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oh, we're not there yet, no, no, but the thing they are standing on allows them to travel through time and space, it's something ultimate Latios and Alquo can both do
EDIT: 300TH POST, COME ON EVERYONE LETS PAARTAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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yeah I need an overworld character a sprite and a back sprite
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i do hear it is
http://www.maj.com/gallery/toa0of0magic/all/pokemon/esptalesbacksp1vc.png °º¤ø,¸¸,øHo-Oh¤º°`°º¤ø is the maker of this sprite |
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yup that's good enough for me we'll meet you on the way to the heart fragment and you come with us to earth
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cool i love the comic's thay are great
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can i ask u adam y does your name hav a + at the end sum times
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I'll be talking to people in this order:
Zorro: uh... thanks I guess? I'll start on the next episode tomorrow. KT: Does it? Well it happens on newten5 sometimes but I have honestly no clue |
i hav to let sum thing out Im near my 100 post yay!
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And Adam? Can I have another pokemon? XD Since you have Mew, how about I have Mewtwo?
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2418/mewtwo6aj.gif I believe that's all you need o.O |
right well, that's nice, I guess.
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Hey Signomi or Adamski148, do you think that any of you two can make me an intro for my sprite comic series:Poke universe? so that other members can click on it and it takes them directly to my sprites. Pretty please? Oh no. I'm supposed to pm this to you guys? sorry...
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Hey adam, you need to grow a frekking skin, your bashing jarman because he's posting his honest oppinion? We don't just comment to annoy you, in fact we do just the opposite, we HELP you try and be better, and if you can't handle that you might as well stop making comics, because when you post them up here on the internet, your risking that some people won't like it, but posting them here will also help you since they'll point out what you did wrong. Don't like it? Oh well, on to the critique.
The story is bland...at best. It's the exact same generic pokemon trainer storyline that everyone and their mother uses here. You need to figure out a new twist that no one's done before, maybe a trainer's pokemon is murdered, and he seeks revenge maybe? C'mon, be a little more original. The text boxes and framework are mediocre. You used the lazy, white box at the ottom of the panel style. Again, you could be a little more original with your test box and framework style. Like make the panels over lap etc. You can look at the old super hero comics to see how they set up the comic's framework. Again, very mediocre. The text is very small and hard to read, might wanna fix that too. Along with the huge amount of text in ONE FREAKING SCENE. The sprites are the tiny little overworld pokemon sprites that EVERYONE here uses too. C'mon we need more overdone megaman edit comics here. And the backgrounds are just made with the R/S FR/LG tilesets that, again EVERYONE USES. I'm not saying make your own tilesets, but overworld tilesets are a real turnoff. Your effects...don't really look like anything, just some lines or blots of grey, cmon, put some more effort! "Kamon" is in the wrong bittage as well (Not 24 bit) Also, I think jarman should have put a little more explanation as to WHY it was boring. Then again... I don't think there's a gripping plotline either ;>> Word |
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Mystic trunks- Okay I'll affiliate, but you should do it to, you know to make it official,
Jhgghyu- Sure you can join. Jarman- I thought you were not going to post? I am Christian, i am not easily distracted your just psycho, and I'm 12 |
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Next eppy is almost done,
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Awesomeness :o
(Message too...FOUND ONE POKEBALL MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!) Edit:Ha ha, great way to start the 9th page ^_^...no not realy :( |
excuse me, I don't understand what your talking about
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...Nether do I my freind,
Nether do I. |
next eppy coming later,be prepared, be very prepared
Edit: Next eppy is up and running |
Awesometastic....heh..
I'm running out of things to say about the comic -_- |
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