plot. Not that many, just some to keep people busy 'till you think of more plot for the main comic? o.o |
Those are awesome sprites.
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*mysteriously large axe is seen behind me, and I have my hands behind my back* ehehe...... :nervous: |
this is pure genius(unlike my spelling, as you can see :p) it's so fresh and original, admittinly I'm only on chapter one, but man am i enjoying it, keep it up
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Finally. I've finished Chapter 1 part 2. Though it's not exactly much, and it's not that good... so sorry o_o I've been putting my comic aside too many times that I forgot what to put in it >.< -gets hit by pancake- Well.. atleast I keep my head! ^_^ Erm..right? o.O -hides from FR/LG Master- XD
Thanks halfling2 and Vaati XD And Side comics? I'll take note of that Kurayami XD Though...I wouldn't even bother to do Side comics anyway XD |
I've just read the new part and I want to read more please please pplease make more It keeps getting more interesting
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Ugh, now we're back where we started, with Blue and Green at each others throats. The next time they meet, a will feel truly sorry for them. They are really off to a bad start, what with hecatomb on the islands, and- Green being captured by a madman and his phantom-pidgeon.... Oh no, phantom-pidgeon? Blue is so dead....
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Hm...well Chapter 1 part 3 is up. Though again it's not all that good -_- But not to worry, I'll make sure part 4 is much longer than part 3
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Once again great work signomi I just love your comic and I hope you'll make alot more of that stuff because it's great. That is all for now but, once again keep up the good work.
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good job. i shall spare your brain......for now.
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Thanks. I have an extension for Chapter 1 part 3.
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Amazing, you work so hard, Signomi; how do you manage it? Also, have you played Diablo II, because that is what the river of blood reminds me of. You just need to add an escape scene somewhere in this comic; I simply adore escape scenes. They are, usually, my favorite part of every video game and comic/show; collapsing buildings, exploding mountains, crashing planes, time limits, et cetera.
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Eww... escape scenes... those are just stressful...
Anyways, that madman scares me. I feel for Green XD |
Hmm, there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with this. They're really good! Keep up the good work. (i've been dared: reason for the quote at the end of my post)
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How do I manage it? That's what I'd like to know aswell....and I just got the 'river of blood' idea by an accident, when I got a little careless with a bottle of ketchup o_O
Yes, an escape scene I'll add ^^ Though it's going to take some time before I'm going to make an escape scene, chapter 1 is going to be a looong chapter. Anyway...Chapter 1 part 4 is up though it's not very long...or as interesing..sorry -_- And I've changed the cover once again. |
Like you said chapter 1 part 4 isn't very long or interesting but, the whole palace thingy would be kinda pointless without traps and I'm sure that part of your comic will leed to something interesting. Just keep the comic coming.
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Well, I only improved a slight bit in this part. Though it would've been much better if my computer didn't freeze and I lost a whole finished part >_<; And I was about to save it too. I got so frustrated and angry I left the whole 'to do' part 6 hours later.
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no matter what you say about it, it's still good ^_^
i've given up on your brain. you need it more than me, Signomi. You got a comic to write. to others reading this post: other peoples' brains are still up for grabs. that means YOU! |
The comic is getting very good, Signomi; and as for you, FR/LG master, you had better watch your step because you are not the only one with a(n) axe/scythe/knife/dagger/claymore/guillotine/scimitar/trident/fish fork/pair of scissors/other sharp, pointy object (that can take off someone's head). |
Eheheheh... I liked him better with the tooth out. But of course that's just me. Wow, can't wait to find out what twisted fantasies that guy has. And if you don't know: You cop out!
Well, I can't wait to see another chapter. I'm so glad my computer will work again! It's still against me but it's gone into "Nuetral Evil Mode" right now! |
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