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Roy-Kun August 13th, 2005 4:06 PM

Hoenn Journeys
 
Well this is my first sprite comic, it will be rated PG-13 for violence, and foul language... maybe some young members must not check the comic (in some scenes)

Plot:
The history tells about a boy named Renato, that was about to start his journey when he moved to Hoenn (unknown reason). While he's in there, he quickly heads to Littleroot Town, when he was about to leave, he meets Stephen, and they go together to Littleroot. While the story is passing away, they meet new friends, and new rivals, also new dangers.

Main characters:

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/9245/red6hy.gif Name: Renato Age: 11 Hometown: Pallet Town
Formerly known as Red, he is very energetic, sarcastic, almost nice and strong. Renato is a boy of Pallet that starts his journey with a Charmander, but before he could start, he moved to Hoenn, most of his friends didn't knew that he moved. In there, he learns about Prof. Birch and goes to Littleroot, before he could go there he meets Stephen and they go together to Littleroot but they split up because Renato faces a wild Seviper, then he's helped by May, after that he is bothered by her because she wants to battle her, he agrees after a while but a girl interfers, he tries to remember her, and he reminds that she is Kathy! his old-friend of school! He battled Sapphire and the battle ended as a draw, now both have a dislike to each other.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Stephen.gif Name: Stephen Age: 15 Hometown: Blackhorn City
Formerly known as Diamond, Stephen is funny, smart but very hasty. Stephen was a strong Pokemon trainer while he was younger, he won the 8th Silver Conference in Johto, and after that he moves to Hoenn with his Family, leaving all his Pokémon with Prof. Elm. In there he forgot to pick any of his Pokémon to keep his journey, but in his lucky day, he meets Renato and they go together to Littleroot Town, he goes to the lab of Prof. Birch but he doesn't finds him, so he searches him in route 101 (reason: screams) and he finds him, he helps both he and Ruby of the Poochyena attack but he recieves some help of Brendan.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2866/yellowfrlg7wk.gif Name: Kathy Age: 10 Hometown: Viridian City
Also known as Yellow, she is hasty, a bit timid and nice. Kathy was in the Viridian's School with Renato until she moved to Hoenn and met two special friends, when Renato saw her again, she didn't remembered him, but quickly she remembered that he was a good friend in her school in Kanto. She recieved a Pikachu as a gift of Birthday so she can go to her own journey.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Ruby.gif Name: Brendan Age: 11 Hometown: Somewhere in Johto
Known by his friends as Ruby, he is cool, hates battles and loves Pokémon beauty, Brendan is Norman's son, he seems to dislikes battles by some reason (...), He is an expert on making some clothes, he made Kathy her current clothing, and he seems to know May a bit, he meets Stephen while he and Prof. Birch were going attacked by a group of Poochyena, even if he hates battling, he doesn't likes seeing people in trouble, so he helps Stephen with a Treecko, now they have arrived to the lab...

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Sapphire.gif Name: May Age: 10 Hometown: Littleroot Town
Known by everyone as Sapphire, she is frantic, wild and very serious. May is Prof. Birch's daughter, she meets with Renato when they battle a wild Seviper together, after that, she wants to battle him. After a long "chase-me-if-you-can" game, Renato agrees to battle but the battle is interfered by Kathy, still they Battle in the Lab, the battle ends in a draw and May seems to dislike the result. Now she seems to totaly dislike Renato, same goes for him.


Chapter one: V.S. Seviper

Comic 01
Comic 02
Comic 03
Comic 04
Comic 05
Comic 06
Comic 07
Comic 08

V.S. Poochyena

Comic 09
Comic 10
Comic 11
Comic 12

V.S. Mudkip

Comic 13
Comic 14
Comic 15
Comic 16
Comic 17
Comic 18

V.S Pikachu

Comic 19
Comic 20
Comic 21

Fan Stuff:
Stephen's fan art (Made by Rukari0)

Thanks to:
The Spriter resource.
Renji for the Stephen/Diamond Sprites.
Coronis for the Diamond/Yellow original Trainer Sprite.
Signomi for the Yellow OW/Back sprites.
Myself for the Red/Renato sprites.

Well i hope that you enjoy it... comments?

I'll update every weekend

Thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting

Dragon-Chan August 13th, 2005 4:18 PM

It's a pretty well-drawn comic, but I can't find the humor..if it's supposed to be funny, I don't see how. 6/10
Keep making comics, though. They may not be funny, but they're good otherwise ^^

Rukari0 August 13th, 2005 4:22 PM

I like this comic because it's one of the very few non-humor comics. Could I draw some fan art?

Roy-Kun August 13th, 2005 4:23 PM

yes if you want ^^ well i'm not good at jokes but i'm adding some soon

Rukari0 August 13th, 2005 4:30 PM

I tried-

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5885/stephen2af.th.jpg

I haven't draw a male character at all so it sucks.

Roy-Kun August 13th, 2005 4:54 PM

take your time... try doing an ahnd drawing then post it

Omega Latios August 21st, 2005 12:00 AM

These Comics Are Cool! I Can't Wait For The Next One!

Signomi August 21st, 2005 7:20 AM

I can't wait for the next one either =D Keep at it!

Roy-Kun August 21st, 2005 11:25 AM

a reply is a reply XD here is only one comic

Comic 04

Omega Latios August 21st, 2005 11:31 AM

That Was Kinda Scary! I Wonder What Will Happen!

Signomi August 21st, 2005 11:51 AM

Ooh, a scream!? It must be bad...especially if it's a girly scream! o_o XD Keep at it Red-san!

~Amethyst_Callista_Moon~ August 22nd, 2005 6:02 PM

These are amazing! I can't wait for the next one!

Omega Latios August 25th, 2005 11:28 AM

I Can't Wait For The Next Too!

Roy-Kun August 28th, 2005 10:41 AM

i'm posting because i've already got an idea for a title >_> i'll post later a new chapter

Signomi August 28th, 2005 11:27 AM

Tsk tsk, stalling stalling XD Jk. -can't wait-

Roy-Kun August 28th, 2005 11:46 AM

tsk tsk, here's the update!

Comic 05
Comic 06

Signomi August 28th, 2005 11:52 AM

Interesting ^_^ Though it is a bit unnatural to see a Seviper on that route XD Ohwell. Keep at it Red-san! =3

Roy-Kun August 28th, 2005 11:56 AM

i'm trying to make it as the special (but i don't know too much about the R/S sagas) well in there Sapphire appears and... whoa! *covers mouth* o.o;;

Signomi August 28th, 2005 11:58 AM

Blabbermouth XD -giggle-

To you viewers out there: PAY ATTENTION TO THIS COMIC! It's going to get /really/ interesting =3

Omega Latios September 1st, 2005 8:29 AM

Uh-oh! The Seviper Attacks! I Can't Wait For Next Comic And See What Happens!

Roy-Kun September 7th, 2005 6:03 PM

is time to update! i think this will be like the anime style attacks

Comic 07

Signomi September 9th, 2005 2:13 PM

Hm. That part is magnifiqué! Keep at it Red-san ^_^ Since I can't wait to know what happens next.

jc_rcw September 9th, 2005 3:33 PM

Hey its very nice(specially the seventh episode)*sits and waits for more*

Sheepnut September 9th, 2005 3:52 PM

Ummm how come in the 7th comic mudkip and charmander come out and then may and the freakish hair dude throw the pokeballs? Oh and the text is a little hard to read...

Roy-Kun September 17th, 2005 6:13 PM

i skipped that part, is hard to add effects,

BTW here's an update

Comic Eight

V.S. Poochyena

Comic Nine

Karasuma September 17th, 2005 6:15 PM

Not bad Red-San. Can U tell me what's the secret Pokemon?

Roy-Kun September 22nd, 2005 1:54 PM

well i had added some Bios, but it's not complete, when the comic show enough info i'll do it completed

Signomi October 1st, 2005 4:36 PM

Okie Renato, time to add the new update ^^

Roy-Kun October 1st, 2005 4:38 PM

thanks a lot ^^ here it is... (sorry for just adding one, i was in exams so i wasn't able to do more comics...)

Comic 10

O October 2nd, 2005 4:14 AM

[SIZE=1]Influenced by the manga? Yay. Keep it up man.[/SIZE}

Karasuma October 2nd, 2005 4:20 AM

Yeah I relly like it. I may give it a 10/10 for being good.

Roy-Kun October 10th, 2005 3:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Outskate
Influenced by the manga? Yay. Keep it up man.

Just by some reasons, is kind of linked with it, some parts are made by me ^^;

Recknin October 15th, 2005 4:00 AM

yeah...those were alright coz of the spech bubles
that's what comics is soposed to be not writing
undernief it

Roy-Kun October 21st, 2005 4:21 PM

well time for an update, but i had to erase my disk drive, so i had to make them again... here it is:

Comic 11
Comic 12

Why isn't anybody posting?

Signomi October 23rd, 2005 2:25 PM

Hrm. =/ I wonder why people aren't posting. Ahwell. Still, you must continue ^^

Roy-Kun October 23rd, 2005 4:41 PM

here's the new update, sorry for the being late

V.S. Mudkip

Comic 13
Comic 14

Signomi November 6th, 2005 3:02 PM

Sapphire = Pain in the -bleep- backside XP;

Well, I know you've an update Renato ;x So update! XD

Roy-Kun November 6th, 2005 3:05 PM

Meh you discovered me xD

Comic 15
Comic 16

Signomi November 6th, 2005 3:10 PM

Neh, enough with ze suspense! XD Man..Sapphire is as stubborn as hell, If I was Red I would've given her a muzzle X3 But it was sweet how Red and Yellow/Kathy met up again =D Well keep it up Renato ^^

Roy-Kun November 13th, 2005 6:30 PM

well to keep you busy for now i had made the plot and another comic! (it was hard to find the battle efects, so i took the entire week looking for it)

Comic 17

And people, please comment...

Signomi November 14th, 2005 12:32 PM

Nice looking ^^ Though, I think you ought to go back to speech bubbles...

Roy-Kun November 14th, 2005 12:51 PM

I had figured out that i don't like too much speech bubbles ^^; so i changed, hope you don't mind

jc_rcw November 19th, 2005 1:29 PM

So any new eppys Red? I really want to see more.

Roy-Kun November 20th, 2005 2:03 PM

Yep, here's an update:

Comic 18

V.S Pikachu

Comic 19

And i had updated other two Bios, ^^

jc_rcw November 20th, 2005 2:07 PM

Awesome new eppies, and the bios look great.

Roy-Kun November 29th, 2005 3:11 PM

Well for now i will update with this, i had been having problems with exams... and i will for two weeks more

Comic 20

Fateful November 30th, 2005 5:36 AM

It's great I wonder what happens next!

magnus døhl November 30th, 2005 10:52 AM

Can I Have Venusar + Articuno Articuno Base Pleas!!!!

EDIT ~ Please take that to a Home of the Sprites request topic, not here, this is somebody's comic thread. ~Signomi

Signomi November 30th, 2005 10:54 AM

magnus døhl: Sorry, wrong place to ask. This is somebody's comic thread, you look for a request thread in the Home of the Sprites section for that.

Roy-Kun December 6th, 2005 10:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by magnus døhl
Can I Have Venusar + Articuno Articuno Base Pleas!!!!

Urgh... what?

Well people, i will be busy until Monday, but then i will give you an update ^^;

Karasuma December 6th, 2005 12:29 PM

I gotta say Red-Kun this is beter than reading the manga I'm reading...Gotta love those yellow sprites....so cool..Keep it up Red-Kun, I'll be keeping my eye on this one.

limy85 December 6th, 2005 11:26 PM

I like the comic series it's realy good.

Roy-Kun December 9th, 2005 1:51 PM

Well i'm having more viewers each time ^^

Here's an update, i hope you like it for now =P

Comic 21

And for Yellow's scratch, it had been modified a bit ^^;

Please comment

Shijuukara December 9th, 2005 7:23 PM

I've been having my eye on this Comic and I like, keep up the good work.

P.S. I'll be watching

Signomi December 17th, 2005 1:11 AM

This thread is closed on Request.

~Closed


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