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My poetry
Yea, I have some poetry lol, it's kinda deep, so, here ya go
Tired of trying Yeah I'm smiling But inside I'm dying Everyone sees who I appear to be But only a few know the real me You only see what I choose to show There's so much behind my smile That you don't know |
That's really good DT! I didn't know it, but you're a poet!
I have one pretty good poem I made too..... Anyway, I hope I can see more! |
Well, here's some more for you:
I feel like I'm trapped With nowhere to go Where?I don't know I just wish that I could get out of my mind's prison And I just think this isn't The kind of place for me But inside my heart I always know There is nowhere else I'd like to go |
*Applauds*
Yay!!! .........huh? Was it supposed to be sad? In that case... *cries joyfully* hehe...sniff Nice poems DT! You've got that writer's blood in you afterall! Excellent work! |
Yea, thanks man, guess I found a talent, I gotta go write some more poems
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Here's another one I have made, it's kinda hard to understand, but....
And now you leave me How could you do such a thing? I thought we were meant for each other I always thought there wasn't another Who could take my place But now, at this rapid pace That the world moves along I can see That relationships cannot last long What a fool I was To believe such a thing To think we were going to be together forever Our breakup can only bring Pain, endless agony At least to me Now I know That you can never let a relationship grow Because before you know it It all breaks apart And the pain to your heart Will never leave your soul |
Wow! This one's better then your last two combined!
.....and much longer too! Hehe.... Good job DT! I hope other people will come to read your brilliant masterpieces! |
*applauds*Very good,very good!:)
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Whoa.... good poems DT!
I like the last one...really great! ~HORN! |
Thanks guys, guess I really am good at poetry :)
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Mmm... Yah, looks like you really put yourself in the dark there. ^^'
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Yeah, sounds like the best one so far. Keepy uppy!
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Yea, they are, I never knw I could write until now
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Wow DT, these are some great poems, i think my favourite one's got to be the last one ^_^ Hope to see more of them later!
*Wonders if she should start a thead with some of her own poetry and see what others think....* |
Those are really great! All the poetry I write is deep too. Course, mines also long...
Anywho! Keep it up DT! ^_- |
Thanks guys, I'm working on one right now, I have a feeling it'll be great ^^
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Well hurry and post it!^___^
I have a thread for my poems too but I can't ryme for beans-_- I just put a bunch of deep words on paper and call it a poem. You put mine to shame XD |
Cool down teara, here it is ^^
Our Love Your love, so pure And yet, sometimes I am unsure Is your love true and mature? Or is it sad and fake? Times these days are so tough And I just feel like I've had enough Of these lies and fake feelings Love nowadays is so hard to find Most of the time it is completely blind I sometimes wonder Why are we still together? So much trouble from our love, the only offender But deep in our hearts for now and forever Our love will never be severed |
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*blink* *drops dead* You're so good at poetry! Now I'm jealous...*sniff* I should practice ryming... OH Ha! beat this! There was an old fisherman that sang. Through the wide lake his rusty voice rang. He sang to lure the fish. He planned to make a dish. He caught a fish so big he sprang. Ha! *looks at DT's poems* I think I'll stick to non-ryming stuff XD Great Job DT! ^_^ |
Lol thanks, I think that was my best yet
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*looks at DT's last poem again*
hmmm...ohhh, I think DT has a girlfriend!;b JK Do you ever write anything that dosn't ryme? Just curious, some people specailize in ryming but some people like to write both. And some people *coughMeCough*, like I said before, can't ryme for beans^^ |
Wow, those are really good! ^_^ I didn't know that you were interested in poetry. I think I like your last one best. I really don't see how you do it... I'm with Teara, I can't rhyme worth a flip. o_o; (Though she's most likely better than me.) Great job! I can't wait to see more.
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