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Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 10:54 AM

oh, we're not there yet, no, no, but the thing they are standing on allows them to travel through time and space, it's something ultimate Latios and Alquo can both do
EDIT: 300TH POST, COME ON EVERYONE LETS PAARTAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Crystal Walrus September 3rd, 2005 10:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZORRO
can i join as a pokemon pleaz

You might if u hav a pic of it

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 10:56 AM

yeah I need an overworld character a sprite and a back sprite

_Manafi_ September 3rd, 2005 10:57 AM

i do hear it is
http://www.maj.com/gallery/toa0of0magic/all/pokemon/esptalesbacksp1vc.png
°º¤ø,¸¸,øHo-Oh¤º°`°º¤ø is the maker of this sprite

Crystal Walrus September 3rd, 2005 10:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZORRO

good enough 4 me how about u

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 11:00 AM

yup that's good enough for me we'll meet you on the way to the heart fragment and you come with us to earth

_Manafi_ September 3rd, 2005 11:01 AM

cool i love the comic's thay are great

Crystal Walrus September 3rd, 2005 11:05 AM

can i ask u adam y does your name hav a + at the end sum times

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 11:05 AM

I'll be talking to people in this order:
Zorro: uh... thanks I guess? I'll start on the next episode tomorrow.
KT: Does it? Well it happens on newten5 sometimes but I have honestly no clue

Crystal Walrus September 3rd, 2005 11:09 AM

i hav to let sum thing out Im near my 100 post yay!

Signomi September 3rd, 2005 11:11 AM

And Adam? Can I have another pokemon? XD Since you have Mew, how about I have Mewtwo?

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2418/mewtwo6aj.gif

I believe that's all you need o.O

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 11:12 AM

right well, that's nice, I guess.
Signomi- well, okay sure.

Karasuma September 3rd, 2005 11:22 AM

Hey Signomi or Adamski148, do you think that any of you two can make me an intro for my sprite comic series:Poke universe? so that other members can click on it and it takes them directly to my sprites. Pretty please? Oh no. I'm supposed to pm this to you guys? sorry...

armadilloHD September 3rd, 2005 1:53 PM

Hey adam, you need to grow a frekking skin, your bashing jarman because he's posting his honest oppinion? We don't just comment to annoy you, in fact we do just the opposite, we HELP you try and be better, and if you can't handle that you might as well stop making comics, because when you post them up here on the internet, your risking that some people won't like it, but posting them here will also help you since they'll point out what you did wrong. Don't like it? Oh well, on to the critique.

The story is bland...at best. It's the exact same generic pokemon trainer storyline that everyone and their mother uses here. You need to figure out a new twist that no one's done before, maybe a trainer's pokemon is murdered, and he seeks revenge maybe? C'mon, be a little more original.

The text boxes and framework are mediocre. You used the lazy, white box at the ottom of the panel style. Again, you could be a little more original with your test box and framework style. Like make the panels over lap etc. You can look at the old super hero comics to see how they set up the comic's framework. Again, very mediocre.

The text is very small and hard to read, might wanna fix that too. Along with the huge amount of text in ONE FREAKING SCENE.

The sprites are the tiny little overworld pokemon sprites that EVERYONE here uses too. C'mon we need more overdone megaman edit comics here.

And the backgrounds are just made with the R/S FR/LG tilesets that, again EVERYONE USES. I'm not saying make your own tilesets, but overworld tilesets are a real turnoff.

Your effects...don't really look like anything, just some lines or blots of grey, cmon, put some more effort! "Kamon" is in the wrong bittage as well (Not 24 bit)

Also, I think jarman should have put a little more explanation as to WHY it was boring.

Then again... I don't think there's a gripping plotline either ;>>

Word

Alex_ September 3rd, 2005 1:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kygore trainer
i hav to let sum thing out Im near my 100 post yay!

And I have to let something out You are spamming!

Dragon-Chan September 3rd, 2005 2:07 PM

Hi! Can I please join?

http://www.jhgghyu.com/images/spriteofmetinysheet.PNG

Jarman September 3rd, 2005 4:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
Sorry I couldn't finish the second one last night, but jarman really bugged me... oh well anyone got a good story?

Stop blaming your laziness on me. It's not my fault that something that lasted 5 minutes and you started causes you to be distracted for days. If you really are still distracted, you're either 10, were raised in a strict Christian home (which is unlikely since Christians hate pokemon) or need to see a psychiatrist. Hell, all of those apply to you if you were distracted by it at all.

Quote:

Originally Posted by armadilloHD
Also, I think jarman should have put a little more explanation as to WHY it was boring.

I was never good at explaining things.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 12:43 AM

Mystic trunks- Okay I'll affiliate, but you should do it to, you know to make it official,
Jhgghyu- Sure you can join.
Jarman- I thought you were not going to post? I am Christian, i am not easily distracted your just psycho, and I'm 12

Jarman September 4th, 2005 3:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
Mystic trunks- Okay I'll affiliate, but you should do it to, you know to make it official,
Jhgghyu- Sure you can join.
Jarman- I thought you were not going to post? I am Christian, i am not easily distracted your just psycho, and I'm 12

I never made any promises. If you're not easily distracted by my "just psycho," then why did you say that you couldn't finish a comic in time because I bugged you a day after it happened and the day it happened you said that you might not be able to make it in time because I was distracting you? And why are you ignoring armadilloHD's post?

To the rep giver: I know.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 3:18 AM

Next eppy is almost done,

The Dash September 4th, 2005 3:21 AM

Awesomeness :o
(Message too...FOUND ONE POKEBALL MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!)


Edit:Ha ha, great way to start the 9th page ^_^...no not realy :(

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 3:30 AM

excuse me, I don't understand what your talking about

The Dash September 4th, 2005 3:36 AM

...Nether do I my freind,
Nether do I.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 3:41 AM

next eppy coming later,be prepared, be very prepared

Edit: Next eppy is up and running

The Dash September 4th, 2005 4:33 AM

Awesometastic....heh..
I'm running out of things to say about the comic -_-

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 4:34 AM

right... next eppy later, but first, what should be the next storyline?

Crystal Walrus September 4th, 2005 6:31 AM

il try and think of 1 if u want

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 6:43 AM

okay, you make 1 up and then I can start

Stephen,Pokemon Master September 4th, 2005 6:54 AM

Where's Stephen in the last 2 eppies?

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 6:56 AM

I thought I'd said this... he's already jumped off the big yellow circle to go and find a heart fragment, we'll meet up with him again later on in the comic. I tried recruiting more characters today, so far I've had one reply saying... no.

Omega Latios September 4th, 2005 7:18 AM

The New Chapter Was Great! I Can't Wait For The Next Part :classic:

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 7:19 AM

go on say it, I had to make you use a move it looked cool
I need a story to work on for the next eppy, so, if you want make up a story

Avatar September 4th, 2005 7:56 AM

I did NOT give you permission to recolor my Hiro spritesheet and use it in your sprite comic, not to mention having you claim that you made it.

Stop stealing MY work.

Original sprite can be found here
Further proof can be found in the Game Development section

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 7:58 AM

but i didn't know you made it! Sheesh

Avatar September 4th, 2005 8:01 AM

That is still no reason to state that you made those sprites, you could have wrote that you based them on an artist's (which you did not know the name of) sprites.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 8:03 AM

look I'm sorry okay, didn't know and I'm going to go and change that in my sig now.

The Dash September 4th, 2005 8:22 AM

Avatar theres no need to be mean to him for it. If he dident know who you were then he cant exactly credit you can he? Dont shout at him just ask him nicely, jeez.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 8:26 AM

I think I've got Jeff_PKLight on the team but I'm not exactly sure yet, he thinks my comics are good so far. I aggree with Dashiel

The Dash September 4th, 2005 8:29 AM

Personally i think sprite makers get a little TOO defencive over their things.

Avatar September 4th, 2005 8:30 AM

This is not the first time I've had some of my work stolen, not to mention the first community where it has happened. I've had it stolen so many times it just pisses me off, and I start shouting at the people I see stealing my work, (intended or not)
If you found it offensive, I apologize.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 8:31 AM

I think you may be right there Dashiel...
Anybody got any ideas for the next eppy

Alex_ September 4th, 2005 8:33 AM

First of all he's not being mean. Sprite theft isn't taken lightly and frankly,it's pathetic. Don't use sprites when you don't know who made them cause you'll always be caught. Avatar has every right to be angry,this is a warning adamski.

Avatar September 4th, 2005 8:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _Alex_
First of all he's not being mean. Sprite theft isn't taken lightly and frankly,it's pathetic. Don't use sprites when you don't know who made them cause you'll always be caught. Avatar has every right to be angry,this is a warning adamski.

We resolved this, the warning does not need to issued.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 8:36 AM

okay Alex, I'll try and find out who made the sprites and get their permission before I take or edit them. Sorry Avatar.

Crystal Walrus September 4th, 2005 9:18 AM

i hav my idea ready how about they need to fight guards in that part of the universe

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 9:23 AM

okay, I'll keep that one in mind, anybody else got an idea?

Crystal Walrus September 4th, 2005 9:34 AM

i geuss no 1 else has 1 (message to short)

5 posts until my 100th post

Omega Latios September 4th, 2005 9:36 AM

That Was Spam Kygore Trainer

Crystal Walrus September 4th, 2005 9:37 AM

sorry its just im geussing i dont really think that

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 9:39 AM

squall has joined us. I'm just making something for him.

Alex_ September 4th, 2005 9:40 AM

I guess i'm going to have to type in size 7 font for Kyogre Trainer to see me...ahem...Kyogre trainer stop spamming,you've been doing it like crazy. Don't put "message too short". This is a warning.

The Dash September 4th, 2005 10:10 AM

Eep I dident know we wernt allowed to do (message too short) :| Ive done it tonnes of times :( Sorry.

Jaybob September 4th, 2005 10:11 AM

wow great comic adam it gets better every time i come in ;)

StarryLatiasGirl September 4th, 2005 2:36 PM

Hi, I'm just wondering, can I be in? I sent you a PM, but I'll post here, too.

Here's my sprites-
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7190/koji1nu.png
Here's some info about him-
Name- Koji
Age- 11
Goals- To become the best Dragon/Cat Pokemon Master ever (yeah. He has problems.)
Pokemon- Skitquaza ( a mix between Skitty and Rayquaza. His favorite Pokemon. I supplied overworld sprites and attacks for her too.)

Other- When he was very young, he was captured by an anonymous Team and infused with Rayquaza DNA. He now travels the country with his Dragon/Cat Pokemon. He can turn into a Rayquaza at will, but he still has his hair and goggles on his Pokemon form. He also can fly and use Fire, Ice, Electric, and Dragon attacks when he is in his Pokemon form. He dislikes large crowds, is good at making friends, and likes to tell jokes, but is pretty bad at doing so.

Here he is in Pokemon form-
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4153/kojiquaza8wy.png

Hope I can be in!

~Ho-Oh

Karasuma September 4th, 2005 5:40 PM

Did you affliated yet adamski148?

Jaybob September 5th, 2005 1:11 AM

waits for new eppy. come on adam....

p.s not trying to spam but someone gave me bad red sayin that i like lookin at the pic in my sig from here sowho is it?

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 3:49 AM

Don't you mean rep??????????

Jarman September 5th, 2005 3:58 AM

The person who gave the rep won't come out and say they did, escpecially if they did what they did.

Foxâ™  September 5th, 2005 4:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Avatar
This is not the first time I've had some of my work stolen, not to mention the first community where it has happened. I've had it stolen so many times it just pisses me off, and I start shouting at the people I see stealing my work, (intended or not)
If you found it offensive, I apologize.

you have every right to be as angry as you are, Adam got pretty pissed when Teh only took his sprites without permission, he's just been a hypocrit

Crystal Walrus September 5th, 2005 6:54 AM

im very sorry alex il stop its just sumtimes i cant think of what to type in my posts

Adam_148 September 5th, 2005 10:15 AM

I'm back, sure you're in koji, and of course I affiliated mystic trunks.

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 10:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
I'm back, sure you're in koji, and of course I affiliated mystic trunks.

Thankx. I really appreciated. :classic:

Crystal Walrus September 5th, 2005 10:29 AM

whell when the next part up adam?

Adam_148 September 5th, 2005 10:33 AM

depends, I will now be updating every night after homework

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 10:37 AM

It's going to be hard making Sprite comics and having Homework at the same time. Well, that's life, I guess.

Crystal Walrus September 5th, 2005 10:38 AM

its strange that i havent seen hazard on 4 a while

Adam_148 September 5th, 2005 10:40 AM

neither have I for that matter, and your right, last year I got tons of homeworl and that was only year seven!

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 10:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kygore trainer
its strange that i havent seen hazard on 4 a while

Yeah, his comic eps. is awesome. Maybe he's in another country. Ooops sorry for spaming

Crystal Walrus September 5th, 2005 10:42 AM

anyway will sum 1 visit my comic on my sig please not much people post in it

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 10:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
neither have I for that matter, and your right, last year I got tons of homeworl and that was only year seven!

Yeah and I'm in high school so that means I'll only have time to make one Episode for my SC every week because I'll be getting projects, oral presentations,etc...Ooops sorry for spaming. :nervous:

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 10:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kygore trainer
anyway will sum 1 visit my comic on my sig please not much people post in it

neither in mine. I want to Hear what Signomi thinks about my SC's so far. Please post. :nervous: Crud I spamed again.

Adam_148 September 5th, 2005 10:45 AM

okay I'll go now, I'll try and make a start tonight if I can't finish tonight, I'll try and finish it on other days. I hate school

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 10:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
okay I'll go now, I'll try and make a start tonight if I can't finish tonight, I'll try and finish it on other days. I hate school

Heh, You're not the only one. We should make a thread and see who likes school or not. Darn, I can't stop spaming :nervous:

Crystal Walrus September 5th, 2005 10:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
okay I'll go now, I'll try and make a start tonight if I can't finish tonight, I'll try and finish it on other days. I hate school

i hate it too but luky 4 me i dont get much homework coz im in P6

Adam_148 September 5th, 2005 11:00 AM

lucky you, I got the first part today, so I was lucky

Crystal Walrus September 5th, 2005 11:16 AM

whell il go start my comic but im leaveing this window on

Adam_148 September 5th, 2005 11:20 AM

okay, you do that, Signomi said she was going to post when she finished some fanart, so i'll wait

Karasuma September 5th, 2005 11:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
okay, you do that, Signomi said she was going to post when she finished some fanart, so i'll wait

I hope she post's in my SC too. I guess I'll go work on my next SC as well, But I'm leaving Windows on.^_^

Signomi September 6th, 2005 1:44 AM

I'm sorry I took so long ^^ But I finally done the 3rd Fanart. Adam and Mew:

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8824/adamandmew2rf.gif

Sorry, couldn't be bothered to do the whole of his legs..

Karasuma September 6th, 2005 3:31 AM

Now that must be the coolest Sprite Trainer I've seen. The Mew looks so good as well.

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 7:24 AM

thanks! It's much betetr than I expected it to be! Next eppy coming soon!

Karasuma September 6th, 2005 7:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
thanks! It's much betetr than I expected it to be! Next eppy coming soon!

Hey, could you also put me in your SC's. I got some Overworld sprites. :nervous:

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 7:33 AM

sorry, but... OF COURSE YOU CAN BE IN I said so earlier that "anyone" could be in it

Karasuma September 6th, 2005 7:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
sorry, but... OF COURSE YOU CAN BE IN I said so earlier that "anyone" could be in it

Thanks! Here are some:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a354/MysticTrunks/Ashadvanced.png
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a354/MysticTrunks/what.png

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 7:43 AM

okay I will put you on. Man, I hate this character limit. um... oh yeah next eppy coming soon

Karasuma September 6th, 2005 7:57 AM

Thanks dude. Appreciated.

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 8:12 AM

no problem, next eppy is almost done, but I gotta do some homework now so I'll just keep this window open

GoldenHouou September 6th, 2005 8:12 AM

Um, can people still some in the comic? I was thinking of joining... Anyway, I just want to say this:

Signomi, youre ofically the best at making pixel fanart. Perioid.

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 8:15 AM

yeah people can still join, but I gotta do homework so...

Crystal Walrus September 6th, 2005 8:16 AM

ive got sum sprites of pikachu,sandshrew,bulbasuar if ya use em give credit http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/5600/pikachubulbasuarsandshrew2au.png

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 8:18 AM

right I'll use them if I need them. You've recoulered them from Pokemon Yellow haven't you?

Crystal Walrus September 6th, 2005 8:20 AM

yeah i was bored so i just did it 4 the crack

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 8:28 AM

yeah well at least you don't have to do a load of history homework

Crystal Walrus September 6th, 2005 8:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
yeah well at least you don't have to do a load of history homework

so true i proably get a lot less homework than you

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 8:40 AM

yup, you're probably right there. Next eppy finished after homework is finished

Crystal Walrus September 6th, 2005 9:10 AM

(waits for next eppy)*starts to sleep*

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 9:12 AM

hey don't go to sleep I've almost done my homework

Crystal Walrus September 6th, 2005 9:34 AM

*wakes up*huh what happend

Adam_148 September 6th, 2005 9:37 AM

I almost finished the homework, I would have finished earlier but, I had tea.

Karasuma September 6th, 2005 9:38 AM

Are you putting me on this eppy (*Falls Asleep*)


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