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Space Guard October 7th, 2005 10:43 AM

Space Guard 05's Sprite Comic
 
This is my first ever sprite comic. Critisism is welcome and ideas are welcome!
Episode 1

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4-Phone by adamski148 (Thanx)

Hopefully some one can make some fanart.

Enjoy!

Esupio October 7th, 2005 11:00 AM

¬¬

okay theres nothing great about this at all actually its kinda rubbish why did ELM call him up and OAK be there to meet him
thats stupid and it doesn't work
and people should be able to tell whats going on you don't NEED to tell them ¬¬

Adam_148 October 7th, 2005 11:01 AM

why is Gary Red's Grandson Chris? That's weird

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 11:03 AM

Sorry I need to edit it. and Balzind Espeo. It is my first comic.

Adam_148 October 7th, 2005 11:06 AM

yeah, you're first, but you still coulda PMed me with it for the next eppy

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 11:26 AM

I cant see the eppys dude? cant rate it yet.

The Dash October 7th, 2005 11:28 AM

Links are broken.So....Yeah what MT said.

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 11:28 AM

I'm just editing them. they should be up in a mo!

Esupio October 7th, 2005 11:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Space Guard 05
Sorry I need to edit it. and Balzind Espeo. It is my first comic.

No exscuse and you made a grammar mistake somewhere in the comic

fr/lg continued is signomi's first comic, thats just an awesome comic. so its no exscuse

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 11:33 AM

yeah thats good news.................

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 11:35 AM

So what i made 1 grammar mistake which is Biys intead of boys!

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 11:37 AM

Now thats better. I love that new pallet town. looks so cool.^^

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 11:40 AM

Yes, it is from my RPGmaker2003 game. The place on it is Turnsville.

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 11:44 AM

Well thats cool. Your hack being turned into comics. So will the Hiro fight Gym leaders?

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 11:46 AM

Probably. While I am at it to continue I need a battle system. A picture will do fine.

Karasuma October 7th, 2005 11:53 AM

If you want all sprites you must go to SpritesResource.com^^

spam monkey V2 October 7th, 2005 10:56 PM

hi chris i'm posting!!!!!!!!!!! well i think so am not sure yet

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 10:56 PM

Ok I'll try that. next eppy up probably by tommorow. (Do spriters rescource do the charcters used for batteling in FR/LG)

spam monkey V2 October 7th, 2005 10:57 PM

your comic was not at all original, i must say

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 10:58 PM

Stop going off topic. Spam Monkeyv2 you don't post our names!

spam monkey V2 October 7th, 2005 10:58 PM

r u there chris???? and the comic = not good

spam monkey V2 October 7th, 2005 11:03 PM

chris for gods sake it's me from school u numskull!
who did u think it was!!!!!

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 11:03 PM

keep irrevelent comments to PM's

Space Guard October 7th, 2005 11:06 PM

Stop Spamming up the thread spam monkey v2 or I will report you.

Esupio October 8th, 2005 12:44 AM

well your not supposed to double post
use the edit button if you want to say something else

Karasuma October 8th, 2005 5:22 AM

That guy is spamming *reports*

Alex_ October 8th, 2005 6:12 AM

Spammonkey or whatever the hell your name is,shut it. I'm not going to give this thread a warning because the original poster hasn't done anything. Instead,you're getting a warning. Keep it up and you get another.

Eon-Rider October 8th, 2005 6:16 AM

They're ok...

I want to see the next episode.

Draik October 8th, 2005 3:15 PM

Not that good. Heed these words Speech Bubbles.
Also, the rooms are kinda empty, and Gary is Ash's Rival too. And also, you spelled "Mum" as "Mun"
Try and paste the words for Microsoft Word.

Space Guard October 8th, 2005 11:57 PM

Thanks sykora. I will try and do that on the next episode. Part 3 up in a moment! (Edit: part 3 and 4 are now up and running!) Also does anyone have a title for the first Episode? i am going to start Episode 2 tonight!

Adam_148 October 10th, 2005 10:14 AM

Hi, i think this is pretty good but there is definate room for improvement

Space Guard October 13th, 2005 9:57 AM

Ok next episode is 1/3 finished

Recknin October 13th, 2005 10:36 AM

they r ok for your first and you need a lot of work

Space Guard October 17th, 2005 10:41 AM

Thanx for the ideas and critisism but i have not had chance to finish the next episode as I have been piled up with homework I will probably start it sometime tommorow.

Karasuma October 17th, 2005 10:44 AM

This is okay, but there's too much space in the lab. You may want to put a little room where the prof. Oak sleeps in.

Space Guard October 18th, 2005 9:20 AM

I'll try and edit it that. It actually seems to be a good idea to have Proffeser Oaks sleeping quarters there

Adam_148 October 18th, 2005 9:28 AM

Okay, Chris, don't post that here send it to George via PM, edit it out of your post, Please, oh, I'm not saying it's not good it's just not the right place to put it.


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