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Hoenn Journeys
Well this is my first sprite comic, it will be rated PG-13 for violence, and foul language... maybe some young members must not check the comic (in some scenes)
Plot: The history tells about a boy named Renato, that was about to start his journey when he moved to Hoenn (unknown reason). While he's in there, he quickly heads to Littleroot Town, when he was about to leave, he meets Stephen, and they go together to Littleroot. While the story is passing away, they meet new friends, and new rivals, also new dangers. Main characters: http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/9245/red6hy.gif Name: Renato Age: 11 Hometown: Pallet Town Formerly known as Red, he is very energetic, sarcastic, almost nice and strong. Renato is a boy of Pallet that starts his journey with a Charmander, but before he could start, he moved to Hoenn, most of his friends didn't knew that he moved. In there, he learns about Prof. Birch and goes to Littleroot, before he could go there he meets Stephen and they go together to Littleroot but they split up because Renato faces a wild Seviper, then he's helped by May, after that he is bothered by her because she wants to battle her, he agrees after a while but a girl interfers, he tries to remember her, and he reminds that she is Kathy! his old-friend of school! He battled Sapphire and the battle ended as a draw, now both have a dislike to each other. http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Stephen.gif Name: Stephen Age: 15 Hometown: Blackhorn City Formerly known as Diamond, Stephen is funny, smart but very hasty. Stephen was a strong Pokemon trainer while he was younger, he won the 8th Silver Conference in Johto, and after that he moves to Hoenn with his Family, leaving all his Pokémon with Prof. Elm. In there he forgot to pick any of his Pokémon to keep his journey, but in his lucky day, he meets Renato and they go together to Littleroot Town, he goes to the lab of Prof. Birch but he doesn't finds him, so he searches him in route 101 (reason: screams) and he finds him, he helps both he and Ruby of the Poochyena attack but he recieves some help of Brendan. http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2866/yellowfrlg7wk.gif Name: Kathy Age: 10 Hometown: Viridian City Also known as Yellow, she is hasty, a bit timid and nice. Kathy was in the Viridian's School with Renato until she moved to Hoenn and met two special friends, when Renato saw her again, she didn't remembered him, but quickly she remembered that he was a good friend in her school in Kanto. She recieved a Pikachu as a gift of Birthday so she can go to her own journey. http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Ruby.gif Name: Brendan Age: 11 Hometown: Somewhere in Johto Known by his friends as Ruby, he is cool, hates battles and loves Pokémon beauty, Brendan is Norman's son, he seems to dislikes battles by some reason (...), He is an expert on making some clothes, he made Kathy her current clothing, and he seems to know May a bit, he meets Stephen while he and Prof. Birch were going attacked by a group of Poochyena, even if he hates battling, he doesn't likes seeing people in trouble, so he helps Stephen with a Treecko, now they have arrived to the lab... http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Sapphire.gif Name: May Age: 10 Hometown: Littleroot Town Known by everyone as Sapphire, she is frantic, wild and very serious. May is Prof. Birch's daughter, she meets with Renato when they battle a wild Seviper together, after that, she wants to battle him. After a long "chase-me-if-you-can" game, Renato agrees to battle but the battle is interfered by Kathy, still they Battle in the Lab, the battle ends in a draw and May seems to dislike the result. Now she seems to totaly dislike Renato, same goes for him. Chapter one: V.S. Seviper Comic 01 Comic 02 Comic 03 Comic 04 Comic 05 Comic 06 Comic 07 Comic 08 V.S. Poochyena Comic 09 Comic 10 Comic 11 Comic 12 V.S. Mudkip Comic 13 Comic 14 Comic 15 Comic 16 Comic 17 Comic 18 V.S Pikachu Comic 19 Comic 20 Comic 21 Fan Stuff: Stephen's fan art (Made by Rukari0) Thanks to: The Spriter resource. Renji for the Stephen/Diamond Sprites. Coronis for the Diamond/Yellow original Trainer Sprite. Signomi for the Yellow OW/Back sprites. Myself for the Red/Renato sprites. Well i hope that you enjoy it... comments? I'll update every weekend Thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting |
It's a pretty well-drawn comic, but I can't find the humor..if it's supposed to be funny, I don't see how. 6/10
Keep making comics, though. They may not be funny, but they're good otherwise ^^ |
I like this comic because it's one of the very few non-humor comics. Could I draw some fan art?
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yes if you want ^^ well i'm not good at jokes but i'm adding some soon
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I tried-
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5885/stephen2af.th.jpg I haven't draw a male character at all so it sucks. |
take your time... try doing an ahnd drawing then post it
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These Comics Are Cool! I Can't Wait For The Next One!
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I can't wait for the next one either =D Keep at it!
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That Was Kinda Scary! I Wonder What Will Happen!
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Ooh, a scream!? It must be bad...especially if it's a girly scream! o_o XD Keep at it Red-san!
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These are amazing! I can't wait for the next one!
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I Can't Wait For The Next Too!
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i'm posting because i've already got an idea for a title >_> i'll post later a new chapter
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Tsk tsk, stalling stalling XD Jk. -can't wait-
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Interesting ^_^ Though it is a bit unnatural to see a Seviper on that route XD Ohwell. Keep at it Red-san! =3
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i'm trying to make it as the special (but i don't know too much about the R/S sagas) well in there Sapphire appears and... whoa! *covers mouth* o.o;;
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Blabbermouth XD -giggle-
To you viewers out there: PAY ATTENTION TO THIS COMIC! It's going to get /really/ interesting =3 |
Uh-oh! The Seviper Attacks! I Can't Wait For Next Comic And See What Happens!
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Hm. That part is magnifiqué! Keep at it Red-san ^_^ Since I can't wait to know what happens next.
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Hey its very nice(specially the seventh episode)*sits and waits for more*
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Ummm how come in the 7th comic mudkip and charmander come out and then may and the freakish hair dude throw the pokeballs? Oh and the text is a little hard to read...
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i skipped that part, is hard to add effects,
BTW here's an update Comic Eight V.S. Poochyena Comic Nine |
Not bad Red-San. Can U tell me what's the secret Pokemon?
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well i had added some Bios, but it's not complete, when the comic show enough info i'll do it completed
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Okie Renato, time to add the new update ^^
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thanks a lot ^^ here it is... (sorry for just adding one, i was in exams so i wasn't able to do more comics...)
Comic 10 |
[SIZE=1]Influenced by the manga? Yay. Keep it up man.[/SIZE}
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Yeah I relly like it. I may give it a 10/10 for being good.
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yeah...those were alright coz of the spech bubles
that's what comics is soposed to be not writing undernief it |
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Hrm. =/ I wonder why people aren't posting. Ahwell. Still, you must continue ^^
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Sapphire = Pain in the -bleep- backside XP;
Well, I know you've an update Renato ;x So update! XD |
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Neh, enough with ze suspense! XD Man..Sapphire is as stubborn as hell, If I was Red I would've given her a muzzle X3 But it was sweet how Red and Yellow/Kathy met up again =D Well keep it up Renato ^^
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well to keep you busy for now i had made the plot and another comic! (it was hard to find the battle efects, so i took the entire week looking for it)
Comic 17 And people, please comment... |
Nice looking ^^ Though, I think you ought to go back to speech bubbles...
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I had figured out that i don't like too much speech bubbles ^^; so i changed, hope you don't mind
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So any new eppys Red? I really want to see more.
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Awesome new eppies, and the bios look great.
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Well for now i will update with this, i had been having problems with exams... and i will for two weeks more
Comic 20 |
It's great I wonder what happens next!
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Can I Have Venusar + Articuno Articuno Base Pleas!!!!
EDIT ~ Please take that to a Home of the Sprites request topic, not here, this is somebody's comic thread. ~Signomi |
magnus døhl: Sorry, wrong place to ask. This is somebody's comic thread, you look for a request thread in the Home of the Sprites section for that.
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Well people, i will be busy until Monday, but then i will give you an update ^^; |
I gotta say Red-Kun this is beter than reading the manga I'm reading...Gotta love those yellow sprites....so cool..Keep it up Red-Kun, I'll be keeping my eye on this one.
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I like the comic series it's realy good.
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Well i'm having more viewers each time ^^
Here's an update, i hope you like it for now =P Comic 21 And for Yellow's scratch, it had been modified a bit ^^; Please comment |
I've been having my eye on this Comic and I like, keep up the good work.
P.S. I'll be watching |
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