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Dark Summoner October 5th, 2005 11:23 AM

Pokemon 3rd Generation: Pokemon Of Chaos
 
OK please people keep posting your charecters !! but now the story begins


BRAD SAGA!

Intro

Issue 1

Issue 2

Issue 3

Issue 4

Issue 5 part one

Issue 5 part two

Issue 6

Isuue 7




ONE FRAMERS ^_^!

Poke Nurses Go Wild

Post your comments please folks :)

Draginis October 5th, 2005 5:34 PM

It's a very nice comic ^^ Is it your first one?
However,there's a few puncuation and spelling mistakes in it.
For examples:
It's "where" not "were" but I've seen a lot of people make that mistake.
Overall it's good.Keep it up.

Karasuma October 5th, 2005 5:38 PM

Its too small. you may want to save it on an IPS file. Then it has that thing that makes it grow.

Celebi22 October 5th, 2005 8:27 PM

Nice but KISSES IN A COMIC!
nvm.Its still nice.You might want to go in and make the INTRO a little bigger. :D

Dark Summoner October 5th, 2005 11:34 PM

Hey they were freinds who havent seen eachoither in 2 years yeh im gonna save as png but make em longer lol..... such nice comments for my first comic



Grrr i see what you mean with the imgae this never hapened with photobucket so looks like ill go back to using that

armadilloHD October 6th, 2005 3:38 AM

Don't write actions like Kisses, in a sprite comic, it bleeds laziness.

Dark Summoner October 6th, 2005 3:42 AM

OK THanx for the Hints lol i am new so i didnt know whether or not to do it

Dark Summoner October 6th, 2005 12:20 PM

I have updated the 3rd comic now and have mad eall comics readable thanx for comments every one!!

Karasuma October 6th, 2005 12:23 PM

Nice battle attacks. Where in Bazinkens Hyni did you get them?

Dark Summoner October 6th, 2005 12:29 PM

MY good old freind Runasturu Got them for me thats why she got credit this tiem :) im having lots of help in this comic so she will probably apear all then time!

Celebi22 October 6th, 2005 8:49 PM

Nice comic! I really like the 3 eppy! Keep it up! :D

Dark Summoner October 6th, 2005 11:40 PM

THanx i will keep it up !!!

Dark Summoner October 7th, 2005 12:53 PM

Our first ever one framer is now up hope you enjoy

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 1:55 PM

Hmmm, I suppose you got that Gym place from Pokesho.com if you did U may want to give them credit for that.

Dark Summoner October 7th, 2005 2:00 PM

nope got it from voho and i forgot to give reds lol il ledit my post and give cred so i dotn have to always do it

Dark Summoner October 7th, 2005 2:20 PM

Issue 4 also up and running....

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 2:22 PM

Is that Proffesor Elm? That's really good. I hope he catches Rayquaza.

Dark Summoner October 7th, 2005 2:23 PM

nope it isnt its a sprite from emerald the weird thing is the chosen one!!!!

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 2:24 PM

Oh my bad. Well keep it up, can wait till he fights the gym leaders^^

Dark Summoner October 7th, 2005 2:24 PM

yes gymys gonna be lot stronger

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 2:33 PM

Well thats some good news.

Dark Summoner October 7th, 2005 2:35 PM

YUP!! ^_6 ^-^ *message so short*

Runasutaru October 8th, 2005 5:29 AM

Hey Mystic Trunks! ^_^

See that blue thing?It is I,Runasutaru! ^_^
And well...

I still say D.S...

You´ve got some spelling errors,not that much anymore...
But the main prob...

DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

Is the punctuation! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Well,in this Issue#4,there is only a "." missing,the rest is good,any other mistakes I´ll point out over MSN! ^_~

So,hope more people review! ^_^

Dark Summoner October 8th, 2005 8:28 AM

*cries* Dont be nasty you scummy noob!!

lol ^_^ joking you wicked queen spriter lol

Karasuma October 8th, 2005 8:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Runasutaru
Hey Mystic Trunks! ^_^

See that blue thing?It is I,Runasutaru! ^_^
And well...

I still say D.S...

You´ve got some spelling errors,not that much anymore...
But the main prob...

DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

Is the punctuation! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Well,in this Issue#4,there is only a "." missing,the rest is good,any other mistakes I´ll point out over MSN! ^_~

So,hope more people review! ^_^

Who the hell is this NoOb. she smiled at me? :P

Dark Summoner October 8th, 2005 10:10 AM

grrr leve her alone she's cool

Dark Summoner October 8th, 2005 11:49 AM

issue 5 part 1 ^_^ soooo what people think

Karasuma October 8th, 2005 11:54 AM

Nice its okay. will he catch rayquaza?

Dark Summoner October 8th, 2005 11:59 AM

ahhh well.... its only a vision to show what will get him lol.
oh and i thought i should post this http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b253/Dark_Summoners_Lair/BRADX.png

Dark Summoner October 8th, 2005 1:02 PM

ok dudes part twos up of issue 5

Karasuma October 8th, 2005 1:43 PM

This is getting good. But please dont double post. The members dont like the double posting.

Runasutaru October 8th, 2005 1:46 PM

Quote:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Runasutaru
Hey Mystic Trunks! ^_^

See that blue thing?It is I,Runasutaru! ^_^
And well...

I still say D.S...

You´ve got some spelling errors,not that much anymore...
But the main prob...

DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

Is the punctuation! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Well,in this Issue#4,there is only a "." missing,the rest is good,any other mistakes I´ll point out over MSN! ^_~

So,hope more people review! ^_^


Who the hell is this NoOb. she smiled at me? :P
»__» Har,har,har... »__»

XD

Oh well,it didn´t work with me,but it seems you tricked D.S. into thinking you were REALLY insulting me...The smiley was enough for me to understand that...XD

Neways,review...

The thing I´m going to say constantly until the end is...

SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION! -.-;;;

Not really spelling,that is much better,only the occasional error... ^_^;;;

But punctuation...You forget to use "," when someone is talking,because someone can´t talk without having even the smallest of breaks...

And sometimes you forget the "." too,when you finish writing a sentence...
I notice that because of the "sudden" capital letter in the next word...

So remember...

Commas and full stops are your best friends! ^_^

Karasuma October 8th, 2005 2:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Runasutaru
»__» Har,har,har... »__»

XD

Oh well,it didn´t work with me,but it seems you tricked D.S. into thinking you were REALLY insulting me...The smiley was enough for me to understand that...XD

Neways,review...

The thing I´m going to say constantly until the end is...

SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION! -.-;;;

Not really spelling,that is much better,only the occasional error... ^_^;;;

But punctuation...You forget to use "," when someone is talking,because someone can´t talk without having even the smallest of breaks...

And sometimes you forget the "." too,when you finish writing a sentence...
I notice that because of the "sudden" capital letter in the next word...

So remember...

Commas and full stops are your best friends! ^_^

Entonces ablas ESPANCHOST? Sino me agarro las bolas. :P

Runasutaru October 8th, 2005 2:19 PM

Nah,I can´t speak Spanish...I wish...XD
They teach English,French and German here in Portugal,but not SPANISH! XD
But I can try to understand...

I prefer English...By FAR! XD

Off topic,I know...
But he didn´t post a new one yet because I´ve gotta rip some moves... -_-;;;

Karasuma October 8th, 2005 2:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Runasutaru
Nah,I can´t speak Spanish...I wish...XD
They teach English,French and German here in Portugal,but not SPANISH! XD
But I can try to understand...

I prefer English...By FAR! XD

Off topic,I know...
But he didn´t post a new one yet because I´ve gotta rip some moves... -_-;;;

I know portugese Bon Dia mai^^ bona push caraliu^^

Dark Summoner October 8th, 2005 2:33 PM

um lol how do you know th charecters arnt weird and dont take breaks!! and i dont think he really was :)

Dark Summoner October 9th, 2005 6:37 AM

sorry about double psoting again lol but issue 6 is now up and running!

wakachamo October 9th, 2005 8:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MysticTrunks
I know portugese Bon Dia mai^^ bona push caraliu^^

Er... MT? That's KINDA like Portuguese....

*Bom dia mãe. (Don't understand the last one XD)

The stupid accents keep makin' it harder and harder XD!

Dark Summoner October 9th, 2005 8:14 AM

!! i just nticed mt is booted out!

Dark Summoner October 10th, 2005 10:52 AM

Yey issue 6 is now up !! yay....

Shijuukara October 10th, 2005 11:04 AM

Excuse me I really want to make a sprite comic do you know how to rip frames of a game?

Dark Summoner October 11th, 2005 11:21 AM

Issue 7! is up whoo who


p.s im unhappy i acidently deleated my pokemon Fr save :(

Titanium October 11th, 2005 11:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by XiaolinDragon
Excuse me I really want to make a sprite comic do you know how to rip frames of a game?

Hmmm. isnt that spammy? :\

Dark Summoner October 11th, 2005 11:36 AM

yes im just ignoring the spammer :) oops im spamming now um....

:( soo what wil happen next in POKEMON!:pokemon of chaos

Titanium October 11th, 2005 11:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dark Summoner
yes im just ignoring the spammer :) oops im spamming now um....

:( soo what wil happen next in POKEMON!:pokemon of chaos

Eppy number 7 reminded me a little about DBZ. Is that pokeball like a capsule cause it swalloed the entire house.

Dark Summoner October 11th, 2005 11:56 AM

lol mabe... or mabe it holds the pikachu that got killed by the house...

Titanium October 11th, 2005 11:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dark Summoner
lol mabe... or mabe it holds the pikachu that got killed by the house...

If this is like a dbz then perhaps you should make Goku or Son Wukog the hiro next time*_* :\

Dark Summoner October 11th, 2005 12:07 PM

lol wel not watching dragon ballz...............

Recknin October 13th, 2005 1:26 PM

the comics are not the best but prety good


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