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Through Umbreon Eyes
For those of you who didn't know, I am not a fraud: I am SPon11. Few of you may know of the story Through Espeon Eyes (my friends went insane over it) but I have decided to create a new FanFiction based on the same story but from a different point of view. You don't have to neccesarily have to read Through Espeon Eyes in order to understand this story, but it would balance out your thoughts, I guess. Anyways, this story is in a different point of view. Fans of the other Fic might understand whos point of view...instead of the story being told by Sunlight the Espeon, it's told by her love: Moonlight the Umbreon. I thought it would be a good experience if you knew what Moonlight went through...
Here goes! Through Umbreon Eyes Chapter I <A Night of Simple Pleasures> My name is Moonlight. I named myself. Why? I never knew my mother. I never knew my father. As far as I know, they either died or forgot about me. I was born in the winter, so it's most likely that my father ran away as soon as he discovered my mother was pregnant and my mother died at giving me birth. After all, who would abandon a little Eevee in the snow? That doesn't matter these days, though. I have a name which means I am someone. I have a life. I'm an Umbreon. Yes, it is unusual for an Eevee to evolve out in the wild. A typical Umbreon would be living in a little house with a human, evolved by pure happiness in the night. Not me. I found extreme happiness the second I saw her. I soon as I saw her, my heart leapt and I evolved. It was a tingling sensation, evolving. I was glad it was a silent process, too. If it was followed with a large bang, I would be doomed and wake the sleeping princess. Who is "she", you ask? This "princess" I keep rambling on about? She is the most beautiful creature I have ever laid my eyes upon, that's what she is. An Espeon. A sleeping Espeon I spy on night-by-night. When she sleeps, I cannot help but feel this ever blessed feeling. Her face is so sad...whenever I am in her presence, I feel nothing but deep sorrow fill my heart. Something tells me that I should act. I should somehow comfort her. But how? Love? Is that the answer? Love? No. It isn't. Love is never the answer. She is merely a beautiful panting which sleeps silently under the lone tree and on the hard rock. She is of day and I am of night. She lives in the meadow, I live in the forest. She is a female and I am a male. Yet, I still looked at her, obsessed of her sensational sorrow. That night, when I was prowling along in the woods, a Feebas firmly clamped in my jaws, I had decided to give her a gift. A sliver a food wood cheer her up. What was I thinking? I had never even seen her awake! I didn't even know her. With that, I swallowed the small fish myself. I still felt the need to see her and comfort her. I peeped through the bushed and saw her yet again on the rock under the lone tree...sleeping with the saddest of all faces upon her. The gem on her forehead glinted and I knew that was a sign. She sensed me. Her body shifted and her eyes opened into slits. I was so stupid. I finally had the chance to talk to her...to show her that I existed. I also had the chance to cherish the moment of seeing her awake. But no. What I had to do was follow my stupid instincts and scamper away like a scared dog, back into the woods where I belonged. I just had to meet her... ----------------------------------------------------------------------- It may be short, but everyone will be alright ^^; |
It really seems like a mixture of pokemon and human emotions, but it seems appropriate..I loved how you put detail into your writing. It also leaves me in a bit of suspense.. I can't wait for the next one.
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You should read Through Espeon Eyes. It's not as good, but it does the job.
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Woo hoo i found it. Awsome that is better than through espeon eyes.i thought you said you wre going to make a story about an eevee.this still rocks though.and yes this is the true ble SPon11. having seen her go on both her spon11 name and hewr rin-rin name. ha i think this is the most i eveer wrote except in that rp i made that sucked.Yay 4 rininator the spoon.
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It's short, but we get the point. I really like it. I've pretty much decided to drop Vaporeon Dreams, so I'll check this out from now on. n_n
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It's Spoon! :0 (I acutally am one of the few people who got the whole SPon11 thing. O.o). This is very well written, at least to me. O_o Can't wait to read more. ^^
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Great news! I'll be on everyday now! Okey-dokey, next entry.
Chapter II A Night of Greeting It was the next night and I didn't bother to eat. I was still haunted by the constant thoughts of the beautiful sleeping Espeon...the beautiful sleeping Espeon moving...and waking up. What if I visited her again? Would she recognize my scent and instantly awaken? I had to make sure that she was still there. I...wanted to protect her. I wanted to be her guardian. That was stupid. I didn't even know her. How could I protect her? But, even though these thoughts swam through my head, and peeked through the bushes yet again to see the Espeon. To my astonishment, she was wide awake...looking at the moon. He body was sleek and slim, curved gently across the waning gibbous. I suddenly felt a serene yet sorrowful happiness run through me. I could do this! I could speak to her! I suddenly felt this bravery leap up in me. I was dominant over her...she would allow me to cross across her territory and she wouldn't mind, you know? So, without further ado, I prowled casually out of the bushes. She instantly caught sight of me, not looking at my eyes. I figured she couldn't see my well camouflaged body. "Funny seeing an Espeon like you out." And instinct inside of me slurred out. Her eyes held fearful shock, and she was lost for words. Her mouth was gaping open. I couldn't help but savor her irresistible beauty. She may have been scared, but I loved it... "I was..." She began, but nothing came out. I smiled at her fear. It was beautiful. I stuck to being as casual as I could. "I thought they were the type that frolic in the daytime meadows." I went on. "We Umbreon are ones of the nighttime meadows." She smiled weakly, as if I would attacked if she moved at all. She tried yet again to look into my eyes, but couldn't find them. It was far too dark. For a pokemon who wasn't nocturnal. I just remembered that she was the one that all the trainers were looking for because of her rarity. No one ever saw an Espeon out in the wild, nor did they see an Umbreon out in the wild, but I wasn't as vivid as her. "You must be that Espeon that everyone wants to catch." I said. "You know it's hard to find things like us out here. Did you have a trainer once?" He brow furrowed and she defiantly snapped, "Never..." I loved how fiesty she was. She was a firecracker! By her expressions and all the emotions emitting from her, I fell even more in love with her...it was love... "Then how did you evolve with such sorrowness?" I asked, truly curious and wanting to keep are partly interesting conversation going. She looked around nervously and stuttered. "I-I was born an Espeon..." I laughed heartily. I real, healthy laugh. "Born an Espeon? Why that's impossible!" "N-no it isn't..." She stuttered ever so nervously, seeming to break out into tears of all her frustration built up inside. I made a short "hm" through my nose and smiled. I went off, knowing my work was done. As I walked away, I rubbed my tail affectionately against her cheek. I could feel her questionably stare at me as I walked back into the brush. I was in love. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Still short, but to the point. |
woo hoo this is awsome yay i alwas wondered... well gotta go!
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Wow, interesting change in sig and such, Saphira Oo Creepy.
Chapter III The Mystic I couldn't sleep that day. I had the thoughts stirring mirthilessly that I steered her into hating me completely. I acted in such an instinctive way, it made me sound snotty and prideful. What if she didn't like that? Why--oh why--was the life of love so depriving? I couldn't seem to get it straight! "That does it." I said coldly to myself. "I'm going out! I'm going to speak with her! I need to know her!" A flock of pidgey flew away from their perch in a disgruntled way at my last sentence. I sighed and shook my head, looking down at my front paws. [i]What's the use?[i] I thought to myself. What will I earn? "Many things..." An airy voice came out in a whisper. I halted my breathing and looked around. "Who's there?" I asked the branches of the boughs. I squinted from left to right, for the sunrays hurt my eyes. I was never used to the daylight hours. Something stirred in the trees, but silently. I looked in the direction in where the sound came from and jumped. A light green figure was perched elegantly on a branch, it's slender and sinuous body arched. "I am here." It had said. In an amazing movement I could not follow, he twirled down from the tree and rushed pass me. I spun my head around to look at the peculiar creature, but instead I noticed something else. The tip of my tail had been cut off. Only the fur, though. "What was that for?" I asked the creature. The strange and agile pokemon had managed to climb back into the canopy, not allowing me to see him completely. "Why'd you cut my tail?" "It's a warning. Didn't you notice?" The voice chuckled. "You're Moonlight, are you not?" "I am." I replied. I was not at all baffled that he knew my name. I was widely known among all of Kanto. "Why do you ask?" "Word has it you're in love." He told me. I was baffled by this. How could that get out? "Where did you learn this?" I snapped. "I am not in love...love is stupid." "Then why do you think of it?" Finally, the talker revealed themself in front of me. It was a grovyle. And he was not at all a he. It was a she. "Do you bear the gift of foresight?" I asked. She nodded. She held in front of me a ruby-red jewel. "This is the gem of the Espeon, my dear Moonlight." She told me. "My grandsire had slain one decades ago. But it was of a wicked one. This one knew of no good." She dropped in on the ground. "You will need it. I have no important use of it." "Me?" I asked, perplexed. "But...why me?" "When you can read ones mind and see the future, you are engrossed with wisdom. You will be able to understand what love is. You will know how to harness it." She nodded her head towards the meadow to the east. "She, however, already bears it." "How to I carry it?" I asked as the Grovyle leaped off. She looked at me wisely from her branch on the tree. "Eat it." She said, and she was off. |
hello my friends! what a wonderful story Rin! I enjoy your stories as always. cant wait for the next chapter*adds rep*:D
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That's a really cute avatar, Marsy!
Chapter IV The Vision (Ooooooooh....) I was left with the absent sent of maple leaves and the absent thought of what to do. This red jewel glinted on the ground in front of me, staring at me with its malevolent shine. Eat it, she said. Eat an inedible thing...it was a hard choice. I took it in my teeth and swallowed. It felt like swallowing a smooth stone. A weary feeling came over me and I became restless. The thoughts which overcame me were not stupid thoughts or worrying...but of moving pictures. There was the sun...a dashing figure in the mess of trees...a large horde of pinser... The images became clearer and clearer...The sun became brighter...the leaves on the trees became more noticeable...the dashing figure turned light amethyst... And then, I realized...the dashing figure was my love...the Espeon. I took off to the east, knowing immediately where to go. The gem led me...I knew exactly where...I knew how to do everything...I had to find her... The eastern woods...I rushed into the deep eastern woods, far deeper and more dangerous than the western woods. There I saw my love padding along the woods, unharmed. She didn't hear me or notice I was near. I merely saw her from afar, pecking at some oran berries. What was she doing...? Did she not see what was about to happen to her? She walked deeper into the woods. It baffled me that she was even walking. I watched her body move so elegantly...such grace. The worry it led me to I couldn't help. She was to be chased! Chased by a herd of Pinser! I wanted to call out, but something in me jerked me back. "No!" It said. "Let it be!" I wanted to scream out at the voice, but it wouldn't listen...I had to listen to it. It was the gem...I knew it was. I felt it glowing in my stomach. She flitted around in the grass. I was sweating. I was overcome with fear of her death. I didn't want her to die. I didn't want this foresight! I didn't want to eat the jewel...it all happened so quickly... Then the rumbling noises came. My heart leapt. This was it. I heard the cries of the Pinser...the menacing, terrible cries. Their feet trampled the ground and brought up dust as they went. My love spun around, her ears curved back and her eyes narrowed. She noticed the herd and ran, her limbs blurring in the process. I went after her. We both ran, me following behind her so she could not notice me. I didn't want her to know I was spying on her. She brought herself to a crevice and looked deep down into the hole. I watched her head spin back to the Pinser charging after her. No... I thought. She can't jump...this can't all end in suicide! She jumped. I screamed to the air and piercing yowl and dove after her body in mid-air. I shoved her down...down...down... ---------------- Wha~hoo! This is fun! Ah, the good old days of cliffhangyness... |
Holy..crap..I can't describe it..its just so awesome!!
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SPOON! Good, took my advice in old TEE huh? So, wheres the butter. And that is a true cliffhanger, if there ever was one. A cliff-likeish drop.
Well, you're back. btw, does anyone else have IMVU, here? |
Yeah, I sorta felt like changing my sig, and... Well, you know.
*grabs popcorn and butter* THE BUTTER WARS HAVE RETURNED!!! A-nyways, that really was a cliffhanger... Or a cliffdrop.... Or a cliffalmostsuiciderescuethingy.... Yeah... O_o' I really like these chapters. They're short, to the point, and they have plenty of detail. Saphi ish sitting here thinking, NOOOO! Don't end THERE!!! Gah, Spoon, I eat you. |
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Chapter V The Great Day I felt the rush of deceased leaves rush across my face. I was winded and out of breath. My chest was to her chest and her eyes were locked tight, her chest heaving restlessly up and down. I caught my breath and uttered, "So, we meet again..." Her eyes plinked open and my heart leapt from her gorging, endless amethyst eyes. She jerked in my grip. "No need to be timid," I said, "I just saved your life." I heard the Pinser screeching and howling as they fell of the cliff, stupidly. She looked in that direction in fear. It added a strangely great effect to the romantic scene. "I don't think we properly introduced ourselves." I purred. "I'm Moonlight." She hesitated, her mouth gaping slighly. "I...I don't have a name." Poor girl... I thought. She must've lost her parents too...but drowned in her depression... "Well..." I looked deep into her eyes. "Make one up." I felt her chest heave gently up and down against mine. She took a large breath and whispered, "I'm...Sunlight." I smiled at that. "Hm. I think people will think we're twins." I got off of her and laughed whole-heartedly. With all my heart. It wasn't fake. I laughed my heart away. It surprised me thought...she started laughing too. ~*~ The day was beautiful. The future was bright. The sun was bright. The Beautifly and Butterfree glittered in the brightness. We chased them, giggling in such giddy ways, passerby thought us as mad. But it was obvious: we were in love. And I knew that she loved me and she knew that I loved her. It was wonderful! I knew it. Love was right. Love was the thing that kept a soul alive. She needed it. I needed it. We both needed it. That's why we were destined to meet. We had our differences, but we had our many simialarities. The sun had had it's time and prepared to descend behind the rolling hills. We lay down comfortably on the grass and cuddled next to eachother, grooming eachother behind the ears. It was comforting. The sun was beautiful with the tickle-me-pink clouds and the tropical watercolors of bright orange and periwinkle. "Moonlight..." Sunlight spoke. I turned to her. She had an intoxicated look upon her face. "This is the best moment of my days." I chuckled in my throat. "I would have never guessed..." "Moonlight..." She repeated in the same tone as before. "I love you, too..." She licked me on the cheek. I felt her wet face as she rubbed against mine. "I'll never forget this day!" She cried behind her tears. Wah~hoo! Lovey-dovey power! xD |
You cant have butter without me I am the gaurd to the butter vault! Yes the almighty ClappySeel! W00t as always you stories are great but better!
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^o^ Eeeee! How cute!! *emotionless disposition returns* Nice story, Riny. They do get better. And yes, even though I've read the other story, I wanna know what happens to Moonlight. o.o
*happy again* BUTTER!!! *attacks butter and orders 5 truckloads of popcorn for everyone* |
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Chapter VI The Capture We both stared at the sun, unblinking as it sunk beneath the hills. My eyes began to water, but had no energy to blink. Sunlight lay purring next to me, about to fall into deep sleep. I licked the top of her head. "You know, Sunlight, I'll never let anything happen to you...I'll always be with you." I told her. I finally could protect her. I had fulfilled my dream... I felt the wet fur on her face as she rubbed against me. She wept of joy. "You won't sleep in the day?" "Never..." I replied. "Being with you is just the same..." As a dream...I finished in my mind. I pecked her with my nose on her cheek. Her tone reverted to a more serious one. "I'm not going to mate you, if that's what you're thinking." I laughed. "No. I hate Eevee..." She moved her way on top of my back and closed her eyes. She hugged me comfortably. I smiled and fell to sleep. (I bet you know what's coming, Saphi...hehe...) I woke up in the night to a delicious scent. It was a fantastic scent...it smelled of tender beef. I scrunched my way carefully out of Sunlight's grasp and started trotting off towards the smell. I hadn't eaten in a while, and since I gained my spirit back, I had the will to eat. The scent carried me to the woods. I followed the trail still, following my nose. I kept traveling east and saw a hunk of beef in the center of a brush of leaves. The sight of the slab of meat intrigued me, but then I thought of Sunlight. Didn't I promise...to protect her? Yes...I thought. But she would love it if I brought back breakfast. I crept up to the chunk of meat and bit my teeth in, but I regret what I did. Clang! The sound of metal crashing against metal ringed in my ears. Wind rushed though my fur and leaves were in a cloud around me. In horror, I discovered the reality of the situation. I was in a cage...it was a trap. The meat was still clamped firmly in my jaws. I looked around in fear, my heart pounding. My body sunk to the floor as the cage heaved up into the sky by chain. I felt this gathering feeling in my lungs and my jaws opened wider than ever in a howling cry of anguish. "SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGHT!!!!!" You see? Instead of "MOOOOOOONLIIIIIIIIIIGHT!" It's vice versa. Comical, ey? xD |
MOONLIGHT!!! SUNLIGHT!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!
Omg, it's as great as the first! I love it! I love it! :) :) :) And also :). |
Yesh, I knew what was coming... Nragh! I have to bear through the torture all over again!!
*eats popcorn with butter* |
Yeah, we have to feel the torture all over. *prepares a handkerchief*
Can I have some of the popcorn too? XD |
Of course. *dumps truckload on Pika-Mew* Enjoy, Keheh. n_n
Well, I haven't noticed any spelling errors or any of that other stuff (probly because I suck at spelling), so, I leave a review until later, Spoon. Keheh!! |
Oh, gosh. That is NOT you Rin. Ya know, I thought the new username was Rin-Ran. So I will now call you Ran.
Good chapter Rin....Ran. :) I like how it started. Yes, maybe, betwen Clappyseel and Dark_espeon, we will succeed in re-naming this thread, 'The Popcorn and Butter Wars'. I re-read TEE the other day, you know. A sign, it must have been. I know it, I could feel it late at night as I read, "NOOO MOONLIGHT!" And going over MM2's report on "People going insane and..... 'An NHL player refused to go onto the field today. The only clue about "WHY?" is that he keeps saying 'No', and 'Moonlight', repeatedly, even thoguh its daytime.' ROFLLOL! |
Yay, POPCORN! *starts eating*
I don't see any errors. I suck at speling too(did I spel that right?). Great job so far, Rin/Spoon/Greatest writer in the galaxy. :) |
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=is tempted to start chanting "More! More! More!"= This story PWNS. I only saw one mistake. Other than that, go get this published. :D |
She'd need to lengthen it to be published, most-likely... Though I support the idea 110%.
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She might run into copyright problems with Nintendo. What else is knew? XD. I'm all for it.
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Hey ya know she is writing a story to get published! How I know that you will never know mwahahahahahahahahahaha
Oh and by the way my butter!!*grabs butter and stuffs back in vault!* askme first give key to your store I get butter for you!*brings out borrowed ginormous mallet and takes up gaurd position!* Ya know there really isn't butter wars without Deoxys55. Does anyone know where that butter theif is? |
Wish I did. Can I have some butter? PWEEAASSEE?? *puppy dog eyes*
You're getting published, Spoon? WOOT! Look out, J.K. Rowling. There's a new author in town. ^__^ Good luck, Spoon-rin. And best wishes. |
Sorry I haven't come here in a while. I was slacking off -_-
Thanks for the compliments! ^^ Chapter VII The First Night The cage rattled and the wind whistled through the bars. I heard the loud whirring of a helicopter's pillar cutting through the air continuously. Through all the noise, I still cried her name out loud and clear, splitting all the obnoxious noises in half. "Sunlight! Sunlight! Sunlight!" My voice ran hoarse and I started to calm down even though my blood boiled with rage. I tried maintaining my balance as the cage swung viciously through the sky. I watched as the sun began to peek it's head from under behind the hill. Will she notice I'm gone? "Sunlight! I cried once again, much more pitiful than I ever felt. My bones were shivering and I felt a surge of fear run through me. My vision became blurry and I felt wetness spread on my face. I gained bruises from being thrashed around in that wretched cage. I begun not to care. A sudden thrust from the whirring helicopter sent me into the bars so hard that I leaned over and coughed up a bit of red substance. Blood... "S-s...sun...light..." I wept. Tears rolled down my face and I shook my head continuously as I rolled around the cage pitifully. I didn't keep my promise...I couldn't protect her...I broke it... "Sunlight..." I cried through my tears. I felt the thin saliva in my mouth from the tears that dribbled down. My ears, although battered, perked up at the slightest noise. "Moonlight!" I looked down, I eyes widening. I heard my name screamed across the skies over and over, more defined and hoarse each time. I cried out her name once I saw her dashing, pink body under me. "SUNLIGHT!" My lungs creaked as I howled it across to her. The forest blocked my view and she was gone... I resignedly put my head to the bars and laid my paws out. I felt the cold blood go down my cheek. My head became dizzy and my vision blurry... "Sunlight..." So...so sad ;; WHY?! |
:'( *is crying* Why? Whyyyy???? NOOO!!! Og, I actually fell off my chair. 0.o
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Aw, that's so sad.... *hopes new chapter is coming soon* *gets idea* Ooooh, I could draw a cover-page thingiemabob for this!!
*ninga stealth* *sneaks into Butter Vault* Bwauhahaha, theres an new Butter Theif in town!! *gets locked inside vault* |
A cover? Great idea!
*opens vault with her superpowers* Ha, you can't hide from ME!!!!!!!!!!! *gets locked in vault also* |
*puts hugeo lock on the vault*
I'll try.... "NOOO, MOONLIGHT!!!111one1!!" *kills good writing skills* T3H n00b! Good new chapter, alhough, most of us already knows what happens. And where's Starlight? Is he going to be in the ending? Again...? |
Mwahahahaha!!! *puts dark_espeon,and pika mew in chains in the back of the butter vault* thats what you get when you try to steal my butter!! Now ask nicely dont try to steal and I might forgive you. BY the way if you become a full thrown butter theif like Deoxys55 then i'll have to attack you with my borrowed mallet from scarlet sky.
Gohan you want to be my assistant butter vault gaurd? If so patrol the inside of the vault and regularly head out to the prisoners and head back here to report. We interupt mars' constant blabering to tell you that IN central florida there has been an outburst of the word SUUUUNNNNLLLIIGGHHTTTTT!!!! WE have asked profesionals what caused this epidemic, but they were unable due to the constant courous of SUUUUNNNLLIGGHHHTT! that exited their mouth. Thank you. *sniff* so sad. even more sad then in Through Espeon eyes. Man why do you have to be so good and yet soo bad. Big meanie. Well we all know the story will continue and soon Moonlight has to be rescued. |
*is in chains* Oh great, it's the straitjacket all over again...
Ask nicely? *gasps* NEVERRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can we have some butter pwease? |
Hmm let me think about it....... not now im getting dinner right in front of you my prisoner mabey ill give you some leftover chicken. Mwahahahahaha!
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Holy....the story's getting better and better....WRITE MORE OR DIE!!!
XD I'm just playing about the 'die' thing but it would be nice if you kept going and going...anyway poor Moonlight..I only wonder who captured him... |
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Chapter...uh, VII? I think...Oh, who cares... *Okay, for a moment I'm going to use no first person mode. Just so you don't get confused... "C'mon! Wake up, yeh rotten animal!" The grunt disposed yet another chilling bucket of water over the unconscious Umbreon. The pokemon merely twitched and shifted unnervingly, growling lowly in his throat. The Team Rocket grunt kicked it usely. "The boss won't be happy with this one...It's barely alive!" "Then maybe someone shouldn't hang cages from helicopters by a mere metal chain..." Snarled a cranky administrator, kicking the grunt in the shin. "See him to his cell...Maybe a bit of company will bring him to." He bent down and pet the Umbreon under the chin, smiling. "Well, what did I say? Go!" The grunt flinched and immediately flung the animal over his shoulder, retreating hastily. ~*~ "What's the matter with him?" "Why won't he wake up?" "Is he sick?" My ears cringed and my nose wrinkled as my senses slowly regained themselves. The sounds of various voices echoed throughout the area in which I was in which had a vile stench and a cold, wet floor. My eyelids felt incredibly heavy as I opened them and saw two large yellow eyes staring at me. "Where...?" I began, but the creature lieing in front of me answered. "Viridian Gym; the basement. This is where Giovanni keeps his stash of cool pokemon." I focused my eyes on the strange pokemon and lifted my head up. "Who? Where?" "A human. An evil human to say the least." Another voice had sounded. I twirled my head around and spotted a shining glimmer. I sat up on my haunches and licked my paw. "So...held captive by a dirty human?" "Correct." Another voice had said to my left. My eyes began adjusting immediately to the dark room. They fixed on a blue character with a hard shell on her back. "We are merely three of his captives. You are the fourth to be held in this cell." "See that crack?" The first voice had said. I looked to him and saw him more clearly. He was green with a large bushy tail. He was a Treeko. I looked up to where he was pointing. A shine of light perculated through a corner in the high ceiling, flecks of dust swimming through the air in its path. "That's supposed to be our escape route. It's taken us years to create that simple little crack in the ceiling." "Sad, isn't it?" The second voice growled. I stared at him more clearly. He was a jet-black Quilava with a peach-colored underbelly. "What he's trying to say is...there is practically no means of escape." "Even sadder..." The third voice said. She was sitting on the ground, studying her wavy tail. She was a Wartortle. "What is your name, young one?" "Moonlight." I said. "It's Moonlight." "I'm BoughLeaf." The Treeko curtsied kindly. "My name is Phlow." The Quilava aired. "And I am WaterWing." The Wartortle cooed. "And we all are certain that you are to be a favorite of Giovanni's..." I love to make you guys suffer >) |
That's evident. :dead:
Isn't it reassuring that some things just keep getting better and better? ;) |
Oh, I like Phlow, for some strange reason. O.o'....^-^
Yes, we've all firgured that out by now, Riny-Spoon-chan.... Miss Evil Cliffhanger-make-you-wait-a-whole-day-before-reading-the-next-chapter Girl... *bites through chains with vampiric-like teeth* *frees Amy-chan* Bwauahahaha, here we are, locked in the Sacred Butter Vault, without out chains!! Now, my young, theiving apprentice, let ze heads roll!! |
This thread is moving...very fast O.o TEE didn't move as fast as this, as I do recall...
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Bwauhahahahaha!! WE SHALL TAKE OVER THE WORLD!!!!!!!
Or at least the butter vault. |
Yesh, we shall. *whets cheap plastic halloween axe*
Yeah, Riny-Spoon-chan ish right.... This is going fast... Probably because of the newly-remade, ever-raging on, Butter Wars. |
It's fine with me if you play around in this thread, but please don't go too far with this -_- I mean, it's funny and all, but what would a mod think xD
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Yeah, lets hope we don't get too outta hand.... *shoves plastic axe under Amy's bed*
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Chapter VIII “I’m a favorite of this human?” I asked, simply flabbergasted. “But…how? I’ve only been here for a few minutes!” “Correction.” BoughLeaf grunted, raising a finger. “You’ve been here for two days…” “Two days?” I parroted. “I was out for that long?” “You were in a completely comatose state.” WaterWing whispered. “You were bruised quite relentlessly…you not only suffered complete brutality from the cage you were confined in, but we ordered Phlow laid to by you as you slept on. He reported once we got up of you mumbling in your sleep ‘sunlight…’ It is obvious that you haven’t suffered just physical abuse, but emotional abuse as well.” “You were mumbling nothing but that.” Phlow snarled. Although he snarled in all his speech, his language was somewhat soothing. “Not only that, but you constantly repeated it as you rolled around restlessly…you had me worried dearly.” I stared in awe at the three pokemon…at how they knew me more than I knew myself. “You three are skilled!” I declared. “Such acuteness of my deepest thoughts…” “Ah! But there’s even more, my friend.” Phlow went on. “I couldn’t help but catch an uncanny scent upon your breath. It was a scent I had never smelled on the breath of an Umbreon, but of an Espeon. This, I am certain, is why Giovanni favors you as he does.” “Because I have Espeon breath?” I laughed forcefully, for my mind directed towards Sunlight. “Why is that such an important quality?” “Why would an Umbreon smell of an Espeon?” WaterWing announced. “It’s all so clear. You have consumed the Jewel of Foresight.” “The Jewel…” I uttered, and then remembered. The jewel… “Yes! That Grovyle…she gave it to me!” I yowled. My voice echoed off of the walls and they hushed me. BoughLeaf twisted his head around and looked at me with wide eyes. He crept up to me sneakily and put his finger to my wet nose. I didn’t know why, but it felt somewhat familiar. “What are you doing, BoughLeaf?” Asked WaterWing urgently. BoughLeaf let his arm go limp and scurried back into his corner. He said nothing. “Why do you say ‘sunlight’ in your sleep?” Phlow asked. “Is it your deepest fear? What is it about this ‘sunlight’ that you treasure most?” My thoughts were still half on what the Treeko had done. I looked at Phlow and answered. “Sunlight is a being. She is an Espeon.” I had said. “Is she an enemy?” WaterWing asked. “No! Not at all…” Moonlight growled. “She is my dearest love.” There was silence across the room and I felt a shiver go down my spine. BoughLeaf whispered something into Phlow’s ear which I knew would be something nasty or rude about me… “Moonlight…” Phlow said. “It is strange of you to love an Espeon. For you are an Umbreon.” He bowed gratefully. “But, although it may be out-of-the-ordinary, we give you our deepest gratitude. I hope faith is with Sunlight.” I felt embarrassed as all three of the pokemon bowed their heads to me. “And I am certain that Giovanni was planning on capturing Sunlight rather than you, Moonlight.” WaterWing had said. “An Espeon would’ve proved more use to him.” “But, knowing that you contain the Jewel of Foresight…” Phlow growled, “it is all just the same…except more of a rare thing. I’ve known Giovanni long enough to know that he craves rare things greatly, and you, my friend, are indeed an extraordinary being.” And I did all of the MS word :D I'm so happy...that's why it's so long and full of goodness :D |
Seemed somewhat short..but nonetheless well written..XD Moonlight and his obsession...anyway...Giovanni must die..XD
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If Giovanni must die, we should get that kitten in your avatar to do it. That avatar rocks, I cracked up laughing when I saw it.
I shall gaud the butter vault with my li-- Is that butter? Nice chapter. NOOO SUNLIGHT!!! |
Aw, poor Sunlight. And Moonlight. Heck, I feel sorry for both of 'em. This is like watching-er.... reading some Pokemon soap opera...!! XD (<--first time I've said 'XD' in three months... Curse you, Riny-Spoon-chan!!)
And if this is a soap.... *grabs Ice Cream* There we go. from this day forth, This thread shall be known as.... ZE AWESOMENESS THREAD OF RINY-SPOON-CHAN'S AWESOME STORY THOUGH UMBREON EYES!!! Also known as ZE ICE CREAM AND BUTTER WARS VER.2.0!!!!! Ph34r 1t. Anyways, nice chapter. No speeling mistakes 'n whatnot, so... Good job! *can't wait for next chapter* |
Awww. *wipes face on handkerchief* I can't get over how great this is. And yet, how sad...
My parents keep asking me why I yell 'sunlight' and 'moonlight' every time I go on the computer. I tell them I've finally lost it. Weird, the things people believe. |
Yeah, my friend keeps on looking at me funny. Riny-Spoon-chan, you're making us look crazy. At least, a teeny bit craizier than we already are... O_O Caffinage...
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You people...are yelling "Sunlight" in public? o.O Okay, how about you end each sentence with "in accordance with the prophecy" for a while? xD
I'm not posting the story right now, but I uh...think those things in your sig are the pwnage XDXDXDXDXDXDXD |
Thanks, Rin-Rin!! As you can see, I got them from my friend. I hope she doesn't murder me.... O.o'
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Would you like some ice cream *cough*inaccordancewiththepropechy*cough*?
A metal can had glided through the air towards me. I skillfully dodged it, it striking BoughLeaf squarely on the back of the head. He flinched and rubbed the bump on the spot and merely said nothing as he threw the heavy can to Phlow. “What’s that?” I interrogated. Phlow unsheathed a single claw and used it to open the can. “Food.” He replied. “We are served one can a day, so take in your nourishment gratefully.” He poured the contents of the food on the ground and I wrinkled my nose at the stench. “That’s food?” I whined. “Nourishment?” “S’better than nothin’…” BoughLeaf grumbled. “Quit complaining…” WaterWing took her share of the colorless goo and tucked in on it appreciatively. I noticed how little we each were given and how evenly these creatures split it. They were the fairest pokemon I had ever met. “Is it safe?” I asked under my breath to Phlow. He was the one I felt most comfortable with…BoughLeaf was far too unsociable and WaterWing was too old. Phlow nodded. “Isn’t poisoned…mine as well take a taste. Remember, one serving a day…” “I know…I know…” I said, believing only partly. I licked the edge of the goop and gagged. “Nasty, isn’t it.” BoughLeaf laughed. “It takes some getting used to.” After the small and disgusting meal (if you could call it a meal, or even a snack), they all enjoyed sharing their stories with each other. “Believe it or not, I was part of the Squirtle Gang once.” WaterWing laughed. I looked at her in disbelief. She nodded. “Yes…after I lost my trainer as a young Squirtle, they found me trying to drown myself in a mud puddle. I was miserable back then…I wanted to die of all the pain my heart suffered. They took me in and nursed my cold and such. I was very thankful for their affection and nurturing.” “But, as the years went by, they began to treat me as their pet. I was the only female of the gang and wasn’t considered ‘cool enough.’ They began to abuse me…sexually abuse me, actually. I had far too many kids at that time…” “That’s heartless!” I cried. I couldn’t control myself…she had gone through so much pain. “Who would do such a thing?” “The Squirtle Gang, apparently. So, I ran away from them and never saw them again. Afterwards, I was mourning over my trainer. I decided, ‘well, better pick up from where I left off…’ so I did. I began battling with wild bugs and such in Viridian Forest. Eventually, I evolved into what I am now…” She heaved a great sigh. “Ah…but then I became popular among the humans. Viridian Forest became my home and that was a famous trail for young trainers. People tried to catch me and such, but it never happened…until the news of me slipped out to Giovanni…” “She’s been here ever since.” Phlow sighed. “Six years…” “Six?” I looked up to the ceiling. “Wow…” “There’s nothing you should know much about me.” Phlow said, closing his eyes. “I was stolen.” “You mean you also had a trainer?” I asked, fascinated. Phlow nodded gruffly. “Indeed. She was quite the good one, too. Strong and very strategetic. Her team was quite robust, despite the fact that she was a girl. She didn’t have small puffs of pink fluff as her pokemon…” “Anyways, I was stolen by Team Rocket because I was Tori’s favorite. I was also known to be one of the strongest pokemon of Johto. I was stolen in the middle of the night, making it impossible for Tori or the police to know that it was Team Rocket. They left no sign that they were there. No finger prints, no foot steps, only the absence of me. They were brilliant.” “Did you put up a fight?” I asked. He shook his head in disappointment. “They had a strange poke ball…I couldn’t escape it. I’m surprised they don’t just confine me in it itself. I’ve been here for three years.” “BoughLeaf…what about you?” WaterWing asked the Treeko. Throughout the day, the little green lizard was crouched over, averting everyone’s gaze by looking sadly at the floor. Although he acted sorrowful, he told his story without hesitation. “My mother, Fronalas, was the most powerful wild pokemon of Western Forest. She was swift powerful…a complete master of stealth…it was soon that Team Rocket heard of this incredible pokemon…” “They attempted for years to capture her, but failed drastically every single time. Amazing how the human mind works, though…they decided to capture me to try and get to mother’s head…but I haven’t seen her in a year…she…she forgot about me…she’s not coming to get me…” He said all this with his head bowed. I saw the tears shed from his eyes as they dripped onto the concrete floor. I padded over to him and licked him comfortingly on the back. “It’s alright…” I told him. “Your mother has sent me.” “I figured that…” He sobbed under his breath so no one would hear. “How else would you have the Jewel?” |
^^ Oooh, cliffhangy! What's going to happen next?
For making such a great fanfic, I shall obey you and say, 'in accordance to the prophecy' at the end of my next few posts. XD In accordance to the prophecy. |
Phlow and WaterWing had understood after a few moments that the discussion between BoughLeaf and I wasn’t to be shared among the four of us together. By the undertone in which we spoke in, they knew that it was a secret between the two of us. The Quilava and the Wartortle exchanged glances and nodded in unison, both indicating that they should get some rest. At that, they curled up into opposite corners and shut their eyes, both straining their ears to listen in on what we were speaking of.
“I met your mother only few days ago.” I had said to the small Treeko. “It was when I couldn’t help but spy on the Espeon, Sunlight. I thought of her constantly…the thoughts were so compulsive…I couldn’t help but live off of them. Because of all these dangerous thoughts, I thought I should give the Espeon up…I thought maybe I was in love with her, and that’s when I ran into your mother…well, she ran into me.” “She told me that love was the way and that I shouldn’t give her up. It wasn’t the most colorful conversation, but it was useful. She gave me the Jewel, telling me that it would help in my life of love…and then she went away.” “She was meaning for you to find me.” BoughLeaf sobbed. “She was wise. Giovanni wanted her for what she had; the Jewel! If she gave up the Jewel and made someone eat it…then she would be lifted of the burden forever…” “Yes…she also wanted me to find you.” I had said to comfort him. BoughLeaf looked up from his folded arms. “Did she tell you that?” He sobbed. I hesitated. “Yes.” I lied. “She dearly misses you. She wanted me to…” “You’re lying…” He croaked. “Mother told me how to tell if someone was lieing…it’s all in how their breath acts…and your breath was thin.” He curled up into his corner, the corner where the crack leaked the rays of the full moon onto him. “Leave me be. I need to rest.” I backed away and looked to WaterWing who pretended to sleep. I heard the Treeko quickly revert to deep, warm breaths, signifying that he was in comfortable sleep. WaterWing opened one eye and told me, “Don’t worry, Moonlight. He is always this way. Come, sleep with me. I shall tell you ways of our cell.” “More like ‘the ways of our hell.’” Phlow grumbled as he shifted in his lying sleep. I frowned at his defiant words and looked to WaterWing who was also frowning sadly. ~*~ We were awoken by the sound of the sliding cell door opening. We all hopped back and backed against the wall as the Team Rocket administrator’s form was framed in the window. I arched my back and hissed ferociously but WaterWing touched my shoulder. “Learn not to fight. You’ll get the consequence of punishment.” My back straightened and I bowed my head resignedly as the admin hoisted me up gently. I was surprised at how tender he was with me. I was expecting him to yank me up by the scruff, but held me much like the human mother hold an infant. I instantly considered him fondly of me. “Alright…” He told me gruffly. “Let’s head out.” “Where’s he taking him?” Phlow asked WaterWing. “Is he free to go?” “I don’t know...” WaterWing whispered. The last I saw before the metal door clanged shut was BoughLeaf squatting in the corner with his face in his hands. I truly felt sorry for him…he was only a kid… “You’re quite docile.” The human told me. I looked up to him curiously. He was smiling boldly. “We’ve never had a pokemon here that never put up a true fight.” I purred reassuringly. I liked the human. He may have been a Team Rocket member, but he complimented me and that’s all that mattered. I was cared for… La-dee-dah...I'm bored... |
Ahhhhhh why are you bored the butter wars are raging. Your welcome to join you are the great creator! *Bows*
Oh great creator spare me you cliff hanger will on day kill me, but i would die for you great creator! your story is the best better than the rest! By the by we should stick to the opriginal butter wars with ice cream things would become too confusing. Here have some carrots vegitairian. Gohan patrol the area and ill pay your wage in butter. Now go! CharMZ join in the wars! XD long post! ~In accordance to the prophecy |
From now on, we all must say 'in accordance to the prophecy' at the end of our posts, for the great cliffhangy creator wishes it. *bows* In accordance to the prophecy.
EDIT: Omg! *slaps head* It's 'in accordance with the prophecy'! :dead: I'm sorry, Rinspoon. I have failed you. In accordance WITH the prophecy. |
You guys are scaring me...with all of this stuff...it's just....scary. I don't have anything to post today, unfortunately, so don't kill me >.<;
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Wars? What wars? XD Well I'm getting hungry with all this butter talk...XD
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Sorry I'm being such a lazy butt >.< I like to slack off a lot.
The administrator held me in one arm as he reached out his other arm to enter some type of code on an allignment of buttons on the wall. After a few seconds, an opening appeared and we entered. The room had the vile stench of pollution about it--possibly the scent of ciggarette smoke. I sneezed and the admin patted my head. "Do you have the cargo, Cornelius?" A gruff voice came from behind a chair. The back of the chair was facing towards us, but upon closer observation, I discovered the top of a human head poking from behind. Also, a line a smoke reached up to the ceiling. That must be the source of this stench...I thought. "Yes, sir." The admin nodded and placed me on the desk in front of the chair. I shivered as soon as I was placed. I felt the Jewel glow inside me. Evil...It whispered in my thoughts. There's something evil here... I gasped as the chair slowly swiveled around and a human was distinguised in the chair. He placed his elbows on the desk and smiled at me maliciously. A thick stick dangled from his mouth, glowing at the end and emitting smoke. He wore a pin-striped suit...I realized immediately by his uncanny presense that he must be...Giovanni... "Very nice..." I chuckled as he put his thick fingers upon my tender head. I recoiled and stumbled back. Get off of me... I growled lowly in my throat, and remembered what WaterWing had said..."Don't fight back..." "Are you sure it's the one?" The admin had asked. "It's just a normal Umbreon..." "That's where yer wrong, Corn." Giovanni laughed as he pulled the stick out of his mouth and waved it about. He crossed his feet across the table, totally disregarding me. "You see, this little fellow acts different than any other Umbreon I have seen. I saw him from my copter one day running to the forest for no apparent reason. Minutes later I spotted a large herd of Pinser stampeding across the ground. These Pinser were miles behind him before this happened. And besides, an Umbreon doesn't have that good of hearing. He wouldn't be able to hear them before they came. "How can we be so sure with such a small observation, sir?" The admin asked. Giovanni put his feet down and grabbed my chin and looked at me closely. "Hook him up." |
Hook him up? Whats he gonna do? WHATS HE GONNA DO???
Ok well Marsy thinks she'll let the prisinors go now but if you try to steal my butter then your in big fatty fat trouble! She'll use this borrowed mallet Marsy promises! Sorry for spammy sort of post but Marsy's sure that is what is going through everyones head right now so please excuse it. Awsome,Rinny-Spoon-Chan! Rock on! |
Awesome Rin...I think I know what's gonna happen...but no spoilers..XD
EDIT:: I forgot to say.. In accordance with the prophecy. |
Yesh, Riny-Spoon-Chan has the greatest stories--EVA!!
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You know somthing that would be even better than saying in accordance with the prophecy? Talking in third person! Marsy is doing it alredy for awhile. Besides I say it a lot at home and it's driving my family crazy.
~Cheesecake llama |
I am really sorry everyone, but I can't post another chapter until either Saturday or Sunday. My computer is unhooked because I am moving Friday >.< Sooooo sorry.
{Edit:} Don't mind me. I lied. The computer's hooked up again :D But I'm not posting more until someone else replies >) |
Annnyways, forget the reply thing-a-ma-bob; I'm gonna post it right now...
----------------------------------------------------------------- I felt something swiftly collide with the back of my cranium, sending me crashing down onto the table. A high-pitched ringing sang annoyingly in my ears and my eyes slowly drooped down...my head swam continuously and it felt as if needles were piercing into my brain twenty at a time. The ringing screamed and screamed...my thoughts flashed blindingly in my mind as my thoughts slowly depleted...and I was falling into darkness...the deepest, darkest chasms of my nightmares. ~*~ "Out." Cornelius told his leader with a nod. "Completely out, sir." He moved his hand towards the dark creature unsurely. "Would you like me to escort him to Vialle?" Giovanni pierced through the administater's eyes and blew cigar smoke out of his nostrils. Cornelius forced a cough back into his lungs, knowing it impolite to show weakness in front of the boss. "Take it." Giovanni said, crossing his fingers and turning the back of the chair on the admin. Cornelius picked the unconscious Umbreon up as gently as he could, stroking him admirably. "Yes, sir..." He hesitated and headed towards the exit. "Oh, and Corn..." Giovanni gruffly added. The admin turned around, his legs tremoring. "Don't call it 'he', alright? I get the impression that your a little attached to that mutt." Cornelius nodded and scurried out the office without a word. ~*~ The soothing noise of crashing waves were heard...they were somewhat soothing. The waves did not exactly "crash," but they more...kissed the rocks that I heard them crash upon...My vision became clearer and I began to sea a great ocean open beneath me, the waves moving in and out, curving and roaring heroicly. The rocks stood high up, pointing to the heavens towards me. I breathed in the ocean air, for I never smelled the scent before. It was salty and smelled of fish. I looked around and realized...I was floating in mid-air! I felt a giddy glow fill inside of me. I zoomed down and got closer to the splashing waters. Up close, the scent of salt intensified. It filled my lungs and made me...well, happy. I splashed my paws in the water as I still dangled in the air. I then arched my back and speed down into the deeps, savoring the wonderous world around me. As the water rippled through my fur, I felt delightment consume me. I watched in amazement as schools of goldeen floated around lazily...billions of them! They looked at me without a care...then there I saw anemones swaying the waters current, sitting upon vibrantly-colored rocks. Purple, orange, green, blue, pink...all the colors of the rainbow and Earth around me. But, my solace was broken by a thunderous roar which sent bubble lodged beneath the rocks speeding towards the surface. I felt my chest shrivel and I gasped for air but instead received a lungful of water. I floundered to the surface and coughed up the salty-tasting liquid and took gasps of air. I attempted bounding from the water, but couldn't. I couldn't fly anymore! I was normal once again! A shadow passed over the sun and I spotted a sleek green figure far off above my head. It stirred and flew faster than ligtening, turning all the clouds blood-red and the sky pitch black. I felt my heart hammer. The paddled over any land I could find and found an island of loose sand. I clammbered on. I looked up, realizing the shadow cast upon me. There, descending forever to the heavens, was a golden-brown tower. -------------------------------------------------------- That shows how sinister and evil I am |
Wow. A good story. Makes ya wonder what's gonna happen next.
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[][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][] "Incredible." Giovanni smirked as he said the remark, holding his thick cigar between his yellowing fingertips. He was observing a monitor hanging from the ceiling. "Vialle, this machine of yours is handy." He sucked on his cigar and puffed out a cloud of grey smoke. "I give you my word. It's magnificent." "Thank you, Sir." Vialle said as he adjusted some cords at the back of the main generator. "It took me ages to make it up." The doctor's scrawny face appeared from behind the large metal hunk with his thick glasses nearly to the tip of his nose and slightly askew. "Is image coming in clear?" "Quite." Giovanni growled through his breath. He kept his back stiff as he watched the images on the screen. It was like watching a cataclysmic movie through the eyes of a small animal. Dr. Vialle, knowing that his work had been approved, nodded and pushed up his glasses, continuing his tedious work. The miniscule laboratory in which they both were present in was one scarcely spoken of throughout the Viridian Gym. It was a dank room that was dimly lit only by green glowing liquids in bottles and tubes. Glass cases lined the wall about the height and width of the average man. These large, tubular cases contained with them not only mysterious neon liquids, but pokemon floating nearly lifelessly within them. Tubes were connected to their muzzles, leading out to the air-filled room, allowing them to breathe. Cord were strapped down to their heads and wriggled slightly at the little movement of the pokemon they were attached to. "I'm planning on making a machine like this for the other two over there." Vialle jerked his head over to a pair of nearly identical pokemon: one female and colored red and white, and one male and colored blue and white. They both bore wings upon their backs and a symbol upon their breast. "Superb." Giovanni smiled at this. He knew that these pokemon, Latias and Latios, were both great readers of minds and of the future. With both of them and the new addition, there was nothing stopping them from discovering when Mirage Island would appear...precisely! "This one's dreams seem to be quite useful." Dr. Vialle remarked as he came up to observe the monitor. "They are vivid and show us quite clearly what is happening." "I'm not concerned on how vivid they are, Vialle." Giovanni snarled. "I'm more interested in how they tell me where Rayquaza is and when Mirage Island will appear. Just showing me Sky Pillar doesn't tell me anything." "We can discover the date simply by looking at the sun in this dream." Dr. Vialle told his boss smartly. "I so that eventually the Umbreon will look up to the sun." Almost as if Vialle predicted it, the vision on the monitor directed towards the sky and a shining light shown in front of their eyes. "Ah..." Vialle sighed. "Equinox. That is when Mirage Island will appear." "You're certain?" Giovanni questioned. Vialle nodded and took a note on his clipboard. "Quite certain. Some creature with psychic powers would most undoubtedly have incredibly accurate dreams. I'm scheduling our departure on September the ninetenth." "I will send some grunts to the site immediately." Giovanni said. "They'll arrive by helicopter. They have a few gadgets of their own; they'll no what to do." He whipped a phone out of his pocket and dialled a number. ~*~ [Oh, joy...I bet this'll give you a laugh] "James, get your elbow out of the way!" "Hey! That's not my elbow!" "Ouch! Watch where you putcher fingers, wise guy!" A man with sleek purple hair poked his head from out of a bush and looked around stupidly. A voice from inside the bush asked, "Is the coast clear?" "Twerp heading up the trail and five o'clock!" He told the bush he was in as he shaded his eyes and looked out to a group of four kids coming up the trail. He ducked down back into the bush and chuckled to himself. "What's so funny?" A girl's voice snarled next to him inside the bush. "Oh, it's nothing Jesse. It's just the perfect plan! We dig a gigantic hole, cover is with twigs, leaves, and sand, and wait for them to fall into their doom! It's just so fantastic!" The form of a cat head poked out of the bush and looked ahead. He saw a boy, hanging his head and possibly crying and a girl wearing his bandana attempting to comfort him. "Heads up, you guys! I don't think the twerps have the Pikachu." The cat said. Jesse and James pulled the cat back into the bush furiously. "What?!" Growled Jesse. "No Pikachu? Then this plan is just pointless?" "Well, at least we get to steal any other goodies they have." James cackled. The boy and the girl came closer and closer into their direction. James was chuckling inside his chest and Jesse waited impatiently. Right before they came to the line of the trap, an annoying little tune of Row, Row, Row Your Boat broke the silence. "What the--?" Jesse exclaimed. 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ROFL!!! That was Funny. *brakes out into song* Row Row Row your boat gently down the stream! *Settles down*..... ok ok where was I?
Great! Another bit to add to The Great Bits and Pieces of Novels By my Best Friend Spoony the Rinninator Book! Butter Wars you are dieing! *atempts to recunstruct obscure object with slimy butter you find at the movies in the dispensers labled:Extra Butter* It has to Be as repiulsive as before or else nobody will want to eat its brothers and sisters that lead(pronounced with the sound like the rocky mineral...Pheew) to war!! ~Marsy-Most random peron In the world! |
Kreeee! That was funnay!! Row, rwo, row, your boat, Gently down the stream. If you see a crocodile, don't forget to scream.... Sorry, I couldn't help it.
Anyways, I saw a few mistakes, but nothing too big. So, great job!! Kree!!! |
Lol! Alligators live close to Marsy and thier nothing special so yeah...Marsy's got nothing more to say...PHWEEE!...semi-hyper
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*laughs so hard she's crying* Row, row, row your boat...
Yes, we must save the butter wars! *throws popcorn ball* Please don't die, my butter wars. You were my only friend. Uh, besides all the people on my friends list. |
Lol! Adding Team Rocket in was a good idea!
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BUTTER!! *chases after popcorn ball, tackling it* Heh heh heh, you're MINE!!! *pounces on it and rolls it across the floor* Kreeee!
Stepping aside from the Butter/Popcorn ball, when's the next chapter coming, Kree? Kreeeeee! *attacks ball again* |
*CharMz laughes is %&# off*
XD That's funny...XD Anyway...NEXT CHAPTER!!! In accordance with the prophecy. |
Awhups. I see everyones gotten... not as crazy without me here. Well... *shove a piece of popcorn into my ear*
Nice new.... like 3 chapters. In Accordance With The Prophecy~ |
The next chapter will come soon enough but Rinny-Spoon-chan is moving so it will come later than usual.
*Shoves butter up nose* The wheels on the bus go round and round all the live long day! |
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very awesome fanfic, rin-rin! :D i really enjoyed the part when Team Rocket came in. The plot of this story is very evil *turns into evil person* verrryy nice. Easily 10 out of 10. I never knew how interesting umbreon could be.
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*points up* Agreed. And, I hope your 'moing' goes well, Rinny-Spoon-Chan!!
Kreee! The nickname I made up for you is in your sig!! ^_^ *chokes on Butter-Popcorn Ball* |
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--Hopefully, the next chapter will be posted later to day...We're getting DSL back today...so they say >> |
Arrgghh now i'm going to die because of stupid typo that is now non-existant!
Please don'y mak fun with the wholemoing thing please. |
*sees Saphi choke on popcorn ball* Glad you like it. Want another?
Eee, can't wait 'till next chap., Rinnyspoon! ^^ But in teh meantime... *flings butter everywhere* |
Well, this sucks -.-; We got the internet hooked up and everything, but guess what? We unpacked every single box and searched through both cars, but couldn't find the friggin' DSL modem...
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Oh, ****... That sucks...
Sorry 'bout that, Marsy (can I call you that?) I just thought it would be fun to say. *gets mad at self for being so schtoopid* How could I?! To be so mean, heartless, and cruel!! I do not deserve to live for this!! Goodbye, my dearest friends!!! *stabs self with pencil* *looks around* I'm alive!!! Stab bats bats stab stab bats stab stab... Same word, backward and forward.... o_o' Kreeee! *jumps up and catches butter in mouth, running in circles trying to eat teh butter* |
Yeah, that really sucks. >_> Hope you can find it soon...
Stab bats stab bats stab bats stab bats. 'Tis a palindrome, my friends. *watches Saphi run around* Keep...trying! XD In accordance w/prophecy. |
Anyway, y'know, I wonder why they couldn't the word for Palindromes a palindrome itself. Must resist urge to... umm... correct spelling n' stuff.
That REALLY sucks though, Rin-ran. I'm a Goofy Goober YEAH! You're a Goofy Goober YEAH! We're all Goofy Goobers YEAH! GOOFYGOOFYGOOFYGOOFYGOOBERS!!! |
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Incandescent starlight shown through the steadily growing crack in the corner of the ceiling. Dust particles could be seen in its trail of rays, flitting about lazily in the air. WaterWing was resting in the corner, her head bowed with her chin softly touching her collar bone. Phlow's sleeping form was curled up tightly in the center of the cell, gently heaving up and down. However, BoughLeaf was wide awake the whole of the night, up administering the crack on the ceiling and scraping his stubby fingers against the solid concrete. Luckily, he found a weak spot which easily gave way to his unsharp claws, showering gravel down the wall. The pebbles chinked off the musky floor. Phlow's ear twitched as he felt the wind of a rather large pebble sweep down by his ear. He looked up, curious to what the source of all the raining rocks was for. He did a combination of a yawn and a growl once he say the illuminated neon-green figure of the tree gecko. Seeing that this was no major problem, he tucked his head back into his folded arms and attempted falling into a very difficult sleep. WaterWing knew what the naive child was trying to do, though. She was awakened the second he climbed up the wall. She squinted and watched as the Treeko mumbled to himself "Moonlightmoonlightmoonlight" as if it were some incantation to heal his emotional wounds. BoughLeaf had been working on the crack when the two weren't looking, as if it were a sin to try and escape from the dank prison cell. He didn't want to be caught seeking for freedom. Although the fact that he was trying to escape was obvious, the wise Wartortle knew that freedom and fresh air wasn't BoughLeaf's impetus. He wanted to set the poor Umbreon free. He wanted to save Moonlight for he was the only one out of them other than the Treeko himself who knew his mother. BoughLeaf had at last developed a hole in the wall large enough for his fist to fit through. The frail creature ran his fingers over the hole and gasped in awe as he felt the night wind whistle through the hole and cool the sweat upon his face. He wanted to drink the cool breeze. He managed to fit his hand through the hole and flit his fingers about in the wind. He hadn't felt true air in forever...it felt like his entire body was being recreated. The memories of the sweet forest smell of pine trees seemed to fill the cell. He closed his eyes and saw the towering trees bounce up from the ground. The slimy disappeared and the rough bark under his fingertips. The hand going through the hole was searching for worms for him to eat... He slowly opened his eyes and looked down into the dark cell, his eyes traveling down the trail of starlight. "Mother..." He whispered. Honestly, I don't know what to put next O.o You'll have to wait for the next chapter (which will be later today :D) God, that's a short chapter :X |
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