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does anyone want to try? :3
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Hello there! So I'm dropping by to say I noticed you've been pestering for a response to your thread. I'm going to ask nicely for you to stop and to be patient for a response or else you're actually driving away folks in helping you. (And before you ask, I won't be able to help you at this time as I'm quite busy)
Also another thing I want to mention is sometimes I notice in your threads you kept asking for help but either you're unable to expand your ideas from the barest minimum or you don't give back. I'm also going to be truthful and say you might not get any help unless you can prove you can expand your ideas on your own a bit more and help in return. I apologize if this is harsh, but I think you need to hear this. |
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the only thing i know are the characters right now, more or less.... >.< but how do you mean ''give back'', if it's not a silly question? 😮 |
I can help you out a little bit if you'd like. I'm pretty decent at storytelling, though I have almost no knoledge of the PMD games.
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i recomend that you go play the PMD games of red/blue rescue team and PMd explorers of time/darkness or sky & gates to infinity , super mystery dungeon to get knowledge of them, though... they're great :D |
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1. Are you going to use your Mew Pokesona in your comic? 2. If you are going to, will your Mew be the main character? |
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:3 that would be either gates to infinity or super mystery dungeon, or even blue rescue team or explorers of time, darkness, or sky as those can be played on 3ds too :> Quote:
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but i do know that the human character is afina the espurr - https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Afina-the-espurr-future-PMD-comic-958531492 would that make her the main character, i wonder?.... 😮 i'm not sure of her personality, though.... Quote:
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well, it's true that there are a couple of other human-turned- pokemon, such as fluffy the eevee (F) *from red rescue team* and the gengar *from both red and blue rescue team*, cue the cubone (F) *from blue rescue team*, apricot the vulpix (F) *from explorers of sky*, neko the skitty (F) *from explorers of time*, candice the torchic (F) *from explorers of darkness*, poka the tepig (M) *from gates to infinity*, fokko the fennekin (F) *from super mystery dungeon*, squeak the pikachu (F) and hino the cyndaquil/quilava (F) *from rescue team DX* , but i'm not sure what to do about that... to keep them like that or not to.... hmm.... |
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mmmmm...... i'm not totally sure on that.... ^^' *that's the problem with me... i sometimes can't think up stuff even when i want to* which one by the way? My story (Mew)? *fun fact: I have the power to go back and forth between human world and PMD world, as a mew :D * |
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1. It starts from your Mew's perspective, maybe in your house, maybe out in the woods, etc etc. This gives the reader a look into Mew's daily life. after a bit of set-up, Mew finds a Pokemon that's never been seen around that area before. This would lead to introducing Afina's character. 2. The alternative of that would be starting from Afina's perspective, probably (it doesn't have to be, this is just an example after all) waking up in the Pokemon world, as a Pokemon! The reader would get to see the world from the point of view of a person trying to learn how to be a Pokemon, then after a little while, would meet up with other Pokemon and the story would go from there. 3. The third 'wild card' option. Have it start some time after Afina joins the heroes(?). Skips the longer introduction of side characters in favor of jumping right into the action. The reader would be introduced to characters as they appear, rather than the 'Hi! I'm ?????! And I do this job!' etc etc. |
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*don't know if this is revelevent, but, fun fact: I have the power to go back and forth between human world and PMD world, as a mew :D * Quote:
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Another good thing about making your own story is, you can have as many or as few 'main characters' as you want. I only recommend you start with things from one character's perspective for a chapter or three, just to help ground any readers in the world you make. Now I must get to bed, as I'm very tired. I'll be around tomorrow though, if you'd like to keep talking about this with me. |
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The same thing applies here. As you get better at drawing in the comic style, you can always re-do your older stuff to match your improving skill level. Quote:
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..... well... i did this way back - https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/8c26de1b-afd2-4a67-8823-6cd612565169/dasvezn-636e432e-cf87-46ba-b5f4-bb9b27abe7bc.jpg/v1/fill/w_1024,h_578,q_75,strp/how_ladomon_met_tatsumon_by_akarifan25_dasvezn-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NTc4IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvOGMyNmRlMWItYWZkMi00YTY3LTg4MjMtNmNkNjEyNTY1MTY5XC9kYXN2ZXpuLTYzNmU0MzJlLWNmODctNDZiYS1iNWY0LWJiOWIyN2FiZTdiYy5qcGciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9MTAyNCJ9XV0sImF1ZCI6WyJ1cm46c2VydmljZTppbWFnZS5vcGVyYXRpb25zIl19.6SdSCdU9SzumGPLsQwYGuyLPmouK6nqMHZee2AlgIq0 Quote:
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Alright, so now you have an idea of were you want to start, the next thing to figure out is who you want the first character Afina meets in the Pokemon world to be?
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The reason I ask is because the more 'important' characters you have, the more time and work you'll need to spend on them and their growth in the comic. I'd say have as many as you want, but keep in mind that less is often better in the long run than more. Another thing to think about on this same topic is even if you don't have room in this comic for every character you want, you can always use them in a different comic after this one is finished. |
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Listening to music helps me with that exact thing. So far you've got three confirmed characters, You (Mew), Afina, and Kojo. Now might be a good time to start thinking about a villain character, if you'd want to have one that is. Another idea could be something disrupting the land itself without having it be caused by an evil Pokemon. |
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i mean, there are a lot of pokemon lined up for the comic.... https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Other-Pokemon-In-My-Future-Pmd-Comic-955684487 / https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Other-Pokemon-In-My-Future-Pmd-Comic-954275670 / https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/gallery/87026516/possible-future-pmd-comic- team meanies (gengar, medicham and ekans) aren't mean anymore... as medicham is part of team charm now, with gardevoir and loponny and ekans is now evolved as part of team AWD, with drapion and weavile, drowzee isn't mean anymore either and is ''Probably'' evolved ... dusknoir is either gone or isn't looking to get rid of grovyle anymore either and team rogue (bagon, snover and gligar) and is ''probably'' evolved and are probably not thieving anymore.... |
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i suppose i could do that, yes :D i'll have a think :> |
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(not that fanfics are a bad thing, just not what I thought you were going for here) It also gives you more creative freedom over how your characters look and act, due to not needing to keep legacy characters consistent with how they were in the source material. |
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a trio of male skeledirge - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Skeledirge_(Pok%C3%A9mon) , Spidops - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Spidops_(Pok%C3%A9mon) and lokix - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Lokix_(Pok%C3%A9mon) their role of evil villian? i've no idea right now....^^' i'll try to draw them later, maybe :> |
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but.... skeledirge may seem a bit hard to draw alot.. so i might replace him with a male liepard :> - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Liepard_(Pok%C3%A9mon) |
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lokix (M) *the leader, i think* moves he knows: X-Scissor Dark Pulse Skitter Smack Detect https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/8c26de1b-afd2-4a67-8823-6cd612565169/dfvg0ly-61011bea-bc99-455b-9306-5d6279d4084b.png/v1/fill/w_1280,h_777,q_80,strp/pmd_comic_evil_team___member_1___liepard_by_akarifan25_dfvg0ly-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9Nzc3IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvOGMyNmRlMWItYWZkMi00YTY3LTg4MjMtNmNkNjEyNTY1MTY5XC9kZnZnMGx5LTYxMDExYmVhLWJjOTktNDU1Yi05MzA2LTVkNjI3OWQ0MDg0Yi5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9MTI4MCJ9XV0sImF1ZCI6WyJ1cm46c2VydmljZTppbWFnZS5vcGVyYXRpb25zIl19.jEX71NGkMFyVbg-J1ILttLLkOqG6sBHjsltsrl8e-J0 liepard (M) moves he knows: Hone Claws Night Slash Quick Attack Seed Bomb https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/8c26de1b-afd2-4a67-8823-6cd612565169/dfvg0me-8f7adc43-01d6-467c-bafc-c035dd0963f5.png/v1/fill/w_1280,h_906,q_80,strp/pmd_comic_evil_team___member_3___alolan_persian_by_akarifan25_dfvg0me-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9OTA2IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvOGMyNmRlMWItYWZkMi00YTY3LTg4MjMtNmNkNjEyNTY1MTY5XC9kZnZnMG1lLThmN2FkYzQzLTAxZDYtNDY3Yy1iYWZjLWMwMzVkZDA5NjNmNS5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9MTI4MCJ9XV0sImF1ZCI6WyJ1cm46c2VydmljZTppbWFnZS5vcGVyYXRpb25zIl19.yuMrtexOpFOK-mXKVx7x9XEBR8nkwi4yzJbHGP-2pj0 alolan persian (M) i think he's a little jealous of liepard... moves he knows: Power Gem Shadow Claw Iron Tail Burning Jealousy |
Those are all really good! You did especially well on Lokix and all its little details though!
You switched out Spidops for the Alolan Persian, what made you change your mind? |
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soo... what's next, i wonder? :> |
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Alright, I made a list of everything so far, it should help me keep up.
Next I think we should work on the world a little bit. That is, the name of the region, and the name of the town/village/city (etc etc) that the Pokemon of your comic live in. |
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i'll have a think of the environment, too.. ... but i do know that it has a cafe in the town, though - https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/8c26de1b-afd2-4a67-8823-6cd612565169/dft9a1n-aa9334c5-cacb-47f2-8fa9-fbce57c89df2.png/v1/fill/w_1024,h_1963,q_80,strp/cafe_interier_and_entrance___del_cafe___tbc__by_akarifan25_dft9a1n-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTk2MyIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzhjMjZkZTFiLWFmZDItNGE2Ny04ODIzLTZjZDYxMjU2NTE2OVwvZGZ0OWExbi1hYTkzMzRjNS1jYWNiLTQ3ZjItOGZhOS1mYmNlNTdjODlkZjIucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEwMjQifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.IkhPhqm-eOu3J2ewx41b0WdO-CNmu03_uHSOHg7CABg and the town also has a spa clinic, named the ''au clinic spa'' it's built near the hot springs, near the waterfall cave - https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/8c26de1b-afd2-4a67-8823-6cd612565169/dftj7ll-7f194bee-130f-4e14-86f8-a8ead0fcda28.png/v1/fill/w_1280,h_2536,q_80,strp/pokemon_in_the_guild_and_cafe_by_akarifan25_dftj7ll-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MjUzNiIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzhjMjZkZTFiLWFmZDItNGE2Ny04ODIzLTZjZDYxMjU2NTE2OVwvZGZ0ajdsbC03ZjE5NGJlZS0xMzBmLTRlMTQtODZmOC1hOGVhZDBmY2RhMjgucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.3-U1hkCpLoSUdTine31L9AlEwM8UcgatLJgCwLuPEKU *this list is in-progress* - https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/8c26de1b-afd2-4a67-8823-6cd612565169/dfviskg-fddeb1c7-65f2-45e4-b386-aff622fe11ca.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzhjMjZkZTFiLWFmZDItNGE2Ny04ODIzLTZjZDYxMjU2NTE2OVwvZGZ2aXNrZy1mZGRlYjFjNy02NWYyLTQ1ZTQtYjM4Ni1hZmY2MjJmZTExY2EucG5nIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.DYQzju-3bEuzBQjo5THHD_S61q5KWjB6CUxdjz5Ct9w *heartcrest town is basically the same place as where treasure town is* |
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..... *a few moments later* i've found one... how about the ''abiru'' region? i think that's a good name :> *it's just as good as any other name ^^ * apparently it means ''to bathe; to take a shower; to bask in the sun'' in japanese... 😯 |
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Okay, I think I have something.
You've mentioned Mew has a family right? How important to your comic do you want them to be? Does Mew live with them or alone? You mentioned that Mew was once human, so were you adopted by this family of Mew(s?), or are you somehow blood related? |
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Too tired to take notes right now... I'll mark everything new down later...
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that's the thing... i'm not sure if I even ''know'' how to write a comic, either 😱😢 so, what's next, i wonder? 😯 |
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mist https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/8c26de1b-afd2-4a67-8823-6cd612565169/dfstu1k-8d94d894-2e9b-4a4c-9818-1ca1475b4f2e.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzhjMjZkZTFiLWFmZDItNGE2Ny04ODIzLTZjZDYxMjU2NTE2OVwvZGZzdHUxay04ZDk0ZDg5NC0yZTliLTRhNGMtOTgxOC0xY2ExNDc1YjRmMmUucG5nIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.DmIPFTJ030iSuW9O6jVbhvL8B1zKC0uMFpKgOevwc6o ( https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Mist-the-male-mew-955413848 ) Quote:
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Next would probably be, do they all live in Mew village with your Mew. Are there any other Pokemon that live in Mew Village? |
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it's like enone the pikachu's home in a village*full of pikachu and maybe a raichu and pichu* in Zander-The-Artist 's comic - https://www.deviantart.com/zander-the-artist... but my one is Just mews :> |
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then i think other pokemon can find the mew village... or they maybe stumble upon it... i mean, i'm sure other pokemon know about it.... |
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Now I've got to go to sleep again, as it's quite late for me. Some parting advice? Think about a comic, or a story, or even a game that you like, and remember what it was about the story that made you like it. What some of your favorite characters from them were like as well. This might help give you some inspiration for your own comic! |
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This short story about being found by the Kuriu and making a Team would make an excellent practice comic. If you draw pictures to match what you wrote about, 'geting found by the dog' then 'her asking you to make a team' then 'the cats joined' etc etc. It's short and to the point enough to practice with, like a flashback explained by your Mew character. Quote:
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