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Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 10:54 AM

oh, we're not there yet, no, no, but the thing they are standing on allows them to travel through time and space, it's something ultimate Latios and Alquo can both do
EDIT: 300TH POST, COME ON EVERYONE LETS PAARTAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Crystal Walrus September 3rd, 2005 10:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZORRO
can i join as a pokemon pleaz

You might if u hav a pic of it

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 10:56 AM

yeah I need an overworld character a sprite and a back sprite

_Manafi_ September 3rd, 2005 10:57 AM

i do hear it is
http://www.maj.com/gallery/toa0of0magic/all/pokemon/esptalesbacksp1vc.png
°º¤ø,¸¸,øHo-Oh¤º°`°º¤ø is the maker of this sprite

Crystal Walrus September 3rd, 2005 10:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZORRO

good enough 4 me how about u

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 11:00 AM

yup that's good enough for me we'll meet you on the way to the heart fragment and you come with us to earth

_Manafi_ September 3rd, 2005 11:01 AM

cool i love the comic's thay are great

Crystal Walrus September 3rd, 2005 11:05 AM

can i ask u adam y does your name hav a + at the end sum times

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 11:05 AM

I'll be talking to people in this order:
Zorro: uh... thanks I guess? I'll start on the next episode tomorrow.
KT: Does it? Well it happens on newten5 sometimes but I have honestly no clue

Crystal Walrus September 3rd, 2005 11:09 AM

i hav to let sum thing out Im near my 100 post yay!

Signomi September 3rd, 2005 11:11 AM

And Adam? Can I have another pokemon? XD Since you have Mew, how about I have Mewtwo?

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2418/mewtwo6aj.gif

I believe that's all you need o.O

Adam_148 September 3rd, 2005 11:12 AM

right well, that's nice, I guess.
Signomi- well, okay sure.

Karasuma September 3rd, 2005 11:22 AM

Hey Signomi or Adamski148, do you think that any of you two can make me an intro for my sprite comic series:Poke universe? so that other members can click on it and it takes them directly to my sprites. Pretty please? Oh no. I'm supposed to pm this to you guys? sorry...

armadilloHD September 3rd, 2005 1:53 PM

Hey adam, you need to grow a frekking skin, your bashing jarman because he's posting his honest oppinion? We don't just comment to annoy you, in fact we do just the opposite, we HELP you try and be better, and if you can't handle that you might as well stop making comics, because when you post them up here on the internet, your risking that some people won't like it, but posting them here will also help you since they'll point out what you did wrong. Don't like it? Oh well, on to the critique.

The story is bland...at best. It's the exact same generic pokemon trainer storyline that everyone and their mother uses here. You need to figure out a new twist that no one's done before, maybe a trainer's pokemon is murdered, and he seeks revenge maybe? C'mon, be a little more original.

The text boxes and framework are mediocre. You used the lazy, white box at the ottom of the panel style. Again, you could be a little more original with your test box and framework style. Like make the panels over lap etc. You can look at the old super hero comics to see how they set up the comic's framework. Again, very mediocre.

The text is very small and hard to read, might wanna fix that too. Along with the huge amount of text in ONE FREAKING SCENE.

The sprites are the tiny little overworld pokemon sprites that EVERYONE here uses too. C'mon we need more overdone megaman edit comics here.

And the backgrounds are just made with the R/S FR/LG tilesets that, again EVERYONE USES. I'm not saying make your own tilesets, but overworld tilesets are a real turnoff.

Your effects...don't really look like anything, just some lines or blots of grey, cmon, put some more effort! "Kamon" is in the wrong bittage as well (Not 24 bit)

Also, I think jarman should have put a little more explanation as to WHY it was boring.

Then again... I don't think there's a gripping plotline either ;>>

Word

Alex_ September 3rd, 2005 1:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kygore trainer
i hav to let sum thing out Im near my 100 post yay!

And I have to let something out You are spamming!

Dragon-Chan September 3rd, 2005 2:07 PM

Hi! Can I please join?

http://www.jhgghyu.com/images/spriteofmetinysheet.PNG

Jarman September 3rd, 2005 4:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
Sorry I couldn't finish the second one last night, but jarman really bugged me... oh well anyone got a good story?

Stop blaming your laziness on me. It's not my fault that something that lasted 5 minutes and you started causes you to be distracted for days. If you really are still distracted, you're either 10, were raised in a strict Christian home (which is unlikely since Christians hate pokemon) or need to see a psychiatrist. Hell, all of those apply to you if you were distracted by it at all.

Quote:

Originally Posted by armadilloHD
Also, I think jarman should have put a little more explanation as to WHY it was boring.

I was never good at explaining things.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 12:43 AM

Mystic trunks- Okay I'll affiliate, but you should do it to, you know to make it official,
Jhgghyu- Sure you can join.
Jarman- I thought you were not going to post? I am Christian, i am not easily distracted your just psycho, and I'm 12

Jarman September 4th, 2005 3:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adamski148
Mystic trunks- Okay I'll affiliate, but you should do it to, you know to make it official,
Jhgghyu- Sure you can join.
Jarman- I thought you were not going to post? I am Christian, i am not easily distracted your just psycho, and I'm 12

I never made any promises. If you're not easily distracted by my "just psycho," then why did you say that you couldn't finish a comic in time because I bugged you a day after it happened and the day it happened you said that you might not be able to make it in time because I was distracting you? And why are you ignoring armadilloHD's post?

To the rep giver: I know.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 3:18 AM

Next eppy is almost done,

The Dash September 4th, 2005 3:21 AM

Awesomeness :o
(Message too...FOUND ONE POKEBALL MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!)


Edit:Ha ha, great way to start the 9th page ^_^...no not realy :(

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 3:30 AM

excuse me, I don't understand what your talking about

The Dash September 4th, 2005 3:36 AM

...Nether do I my freind,
Nether do I.

Adam_148 September 4th, 2005 3:41 AM

next eppy coming later,be prepared, be very prepared

Edit: Next eppy is up and running

The Dash September 4th, 2005 4:33 AM

Awesometastic....heh..
I'm running out of things to say about the comic -_-


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