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Pokemon 3rd Generation: Pokemon Of Chaos
OK please people keep posting your charecters !! but now the story begins
BRAD SAGA! Intro Issue 1 Issue 2 Issue 3 Issue 4 Issue 5 part one Issue 5 part two Issue 6 Isuue 7 ONE FRAMERS ^_^! Poke Nurses Go Wild Post your comments please folks :) |
It's a very nice comic ^^ Is it your first one?
However,there's a few puncuation and spelling mistakes in it. For examples: It's "where" not "were" but I've seen a lot of people make that mistake. Overall it's good.Keep it up. |
Its too small. you may want to save it on an IPS file. Then it has that thing that makes it grow.
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Nice but KISSES IN A COMIC!
nvm.Its still nice.You might want to go in and make the INTRO a little bigger. :D |
Hey they were freinds who havent seen eachoither in 2 years yeh im gonna save as png but make em longer lol..... such nice comments for my first comic
Grrr i see what you mean with the imgae this never hapened with photobucket so looks like ill go back to using that |
Don't write actions like Kisses, in a sprite comic, it bleeds laziness.
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OK THanx for the Hints lol i am new so i didnt know whether or not to do it
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I have updated the 3rd comic now and have mad eall comics readable thanx for comments every one!!
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Nice battle attacks. Where in Bazinkens Hyni did you get them?
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MY good old freind Runasturu Got them for me thats why she got credit this tiem :) im having lots of help in this comic so she will probably apear all then time!
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Nice comic! I really like the 3 eppy! Keep it up! :D
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THanx i will keep it up !!!
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Our first ever one framer is now up hope you enjoy
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Hmmm, I suppose you got that Gym place from Pokesho.com if you did U may want to give them credit for that.
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nope got it from voho and i forgot to give reds lol il ledit my post and give cred so i dotn have to always do it
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Issue 4 also up and running....
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Is that Proffesor Elm? That's really good. I hope he catches Rayquaza.
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nope it isnt its a sprite from emerald the weird thing is the chosen one!!!!
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Oh my bad. Well keep it up, can wait till he fights the gym leaders^^
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yes gymys gonna be lot stronger
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Well thats some good news.
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YUP!! ^_6 ^-^ *message so short*
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Hey Mystic Trunks! ^_^
See that blue thing?It is I,Runasutaru! ^_^ And well... I still say D.S... You´ve got some spelling errors,not that much anymore... But the main prob... DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN! Is the punctuation! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD Well,in this Issue#4,there is only a "." missing,the rest is good,any other mistakes I´ll point out over MSN! ^_~ So,hope more people review! ^_^ |
*cries* Dont be nasty you scummy noob!!
lol ^_^ joking you wicked queen spriter lol |
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grrr leve her alone she's cool
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issue 5 part 1 ^_^ soooo what people think
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Nice its okay. will he catch rayquaza?
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ahhh well.... its only a vision to show what will get him lol.
oh and i thought i should post this http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b253/Dark_Summoners_Lair/BRADX.png |
ok dudes part twos up of issue 5
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This is getting good. But please dont double post. The members dont like the double posting.
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XD Oh well,it didn´t work with me,but it seems you tricked D.S. into thinking you were REALLY insulting me...The smiley was enough for me to understand that...XD Neways,review... The thing I´m going to say constantly until the end is... SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION! -.-;;; Not really spelling,that is much better,only the occasional error... ^_^;;; But punctuation...You forget to use "," when someone is talking,because someone can´t talk without having even the smallest of breaks... And sometimes you forget the "." too,when you finish writing a sentence... I notice that because of the "sudden" capital letter in the next word... So remember... Commas and full stops are your best friends! ^_^ |
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Nah,I can´t speak Spanish...I wish...XD
They teach English,French and German here in Portugal,but not SPANISH! XD But I can try to understand... I prefer English...By FAR! XD Off topic,I know... But he didn´t post a new one yet because I´ve gotta rip some moves... -_-;;; |
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um lol how do you know th charecters arnt weird and dont take breaks!! and i dont think he really was :)
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sorry about double psoting again lol but issue 6 is now up and running!
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*Bom dia mãe. (Don't understand the last one XD) The stupid accents keep makin' it harder and harder XD! |
!! i just nticed mt is booted out!
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Yey issue 6 is now up !! yay....
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Excuse me I really want to make a sprite comic do you know how to rip frames of a game?
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Issue 7! is up whoo who
p.s im unhappy i acidently deleated my pokemon Fr save :( |
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yes im just ignoring the spammer :) oops im spamming now um....
:( soo what wil happen next in POKEMON!:pokemon of chaos |
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lol mabe... or mabe it holds the pikachu that got killed by the house...
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lol wel not watching dragon ballz...............
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the comics are not the best but prety good
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