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Poetry From The Heart
Well, these poems are some of my best, so I hope you like them!
A Stare Not a Glare By SPon11 Such an elegant shape Pointed, elf-like ears The long tail like a cape There is nothing it fears Out in the daytime Sleeping in the night It's voice like a windchime Such fur...such a sight The gem on its forehead Resembles the morning sky Such a dark, ruby red It let's out a soft sigh Its eyes are what capture me Such an idle stare It stares at the sea Not a furious glare But a soft, soothing, suddle stare Hoo-hah! I'll do two poems at once! A Will in the Night by SPon11 O, the moon is alight The sun fades away The stars now have might The owls astray As their wings beat So does their spirit One thing, indeed Will always hear it The spirits all sing And it will always stay still "Nothing can withstand The power of will" Hey! I can even do 3! War by SPon11 The lives are at stake Some already downed Survivors have ached Most diers have drowned Phew...So...what do ya think? |
I really do like your poetry its feels calming to read them, and please post more.
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Great Poetry SPon11, i love the first one "A stare not a glare" It's beautifully written and the rhyming scheme is excellent...
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Thanks, Hikaru's Twin and Liquid Thunder! I made most of these when I was about to go to sleep...I guess it makes sense, because I'm kind of relaxed...Gosh! I made myself tired!
Peace by SPon11 I dream of a place Where the soil is healthy Plants never die And the people are wealthy A place where birds sing Fish jump out of water A loyal man is king And has a nice daughter The reeds bow to the wind Seaweed waves in the sea No being has ever sinned To either you, him, or me *bows* I just made that one up. Took a bit... |
You are good! Write more! MORE!
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Okay, I updated "War", and changed the name!
The Agony of War by SPon11 The lives are at stake Some already downed Survivors have ached Most diers have drowned The sky's raining blood The children all cry As blood forms a flood That will surely reach the sky Survivors never die peacefully As their souls shall decend Will this never-ending agony Ever have an end...? I love that one... |
I love that one too ^^;.
But seriously, "The agony of War" captures what its like in War in such a short amount of writing and this is definatly an excellent example of quality over quantity great job. |
WOW, those poems.....*sniffs* SPon, wow...........
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I don't know what else to write! I don't want to put my stupid ones in that don't make any sense.
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Wow...I would love to see work like that on the TNSC FanArt/FanFics pages..even tho they not really FanArt. But of course noone ever visits meh site..altho i spend too much time trying to make it a little better every day. well ill post meh fanfic there..and maybe here..if its ok with the PC mods.
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I made another poem in my signature. It's not actually from the heart, but...
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[font=arial]Okay, I know I'm going online like grandpa, but here's a Mew poem (oh, and 'A Stare Not a Glare' is about an Espeon)
Immortal Accidently helping one Thinking it's a game Just wanting to have some fun To you, it's all the same At the strike of danger You just give off a chortle You're just a small pink stranger Except that you're immortal Heh, heh...I forgot the middle stanza...oh, well...[/arial] |
Your poetry is very calming, it reminds me of Robert Frost. I love his works, they are also very sooting to the soul.
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Yeah, a Frost comparison is quite valid. Yur poetry captures emotion quite well, and it's easy to read. You maintain clarity quite well, nor do you degenerate into sappy lines. Amazingly talented, actually. Might I suggest writing some haiku? I think you'd be good at it.
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Now I remember the Mew poem...Thanks for the compliments! I've done Haiku, but I like rhyming the best.
Immortal by Haley Wall (I finally reveal my name) Accidently helping one Thinking it's a game Just wanting to have some fun To you it's all the same Having only one feeling You are always glad I can't even think of sealing The way you can't get mad At times of perilous danger You just give off a chortle You're just a small pink stranger Except that you're immortal I like your avatar, Liquid Thunder. It's Ken from Super Puzzle Fighter II, right? Oh, and I forgot how to do Haiku... |
5-7-5 syllable structure. There's also an alternate format that gos 5-7-5-7-7.
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[font=arial]Here you go...
Lightning strikes the trees The wind's caress is immense The windstorm is here... I never really was good at Haiku... |
Nicely done SPon11, you seem like a really calm person and I can see it in your poems if you are. I like everything that you wrote so far its calming.
And yes it is Ken from Super Puzzle fighter 2 XP. |
Actually, that's a good Haiku. They're supposed t invoke a feeling of nature and yours does just that. You did well at a description of the setting, and it leaves the reader with the sensation of a storm.
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Uh...okay...........................................
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I love peotry. It always seems to calm the Satorus in me. (Satorus is the villian in Golden Sun 1)
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Yes, I know who Saturos is...:(
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Wow... all this great poetry is making me want to give it a try again (but from experience that's probably not a good thing)
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I had horrible poetry when I had such a small vocabulary, but now it's so vast, that I can write a poetry just out of the blue! I'll post some poems on Tuesday.
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