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oh, we're not there yet, no, no, but the thing they are standing on allows them to travel through time and space, it's something ultimate Latios and Alquo can both do
EDIT: 300TH POST, COME ON EVERYONE LETS PAARTAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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yeah I need an overworld character a sprite and a back sprite
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i do hear it is
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yup that's good enough for me we'll meet you on the way to the heart fragment and you come with us to earth
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cool i love the comic's thay are great
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can i ask u adam y does your name hav a + at the end sum times
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I'll be talking to people in this order:
Zorro: uh... thanks I guess? I'll start on the next episode tomorrow. KT: Does it? Well it happens on newten5 sometimes but I have honestly no clue |
i hav to let sum thing out Im near my 100 post yay!
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And Adam? Can I have another pokemon? XD Since you have Mew, how about I have Mewtwo?
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2418/mewtwo6aj.gif I believe that's all you need o.O |
right well, that's nice, I guess.
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Hey Signomi or Adamski148, do you think that any of you two can make me an intro for my sprite comic series:Poke universe? so that other members can click on it and it takes them directly to my sprites. Pretty please? Oh no. I'm supposed to pm this to you guys? sorry...
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Hey adam, you need to grow a frekking skin, your bashing jarman because he's posting his honest oppinion? We don't just comment to annoy you, in fact we do just the opposite, we HELP you try and be better, and if you can't handle that you might as well stop making comics, because when you post them up here on the internet, your risking that some people won't like it, but posting them here will also help you since they'll point out what you did wrong. Don't like it? Oh well, on to the critique.
The story is bland...at best. It's the exact same generic pokemon trainer storyline that everyone and their mother uses here. You need to figure out a new twist that no one's done before, maybe a trainer's pokemon is murdered, and he seeks revenge maybe? C'mon, be a little more original. The text boxes and framework are mediocre. You used the lazy, white box at the ottom of the panel style. Again, you could be a little more original with your test box and framework style. Like make the panels over lap etc. You can look at the old super hero comics to see how they set up the comic's framework. Again, very mediocre. The text is very small and hard to read, might wanna fix that too. Along with the huge amount of text in ONE FREAKING SCENE. The sprites are the tiny little overworld pokemon sprites that EVERYONE here uses too. C'mon we need more overdone megaman edit comics here. And the backgrounds are just made with the R/S FR/LG tilesets that, again EVERYONE USES. I'm not saying make your own tilesets, but overworld tilesets are a real turnoff. Your effects...don't really look like anything, just some lines or blots of grey, cmon, put some more effort! "Kamon" is in the wrong bittage as well (Not 24 bit) Also, I think jarman should have put a little more explanation as to WHY it was boring. Then again... I don't think there's a gripping plotline either ;>> Word |
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Mystic trunks- Okay I'll affiliate, but you should do it to, you know to make it official,
Jhgghyu- Sure you can join. Jarman- I thought you were not going to post? I am Christian, i am not easily distracted your just psycho, and I'm 12 |
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To the rep giver: I know. |
Next eppy is almost done,
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Awesomeness :o
(Message too...FOUND ONE POKEBALL MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!) Edit:Ha ha, great way to start the 9th page ^_^...no not realy :( |
excuse me, I don't understand what your talking about
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...Nether do I my freind,
Nether do I. |
next eppy coming later,be prepared, be very prepared
Edit: Next eppy is up and running |
Awesometastic....heh..
I'm running out of things to say about the comic -_- |
right... next eppy later, but first, what should be the next storyline?
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il try and think of 1 if u want
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okay, you make 1 up and then I can start
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Where's Stephen in the last 2 eppies?
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I thought I'd said this... he's already jumped off the big yellow circle to go and find a heart fragment, we'll meet up with him again later on in the comic. I tried recruiting more characters today, so far I've had one reply saying... no.
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The New Chapter Was Great! I Can't Wait For The Next Part :classic:
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go on say it, I had to make you use a move it looked cool
I need a story to work on for the next eppy, so, if you want make up a story |
I did NOT give you permission to recolor my Hiro spritesheet and use it in your sprite comic, not to mention having you claim that you made it.
Stop stealing MY work. Original sprite can be found here Further proof can be found in the Game Development section |
but i didn't know you made it! Sheesh
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That is still no reason to state that you made those sprites, you could have wrote that you based them on an artist's (which you did not know the name of) sprites.
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look I'm sorry okay, didn't know and I'm going to go and change that in my sig now.
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Avatar theres no need to be mean to him for it. If he dident know who you were then he cant exactly credit you can he? Dont shout at him just ask him nicely, jeez.
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I think I've got Jeff_PKLight on the team but I'm not exactly sure yet, he thinks my comics are good so far. I aggree with Dashiel
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Personally i think sprite makers get a little TOO defencive over their things.
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This is not the first time I've had some of my work stolen, not to mention the first community where it has happened. I've had it stolen so many times it just pisses me off, and I start shouting at the people I see stealing my work, (intended or not)
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I think you may be right there Dashiel...
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First of all he's not being mean. Sprite theft isn't taken lightly and frankly,it's pathetic. Don't use sprites when you don't know who made them cause you'll always be caught. Avatar has every right to be angry,this is a warning adamski.
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okay Alex, I'll try and find out who made the sprites and get their permission before I take or edit them. Sorry Avatar.
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i hav my idea ready how about they need to fight guards in that part of the universe
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okay, I'll keep that one in mind, anybody else got an idea?
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i geuss no 1 else has 1 (message to short)
5 posts until my 100th post |
That Was Spam Kygore Trainer
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sorry its just im geussing i dont really think that
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squall has joined us. I'm just making something for him.
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I guess i'm going to have to type in size 7 font for Kyogre Trainer to see me...ahem...Kyogre trainer stop spamming,you've been doing it like crazy. Don't put "message too short". This is a warning.
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Eep I dident know we wernt allowed to do (message too short) :| Ive done it tonnes of times :( Sorry.
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wow great comic adam it gets better every time i come in ;)
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Hi, I'm just wondering, can I be in? I sent you a PM, but I'll post here, too.
Here's my sprites- http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7190/koji1nu.png Here's some info about him- Name- Koji Age- 11 Goals- To become the best Dragon/Cat Pokemon Master ever (yeah. He has problems.) Pokemon- Skitquaza ( a mix between Skitty and Rayquaza. His favorite Pokemon. I supplied overworld sprites and attacks for her too.) Other- When he was very young, he was captured by an anonymous Team and infused with Rayquaza DNA. He now travels the country with his Dragon/Cat Pokemon. He can turn into a Rayquaza at will, but he still has his hair and goggles on his Pokemon form. He also can fly and use Fire, Ice, Electric, and Dragon attacks when he is in his Pokemon form. He dislikes large crowds, is good at making friends, and likes to tell jokes, but is pretty bad at doing so. Here he is in Pokemon form- http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4153/kojiquaza8wy.png Hope I can be in! ~Ho-Oh |
Did you affliated yet adamski148?
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waits for new eppy. come on adam....
p.s not trying to spam but someone gave me bad red sayin that i like lookin at the pic in my sig from here sowho is it? |
Don't you mean rep??????????
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The person who gave the rep won't come out and say they did, escpecially if they did what they did.
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im very sorry alex il stop its just sumtimes i cant think of what to type in my posts
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I'm back, sure you're in koji, and of course I affiliated mystic trunks.
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whell when the next part up adam?
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depends, I will now be updating every night after homework
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It's going to be hard making Sprite comics and having Homework at the same time. Well, that's life, I guess.
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its strange that i havent seen hazard on 4 a while
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neither have I for that matter, and your right, last year I got tons of homeworl and that was only year seven!
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anyway will sum 1 visit my comic on my sig please not much people post in it
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okay I'll go now, I'll try and make a start tonight if I can't finish tonight, I'll try and finish it on other days. I hate school
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lucky you, I got the first part today, so I was lucky
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whell il go start my comic but im leaveing this window on
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okay, you do that, Signomi said she was going to post when she finished some fanart, so i'll wait
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I'm sorry I took so long ^^ But I finally done the 3rd Fanart. Adam and Mew:
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8824/adamandmew2rf.gif Sorry, couldn't be bothered to do the whole of his legs.. |
Now that must be the coolest Sprite Trainer I've seen. The Mew looks so good as well.
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thanks! It's much betetr than I expected it to be! Next eppy coming soon!
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sorry, but... OF COURSE YOU CAN BE IN I said so earlier that "anyone" could be in it
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okay I will put you on. Man, I hate this character limit. um... oh yeah next eppy coming soon
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Thanks dude. Appreciated.
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no problem, next eppy is almost done, but I gotta do some homework now so I'll just keep this window open
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Um, can people still some in the comic? I was thinking of joining... Anyway, I just want to say this:
Signomi, youre ofically the best at making pixel fanart. Perioid. |
yeah people can still join, but I gotta do homework so...
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ive got sum sprites of pikachu,sandshrew,bulbasuar if ya use em give credit http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/5600/pikachubulbasuarsandshrew2au.png
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right I'll use them if I need them. You've recoulered them from Pokemon Yellow haven't you?
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yeah i was bored so i just did it 4 the crack
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yeah well at least you don't have to do a load of history homework
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yup, you're probably right there. Next eppy finished after homework is finished
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(waits for next eppy)*starts to sleep*
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hey don't go to sleep I've almost done my homework
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*wakes up*huh what happend
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I almost finished the homework, I would have finished earlier but, I had tea.
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Are you putting me on this eppy (*Falls Asleep*)
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