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Chibaymega12 October 22nd, 2007 1:21 PM

I honestly can't think of what sasuke will do after that point. I don't see him going back to the leaf without force, unless he goes back to restart the Uchiha clan again in the same place as before. But i honestly think if Naruto doesn't take him back by force, then sasuke will go and restart the Uchihas else where, maybe restart the sound village as well, and then make an alliance with the leaf. But of course we know, Naruto has to bring him back sooner or later. I think after the akatsuki is done with, and sasuke has returned home, Tsunade will inaugerate Naruto as Hokage, and right after Naruto accepts, the ANBU root will be the next enemy. I mean, if they were to just leave the series at that, then those five chapter about the root will have been for nothing. After that? Probably another time skip, ten years this time. Sasuke has resurrected his clan, and is an ANBU captain. Sakura will be a a three team leader. And Naruto will be carrying out his duties as hokage. They probably won't be the next Sannin, because Naruto will be hokage and Sasuke will be a captain, and Sakura will be a medic/team ninja. Of course then there will be the Madara Uchiha business, and probably another war.
Wow, when i get going i can't stop, lol

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 1:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Mewtwo42 (Post 3004946)

But, I think people highly overestimate Sasuke. Itachi is one of the strongest ninja in the series. I'm not saying Sasuke isn't, but come on. Itachi is stronger than Oro, and the only reason Sasuke beat Oro is because he was in a weakened state, and couldn't really fight.
Yeah, Sasuke beat Diedara and all, but Diedara was at a disadvantage when fighting Sasuke because Sasuke had Lightening jutsus which have power over Earth Jutsus which is the type of jutsu Diedara used.
I think Sasuke could stand a chance if he had some help, but Itachi specifically told Sasuke to come alone. Therefor, I think that Sasuke has very little to no chance of winning. Besides, would the guy who writes Naruto have one of the Sasuke do the only thing he wanted to do in life, which is kill Itachi? It would definately shorten the series by a lot if he did, and it looks like there's a lot more life left in the series.

Heh. This is just about the exact arguement I made when I said Itachi would beat Sasuke. XD Except with a few different points.

Chibaymega12 October 22nd, 2007 1:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Mewtwo42 (Post 3004946)
Just as Kakashi said one time, that if you exact revenge on someone, and your sole purpose of living was to exact revenge on that person, then there will only be emptiness left.

But, I think people highly overestimate Sasuke. Itachi is one of the strongest ninja in the series. I'm not saying Sasuke isn't, but come on. Itachi is stronger than Oro, and the only reason Sasuke beat Oro is because he was in a weakened state, and couldn't really fight.
Yeah, Sasuke beat Diedara and all, but Diedara was at a disadvantage when fighting Sasuke because Sasuke had Lightening jutsus which have power over Earth Jutsus which is the type of jutsu Diedara used.
I think Sasuke could stand a chance if he had some help, but Itachi specifically told Sasuke to come alone. Therefor, I think that Sasuke has very little to no chance of winning. Besides, would the guy who writes Naruto have one of the Sasuke do the only thing he wanted to do in life, which is kill Itachi? It would definately shorten the series by a lot if he did, and it looks like there's a lot more life left in the series.

i agree, but i dunno, it's really tough, i don't think sasuke should, or could win, unless he's been keeping secrests, as i mentioned before
now i'm thinking a little that maybe Naruto will come along and accadently kill Itatchi(don't ask how you accidently kill someone, lol) and Sasuke will go into a rage. That would please me, probably bring along their fight that much sooner.

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 1:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Mewtwo42 (Post 3004946)
Just as Kakashi said one time, that if you exact revenge on someone, and your sole purpose of living was to exact revenge on that person, then there will only be emptiness left.

But, I think people highly overestimate Sasuke. Itachi is one of the strongest ninja in the series. I'm not saying Sasuke isn't, but come on. Itachi is stronger than Oro, and the only reason Sasuke beat Oro is because he was in a weakened state, and couldn't really fight.
Yeah, Sasuke beat Diedara and all, but Diedara was at a disadvantage when fighting Sasuke because Sasuke had Lightening jutsus which have power over Earth Jutsus which is the type of jutsu Diedara used.
I think Sasuke could stand a chance if he had some help, but Itachi specifically told Sasuke to come alone. Therefor, I think that Sasuke has very little to no chance of winning. Besides, would the guy who writes Naruto have one of the Sasuke do the only thing he wanted to do in life, which is kill Itachi? It would definately shorten the series by a lot if he did, and it looks like there's a lot more life left in the series.

I sure hope that doesn't happen. O_o You spend you whole life hating someone, and then your best friend who is an idiot goes and 'accidentally' kills him. Sasuke would probably hate that so much he'd like...go on a rampage and kill everyone he can. >_> Or something. XD

Chibaymega12 October 22nd, 2007 1:28 PM

Well, i'd be pleased if that happened, make the series we know and love go on that much longer, and it'd add an odd twist to things.

Mewtwo42 October 22nd, 2007 1:28 PM

Spoiler:
I think that Sasuke will die when fighting Itachi. This will be at the end of the series. Just think about it. Sasuke's going to kill Itachi, but die in the process. It make perfect sense.

Just like Chibaymega12 said, it's hard to picture Sasuke returning to the Lea Village after killing Itachi.

Sasuke going into a rage would be nice...

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 1:30 PM

Yeah. I can imagine the convorsation if he did.

Sasuke: Hey guys, I killed Itachi, now I'm returning to live peacefully in the Leaf Village.
Everyone else: O_O What?

XD

Ichikool October 22nd, 2007 1:34 PM

I doubt it though, desu. XP

Yo, anyone read my post before? Spoiler tags anyone?

Mewtwo42 October 22nd, 2007 1:36 PM

Oh...sorry. I forgot about the spoiler tags...I'll go put some on.

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DarkIllusion Yeah. I can imagine the convorsation if he did.

Sasuke: Hey guys, I killed Itachi, now I'm returning to live peacefully in the Leaf Village.
Everyone else: O_O What? XD
Which is why Sasuke's
Spoiler:
gunna die....I think.

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 1:36 PM

Yeah, but it would be funny. >_>

Sorry. I'll use spoiler tags now. <_<

Edit: >_> I hope not. I like Sasuke a lot. But if I'd had to choose between Itachi dying and Sasuke dying, I'd go with Sasuke dying. But if Sasuke dies and Itachi lives, then they'd both have to die since for the most part all of the evil people die. And I don't want either of them to. >_<

Ichikool October 22nd, 2007 1:38 PM

Yeah. be respectful to the others. ~

Anywho, desu.

Spoiler:
I highly doubt Sasuke's gonna die. And I kinda doubt he's gonna kill Itachi... I have my own theories. Which I have already explained about a hundred times...

Mewtwo42 October 22nd, 2007 1:40 PM

This Sasuke-Tachi thing takes up a lot of energy just trying to think about it...
But oh well...
I've already stated my point on the topic like 3 times....so....yeah.

I still stand by my beliefs. If this manga is like any other good manga, something dramatic like my theory will happen.

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 1:46 PM

I have several beliefs, and one of them is that Sasuke isn't going to die. But at this point I'd rather not even have any beliefs because they'll probably be wrong. XD

PokemonRox October 22nd, 2007 1:47 PM

hey, can I join?! i luv the show naruto!!

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 1:49 PM

Sure. Welcome to the club!~

Mewtwo42 October 22nd, 2007 1:49 PM

Sure.....I guess Pipluper will add you. So...welcome.^^ You're like the 2nd person today to join. I think.

Anyways, I have my own beliefs(which I explained several times) and they are probably wrong, but I think there is a good chance of them happening.

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 1:50 PM

Yup. We all want something to happen, and I doubt any of us will get it. XD

New topic, anyone?

PokemonRox October 22nd, 2007 1:53 PM

Yah, lets make a new topic

Mewtwo42 October 22nd, 2007 1:54 PM

If you could make a new village or start up one that was destroyed, what would it be?

I'd make the Ice village. There is already the Snow Village, so why not Ice?
I know it's not the best topic, but it's a topic.

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 1:59 PM

Me and my sister actually made up villages in a roleplay we have going. The village hidden in the Night (mine) and the village hidden in the Dawn (my sisters)

We had the Ice village in our roleplay too. XD

PokemonRox October 22nd, 2007 2:00 PM

If you could make a new village or start up one that was destroyed, what would it be?

umm...I'm not sure but an ice village is a really good idea.. maybe a wind village? village hidden in the wind? XD

Ichikool October 22nd, 2007 2:01 PM

^Suna?

If you could make a new village or start up one that was destroyed, what would it be?

I'd be random [kinda] and call it the Hidden Village of Desu. Though I've all ready named Hidan's village that, desu...

Mewtwo42 October 22nd, 2007 2:02 PM

Sand Village's Element is wind....But that's a good idea. It would be called something....like you said or Village Hidden in the Gust or something.

Hidden Village of Desu..lol
Um....what does desu mean? You say in most od your posts, I just could never figure out what it meant.

Rainfall October 22nd, 2007 2:04 PM

Yeah, Gust would be cool. XD

PokemonRox October 22nd, 2007 2:13 PM

yah that sounds better i wasnt thinking about the sand village and wind... but gust sound cool

Ichikool October 22nd, 2007 2:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Mewtwo42 (Post 3005158)
Hidden Village of Desu..lol
Um....what does desu mean? You say in most od your posts, I just could never figure out what it meant.

It means 'it is' but it's sometimes overused for no reason by some anime characters. I got it from Sumomo from Chobits though. XD
Also, Kisame says it, desu.

Gust... sounds like dust. Hidden Dust village! The land of allergies! ~ *falls*

Mewtwo42 October 22nd, 2007 2:20 PM

Village Hidden in the Top-Soil....A combination of the Grass and Rock villages!

.Aero October 22nd, 2007 2:26 PM

She says it in every post, like me, I just use it once in every post though. XD Kisame is cool. Can't wait for CoN Revolution! (or is it already out!)

Hey a question for everyone, besides Ichi-chan, how many of you actually read the prologue to my fic? I don't want to post the first chapter until I know if anyone is actually interested in it...

~desu Saba~

Mewtwo42 October 22nd, 2007 2:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Pipluper (Post 3005287)
She says it in every post, like me, I just use it once in every post though. XD Kisame is cool. Can't wait for CoN Revolution! (or is it already out!)

Hey a question for everyone, besides Ichi-chan, how many of you actually read the prologue to my fic? I don't want to post the first chapter until I know if anyone is actually interested in it...

~desu Saba~

I read the prologue. But, didn't you change the names of the characters?

Chibaymega12 October 22nd, 2007 3:36 PM

If you could make a new village or start up one that was destroyed, what would it be?

Good Topic! Mine would be the Village Hidden in the Shadows! It sounds kind of evil, but it's actually a village where all the ninja specialize in shadow jutsus.

Hey Rox, be careful what you read here, if your not all the way through the series like we Narutards, sign up at Narutofan.com you can read the manga free there!

.Aero October 22nd, 2007 4:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Mewtwo42 (Post 3005297)
I read the prologue. But, didn't you change the names of the characters?

No....I have no idea what you're talking about. O_o The prologue didn't have the main characters. Maybe you're getting that mixed up.

Kasugi is the main character (Oyuhatsu Kasugi) I just used his great-grandpa or something in the prologue to explain something you will figure out in this "book". I'm making a trilogy, each book having 12 chapters. First book is Titled Roken (meaning discovery). You'll figure out why within the first four chapters. Does that mean you want to read Chapter 1?

My new village would be Village hidden in the Microwaves...oh yeah, Microwave jutsus think of that. XD
But really, I'd have to say Village hidden in the Ocean. It'd be hidden underwater, thus never being discovered. They use water style justsus. The hidden village would be named Joubugakure.

~desu Saba~

onepiecefan22 October 22nd, 2007 4:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Pipluper (Post 3005287)
She says it in every post, like me, I just use it once in every post though. XD Kisame is cool. Can't wait for CoN Revolution! (or is it already out!)

Hey a question for everyone, besides Ichi-chan, how many of you actually read the prologue to my fic? I don't want to post the first chapter until I know if anyone is actually interested in it...

~desu Saba~

PIPLUPER:idk what ur talkin bout!...if u tell me ill probrably read it!...and like it!

Chibaymega12: um i know u guys are true narutards..XD...well im only on volume 21..but i can live with u guys talkin of SHIPPUUDEN!...lol


YES I GOT THE NEW ART OF NARUTO BOOK THAT CAME OUT IN ENGLISH!
it is so cool it has all the cool pics from the series!

.Aero October 22nd, 2007 4:49 PM

I'm talking about my fan-fic with my fan character. Just in case everyone forgot (which I bet they did) I'll re-post the prologue along with Chapter 1.

Secrets of the Oyuhatsu

Prologue



Oyuhatsu Sofu was traveling to the Snow Country on a trip to deliver some natural hot spring water from his home town, Kirigakure. As he walked along the frozen path after departing from a ferry, he could feel the warmth produced by the hot spring water warm his hands. He was unusually pale looking, almost as if he were frightened to travel the path on his own. He would twitch shiver every once and a while, not used to the frost in the air. The frigid air made his breath visible and he became more and more shaky as he traveled higher into the mountain to the town of Yukigakure.

Just as he started towards the unfrozen path, he could hear a growl from behind. “Who’s there?” he asked frightened. “Reveal yourself or I will have to use my secret Jutsu!” Out of the snow covered bushes he saw a pile of pure white fur that blended into the snow. The pile’s head faced him and Sofu could see white teeth growling back at him. The arctic wolf had light blue eyes, like a husky’s, and pointed ears that gave him a demonic look. With teeth bared and ready to tear flesh, he pounced onto Sofu and dugs it’s silvery claws into the vein on Sofu’s right arm. Sofu cried in pain as the wolf dug deeper, he felt as if his arm were being injected with poison. Just then, a sharp ice spear appeared from behind Sofu and struck the wolf in between the eyes. It fell to the ground, lifeless and cold.

“What are you doing out here at this time of night? You can’t travel here at night and not be expected to be attacked by an arctic wolf! Although usually they’re calm around humans, that one had a weird aura to it, almost as if it were possessed. Enough chit-chat let me take you back to the village to look at your arm,” the man who threw the spear at the wolf said.

They headed up the path, Sofu gripping his arm holding it high above his head to minimize blood flow to that arm. They entered a small village with a hospital building just two doors down. The two entered the building and set up the medical care needed for the wound. At first the medics didn’t think it was too serious but when they entered the surgery room…

“Oh my gosh! This isn’t good! Scalpel, I need to see what’s going on deeper inside. His wound appeared to have a silver-white glow to it,” the doctor exclaimed.

“Kind of like that wolf that attacked him, it had silver-white fur, not like most you see. Another thin I think I should mention is the feel I got off it as it attacked Sofu here. It seemed to enjoy the taste of blood, and felt very evil to me. I’m not sure if this has any relevance to the injury, but I thought I’d throw it out there while I could,” the man added.

“I’m not sure if that would have anything to do with the injury, but….” Her voice trailed off as she gasped in fear.


Chapter 1


A round, flat rock rippled in the light blue water. The reflection of the sun was distorted as a disruption seemed to come from underneath the lake. A gust of wind blew through the dew covered pine trees around the valley. A splash was heard as it echoed through the depressed rock formation. Giggling could be heard as someone shouted “Butoukai no Mizu”. Some more laughing was heard as you could hear what sounded like a seal’s bark.

Kasugi laughed, his chestnut colored hair glimmering in the sun, “Nami no Mizu!”

A large wave rose above the lake, a small white sea lion with black speckled fur rose out of the water. It had a big smile on its face as Kasugi yelled “Yuki”. The sea lion landed on the shore of the lake. Akarui Honaka was standing next to him, she had large green eyes. Her long blonde hair sparkled in the light just as Kasugi’s did. They looked at each other and smiled. Kasugi reached into his bag and pulled out a large pink salmon and threw in up in the air. It was a beautiful sight as Yuki rose into the air, spinning around drying herself off while catching the fish in her tiny mouth.

Her fluffy white coat was slightly wet still, and it glistened in the sun. It looked like three tiny stars sitting by the lake, glowing hair and fur was as bright as the moon at night.

“So what should we do now, Honaka?” Kasugi asked with a smile.

“I think we should head back to Kirigakure to see what sensei has for us,” Honaka replied.

Kasugi stuffed Yuki into a small brown pouch, and she poked her little head out. They started walking back to the village just as some rogue ninja appeared on the side of the dirt path. The squad of Yuki, Kasugi, and Honaka prepared themselves for a fight, but the rogues didn’t seem to care about them. They were carrying a big bag that seemed to wiggle every time it hit a rock.

“Wha--,” Kasugi stopped Honaka and rushed her and Yuki into some nearby bushes. The rogues turned around with a swish of their kunai. They searched around behind them, but didn’t see anything. They whispered to each other some inaudible words, which Kasugi was hoping that Yuki’s invisible highly developed ears would pick up.

Kasugi said in a whisper, “Did you catch what they said Yuki?” Yuki just made a small quiet “pip” sound and Kasugi understood. The rogues told one another to watch their backs for some ANBU forces. Kasugi was surprised that they though that the small team of two ninjas and a sea lion could be mistaken. Kasugi whispered what Yuki had told him to Honaka. She giggled and the rogues looked back again.

“Sorry Kasugi and Yuki,” Honaka said with a look of sorrow.

The rogues heard this and threw a kunai at the small bush quickly. It missed Kasugi’s jugular by an inch. Kasugi nodded to Honaka, she knew what it meant instantly and she drew her miniscule kunai from her weapons bag. Her kunai were not like most, instead of just puncturing flesh, once inserted into the body, it releases a deadly poison into the blood stream. Honaka was a master at the circulatory system of the human body. She threw herself out into the open and chucked the tiny kunai at one of the rogues. It missed and the rogue chuckled.

“You think that this tiny thing can damage me?” He let out a large laugh, but sadly it was Honaka’s chance to throw another. It hit him in the chest and he fell to the ground, twitching. The other rogue backed away in fear and then lifted his friend up and ran away. The bag was left on the ground where it just wiggled and made struggling sounds.

Yuki charged to the struggling bag and looked at it confusedly. She tore apart the rope with her tiny jaws and looked bloodthirsty. She flung her head back and forth like a dog with a chew toy. Kasugi laughed at her thinking it was a cute gesture. Honaka and Kasugi headed over to the bag and opened it up to see a small boy screaming and kicking around. He had cuts and bruises all over him. His eyes were closed as he screamed and tears were going down his eyes like tiny waterfalls.

“Are you okay!?” Kasugi exclaimed as Honaka started to heal the cuts with her limited medic-nin abilities.

“Those guys were taking me away from my family!” The little boy exclaimed, eyes still closed and tears poring down. “They said something like they wanted to use my secret ability to the fullest!” The small child opened his eyes. One was metallic silver and the other, a normal dark brown.

“Are you part of the Kinzoku clan?” Kasugi asked surprised.

“Yeah I am. What’s it to ya?” The little boy said defiantly, his brown eye bloodshot from his wiping away of tears. The metallic eye was cold looking, sending shivers down Kasugi’s spine every time he looked into them. The little boy shot a dirty look at Kasugi for staring at him and Kasugi froze in his place.

“Wha--. What’d you do to me you little brat? We just saved your life!” Kasugi shouted at the little boy, only having control over his face.

“Don’t stare at me like that, I get angry and then accidentally freeze people with my eye! I can’t help it!” The little boy burst into tears again and Honaka looked at Kasugi disgusted. Yuki cuddled with the little boy as Kasugi’s body finally became normal again. He mouthed the word “sorry” to Honaka and she continued her healing of the cut on the boy’s arm.

“I’m sorry…err….what’s your name?” Kasugi asked the boy.

“My name’s Kobushi. I am part of the Kinzoku clan, but I wish I wasn’t,” The Kobushi remarked to the group.

“Why wouldn’t you want to be part of the Kinzoku clan? It has the most sought after Kekkai Genkai. It’s probably one of the best to exist,” Honaka said as she had finished healing.

“That’s exactly why. Because it’s so powerful, everyone wants it. I was just kidnapped for what I think is my eye. I can’t take it anymore. This is the second time in my ten years of existence. I just want to tear out my eye and throw it into the lake sometimes,” Kobushi said. Honaka shuddered in disgust at the kid’s thoughts.

“Well that’s not how you deal with a problem! You have to face it, not just give up on it and say it’s all over after that! If you have a gift, use it, don’t waste it away! If I were to have a power like yours I would be the happiest person on the face of the Earth! Now don’t spend your life crying about stuff like that and try to train to use it well!” Kasugi screamed at the kid, hoping that his words would pound him into thinking that everything he said was right.

Kobushi broke into tears again and he got up and ran back to town. Honaka stared at Kasugi with a mean look and then chased after Kobushi hoping to comfort him. Yuki went with her hoping she could provide a cuddly toy like thing to help. Kasugi stood alone staring at a small circular pebble on the dirt path, then spotted the kunai Honaka had throw that missed. He stood there and wondered whether the rogue had died already or not. He picked up the kunai and chucked it down to the lake area in his frustration.


Enjoy!


EDIT: Haha, I guess no one wants to read it...too long I guess?

Well topic time!
http://images.google.com/url?q=http://www.japaneselifestyle.com.au/travel/images/Jigokudani_hotspring_in_Nagano_Japan_001.jpg&usg=AFQjCNEzZubqQsC_EqoLv8abmfDDaseHgw
Remind you of anyone? If not then I guess the answer to the topic is no.
Do you think this monkey is where Masashi got the idea of Jiraiya's image?

~desu Saba~

Cacttus October 23rd, 2007 11:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Pipluper (Post 3005879)
Well topic time!
http://images.google.com/url?q=http://www.japaneselifestyle.com.au/travel/images/Jigokudani_hotspring_in_Nagano_Japan_001.jpg&usg=AFQjCNEzZubqQsC_EqoLv8abmfDDaseHgw
Remind you of anyone? If not then I guess the answer to the topic is no.
Do you think this monkey is where Masashi got the idea of Jiraiya's image?

~desu Saba~

Oh, I do remember seeing Jiraiya in a bath full of those monkey's, come to think of it he does resemble a monkey more than a toad.Maybe they should call him the Monkey Sage instead of Toad.

onepiecefan22 October 23rd, 2007 11:45 AM

yah that looks like jirya..XD
well i know the episode were he was in the bath with monkeys was a filler
and i bet he was based on that monkey
JIRYA THE MONKEY SAGE!

Ichikool October 23rd, 2007 12:07 PM

It's 'Jiraiya.'

Yeah yeah, desu, I heard that those kind of monkies found those hot springs all on their own. XD And and and, desu! I read both the prologue and the chapter. And I am currently awaiting chapter two. X3

Rainfall October 23rd, 2007 1:26 PM

As much as I love this club, I hate that I have to come back and have more than a million posts after mine so I have no idea what's going on. O_o

But that fanfic is pretty cool, so far. I just started reading it, and I'll say what I think of it after I finish. XD

Ichikool October 23rd, 2007 3:25 PM

This club has always been like that, so you have to get used to it, desu. XD

Maybe I should share my fic here also, desu...?

Rainfall October 23rd, 2007 3:37 PM

I have a fanfic, but its like 103 pages and its in a notebook. O_o A Naruto one. XD

Ichikool October 23rd, 2007 3:40 PM

I have mine in a notebook also. ^^ And I restarted it [like 4 times in the past] so there's only about 40 pages in it. I have it all planned out though, desu. XP

Rainfall October 23rd, 2007 4:05 PM

I've started mine over three times. XD

Mewtwo42 October 23rd, 2007 4:26 PM

I'm never motivated enough to start one. If I ever do make one, It'll be hand-drawn since I can't write for my life.

Ichikool October 23rd, 2007 4:32 PM

I'm drawing mine also, but I kinda quit a few days ago. It will take a looooong long time, desu.

Mewtwo42 October 23rd, 2007 4:35 PM

That's the problem with drawing ninjas. It takes a looong time and lots of practice.Which is why I'm not likely to make a fan fic, but maybe I'll make a short 3 or 4 chapter one.

Ichikool October 23rd, 2007 4:38 PM

Yeah, I started drawing it because my writing sucks, but I'll just have to try harder to get better, desu. I'm lazy so I might or might not do the manga. ^^; I'll continue writing. [I'm typing it now]

Anywho! This is an odd topic kinda. Any new ones, desu?

.Aero October 23rd, 2007 4:53 PM

Jiraiya is so that monkey if you ask me (well obviously, I posted XD) Thanks for the compliments on the fic. And Mewtwo, you don't draw a fic, a fic is written. A manga is drawn....O_o I though you'd know.

Chapter 2 will be out before the end of this month. Then I'm gonna make a steady deadline of a week. I find it pretty easy to write now. Maybe to keep it going, I'll take in suggestions of what you guys want to see in the fic, but then change it up and not tell if I'm using it or not. You know, mask that I'm using your ideas?

I've been busy reading Harry Potter 7 lately, AR points. Something probably none of you have heard of ever. It's probably the deadliest thing to a person who "No me gusta leer" (Spanish for: I don't like to read). Writing is way more fun, that's kind of why I slack off and never really read too much Naruto, although I love the manga...

~desu Saba~

Chibaymega12 October 23rd, 2007 5:01 PM

oh, i hated AR points, i havn't had to do them in two years, and in sixth grade, we only had to get2-5, a two was like a 70, and a 5 was a 100, oh, that was crap, lol

anyways, i have a fanfic of my own, it's quite lengthy though, whenever i think of something cool, i write it down, and put it in the story, i might post it by chapter if yall'd like

Ichikool October 23rd, 2007 5:11 PM

Sweetness. ^^ I like how other people have fics too. ^^
I'd be interested in reading anything that anyone has, desu. Maybe...

.Aero October 23rd, 2007 5:36 PM

I'd enjoy reading yours Chibay! I like to learn from more experienced writers and try to learn their style, see if it fits what I like, and if not, I still read anyway. Hope to read it!

(I have to get 25 AR points per quarter. Quarter ends on Friday, so points are do Thursday. They count for 20% of our reading grade, and me being a straight A student pressures me to get it done. It causes a lot of stress, I manage it though. =] )

~desu Saba~

Rainfall October 23rd, 2007 7:03 PM

I think we need a new topic. How about this one, just because I was talking about it with my sister today!~

If you had your own special Summoning Jutsu, what animal would it be that you would summon?
If I could summon anything, it would probably be dragons. Just because I love dragons. Ninja dragons!~ That, or wolves. Not ninja dogs, but ninja wolves. Difference! XD

Pikabloo October 23rd, 2007 7:09 PM

Ah, a very interesting topic..

Ehem. Well, for some reason, in most of my Naruto RP characters (that just spontaneously pop into my head, I never actually end up using them in roleplays) have giant birds as summons. Like, a really big eagle, just bigger than a horse. So my character can ride on it and fly around and stuff. Or sometimes, it's just a bunch of smaller birds used for scouting, much like how Kakashi's ninja dogs work.

But, yeah. I guess ninja birds would be awesome. Or, like what DarkIllusion said, ninja wolves. Cause wolves are awesome, too.

Rainfall October 23rd, 2007 7:33 PM

Very cool reply. That suddenly made me think of Ninja Pheonixes. XD

Ninja birds. That's so cool. XD

Pikabloo October 24th, 2007 5:09 AM

Ninja phoenixes? xD I would have said that... But it seems a bit too, well, flashy. Although it would still be cool.

I really need to write down all my spontaneous Naruto character creations xD

Rainfall October 24th, 2007 7:24 AM

Nothing wrong with flashy. XD It seems that a lot of the Naruto characters try to make themselves as flashy as possible. Jiraiya seems to make himself flash!~ XD

You should. :3

Ichikool October 24th, 2007 11:15 AM

Ninja cat named Ihara. XD [Though he's not a summon]

Honest... I'd want to summon a snake. [xP] Or something, desu... maybe a lion.

onepiecefan22 October 24th, 2007 11:30 AM

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
i would summon a MONKEY!
i know i know we just talked of monkeys.....BUT
there my favorite animal!
i always thought that would be so cool..............
NINJA SUMMONING...........*APPERES A HUGE MONKEY*......LETS GO UUUUUUHHHH..........NARI

EDIT:a cat would be cool!.....kishimoto said he may draw some cats.....if he can draw em right...also masashi loves dogs...
thats why theres so many ninja dogs!
also birds seem cool...same as wolves!

Mewtwo42 October 24th, 2007 5:22 PM

I have an idea.
Ninja...moles...XD
What Village would those be from?

Rainfall October 24th, 2007 5:25 PM

Ninja moles. XD I can so imagine that! Giant NINJA MOLES!! Dang, that would be cool. :3 Like the size of the Sannin's creatures. XD

Mewtwo42 October 24th, 2007 5:34 PM

Yeah. That would be awesome. What I really got that from was Temari's furret thing. I think she has a weasel....whatever.

You know what never made sense to me? Why do Kakashi's dogs burrow in the ground? I've never heard of a burrowing dog...lol

onepiecefan22 October 24th, 2007 5:35 PM

uh....well were else would they go!...XD

Mewtwo42 October 24th, 2007 5:39 PM

Well they could run....or jump...or swim...which is what dogs do.
But maybe dog-nins are different. :|

Chibaymega12 October 24th, 2007 6:10 PM

i was going to say dragons, but shayla took it, lol

hmmm, face the sissyness of ninja dolphins! lol
lets see, ninja tigers would be cool! And like the equivalent of narutos tadpole would be a kitty with a cute face!lol, but yall kinda took that one too, cats
hmmmmmmmmm, i'd summon pikachu!lol, no
an armadilllo would be cool, with spikes on the armor, lets see what else i can think of
hmmm, ninja elephant!
Oh, i got a good one, NINJA TURTLE!!!!! lol
Ninja Bear!
Ninja Pinguin!
Ninja Sea Horse!
Ninja Sheep!
Ninja SQuid!
Ninja Possum!
Ninja Clam!
Ninja Crab!
NINJA DINOSAUR!!! GOOD ONE!
Ninja Bull!
Ninja Alagator!
Ninja Spider!
Ninja Bat!
Ninja Worm!
Ninja Weasel!
Ninja Octopus!
Ninja Cow!
Ninja Gecko!
Ninja Chicken!
Ninja Rhino!
Ninja Walrus!
Ninja Bird!
Ninja Shark!
And thats pretty much all i can think of, did i take every ones?

Pikabloo October 24th, 2007 9:53 PM

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuude. Ninja moles are totally an awesome idea. I don't know why, but I really like it. It's strange, unique and it would totally work.

Ninja worm... Haha. That's about as strange as... Slugs, I guess.

Although I'm still sticking with my original idea of ninja birds xD

onepiecefan22 October 25th, 2007 3:15 AM

u didt take the best one
a ninja......MONKEY!

Ichikool October 25th, 2007 11:42 AM

*Gasp* Ninja crab! Perfect, desu! Summon: Giant enemy crab! ~
I'd love to sommon a crab. XD Okay, time to tweek Phoelion a little...

Rainfall October 25th, 2007 2:40 PM

I don't want a Ninja crab. XD

And about the burrowing dogs, I don't get it either. When he uses it on Zabuza it wasn't even the ground, it was...stone. O_o You think they'd have a giant lump on their head after blasting through that. XD

But its the world of ninja, so anything is possible, I suppose. XD

.Aero October 25th, 2007 3:29 PM

=P Never saw a stingray. That'd be awesome. Giant stinger on it's tail, floating in mid-air, you could ride it and stuff. It'd be awesome!

Here's some more Fic.

Chapter 2


Back at the village, Negaimuri Kokoro was waiting to give them a task. He looked quite surprised giving the team a sense of pride. “I had just been informed that you two and Yuki had taken care of two rogue ninja trying to kidnap one of Kinzoku clan’s members, is this true? Or did one of you just run around making up stories?” He said it in a low calm voice, his brown hair hidden mostly underneath his headband and mask. He eyes and all of his face was visible, except for his chin which was covered by part of the mask.

“Well I just threw one of my Yuudoku kunai at one of them. The other just ran away. Kobushi was tied up in a bag and Yuki here went and opened it up. I think our team did great considering we weren’t ready for a battle, but you’re the leader and I’ll respect your opinion, sensei,” Honaka said like she was a queen.

“That’s good to hear that you were able to do that all on your own. Well what did Kasugi do? Did he do anything at all?” Kokoro asked wondering if Honaka’s words of team were the right thing to say.

“Well…err…nothing really. But if he hadn’t been there, Yuki wouldn’t have been able to tell us what the rogues were saying,” Honaka said quickly.

“Well then, what did the rogue ninjas say?” Kokoro asked looking as if it had no relevance to the situation at all.

“They said that…” Honaka’s voice trailed off as she went to a mumble.

“What did they say? I couldn’t understand you,” Kokoro said sharply.

“They said that they should watch each other’s backs for any ANBU forces,” She said hastily, hoping that Kokoro-sensei wouldn’t get angry at her. Kokoro’s previous accusation was correct. It had no importance in what happened.

Honaka continued the story about the rest of the battle, and the saving of Kobushi. Kokoro was intrigued at how much the boy didn’t want his abilities when they were great enough to prevent the kidnapping from occurring in the first place. The poor boy was only ten; most likely he hasn’t mastered his Kekkai Genkai yet. It made Kokoro think of Kasugi and how he has yet to even learn about his own Kekkei Genkei, or curse, depending on how you look at it. Kokoro’s urge to tell Kasugi that very moment about it was so strong, but he remembered what the Mizukage and Kasugi’s father had told him. “Do not tell him until you believe he is ready to try and master it.” Those words were trapped in his head for three years now.

“Well I have just picked up a mission for you two, wait, where’s Koori Katsurou?” Kokoro question the group of Honaka, Kasugi, and the pygmy sea lion. Yuki gave a little turn of the head. She was looking behind Kokoro to see a plump, black haired boy running at full speed towards them. Although Katsurou was a little overweight, he was still pretty fast. As he reached the group he tripped over a pebble and landed flat on his face. He sprang up with a salute to Kokoro.

“Sir, reporting for duty, sir!” He yelled like soldier. He was puffing out his chest, which didn’t seem to do much considering his gut hid most of it. He stared straight into Kokoro’s eyes, hoping for some sympathy for being late, but no such sign ever came.

Kokoro continued, “As I said earlier, I’ve picked up a mission for you four, it’s only C rank, but it seemed like a challenging task for you. We must venture to the Land of Rain, to Amegakure. I have been informed that not long ago, some rogue ninja had stolen some papers on the Mizukages and their specialty jutsus. It is up to us to stop those bandits from giving those papers to the head authority of Amegakure. According to the file I received on this mission, they had stolen it just yesterday, and to reach them in time we only have four days. So we prepare today, and then take off tomorrow. I feel that you all are ready to handle this mission in three days. Agreed?” Kokoro told the team.

They spent the entire day packing the essentials, such as food, clothes, and paper and such. Their bags were inspected by Kokoro many times to make sure that they had packed to most reasonable things. They team then headed off to the supply room of the Academy where they picked up shurikens, bomb tags, and other ninja equipment. Honaka had already packed her Yuudoku kunai. Always having these with her was the good thing about them. They were tiny enough to leave extra room for anything else she may have wanted to bring with her.

As the day drew on, the sun began to set. The squad was inspected again, and then they were let off for the rest of the night. Kokoro reminded them to get a good night’s sleep. Kasugi and Yuki headed back down to the lake to watch the sun set over the orange and purple sky. The colors reminded him of Honaka. Her usual clothes were always those colors, even though they clashed, it made Kasugi think of her clashing personalities of an outgoing free spirit, and a quiet, on task student.

The orange light broke the quiet dew covered morning. The silhouette of the pine trees with the bright sun behind it looked like a tiny crowd in the horizon. Their tall figures looked as if they were staring back at Kasugi as he stared out his open window. He smiled as he knew this would be a fun day, traveling out into Amegakure to hunt down some important papers. He headed out right away to the meeting place in Kokoro’s garden.

He was already waiting their, reading a copy of “Make out Paradise” that had been given to him by someone from the Hatake clan. “You’ve arrived. So, where are the others?” Kokoro asked being surprised Kasugi had been there before the others, the laggard that he is. Kokoro continued to read as Kasugi sat down, cross-legged, staring up at the now blue sky.

“Hello everyone,” Honaka had appeared out of nowhere it seemed, her being so fast made her nearly invisible sometimes. “Sorry I’m late sensei, but I had to help my mom cook some breakfast. She’s really busy today and she needed to hurry to the Academy to finish some work.”

“That’s fine,” Kokoro had told Honaka, but then addressed someone else, “Where is Katsurou?” He stared down the small alleyway and saw a large round person sprinting as fast as he could down to where they stood. He approached them panting and trying to catch his breath.

“I’m…sorry…I…was…late…sensei,” Katsurou finally managed to say in between breathing heavily. “I have no excuse, unless saying that my dog at my homework counts….Oh yeah, no homework….Sorry sensei.”

Kokoro shook his head in a “no problem” fashion as he marked his page in the book and closed it. He placed it in his vest pocket and then said, “So are you three ready to travel to Amegakure? This is an important mission and I can’t believe it’s only ranked C. You three should manage fine though, I know that you can.” He smiled at the three with a thin looking move of his mouth. Honaka also smiled widely, showing more enthusiasm than any of them.

“So let’s get started!” Honaka yelled as she flung her rucksack over her shoulder. She darted down the alley and turned around at the end, waving her arms in the air. “C’mon you three, it’s not like we have enough time to wait around and read a book about ‘making out’,” Honaka had shouted to them.

Kokoro, Kasugi, and Katsurou had slowly paced towards where Honaka was beginning to look angry. She waved her arms more frantically, hoping they’d move faster. They kept the same pace, knowing that they’d be on a full day journey to Amegakure.

Ichikool October 25th, 2007 3:57 PM

I read it! And I commented on [forum's name here]. <3
And I'm excited to see what'll happen next and when they get to Amegakure.
We have to wait till November 7th? Damn, desu...

Massive crab... = massive damage!

.Aero October 25th, 2007 5:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Super Gullwing (Post 3015441)
I read it! And I commented on [forum's name here]. <3
And I'm excited to see what'll happen next and when they get to Amegakure.
We have to wait till November 7th? Damn, desu...

Massive crab... = massive damage!

I'm excited just to start on it! I can't wait to see what happens myself (although I already know. Ironic, isn't it?)

Well obviously massive damage (this is the weirdest conversation ever), but think about it, GIANT STINGRAY! and it flies too. What is stingray in japanese?

~desu Saba~

Rainfall October 26th, 2007 8:36 AM

Its looking pretty good for far. *thumbs up* Keep it up.

Ichikool October 26th, 2007 11:31 AM

http://youtube.com/watch?v=2g1fr5vk72M
^.^

Shippuuden 32
Spoiler:
OMG! T-Tobi! His voice sounds so cool, desu! He souds clumsy too. XD Yay for Tobi! ^^ I love Deidei's expressions in this ep also. Hah.
Sai's towards the end. Evrybody sheild your ears...

Mewtwo42 October 26th, 2007 6:04 PM

I just realized! Chapter three seventy....something just cam out! I gotta go read it!!!
............
.........
Well....does anyone else who read it have any opinion on the chapter.....? :\

onepiecefan22 October 26th, 2007 6:31 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Spoiler:
it was o...k.....just talked about jairyas past and shows u his strong form....hopefully the next chapter will be better....it will probrably have more fighting.....this was just explaining stuff!

Mewtwo42 October 26th, 2007 6:38 PM

I actually haven't read it yet...
So I guess I'll do that eventually...lol

Ichikool October 27th, 2007 6:40 PM

Dub, dub, yaaaay. ~
I couldn't get around to the site where I read the manga... but anyways...

Happy Birthday Oreo! Must be really old now, desu!
http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u202/kim_kaguya/orochimaru.jpg

Nyaaaaa. Ain't that purdy, desu? X3

akatsuki9 October 27th, 2007 6:46 PM

i cant wait to see the two new akatsuki members that paine summoned
i hope one is from the grass or cloud village

Ichikool October 27th, 2007 6:49 PM

Yesss, be from the cloud! <3
Okay. I need to go read that chapter now, desu.

Chibaymega12 October 27th, 2007 6:51 PM

okay, so Jaraiya has now inserted him self into my top 5 characters

1.Kakashi
2.Naruto
3.Sasuke
4.Jaraiya
5.Kabuto

akatsuki9 October 27th, 2007 6:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chibaymega12 (Post 3024020)
okay, so Jaraiya has now inserted him self into my top 5 characters

1.Kakashi
2.Naruto
3.Sasuke
4.Jaraiya
5.Kabuto

my top 5 are

1.Zetsu
2.Paine
3.Konan
4.Tobi
5.Sasori



i know im obsessed withe the akatsuki
why do u think my username is akatsuki9?

Ichikool October 27th, 2007 7:03 PM

My top five:

1. Gaara
2. Kisame
3. Deidara
4. Sasori
5. Naruto

akatsuki9 October 27th, 2007 7:21 PM

kisame kinda scares me........

Shika October 27th, 2007 10:40 PM

Anyone played Naruto: Path of the Ninja?
It was released on 23 Oct

Pikabloo October 27th, 2007 10:45 PM

Nah, and I don't think I'll be getting it anytime soon. I don't know why, but I'm not really into Naruto games.

Although, I might get Naruto: Clash of Ninja Revolution if I have the sudden urge to play a fighting game.

Shika October 27th, 2007 10:58 PM

At least it is better than Ninj Council series~
This one is really long RPG ^^

Pikabloo October 28th, 2007 12:37 AM

Hmm... I'll wait to see what other people's opinions are about it before I decide xP

Although I really don't like to see Naruto and stuff in their old clothes D: I got too used to seeing them in their (much more spiffy) Shippuuden get-up.

Forest Grovyle October 28th, 2007 1:57 AM

akatsuki9, just to say please do not bypass the 25 character rule by using ... etc. There's always something else you can add in order to flesh it out. :)

Thanks.

--FG

Chibaymega12 October 28th, 2007 8:28 AM

Naruto Rise of Ninja comes out in a few days, i can't wait, it's the one for xbox 360, it's supposed to be kinda like final fantasy and spider man mix

.Aero October 28th, 2007 11:21 AM

My Top 5:
1. Sabaku no Gaara
2. Hyuuga Hinata
3. Nara Shikamaru
4. Jiraiya (Chibay, you spelled it wrong)
5. Tsunade

~desu Saba~

Ichikool October 28th, 2007 3:16 PM

Hah. XD

Phoelion, go, desu!

Whoa... random... if I had a sixth on that list, it'd be Neji. ^^;

onepiecefan22 October 28th, 2007 3:47 PM

oh my top 5:
1. NEJI!!!!!!!!!
2.Itachi
3.Shikimaru
4.Kisame
5.Kankuro

Mewtwo42 October 28th, 2007 4:58 PM

My fav 5 huh? Whooo. That's hard...
Uuuuuummmm....1-Itachi(Duh.)
2-Sasuke(Again, Duh.)
3-2nd Hokage(OK, he doesn't exactly have any character developement, but he's still cool.)
4-Diedara(He's just awesome.)
5-Either Neji or Kakshi....(I can't decide.)
So there you have it....my 5 favorite Naruto characters.....XD

.Aero October 28th, 2007 5:21 PM

You may want to delete those other duplicates Mewtwo. ^^

I can't wait for CoN, I also hope you guys are enjoying SOTO (Secrets of the Oyuhatsu) because I really didn't get many comments so I'm not sure if you're reading. It's fine if you don't, just I'd like to know if you did or not. XD

NAME CHANGE TOMORROW! I'm gonna change it to "Sabaku no Gaara", so don't forget me peoples!

~desu Saba~

Lucy Lu October 28th, 2007 5:34 PM

My top five are:

1. Naruto
2. Hinata
3. Sasuke
4. Sakura
5. Rock Lee

I would put in my other top five...which will make ten. XD But I won't do that.

I still need to read the latest chapter. I did watch Episode 32 of Shippuuden though. It was really good.

Spoiler:
TOBI! I got to see him. He is so awesome! And he is funny too, lol.


Oh a name change huh Pipluper? I won't forget you, lol. "Sabaku no Gaara", wow that is a great name!

Mewtwo42 October 28th, 2007 5:37 PM

Oops. Duplicates. Sorry.

It was hard to decide my favorites, and I'll probably change them later....I usually do.

Lumine October 28th, 2007 5:38 PM

Hmm my top 5

1. Tobi
2. Pain (Yahiko form)
3. Kakashi
4. Neji
5. Itachi

Mewtwo42 October 28th, 2007 5:39 PM

I was going to put Yahiko, but I decided not to.
I don't know why..:P

Lumine October 28th, 2007 5:43 PM

Because hes dead? anyways I really want to know how he died knowing Pain using his body as his main form (must have been tragic), anyways is it just me or the majority of the characters in Naruto are emos?

Mewtwo42 October 28th, 2007 5:48 PM

lol
It's definately not you. For some reason in a world of ninjas, everyone goes emo.
Well, not everyone, but a lot of people.

Rainfall October 28th, 2007 6:37 PM

Uh, I've been gone forever, dang it. >_<

Okay, I watched the new manga/anime a while back, and...they. were. awesome. XD Except the Manga, where it was okay but I wish the flashback didn't take up most of the chapter. O_o This fight has been dragged on too long. <----- I don't think any of this is a spoiler, so if anyone has a problem with it then tell me. Even though I really don't think it is. O_o

My top five, dang it...I have like five crowded onto number one. XD So I'm just going to list characters I like a lot.
Itachi and Gaara are my favorites, and I love just about every other character. I just hate a couple, mostly Sakura and Ino, just because they ruined their friendship over a guy and that's just selfish.

I constantly switch between character to character to be obsessed over, but Itachi/Sasuke will always be my favorites. :3

Chibaymega12 October 28th, 2007 6:45 PM

the third Hokage is pretty awesome too, i didn't think about him when i compiled my favorites, he'd prolly replace Kabuto


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