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DragonTrainer February 20th, 2004 3:41 PM

My poetry
 
Yea, I have some poetry lol, it's kinda deep, so, here ya go

Tired of trying
Yeah I'm smiling
But inside I'm dying
Everyone sees who I appear to be
But only a few know the real me
You only see what I choose to show
There's so much behind my smile
That you don't know

100marios February 20th, 2004 4:16 PM

That's really good DT! I didn't know it, but you're a poet!
I have one pretty good poem I made too.....
Anyway, I hope I can see more!

DragonTrainer February 20th, 2004 4:17 PM

Well, here's some more for you:

I feel like I'm trapped
With nowhere to go
Where?I don't know
I just wish that I could get out of my mind's prison
And I just think this isn't
The kind of place for me
But inside my heart I always know
There is nowhere else I'd like to go

100marios February 20th, 2004 4:35 PM

*Applauds*
Yay!!!
.........huh? Was it supposed to be sad? In that case...
*cries joyfully*
hehe...sniff

Nice poems DT! You've got that writer's blood in you afterall! Excellent work!

DragonTrainer February 20th, 2004 4:37 PM

Yea, thanks man, guess I found a talent, I gotta go write some more poems

DragonTrainer February 20th, 2004 7:35 PM

Here's another one I have made, it's kinda hard to understand, but....

And now you leave me
How could you do such a thing?
I thought we were meant for each other
I always thought there wasn't another
Who could take my place
But now, at this rapid pace
That the world moves along
I can see
That relationships cannot last long

What a fool I was
To believe such a thing
To think we were going to be together forever
Our breakup can only bring
Pain, endless agony
At least to me

Now I know
That you can never let a relationship grow
Because before you know it
It all breaks apart
And the pain to your heart
Will never leave your soul

100marios February 20th, 2004 8:05 PM

Wow! This one's better then your last two combined!
.....and much longer too!
Hehe....
Good job DT! I hope other people will come to read your brilliant masterpieces!

ScArLetSkye February 20th, 2004 8:48 PM

*applauds*Very good,very good!:)

Yamichu February 20th, 2004 8:56 PM

Whoa.... good poems DT!
I like the last one...really great!



~HORN!

DragonTrainer February 20th, 2004 9:10 PM

Thanks guys, guess I really am good at poetry :)

22sa February 20th, 2004 9:29 PM

Mmm... Yah, looks like you really put yourself in the dark there. ^^'

bna_li February 20th, 2004 9:33 PM

Yeah, sounds like the best one so far. Keepy uppy!

DragonTrainer February 20th, 2004 9:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 22sa
Mmm... Yah, looks like you really put yourself in the dark there. ^^'

Lol, what do you mean by that?

22sa February 20th, 2004 11:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DragonTrainer
Lol, what do you mean by that?

I meant they were very thoughtful and deep. :P

DragonTrainer February 20th, 2004 11:30 PM

Yea, they are, I never knw I could write until now

Hikaru's Twin February 21st, 2004 3:58 PM

Wow DT, these are some great poems, i think my favourite one's got to be the last one ^_^ Hope to see more of them later!
*Wonders if she should start a thead with some of her own poetry and see what others think....*

Teara February 21st, 2004 4:10 PM

Those are really great! All the poetry I write is deep too. Course, mines also long...
Anywho! Keep it up DT! ^_-

DragonTrainer February 22nd, 2004 4:25 PM

Thanks guys, I'm working on one right now, I have a feeling it'll be great ^^

Teara February 22nd, 2004 4:37 PM

Well hurry and post it!^___^
I have a thread for my poems too but I can't ryme for beans-_- I just put a bunch of deep words on paper and call it a poem. You put mine to shame XD

DragonTrainer February 22nd, 2004 4:43 PM

Cool down teara, here it is ^^

Our Love
Your love, so pure
And yet, sometimes I am unsure
Is your love true and mature?
Or is it sad and fake?

Times these days are so tough
And I just feel like I've had enough
Of these lies and fake feelings
Love nowadays is so hard to find
Most of the time it is completely blind

I sometimes wonder
Why are we still together?
So much trouble from our love, the only offender
But deep in our hearts for now and forever
Our love will never be severed

Teara February 22nd, 2004 4:57 PM

*blink*
*blink*
*drops dead*
You're so good at poetry! Now I'm jealous...*sniff* I should practice ryming...
OH Ha! beat this!
There was an old fisherman that sang.
Through the wide lake his rusty voice rang.
He sang to lure the fish.
He planned to make a dish.
He caught a fish so big he sprang.

Ha! *looks at DT's poems* I think I'll stick to non-ryming stuff XD
Great Job DT! ^_^

DragonTrainer February 22nd, 2004 5:03 PM

Lol thanks, I think that was my best yet

Teara February 22nd, 2004 5:08 PM

*looks at DT's last poem again*
hmmm...ohhh, I think DT has a girlfriend!;b JK Do you ever write anything that dosn't ryme? Just curious, some people specailize in ryming but some people like to write both. And some people *coughMeCough*, like I said before, can't ryme for beans^^

Kayleigh February 22nd, 2004 5:16 PM

Wow, those are really good! ^_^ I didn't know that you were interested in poetry. I think I like your last one best. I really don't see how you do it... I'm with Teara, I can't rhyme worth a flip. o_o; (Though she's most likely better than me.) Great job! I can't wait to see more.

Teara February 22nd, 2004 5:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kayleigh
Wow, those are really good! ^_^ I didn't know that you were interested in poetry. I think I like your last one best. I really don't see how you do it... I'm with Teara, I can't rhyme worth a flip. o_o; (Though she's most likely better than me.) Great job! I can't wait to see more.

Sometimes, the most unlikly of people are really creative. Take for example my dog, she looks kinda deadbrained (is that a word?), but when she rolls around in the grass she makes patterns that sometimes (okay once, but whatever), look like angles! ;D


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