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Pokemon: Universe Version
The First Cover http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/4577/saga20jk.png This comic is the hit TV show "Pokemon" but done it my way in style. But I make some twist along the way. and yes this comic ends when The gang start in the Orange Islands. If you've never seened the show from the start then this is like watching it. The Plot It starts in Pallet Town where 10 year old Ash Ketchum is living a normal "boring" life and his journey begins when a friend of his sends him an E-Mail. Follow him as he meets new friends and earns some badges. Main Characters Ash http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3531/ash1rm.png The hero of this story. Doesn't really like Pokemon until a friend inspires him. Brock http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8377/brock4kv.png Pewter City's Gym leader that becomes Ash's friend as the story goes on. Misty http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1118/misty6vy.png With her bike stolen she decides to go with Ash on his journey until he pays for a new bike. More Coming Soon... Some Characters talk in different Colors: Ash-Black(Always), Prof.Oak-Brown, A.J.-Lightblue(I hope you can read lightblue), TeamRocket-Red, Brock-Green, Misty-Blue. Now for the Credits: The Sprite Resources.com Pokesho.com (a really big thanks) Signomi for the Mewtwo Adam for the sprites Outlaw for the sprites Tsukasa for some sprites Blazin Espio for the trainer sprites. Chill dude^^ Please post every time you read it.Here they are, Enjoy! :classic: Season 1 Pika Saga Episode 1: A New Beginning Episode 2: My Journey Awaits Episode 3: Pikachu, the Electric Mouse Episode 4: Two Rookies Fight Episode 5: Trouble in Viridian Forest Episode 6: Team Rocket Attacks! Episode 7: Gym Leaders? Episode 8: Pika Problems Episode 9: No Match for Brock Episode 10: Smarter Than Ever! Friends Saga Episode 11: A Shocking Battle Episode 12: To Fall or Advance Episode 13: Change of Heart Episode 14: Mt. Moon Rumble Episode 15: Cerulian City Horror! Episode 16: The Speedy Rocket Episode 17: Rocket V.S. Gym Leader Episode 18: Water Fight! Episode 19: An Explosive Match Episode 20: Bulbasaur's Choice Three Starters Saga Episode 21: Charmander's Problem Episode 22: Another Friend Episode 23: Red & Blue Episode 24: The Newest Member Episode 25: Power Surge! Episode 26: Pikachu's Choice Episode 27: Electric Shock Showdown! Episode 28: Going on a Cruise |
Is it me or did u make two threads for the same comic?
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This is for real!
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Please refrain from making more than one thread for one thing, if possible. ^_^;;
Since this seems to be the thread you want to post in, though...I'll go ahead and close your other one, okay? |
The other one I messed up big time. And I can't delete the other thread. but tell me? Is this one is better from the other one? This one RULZ!!!
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you have too much self esteam, especially for a rookie, I may even have to cut your ego down a notch
for one it's sometimes difficult to follow the pannels, for two there are a few spelling and grammer mistakes, and 3, you need to vredit the spriters who ripped those pokemon, trainers and maps meh, the plot is a little cliche', same with most of the cast, there's no real humour to speak of, and nidoran wouldn't have extream speed at level 3 don't get me wrong, your comic isn't terrible, but it doesent rule there are plenty more stereotypical pokemon adventures like this out there 5/10 oh and on the off chance you ripped them you should still credit nintendo |
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As for the adventure,You may know that anything is possible. The Nidoran learned Extremespeed in the place where in Pokemon Crystal, the hero got a dratini with Extremespeed. I thoght that the just that attack was cool for Nidoran. And about the giving credits I will. I couldn't have made Eps. 1 to 5 without giving credit to the these guys:Eternaldarkwing,Badassbill,and Jack.Thanks guys. ;) Just like vaati I wanna hear what you all think my comics are. if their not funny i'll make funny,if their not too good i'll make them better. ;) |
I'm liking it so far. Though the boy's font colour is too bright, you ought to change it so it's easier to read ^_^ Keep it up.
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Yeah, that's why I don't make more episodes with him. gotta save color for the other charackters.
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These Comics Are Great! I Can't Wait For The Next Part!
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These are great but you should becareful where to put "?" and where to put "!".
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Right, and thanks for the advice Coolmaster. they help a lot.
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ell I'm very glad to see you accepted critism and have decided to hone it to become better ^_^...too bad I can't seem to view issue 6
never mind, it works now |
I'll post Episode 7 soon. I'm still doing it. It's called "Gym Leadres?"
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issue 6 wasn't bad, there were a few spelling mistakes, nothing major though
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My writing can get a little sloppy sometimes but I'll make it better. thanks for the tip vaati.
P.S. I spelled it wrong, It's really called "Gym Leaders?" |
it's ok, a typo is a common mistake in sprite comics
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Okay! Episode 7 & 8 are done. I'll introduce you two New Charcters:
Gotta give Credit to Badassbill and Kingkirby for the new images. :nervous: |
Oh I forgot, how are you guys liking my episodes? please I need to know?
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I'll have Episode 9 by Tomorrow.
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don't triple post, it's against the rules
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It's quite a good comin, okay, stroy, I don't like the light blue colour of some of the fonts....8/10.:)
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Right, It's Kanto but more Advanced.Like some Kanto Pokemon know johto and hoenn moves.
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