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Pokemon: Universe Version
The First Cover http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/4577/saga20jk.png This comic is the hit TV show "Pokemon" but done it my way in style. But I make some twist along the way. and yes this comic ends when The gang start in the Orange Islands. If you've never seened the show from the start then this is like watching it. The Plot It starts in Pallet Town where 10 year old Ash Ketchum is living a normal "boring" life and his journey begins when a friend of his sends him an E-Mail. Follow him as he meets new friends and earns some badges. Main Characters Ash http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3531/ash1rm.png The hero of this story. Doesn't really like Pokemon until a friend inspires him. Brock http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8377/brock4kv.png Pewter City's Gym leader that becomes Ash's friend as the story goes on. Misty http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1118/misty6vy.png With her bike stolen she decides to go with Ash on his journey until he pays for a new bike. More Coming Soon... Some Characters talk in different Colors: Ash-Black(Always), Prof.Oak-Brown, A.J.-Lightblue(I hope you can read lightblue), TeamRocket-Red, Brock-Green, Misty-Blue. Now for the Credits: The Sprite Resources.com Pokesho.com (a really big thanks) Signomi for the Mewtwo Adam for the sprites Outlaw for the sprites Tsukasa for some sprites Blazin Espio for the trainer sprites. Chill dude^^ Please post every time you read it.Here they are, Enjoy! :classic: Season 1 Pika Saga Episode 1: A New Beginning Episode 2: My Journey Awaits Episode 3: Pikachu, the Electric Mouse Episode 4: Two Rookies Fight Episode 5: Trouble in Viridian Forest Episode 6: Team Rocket Attacks! Episode 7: Gym Leaders? Episode 8: Pika Problems Episode 9: No Match for Brock Episode 10: Smarter Than Ever! Friends Saga Episode 11: A Shocking Battle Episode 12: To Fall or Advance Episode 13: Change of Heart Episode 14: Mt. Moon Rumble Episode 15: Cerulian City Horror! Episode 16: The Speedy Rocket Episode 17: Rocket V.S. Gym Leader Episode 18: Water Fight! Episode 19: An Explosive Match Episode 20: Bulbasaur's Choice Three Starters Saga Episode 21: Charmander's Problem Episode 22: Another Friend Episode 23: Red & Blue Episode 24: The Newest Member Episode 25: Power Surge! Episode 26: Pikachu's Choice Episode 27: Electric Shock Showdown! Episode 28: Going on a Cruise |
Is it me or did u make two threads for the same comic?
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This is for real!
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Please refrain from making more than one thread for one thing, if possible. ^_^;;
Since this seems to be the thread you want to post in, though...I'll go ahead and close your other one, okay? |
The other one I messed up big time. And I can't delete the other thread. but tell me? Is this one is better from the other one? This one RULZ!!!
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you have too much self esteam, especially for a rookie, I may even have to cut your ego down a notch
for one it's sometimes difficult to follow the pannels, for two there are a few spelling and grammer mistakes, and 3, you need to vredit the spriters who ripped those pokemon, trainers and maps meh, the plot is a little cliche', same with most of the cast, there's no real humour to speak of, and nidoran wouldn't have extream speed at level 3 don't get me wrong, your comic isn't terrible, but it doesent rule there are plenty more stereotypical pokemon adventures like this out there 5/10 oh and on the off chance you ripped them you should still credit nintendo |
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As for the adventure,You may know that anything is possible. The Nidoran learned Extremespeed in the place where in Pokemon Crystal, the hero got a dratini with Extremespeed. I thoght that the just that attack was cool for Nidoran. And about the giving credits I will. I couldn't have made Eps. 1 to 5 without giving credit to the these guys:Eternaldarkwing,Badassbill,and Jack.Thanks guys. ;) Just like vaati I wanna hear what you all think my comics are. if their not funny i'll make funny,if their not too good i'll make them better. ;) |
I'm liking it so far. Though the boy's font colour is too bright, you ought to change it so it's easier to read ^_^ Keep it up.
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Yeah, that's why I don't make more episodes with him. gotta save color for the other charackters.
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These Comics Are Great! I Can't Wait For The Next Part!
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These are great but you should becareful where to put "?" and where to put "!".
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Right, and thanks for the advice Coolmaster. they help a lot.
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ell I'm very glad to see you accepted critism and have decided to hone it to become better ^_^...too bad I can't seem to view issue 6
never mind, it works now |
I'll post Episode 7 soon. I'm still doing it. It's called "Gym Leadres?"
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issue 6 wasn't bad, there were a few spelling mistakes, nothing major though
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My writing can get a little sloppy sometimes but I'll make it better. thanks for the tip vaati.
P.S. I spelled it wrong, It's really called "Gym Leaders?" |
it's ok, a typo is a common mistake in sprite comics
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Okay! Episode 7 & 8 are done. I'll introduce you two New Charcters:
Gotta give Credit to Badassbill and Kingkirby for the new images. :nervous: |
Oh I forgot, how are you guys liking my episodes? please I need to know?
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I'll have Episode 9 by Tomorrow.
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don't triple post, it's against the rules
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It's quite a good comin, okay, stroy, I don't like the light blue colour of some of the fonts....8/10.:)
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Right, It's Kanto but more Advanced.Like some Kanto Pokemon know johto and hoenn moves.
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Sorry for the double post, but I've done 10 Episodes! Wooho!
I've put them all in order. Episodes 1 to 10 are Season 1 of my series. :nervous: |
*claps*Well Done,MysticTrunks!
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Anyone know where I can get good pictures of Hoenn gym leaders? Thanks
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Nice! I enjoyed readin' them!
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The comic is OK. For battle text, use this.
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oh so you like Mystic Trunks comic but you don't like mine, you are just crazy mines as good as Mystic Trunks
Oh yeah Mystic Trunks this is good 9/10 |
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11 is almost done. ;) |
Season 2 Begins!
Whoops, sorry to double post again, but I'm done with Episode 11. It's called "A Shocking Battle".
I guess for this Episode I gotta Thank Outlaw for giving me the Indian Trainer. :confused: |
Wow very nice :D, keep the good work.
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that was a pretty good read i enjoyed that alot!
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Thanks jc rcw and Link2005 ^.^ It's people like you that make me keep on doing my SC's. Anyway, Episode 12 is ready.
It's called "To Fall or Advance?" Please post so I know what did you think. ;) This episode has a very funny Brock: http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a354/MysticTrunks/bok.jpg :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
I like this comic i give it nine & a half that near perfect but its just like the tv show whell kinda
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its really good*sits back and waits for more*
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Oh there'll be more, just wait. How come people aren't posting?
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Heh, sorry to double post again, but I'm done with episode 13. I've putted all my Episodes in the first page so go on and check.
Please post? |
Dadada. This comic is pretty nice ^__^ -gives it a ribbon- Joo must keep it up MT ^o^
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Thanks Signomi ^_^ Anyway I'm done with eppy 14 so check it out.
And please post. I don't care if you say that it's terrible or good *__* |
Whoops sorry to double post. I'll have eppy's 1 to 14 modified. you'll see.
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:D :D :D this is freakin awesome!!! I wish I could be as good as you YOU MY IDOL :chinese:
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*claps*very nice indeed my friend :D
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this is brilliant, I don't think you should quit, ignore critics, unless it's a good report, and never give up.
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Don't Give Up! This Is One Of The Best Comics Around!
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Well, it depends on the voting poll. so far there's 2 that want me out.
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Don't Care About The Voters. This Comic Is Great! Don't Stop Making Em.
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and 4 people want you to keep going including me, If I was you I'd keep going anyway but...
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4 days then... Ahem.
Hello all people who like this comic please vote if you want Mystic Trunks to carry on with this comic or pack his bags and hit the road. It's in your hands. |
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oi Mystic trunks is going nowhere
hey people dont be sad i like his stuff |
nope this is not it, PM friends ask them, you're not going to give up, I won't let you, don't get down cos people won't post, do what I do, PM somebody to let them know the next eppy is up,
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What? You want to discontinue your comic for just the reason that not many who view your comics post? o_O MT, with all due respect. I think that's a very bizarre reason. You should continue what you have already created regardless of the amount of posts you have in your thread. Because frankly you shouldn't really care.The purpose of continuing a comic is believing that your hard work will pay off. Forget the viewers/commenters, don't let anything discourage you from continuing what you've done. You already have a fan in me and I'd be really dissappointed if you do not continue this comic.
'Nuff said. |
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yeah! what she said! I can see the future this comic will rise before all others
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didn't you understand? It means you're comic will be one of the best, and will remain one of the best
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Personally I'm not really too fond of your Self-esteem o.O; That's what's making you do this.
Take a look around you dearie. At some of the comics who've been severly critisized, you're one of the lucky ones. This comic has potential. It would be a shame to let it go. You let it go, you're only doing yourself bad, not really good o.O; |
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But why do you care so much for posts? It's the comic you should care more of. Not the posts.
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Well I'm not pushing you really MT. You may do what you like. I just think it's very strange to discontinue a comic due to lack of posters... But heck ^^; We'll still be mates right?
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Hm...I'll take that as a no then =/ Very well.
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Noooooo please continue with your comics please
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Of course I do I'm still waiting for the 14th one
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Then say no more. I HAVE DECIDED NOT TOO RETIRE AND KEEP ON GOING WITH MY SC's.
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Yay *dances* well no to wait for the new episodes :D
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Those are some good news*sits back and relaxes*
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Yep, but don't expect them to be very funny. there 100% adventure.
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well that doesn't matter,they're very good.
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Thank's I try to make them pretty good.
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looking good so far, keep it up like that, and dont abandon it like the other comics! (the croconaw hunter, it was real good, but never continued...)
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Thanks Mostachon! Now for the time being I only have one new episode so make sure you see it. it's in the first page.
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Haha XD Poor Misty, reminds me of in G/S/C when she was at Cerulean Cape with a guy then your PC comes and shoos him away. Heh, well what shall happen to Pikachu? Keep at it MT! ^.^
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LOL so when are you doing the 14th one I'm so impacient:P
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Haha, I like this. Good job, the comic is neat and tidy, albeit a little difficult to understand.
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Hey, new eppy 16 is posted. make sure U see it and plz post.
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Looking good so far MT :D
So I take it this is a ...sort of remake of the Anime? |
They're really good(I hadn't read #14,15,and16)keep it up because I want to see more :D.
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OMG! This is so exciting! Good work!
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Thanks everyone. Well, todays the big day. It's time to see if I keep on doing or stop. I'll post again tonite.
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Please keep on doing them I love them.
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Don't say love dude, it makes U sound GAY XD. just say like.
P.S.: By tomorrow I'll have the complete season 2!!!!!!!! But then I'm not sure if I'll keep on doing, before anyone says anything, nope, I am not leaving. Just taking a little break XD's. |
Ok sorry master XD well is that they're so good, if you want I could say I hate them too :D
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I must be dreaming. I've done 20 episodes!!!!! (*Celebrates*) WOOT! WOOT! This is really something that I thought I wasn't gonna continue, but I see that all of U like my Eppy's so much that I decided to keep on going. But I think that for the remainder of this week I won't be doing any new eppy's. Nope, I'm gonna take a break and maybe post eppy 21 by Monday. This does not mean that I quit, this means that I want to take a break for the next 5 days. So long.........
P.S. Take a look at the future of my eppy's as well. It's all in the first page. Now I gotta go Celebrate at "Taco Bell". Dinner is on MT! |
Hmm..interesting ^_^ Can't wait till you update again MT.
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Season 3 Begin!!!!!!
I've partied this week too much but today I've finished eppy 21 which means I'm starting Season 3 WOOT, WOOT! Make sure you check it ;)
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Pretty good comic! Its similar to the original anime story while having its own twists at the same time ^_^ I like it :P
~Newten5 |
Looking good MT :)
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WOOT,WOOT keep it up your doing great.
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I need help though. I want to put some new trainers in my comic so anybody can help.
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