The PokéCommunity Forums

The PokéCommunity Forums (https://www.pokecommunity.com/index.php)
-   Art Studio (https://www.pokecommunity.com/forumdisplay.php?f=21)
-   -   Welcome to Poke Universe! the real one! (https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=48666)

Karasuma August 30th, 2005 5:04 PM

Pokemon: Universe Version
 

This comic is the hit TV show "Pokemon" but done it my way in style. But I make some twist along the way. and yes this comic ends when The gang start in the Orange Islands. If you've never seened the show from the start then this is like watching it.

The Plot
It starts in Pallet Town where 10 year old Ash Ketchum is living a normal "boring" life and his journey begins when a friend of his sends him an E-Mail. Follow him as he meets new friends and earns some badges.

Main Characters
Ash
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3531/ash1rm.png
The hero of this story. Doesn't really like Pokemon until a friend inspires him.
Brock
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8377/brock4kv.png
Pewter City's Gym leader that becomes Ash's friend as the story goes on.
Misty
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1118/misty6vy.png
With her bike stolen she decides to go with Ash on his journey until he pays for a new bike.

More Coming Soon...

Some Characters talk in different Colors: Ash-Black(Always), Prof.Oak-Brown, A.J.-Lightblue(I hope you can read lightblue), TeamRocket-Red, Brock-Green, Misty-Blue.

Now for the Credits:
The Sprite Resources.com
Pokesho.com (a really big thanks)
Signomi for the Mewtwo
Adam for the sprites
Outlaw for the sprites
Tsukasa for some sprites
Blazin Espio for the trainer sprites. Chill dude^^

Please post every time you read it.Here they are, Enjoy! :classic:

Season 1
Pika Saga

Episode 1: A New Beginning
Episode 2: My Journey Awaits
Episode 3: Pikachu, the Electric Mouse
Episode 4: Two Rookies Fight
Episode 5: Trouble in Viridian Forest
Episode 6: Team Rocket Attacks!
Episode 7: Gym Leaders?
Episode 8: Pika Problems
Episode 9: No Match for Brock
Episode 10: Smarter Than Ever!

Friends Saga

Episode 11: A Shocking Battle
Episode 12: To Fall or Advance
Episode 13: Change of Heart
Episode 14: Mt. Moon Rumble
Episode 15: Cerulian City Horror!
Episode 16: The Speedy Rocket
Episode 17: Rocket V.S. Gym Leader
Episode 18: Water Fight!
Episode 19: An Explosive Match
Episode 20: Bulbasaur's Choice

Three Starters Saga

Episode 21: Charmander's Problem
Episode 22: Another Friend
Episode 23: Red & Blue
Episode 24: The Newest Member
Episode 25: Power Surge!
Episode 26: Pikachu's Choice
Episode 27: Electric Shock Showdown!
Episode 28: Going on a Cruise

Tsukasa August 30th, 2005 5:39 PM

Is it me or did u make two threads for the same comic?

Karasuma August 30th, 2005 5:46 PM

This is for real!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Tsukasa
Is it me or did u make two threads for the same comic?

If you went to the other one I wrote that I won't be putting my episodes in there cause I messed up BIG TIME. That's why I called this one "THE REAL ONE". The other thread, It's nothing. This One Rules!!!! :rambo:

Sylphiel August 30th, 2005 5:48 PM

Please refrain from making more than one thread for one thing, if possible. ^_^;;

Since this seems to be the thread you want to post in, though...I'll go ahead and close your other one, okay?

Karasuma August 30th, 2005 5:51 PM

The other one I messed up big time. And I can't delete the other thread. but tell me? Is this one is better from the other one? This one RULZ!!!

Fox♠ August 31st, 2005 1:07 AM

you have too much self esteam, especially for a rookie, I may even have to cut your ego down a notch

for one it's sometimes difficult to follow the pannels, for two there are a few spelling and grammer mistakes, and 3, you need to vredit the spriters who ripped those pokemon, trainers and maps

meh, the plot is a little cliche', same with most of the cast, there's no real humour to speak of, and nidoran wouldn't have extream speed at level 3

don't get me wrong, your comic isn't terrible, but it doesent rule

there are plenty more stereotypical pokemon adventures like this out there

5/10

oh and on the off chance you ripped them you should still credit nintendo

Karasuma August 31st, 2005 3:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vaati
you have too much self esteam, especially for a rookie, I may even have to cut your ego down a notch

for one it's sometimes difficult to follow the pannels, for two there are a few spelling and grammer mistakes, and 3, you need to vredit the spriters who ripped those pokemon, trainers and maps

meh, the plot is a little cliche', same with most of the cast, there's no real humour to speak of, and nidoran wouldn't have extream speed at level 3

don't get me wrong, your comic isn't terrible, but it doesent rule

there are plenty more stereotypical pokemon adventures like this out there

5/10

oh and on the off chance you ripped them you should still credit nintendo

Forgive me then Vaati. This is my first time making these Comic Sprites and it was hard for me to get all sprites from differentpritesdfferent websites. You've inspire me to become better and this is just the beginning, there will be more on the way.

As for the adventure,You may know that anything is possible. The Nidoran learned Extremespeed in the place where in Pokemon Crystal, the hero got a dratini with Extremespeed. I thoght that the just that attack was cool for Nidoran.

And about the giving credits I will. I couldn't have made Eps. 1 to 5 without giving credit to the these guys:Eternaldarkwing,Badassbill,and Jack.Thanks guys. ;)

Just like vaati I wanna hear what you all think my comics are. if their not funny i'll make funny,if their not too good i'll make them better. ;)

Signomi August 31st, 2005 3:35 AM

I'm liking it so far. Though the boy's font colour is too bright, you ought to change it so it's easier to read ^_^ Keep it up.

Karasuma August 31st, 2005 3:37 AM

Yeah, that's why I don't make more episodes with him. gotta save color for the other charackters.

Omega Latios August 31st, 2005 3:40 AM

These Comics Are Great! I Can't Wait For The Next Part!

Eon-Rider August 31st, 2005 3:50 AM

These are great but you should becareful where to put "?" and where to put "!".

Karasuma August 31st, 2005 3:55 AM

Right, and thanks for the advice Coolmaster. they help a lot.

Fox♠ August 31st, 2005 4:18 AM

ell I'm very glad to see you accepted critism and have decided to hone it to become better ^_^...too bad I can't seem to view issue 6

never mind, it works now

Karasuma August 31st, 2005 4:24 AM

I'll post Episode 7 soon. I'm still doing it. It's called "Gym Leadres?"

Fox♠ August 31st, 2005 4:28 AM

issue 6 wasn't bad, there were a few spelling mistakes, nothing major though

Karasuma August 31st, 2005 4:33 AM

My writing can get a little sloppy sometimes but I'll make it better. thanks for the tip vaati.

P.S. I spelled it wrong, It's really called "Gym Leaders?"

Fox♠ August 31st, 2005 4:57 AM

it's ok, a typo is a common mistake in sprite comics

Karasuma August 31st, 2005 5:14 AM

Okay! Episode 7 & 8 are done. I'll introduce you two New Charcters:
Gotta give Credit to Badassbill and Kingkirby for the new images. :nervous:

Karasuma August 31st, 2005 3:03 PM

Oh I forgot, how are you guys liking my episodes? please I need to know?

Karasuma August 31st, 2005 6:19 PM

I'll have Episode 9 by Tomorrow.

Fox♠ September 1st, 2005 12:57 AM

don't triple post, it's against the rules

Datriot September 1st, 2005 1:56 AM

It's quite a good comin, okay, stroy, I don't like the light blue colour of some of the fonts....8/10.:)

Karasuma September 1st, 2005 4:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vaati
don't triple post, it's against the rules

Heh, I get carried away sometimes but thanx for the tip. :rambo:

armadilloHD September 1st, 2005 4:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vaati
and 3, you need to vredit the spriters who ripped those pokemon, trainers and maps

Not really, most rippers want to stay anonymous, you need to credit if you use someone's edited sprite though. Vaati said most of the problems in his post, but this gets the 0 for being nothing but the original season one plot with only few new twists

Karasuma September 1st, 2005 5:11 AM

Right, It's Kanto but more Advanced.Like some Kanto Pokemon know johto and hoenn moves.

Karasuma September 1st, 2005 8:17 PM

Sorry for the double post, but I've done 10 Episodes! Wooho!
I've put them all in order. Episodes 1 to 10 are Season 1 of my series. :nervous:

Stephen,Pokemon Master September 2nd, 2005 11:25 AM

*claps*Well Done,MysticTrunks!

Maks September 2nd, 2005 9:20 PM

Anyone know where I can get good pictures of Hoenn gym leaders? Thanks

Eon-Rider September 2nd, 2005 9:45 PM

Nice! I enjoyed readin' them!

Jarman September 3rd, 2005 4:12 AM

The comic is OK. For battle text, use this.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maks
Anyone know where I can get good pictures of Hoenn gym leaders? Thanks

http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 7:31 AM

oh so you like Mystic Trunks comic but you don't like mine, you are just crazy mines as good as Mystic Trunks

Oh yeah Mystic Trunks this is good 9/10

Karasuma September 3rd, 2005 10:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
oh so you like Mystic Trunks comic but you don't like mine, you are just crazy mines as good as Mystic Trunks

Oh yeah Mystic Trunks this is good 9/10

Thankx, I'm still working on Season 2, which is Eps. 11 to 20.
11 is almost done. ;)

Karasuma September 4th, 2005 8:09 PM

Season 2 Begins!
 
Whoops, sorry to double post again, but I'm done with Episode 11. It's called "A Shocking Battle".
I guess for this Episode I gotta Thank Outlaw for giving me the Indian Trainer. :confused:

jc_rcw September 4th, 2005 8:20 PM

Wow very nice :D, keep the good work.

.-'Infernal Hylian'-. September 5th, 2005 12:59 AM

that was a pretty good read i enjoyed that alot!

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 4:05 AM

Thanks jc rcw and Link2005 ^.^ It's people like you that make me keep on doing my SC's. Anyway, Episode 12 is ready.
It's called "To Fall or Advance?"
Please post so I know what did you think. ;)
This episode has a very funny Brock:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a354/MysticTrunks/bok.jpg
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Crystal Walrus September 5th, 2005 7:04 AM

I like this comic i give it nine & a half that near perfect but its just like the tv show whell kinda

jc_rcw September 5th, 2005 12:49 PM

its really good*sits back and waits for more*

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 6:25 PM

Oh there'll be more, just wait. How come people aren't posting?

Karasuma September 6th, 2005 4:09 AM

Heh, sorry to double post again, but I'm done with episode 13. I've putted all my Episodes in the first page so go on and check.
Please post?

Signomi September 6th, 2005 4:26 AM

Dadada. This comic is pretty nice ^__^ -gives it a ribbon- Joo must keep it up MT ^o^

Karasuma September 8th, 2005 1:25 PM

Thanks Signomi ^_^ Anyway I'm done with eppy 14 so check it out.

And please post. I don't care if you say that it's terrible or good *__*

Karasuma September 8th, 2005 1:44 PM

Whoops sorry to double post. I'll have eppy's 1 to 14 modified. you'll see.

legoman September 9th, 2005 12:42 PM

:D :D :D this is freakin awesome!!! I wish I could be as good as you YOU MY IDOL :chinese:

jc_rcw September 9th, 2005 3:27 PM

*claps*very nice indeed my friend :D

Karasuma September 9th, 2005 4:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jc_rcw
*claps*very nice indeed my friend :D

Thanks guys. I got some bad news. I think I'm stoping here. It's not me. It's other people that don't post here. You see it but you don't post. This is it. I wanna know if you want me to continue or not. I'll post a poll and with that this is it. I'll give up. :shocked:

Adam_148 September 10th, 2005 9:15 AM

this is brilliant, I don't think you should quit, ignore critics, unless it's a good report, and never give up.

Omega Latios September 10th, 2005 9:15 AM

Don't Give Up! This Is One Of The Best Comics Around!

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 9:16 AM

Well, it depends on the voting poll. so far there's 2 that want me out.

Omega Latios September 10th, 2005 9:20 AM

Don't Care About The Voters. This Comic Is Great! Don't Stop Making Em.

Adam_148 September 10th, 2005 9:20 AM

and 4 people want you to keep going including me, If I was you I'd keep going anyway but...

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 9:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
and 4 people want you to keep going including me, If I was you I'd keep going anyway but...

Nah, I'll just wait until the poll closes.

Adam_148 September 10th, 2005 9:32 AM

4 days then... Ahem.
Hello all people who like this comic please vote if you want Mystic Trunks to carry on with this comic or pack his bags and hit the road. It's in your hands.

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 9:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
4 days then... Ahem.
Hello all people who like this comic please vote if you want Mystic Trunks to carry on with this comic or pack his bags and hit the road. It's in your hands.

Nice speech and thanks. But I done it already and know one listened. I guess this is it.... :(

Suki September 10th, 2005 9:40 AM

oi Mystic trunks is going nowhere
hey people dont be sad i like his stuff

Adam_148 September 10th, 2005 9:40 AM

nope this is not it, PM friends ask them, you're not going to give up, I won't let you, don't get down cos people won't post, do what I do, PM somebody to let them know the next eppy is up,

Signomi September 10th, 2005 9:48 AM

What? You want to discontinue your comic for just the reason that not many who view your comics post? o_O MT, with all due respect. I think that's a very bizarre reason. You should continue what you have already created regardless of the amount of posts you have in your thread. Because frankly you shouldn't really care.The purpose of continuing a comic is believing that your hard work will pay off. Forget the viewers/commenters, don't let anything discourage you from continuing what you've done. You already have a fan in me and I'd be really dissappointed if you do not continue this comic.

'Nuff said.

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 9:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
nope this is not it, PM friends ask them, you're not going to give up, I won't let you, don't get down cos people won't post, do what I do, PM somebody to let them know the next eppy is up,

Well, that's one way. But I'm waiting for the polls to close.

Adam_148 September 10th, 2005 9:51 AM

yeah! what she said! I can see the future this comic will rise before all others

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 9:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
yeah! what she said! I can see the future this comic will rise before all others

I see: Worst comic in this PC is mine.

Adam_148 September 10th, 2005 10:03 AM

didn't you understand? It means you're comic will be one of the best, and will remain one of the best

Signomi September 10th, 2005 10:04 AM

Personally I'm not really too fond of your Self-esteem o.O; That's what's making you do this.

Take a look around you dearie. At some of the comics who've been severly critisized, you're one of the lucky ones. This comic has potential. It would be a shame to let it go. You let it go, you're only doing yourself bad, not really good o.O;

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 10:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Personally I'm not really too fond of your Self-esteem o.O; That's what's making you do this.

Take a look around you dearie. At some of the comics who've been severly critisized, you're one of the lucky ones. This comic has potential. It would be a shame to let it go. You let it go, you're only doing yourself bad, not really good o.O;

I think U should look around again. I see that people are posting this just cause they saw my voting poll. If I didn't had it then know one would even post.

Signomi September 10th, 2005 10:14 AM

But why do you care so much for posts? It's the comic you should care more of. Not the posts.

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 10:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
But why do you care so much for posts? It's the comic you should care more of. Not the posts.

I only entered this forum cause my friend "Mostachon" told me that it was cool. then he gave me the idea to make a SC thread. Now I feel that I should go to another forum and start again.

Signomi September 10th, 2005 10:19 AM

Well I'm not pushing you really MT. You may do what you like. I just think it's very strange to discontinue a comic due to lack of posters... But heck ^^; We'll still be mates right?

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 10:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Well I'm not pushing you really MT. You may do what you like. I just think it's very strange to discontinue a comic due to lack of posters... But heck ^^; We'll still be mates right?

............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Signomi September 10th, 2005 10:24 AM

Hm...I'll take that as a no then =/ Very well.

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 3:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Hm...I'll take that as a no then =/ Very well.

No,no. I didn't mean that. I'm sorry if you thought about that. :(

jc_rcw September 10th, 2005 3:28 PM

Noooooo please continue with your comics please

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 3:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jc_rcw
Noooooo please continue with your comics please

Give me a reson? Do you like it?

jc_rcw September 10th, 2005 3:48 PM

Of course I do I'm still waiting for the 14th one

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 4:18 PM

Then say no more. I HAVE DECIDED NOT TOO RETIRE AND KEEP ON GOING WITH MY SC's.

jc_rcw September 10th, 2005 4:27 PM

Yay *dances* well no to wait for the new episodes :D

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 4:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jc_rcw
Yay *dances* well no to wait for the new episodes :D

I'll have them done by tomorrow. 3 I think.

jc_rcw September 10th, 2005 5:00 PM

Those are some good news*sits back and relaxes*

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 5:02 PM

Yep, but don't expect them to be very funny. there 100% adventure.

jc_rcw September 10th, 2005 5:04 PM

well that doesn't matter,they're very good.

Karasuma September 10th, 2005 5:05 PM

Thank's I try to make them pretty good.

Linoone September 11th, 2005 5:33 AM

looking good so far, keep it up like that, and dont abandon it like the other comics! (the croconaw hunter, it was real good, but never continued...)

Karasuma September 11th, 2005 9:44 AM

Thanks Mostachon! Now for the time being I only have one new episode so make sure you see it. it's in the first page.

Signomi September 11th, 2005 9:51 AM

Haha XD Poor Misty, reminds me of in G/S/C when she was at Cerulean Cape with a guy then your PC comes and shoos him away. Heh, well what shall happen to Pikachu? Keep at it MT! ^.^

Karasuma September 11th, 2005 9:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Signomi
Haha XD Poor Misty, reminds me of in G/S/C when she was at Cerulean Cape with a guy then your PC comes and shoos him away. Heh, well what shall happen to Pikachu? Keep at it MT! ^.^

Yeah, I made it just a little funny. I like the Misty part.

jc_rcw September 11th, 2005 3:08 PM

LOL so when are you doing the 14th one I'm so impacient:P

Involuntary Twitch September 11th, 2005 3:17 PM

Haha, I like this. Good job, the comic is neat and tidy, albeit a little difficult to understand.

Karasuma September 12th, 2005 12:29 PM

Hey, new eppy 16 is posted. make sure U see it and plz post.

The Dash September 12th, 2005 2:05 PM

Looking good so far MT :D
So I take it this is a ...sort of remake of the Anime?

jc_rcw September 12th, 2005 3:15 PM

They're really good(I hadn't read #14,15,and16)keep it up because I want to see more :D.

Eon-Rider September 13th, 2005 5:45 AM

OMG! This is so exciting! Good work!

Karasuma September 13th, 2005 8:22 AM

Thanks everyone. Well, todays the big day. It's time to see if I keep on doing or stop. I'll post again tonite.

jc_rcw September 13th, 2005 12:12 PM

Please keep on doing them I love them.

Karasuma September 13th, 2005 12:16 PM

Don't say love dude, it makes U sound GAY XD. just say like.

P.S.: By tomorrow I'll have the complete season 2!!!!!!!!
But then I'm not sure if I'll keep on doing, before anyone says anything, nope, I am not leaving. Just taking a little break XD's.

jc_rcw September 13th, 2005 12:37 PM

Ok sorry master XD well is that they're so good, if you want I could say I hate them too :D

Karasuma September 13th, 2005 8:04 PM

I must be dreaming. I've done 20 episodes!!!!! (*Celebrates*) WOOT! WOOT! This is really something that I thought I wasn't gonna continue, but I see that all of U like my Eppy's so much that I decided to keep on going. But I think that for the remainder of this week I won't be doing any new eppy's. Nope, I'm gonna take a break and maybe post eppy 21 by Monday. This does not mean that I quit, this means that I want to take a break for the next 5 days. So long.........

P.S. Take a look at the future of my eppy's as well. It's all in the first page. Now I gotta go Celebrate at "Taco Bell". Dinner is on MT!

Signomi September 14th, 2005 11:46 AM

Hmm..interesting ^_^ Can't wait till you update again MT.

Karasuma September 18th, 2005 4:56 AM

Season 3 Begin!!!!!!
 
I've partied this week too much but today I've finished eppy 21 which means I'm starting Season 3 WOOT, WOOT! Make sure you check it ;)

Newten5 September 18th, 2005 5:44 AM

Pretty good comic! Its similar to the original anime story while having its own twists at the same time ^_^ I like it :P

~Newten5

The Dash September 18th, 2005 10:47 AM

Looking good MT :)
(post to short :o)

jc_rcw September 22nd, 2005 12:57 PM

WOOT,WOOT keep it up your doing great.

Karasuma September 22nd, 2005 1:00 PM

I need help though. I want to put some new trainers in my comic so anybody can help.


All times are GMT -8. The time now is 1:51 AM.


Like our Facebook Page Follow us on Twitter © 2002 - 2018 The PokéCommunity™, pokecommunity.com.
Pokémon characters and images belong to The Pokémon Company International and Nintendo. This website is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Nintendo, Creatures, GAMEFREAK, The Pokémon Company or The Pokémon Company International. We just love Pokémon.
All forum styles, their images (unless noted otherwise) and site designs are © 2002 - 2016 The PokéCommunity / PokéCommunity.com.
PokéCommunity™ is a trademark of The PokéCommunity. All rights reserved. Sponsor advertisements do not imply our endorsement of that product or service. User generated content remains the property of its creator.

Acknowledgements
Use of PokéCommunity Assets
vB Optimise by DragonByte Technologies Ltd © 2023.