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a random comic i randomly decided to make 1 day
I was at school yesterday when my freind said that his comic was better than mine, of course at the time i didn't even have a comic so i guess this was true. :nervous: Nethertheless i decided to prove him wrong by making 1, I randomly got some sprites and couldn't come up with any idaes whatsoever untill i had the excellent idea to make a time-traveling chicken! I've only actually dun 1 eppisode so far and his is way, way , way better still. Anyway tell me what you think of the comic (and yes i know it's rubbish so don't point that out) :surprised
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/tuppo03/chicky.jpg i can see pictures now! I'm very happy :D :D YAY i've actually finished the second & third one! okay so they're not very good, but i don't really mind. Credit for the odd monkey thing goes to my 7 year old sister who doesn't have an acount on here yet (just to remind you i know it's rubbish so don't point that out) :bandit: click here for the very first eppisode entitled chicky zaps evil dude click here for something chris did for me! click here for the second eppisode entitled chicky ingnites monkey click here for my third eppisode entitled a random walk in the woods click here for my fourth eppisode entitled a monkey surprise okay, last night I had an hour spare between my homework and my parents getting home so I could play something, I decide to make the most rediculous eppisode yet and I succeded. :P anyway here it is! ;) |
Please refrain from double posting. The panels look a tad bit messy, did you try resizing them?
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hmm what r panels? ??????
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The pictures. Along with the text boxes beneath them.
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and guess what George, yours is crap, mines way better than yours, time-travelling chicken, any way, I think everyone should know that you are Spam Monkey, just to make me feel better, and don't double post, and give it a proper title. Yes Signomi, he did try resizing them, you call this Pokemon, if your using Pokemon graphics, use Pokemon characters as well!
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hi adam, that's a really great comic, okay so it's not quite up to your standards quite but it soon will be! And yes the chicken was chris's idea, blame him!
and your not meant to tell people i'm spam monkey i'll get banned agen (i've been banned 4 times alredy) |
it rebels against all laws of good comics it's the worstn one ever AND STOP SPAMMING EVEN IF IT IS YOUR COMIC!
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Adam, I don't think that was neccessary. Calling it crap, and saying that your comic is better than his. He's only just started! He's still got to do more comics until it gets a proper rating. And you being a friend of his I thought you'd know better. And don't try discouraging him.
Well, for now, please don't resize the panels, leave them as how they were created ^_^ And try using a different font of the text, may I suggest Verdana or Tahoma? Well. Don't give up. Keep at it. |
chris said you'd like it....
oh well, and what r panels??? |
okay Signomi, but come on and now I am being serious the kid is obsessed with monkeys
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what u on 'bout? monkeys?
and plz tall me what panels r??? |
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who the heck is MT??? and what r panels???
oh yeah and it was chris's idea 4 tht evil guy mine for the chicken |
this is pathetic
nothing good NEVER MIX SPRITE BITAGES |
he's Mystic Trunks you twat, and Signomi explained what panels were a couple of posts ago
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well i guess it cud be a little bit better, what's a spritebitages and panels every1 is confusing me, i haven't really thought 'bout what happens next...
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Blaze can explain what sprite bittages are, but panels, here:
Panels are the pictures that you create, and Signomi, about a few posts ago, he had to resize it and then save as a PNG file |
Panels are the frames with the pictures in. And sorry but this comic looks awful, the font, the characters, the graphics...its all terrible. 1/10
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oh so the panels r the pictures, that makes sense
so what spritebitages? Hurray a 1\10 better than i could have dreamed possible! :D |
Im not sure but i think its because you made the sprites all bitmaped (fuzy) . I think thats what it is. And Adam ..Seriously hes your freind yet your calling him a twat....HAS SOMEONE RE-DETERMINED THE MEANING OF FREINDSHIP!?
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Well I give it a 0.00000000000000000000000000001/10
Edit: No Dash, no-one has redifined the meaning of friend, it's just that "Random Guy" is self-obsessed, and obsessed with monkeys *coughcoughcoughhe'sspammonkeycoughcoughcough* |
I don't know why but he takes criticism ver seriously, (If I called his comic rubbish at school he would probably be strngling me rite now) but he can be nice when he wants to be
PS: cud sum1 tell me how 2 check if sum1's on??/ a 0,0000000000000000001/10 now thts just dissapointing |
Adam. You're acting like a snob. Stop it. He's your friend and you should try and atleast be supportive. From what I see you're not really helping. I don't really see why you have to act so stuck up.
Anyway. If you're going to do another part to the comic, random person 95, then try taking your time by looking at how you can tidy the neatness of the quality of the pictures. Also try to make what the characters say seem interesting, right now it doesn't really look appealing to me. But never the less, I believe you can still improve by making the next part better. So like I said before, Keep at it. |
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PS: i just realised I did my 10th post! YAY! |
What?! I just said he's a self obsessed lunatic, who believes Monkey's will one day take over the world!
Anyway, I think he should at least make up a name for evil dude, and put real Pokemon in it and it'll be good, not now though |
okay i'm gonna do a second 1 only it's gona be slightly better than the first! and yes i'll consider giving evil dude a name, and tht chicken is a real pokemon tht i made up :classic:
i'm off now 2 make the second 1!!! :nervous: |
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And I think that's a good idea. |
eehhhhrr when i tried 2 put pokemon sprites in it just said invalid image size, this is very confusing....
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From what I have seen so far it looks pretty bad... the comic looks blurry and the text is hard to read. I believe you can do better though. Keep at it, I want to see you improve =) And adamski, you haven't exactly encouraged random person 95...
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dam, shut the bloomin hell up now, you foolish n00b, sheesh, part from Dash, smarty arty and Signomi you all fail at giving critisim, sheesh...Adam your comic isn't exactly aweosme but we don't call you a twat and whatnot, you oughta treat your friends better ya stupid fool.
bout the comic, iy looks quite bad to be honest, try using pokemon sprites, and use sketch/scew for resizing, the spelling, from what I read wasn't bad, just try a lil harder k? |
i've tried putting pokemon sprites in but it says error invalid image size, any1 know how to fix it?
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thx but nones answered my earlier question, how do i check if people r on???
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I can't start my second 1 till i figure out how to get the pokemon sprites in, if it come up with invalid image size, do I make it bigger or smaller?
hmm i'm the only person here... |
Don't just use RPGMaker, you can put them in on paint you know, I think this is good, just don't go saying it's the best ever alright? Sorry Signomi, I'm feeling a bit sick today and after constant annoyance from George all day, I was feeling a little grumpy. George, please use proper Pokemon sized Heroes, not the ones your using, (and Evil Guy, looks like Darth Vader, hehe)
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i wonder why tht is......................
and yet agen i'm the only 1 here... |
random person 95, please don't post twice in a row, it's against the rules here ^^ And try to keep every post you make in this thread connected to the comic. Otherwise it's considered offtopic.
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how do i put the characters in on paint???
I can't figure out how |
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Let me say this, it might offend but... here goes:
THIS SUX!!! But I think you should improve with advices from masters on this like Signomi, vaati, Adam and MT! Also, the problem might be you use on RMXP other format than JPEG, PNG or PCX! Paint is better! |
I already know tht, tht's why I put not to point tht out at the start!
YAY my 20th post! :D |
Random person, i have one bad comment to make. Please use CAPITAL LETTERS. Apart from that I thought for a first timer it was actually pretty good. My rating-7/10
(P.S I did not come up with the idea for the chicken) |
i know earlier on i said tht hehe, and if it was any1 elses it wud only get 1/10 but thx anyway!
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RP to inser sprites into Paint you need to :
1. Get a sprite sheet 2. Crop the sprite you want 3. Put it on a background. Its simple really. Oh and off topic: Monkeys have already inherited the earth because really we ARE monkeys. |
thx thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
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oh yeah umm...hey dude! this is a piece of crap
no realy am gona spam this crap as much as i fell like and i hope it gets locked:cool: :cool: :cool: |
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seriously dude, you're the one that fails,I've never seen you give constractive crit, EVER...and what's more is that you didn't even make your own entry to the sprite comp, so you can't laugh at him for not doing well...at least he done it himeslf. |
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[mind ur own business |
Unlike you I'm trying to help the poor guy, and for the love of god please use proper spelling and grammer, just because you're most likely a chav doesen't mean you have to spell how you speak.
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i'be actually made a second 1 !!! YAY
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you sound like my comic is going to end the world....
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the plot so far is just chicky blowing up evildude and a monkey
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i'm gonna make something interesting happen in the next 1, probably
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My little sister made the monkey and wanted me 2 put it in so i did =)
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and could'nt the guy's pokemon be more exiting then a bird
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hurray i managed to get a talking monkey thing in there!
(iv'e decided they'll all talk in mine) |
The next episode is Fantastic Random person. Keep it up I and I may give you a reward. (90 star wars avatars!!)
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I always spell it wrong, check any thread
well I'm glad to see the comic has improved slightly. |
The 3rd eppy was hilarious
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tht wasn't meant to be funny, oh well
PS: I redid eppy 1 |
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YAY a comic that is mainly made up of complete nonsense exactly what I wanted
+evil dude gets a name! |
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why do you need ketchup??????????
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Don't reply to ruby-adams's post; it was total spam, and if everyone replied to it, this whole thread would be full of offtopic spam, and it would end up locked. -_-;
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Also, Adam, there was NO need for that unconstructive flaming on the first page. <<; +CLOSED+ |
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