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Sorry I've been away for so long... it's been a rough couple weeks... anyway...
All the scientists in the Pokemon world are too obsessed with Pokemon to care about other humans. For that matter, judging by the games and the anime, all the humans in the Pokemon world are too obsessed with Pokemon to care about other humans. If it weren't for the manga and for fanfics, there would be no such thing as trainers having feelings for each other. Just look at any game where you come up to some random person and they talk about their Pokemon. |
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What the heck is going on here? P*A, you can't disappear, you're the heart and soul of this club! Alakazam and I can't go on without you...
Anyway, I almost went crazy when I searched fanfiction.net for Sabrina stories... there seriously was a story featuring a Sabrina and Gary. Unfortunately, that was a Sabrina, not the Sabrina. One of my biggest pet peeves with fanfic writers is when they name an OC after a character who actually exists... Oh and BTW, Alakazam, I searched "will x sabrina" on Google Images and it came up with the Sailor Venus from your former sig and text from your signature underneath it. I didn't know you were that much of a PsychicShipper after all! One more important Sabrina thing I just found... look at the biography of Lisa Ortiz, Sabrina's English VA... scroll down to where it says "Episodic." There of course it tells of her playing Sabrina and Sabrina's mother in the two episodes we all know and love. But go down a little further... Quote:
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*bows to everyone* I'm sorry about my absence, but university life kinda kept me from posting....plus, my beta-reader *coughZammycough* has kinda not sent me my fanfic back *pokes him hard*, so I couldn't post it either, which pi-, annoys me to no end. >>;;;;; I've already started the third chapter!
(He's a psychicshipper? I. KNEW. IT. XD!) Hm, Gary x Sabrina? Name please? 'Cause on my list, over 200 fics are from fanfiction net alone. ^^ So I might know it. (Actually, the chances I know it are pretty high. XD) Hm, many, many, years, Rebecca aka Satine told me about these 'episodes' as well. We discussed them and I think we came to the conclusion that someone was only making fun of Pokemon or it was some kind of fanfic, because we couldn't find any more information on them, aside from the site they were from. So I suppose it's fake. Not to mention our thoughts about an episode called "Saffron Nights"..... |
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Also, I have to wonder... if I were to write another Pokemon fanfic to my series, would you be interested in reading it? I've begun thinking about it again, because of difficulties with coming up with a Bleach storyline. |
Hm, okay then. I just thought it could be there because I do have some Gary x Sabrina (the real one) on my list and sometimes, none real ones also get on it because I forget to check them. >>;;;;
I was also a bit sad, because I thought these were fanfics at first (XD), but well, we should not give up hope yet. Agatha appeared in the end, Wallace did...heh, we can even hope Will appears some time! *silent prayer* Besides, we can always think/discuss what these episodes could have been about. And no, I won't post my thoughts on Saffron Night. XD Haha, you're lucky. When German Ash first changed his voice, everyone was like WTF?!?!?! because he sounded so different. Now, I think May's, Max's and Jessie's voices in movies are different too, but I can't confirm it. And Lance got a new voice. He sounds better now. o,o And Giovanni! OMG, Gio's new vice. ><;;;; Ehm, this is the voice actor discussion club, right? *g* Is that a question, CPF? *sarcastic voice* Of course! If I find the time. >< BTW *shameless advertising here* Posted new chapter. Thanks to Beta-Reading-slave's speed-beta-reading. XD! |
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I get the feeling that the makers of the Pokemon anime have all but forgotten about Sabrina and anyone else from Kanto who appeared once or twice. After seeing one of the more recent movies the other day, something about Lucario and Mew, I don't know how to take it serious anymore. Ash telling Pikachu "I love you"? Wow. My hopes for Sabrina returning are zero.
Great chapter, P*A... I notice Sabrina isn't quite as reserved as I'd expect. Then again, she's not supposed to be shy... I still can't get over the awesome way you made Janine's character. |
*prays to the pokegods* Now, if you could not only mess with Zammy's sig, but also with his mind a bit...
So what am I then? A Germanyshipper? >>;;; (Very bad name... hm ... HackedAbsolShipping? XD) *pats Beta-Reader-Robot-Slave* I still have the whole Discovering series which need beta-reading before being re-posted. Of course, this will require me to re-write them before...>> Well, Gary has appeared, Prof. Oak, Ash's mom...back in Johto, Duplica and Aya appeared...I think that's it. I liked Lucario and Mew. o,o Very much I did. Ash being 'psychic' (=aura)= good, very good idea. (Yes, alls Anti-Riolu guys can kick me now, but I love that puppy. >>) ^^ Not in this fic, at least. And I'll try to include Janine's character more. ^.~ |
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About Sabrina, yes its sad that the Pokemon anime writers had forgotten the coolest and gothic gymleader ever to hit the small screen. I wish the Ash gang could at least mention or visit her once in a while, but nooooo. They'll just move onto the next region. *facepalm and sweat* Would it kill the writers just to mention her name once in a while? And we need Kadabra back. |
They prefer new trainers, heh. As far as I know, the only gym leaders to appear out of the season they were introduced in are Brock and Misty. XDD
Though I haven't made it to the Battle Frontier episodes, so I may be wrong here. But for some reason I doubt it. >_< But to look on the bright side, if they put Sabrina in it again, they may ruin her to an extent where we don't like her anymore(unlikely), or else ruin some of our fanfics by creating contradictions to our fanon(likely). >_< |
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*pokes Zammy* Ya online, darlin'? XD!!!!!
First, news up. Part 1 of Chapter 3 (yes, I'm separating it into parts as otherwise, Chapter 3 would be about 20 pages long. >>;;;;) is complete, but I can't post it because my beta-reading-slave-robot-guy is malfunctioning (aka, having exams). Anyone else here willing (and having enough time) to beta-read? Otherwise, you'll have to wait till the 10th of December... And now, on topic. If Ash's more mature, I could see him with Sabrina. *ducks* Only then. If not...well, there's always Anabel. 0=) *mumbles again about a certain BF episode that p-...annoyed her to no end* No, you won't kill the writers, you'll be a nice girl P*A, no heads will be rolling, no, no... *thinks hard* Yes, I think you are right, Zammy. Though, that depends if you see Agatha and Wallace as gym leaders, because they did appear outside their respective regions. I doubt too that the writers can ruin her so much that we won't like her anymore (although, it's DP, anything is possible...*sarcasm*), they would really have to have a very bad day to do that (again, possible). And contradicting our fandom ideas...very possible. (Considering how crazy some of our ideas are.) Although, if one of us can snuggle into the writer's office...ehm...0=) |
Ash sure has the girls fall for him, doesn't he? But I don't think he'd have Sabrina fall for him... and considering that we've been waiting about 10 years for Ash to mature, I don't think he's going to quite get there to Sabrina's maturity level.
If there ever was an episode that ruined Sabrina for us, we'd just have to use our own discontinuity and refuse to accept the "canon" being forced on us. |
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*apologizes for yet again not being online often* I wish I had an excuse...aside from being tired, that is. >>
I'm not sure...how many 'girlfriends' does Ash have, again? Misty, Melody, that girl from Johto League, 'Latias', Anabel...for a main character, that's not so much over the span of 10 seasons...*looks at Negima and sighs* Besides, he doesn't seem to age at all, so aside from fanfics, no maturing for him apparently. An adult Ash might look hot. All black haired persons are looking hot. 0=) I would so gladly make my own fics canon. And no, just not because of Psychicshipping (I AM looking at you, Zammy...whereever you are, hopefully studying hard), just because I think fans who really try to get deep into the person's character are better than a bunch of writers who create a new character almost every week and drop the others. >> BTW, CPF, I found the Gary x Sabrina fic you were talking about and I was just as frustrated when I read the first chapter. >> Edit: @Zammy: Ehm, you quoted yourself in your sig? 0=) (And you're online when you're supposed to learn! Imbecile!) |
Hehe yes, I am a procrastinator. And while I have sworn off MSN until exams are over, I haven't quite done the same with PC(or anime, actually-just watched yesterday's episode of Naruto, foxswt). But starting now, I won't log in to PC again-or watch anime-until my calculus exam is finished on Wednesday. =D
By then I'll have a new episode of One Piece, a new episode of Bleach, and several episodes of Pokemon to get caught up on. =D Hehe...with Pokemon I've gotten to the Battle Frontier episodes. They were in Saffron City for several episodes, and even managed to go to the Fighting Dojo. Would it have hurt anyone to just go next door for a bit? >_< All right, there. Now I'm gone until Wednesday. 0=) |
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Heh, new stipulation: I can't be on PC from the hours of 1 AM to 10 PM. :D
Yeah, I've tried 100% school work before, and it just doesn't work. Just as long as it's 90%+, I'll be fine. :D Yeah, I heard you complaining about it, but just recently have I been able to complain about it. XD Though I also noticed that that was the last episode dubbed by 4Kids. Serves them right! (although they didn't create the anime....they just destroyed it) |
Okay, I have some exciting news that ought to spark some new topics in this club. It's about a fanfiction featuring Sabrina written by... me. Yes, it's #4 in my series, available right here. It involves Sabrina, her views on Dark Pokemon, Will... and some other people of course. Of course it's only Chapter 1 of what I hope becomes another 46-chapter epic. I hope you like it...
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*forcefully ignores Zammy's post for the time being* REALLY, CPF?!?! *___* **just about to faint of happiness* Somebody please tell me why the heck I did not notice this earlier because I DO check fanfiction. net every day...maybe because Sabrina recently died in another favourite fic of mine...>>;;; Yeah...in a fight with Will....*growls* But I still smell hints of psychicshipping's awesomeness there...I'm obsessed....
Btw, I'm talking about "Grasping the Moon", M-rated fic on fanfiction. net for everyone who wants to check. (Zammy might, as it's mostly anti-psychicshipping for those who search for it...) On the positive side, that fic gave me another plotbunny for a psychicshipping fic. As for one I already started, I couldn't write the last days, so Part 2 of the third chapter is still non-existing. ^^;;;; Ehm, yeah. ... Will post review later. ^^;;; *goes over to Zammy's post* @[email protected] If university life includes +90% school work, I want to quit, now. I will probably still complain about it on my death bed. *sees herself +90 years old, b*tching about Japanese anime writers as her grandchildren and great-grandchildren sweatdrop and wonder if she's yet again talking about that 'psychic lady'...*...>> They ruined the best chance they had. >>;;; *sighs and shrugs* Don't even get me started about our dubbing company here...*cough using English pokemon names cough* |
I already got someone criticizing my story for, of all things, capitalizing "Pokemon." (Not to mention criticizing the plot because they assumed something that isn't the case.) Are you serious? Some people on fanfiction.net are awesome, and some are just looking to cause trouble.
More anti-PsychicShipping? That means we have as many anti-shippers as shippers for such a little-known shipping... not good news. |
...I haven't even finished my review for the first chapter and you already post the second one, argh! XD You're so much faster than me...
You mean Farla? Yeah, I know some of her fics...she is a good writer, but maybe she has a big...ehm...ego...^^;;; (Because a vice-president can kinda not get fired so easily and criticizing someone for listing the ages...ehm...yeah...got nothing better to do?) ^^ Well, small shippings suffer from this fate, I guess. It's not exactly anti-psychic shipping, since Will is the baddy (Yes, Zammy, you can start celebrating now...) and Sabrina's the goody, so they're on opposite sites and that makes them fight. You should read it yourself, it's really a good fic if it wasn't for Sabrina getting killed so cruelly. ><;;;; |
Oh, I see, so it wasn't so much anti-shipping as it was just having those two on opposite sides. Where's the poetic justice, though, if the good Sabrina gets killed? And why must they kill off our beloved character? That just seems so unfair...
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*shrugs* When there's war, people die. That's one thing I do expect from a serious pokemon fanfic. You can't have the world all goody-happy-pinky whatever. And that fic is dark, so some deaths are inevitable. I was pretty much expecting her to die sooner or later....
But that it had to be in a fight with Will...>>;;; Okay, I did hope for something along the line of the legend between Achill and Penthesilea (I might dig that thing out and explain it to you if anyone wants, pretty good and romantic story, though I'm not sure about the spelling. XD). Hm, judging from my fic list, she actually gets killed alot in fics. With that, I don't mean that she dies in every fic, but in the ones where she does, she is always killed in some way. >> Haven't found a fic (aside from my own) where she dies from old age yet... |
Oh, come on, P*A, no review of my fic? I'm really looking forward to seeing what you think of it so far...
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^^;; Sorry, technical problems. When I wrote the last post, I was at university and I couldn't view fanfiction. net properly, so I thought I should try it on my mobile...but that didn't work either, so, yeah...>>;;;;
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Thanks so much for the review, I feel like writing again! But yeah, this fic is set somewhere in between Sabrina and Will's wedding, and the epilogue that follows it. Some things have happened (Silver-Jasmine marriage, rebuilding of Violet and Mahogany), others haven't (Giselle-Joe marriage???). And I guess Cynthia "recently" becoming psychic is relatively speaking, mainly for those who know that she wasn't a psychic in the games.
Anyway the goal of the first chapter was for Sabrina to finally show something she feels weak against. That might be an ongoing theme... Chapter 3, unwritten as of yet, should feature Falkner (and maybe Janine too). |
^^ No problem. I'll review the second chapter asap. (hopefully tomorrow *sweatdrops*)
Hm, I noticed, after all, only about a year has passed (I noticed the age differences of the characters). Maybe some things will happen... Meh, me not cares about Giselle&Joe being married...I don't like her. XD XD! Maybe she should have been psychic in Platinum (would be another reason for me to buy that thing...). ...I'm not sure if I should like this plot idea or not... ^.^ Cool! ...I'm waiting for Zammy to return so I can finally post my Chapter 3 *annoyed* |
I would say that not even a year passed, because remember Sabrina turned 21 in a chapter I wrote almost exactly a year ago (one of your favorites if I remember correctly). I'm glad to see you like Snazzyshipping (Lucian x Cynthia), and they should be a more prominent pairing in this story.
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Which Sabrina are we talking about? The anime Sabrina or the manga Sabrina.
I likes the manga Sabrina, she is so cool. You can count me in on this group :) |
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We talk about Sabrina in all her forms: Manga, Anime, Game, and our own FanFic versions. =D And P*A, I am kind of free now. Though heh, I don't have Internet at home right now. However, I am going to see what I can do to change that over the weekend. And I hope to be around school then as well, so how about you email me that Chapter Three? ^^ I could even save it on disk and bring it home to beta-read. :D |
Which is why I said 'about a year'. ^^ I dunno, I just got the feeling that it might be close to 'one year later', maybe because of the other characters and their birthdays...meh, me and my assumptions. XD
Yes, it was. 0=) I wonder if one of the new chapters will be able to beat it.... ..I will review in my next post, but for now, I'm busy reading Chapter 3. 0=) I like pairing my favourite characters (and, on the other hand, my not so favourite ones, too). Didn't know about the shipping name, though. Snazzyshipping, it is? Anyone care to explain to me what snazzy means? ^^;;;; And now...*takes deep breath* ZAMMY!!!! You're back, finally! No, I did not only wait for you because I want to post that damn chapter, no, of course not. 0=) But thanks in advance, of course. Will mail it immediately. ^.^ Oh, and welcome, Durial666. Nice to have new members. |
"Snazzy" is a word meaning fashionable, and it works because both Lucian and Cynthia have interesting tastes in fashion. It's probably American, definitely slang, but certainly the right name for the shipping.
I don't know if any chapter will ever beat Sabrina's engagement to Will... after all, they're married now, it's hard to get much more romantic than that. |
*rubbing her cold fingers* Just came back from Christmas Market...cold, oh so cold...
Thanks for the explanation. ^^ I think it fits the shipping quite well. Both look great, fashionwise. (Although Will does, too.) I think it would be wrong to assume that there is no romance in marriage, otherwise, people wouldn't stay married for so long (ehm, I know many don't, but well...). I think it's more of an 'everyday' romance and not as fiery and blazing as it was in the beginning. Now, to the review of Chapter 2... Quote:
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Thanks for the review of the chapter... and yes, you're pretty safe in assuming it's one of those three league champions.
And don't worry, Sabrina and Will's romance is still strong, even now married... although I can't spring a surprise engagement chapter ever again. |
Hm...so at least I 'guessed' right...I'll just have to see who out of the three it is (no telling me- I wanna find out by myself =) ).
XD Well, you can, if you make them divorce, then re-marry. But if that's romantic anymore...I doubt it. At least the romance only (already?) started in my fic and can still very well bloom. ^.~ *insert obvious hint about new chapter/part of chapter 3 here* |
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I love Sabrina, I will have to join this club. I never join clubs anymore, but she was my favorite gym to battle in on Pokemon Blue, and one of my favorite episodes was her gym battle with Ash in the first season!
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Yes, Pokemon Blue...I was playing that when I first met her and fell in love. XD And P*A, I assume you've found it, but in case you haven't, I'll tell you that I've emailed you the beta-reading stuff. ^^ |
@CPF and Zammy: Ehm it's right there. *points somewhere*...I mean I posted it. So I got your email. Without it, I couldn't post the chapter, right? Or could I? Ehm....
Welcome, Thomas-san! Another member! ^^ I own Pokemon Blue too (just don't ask me in which corner it's sulking right now), but when I first played it, my love was Mewtwo, not Sabrina. *sweatdrops* |
I posted a review of your story, P*A, another great chapter. And I also posted chapter 4 of my story. It mainly features Giselle, but there is one scene with Sabrina and Will you may like.
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Thanks for the review, CPF, I'll reply in the other thread.
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I wonder why Giselle's dark powers only developed now... Hm, short review. >< |
Don't worry, lots of Sabrina coming up in Chapter 5. She comes up with an idea, and either she's brilliant or completely fooled.
Edit: Chapter 5 posted, very Sabrina-centric. You will NOT like this chapter, P*A, I warn you! |
Too late, CPF, too late. >< I always check fanfiction. net before I check PC, so, yeah...
.... ...I HATE YOU, KAREN!!! I SO HATE YOU FOR VARIOUS REASONS I DO NOT WANT TO NAME HERE!!! I think Sabrina was both. >>;;; And yet again you manage to overrun me. I haven't reviewed Chapter four yet and you post Chapter five... And to continue with the bad news, Zammy's at home, where no internetz iz, so he can't beta read. Which he couldn't anyway, because Part 2 is not finished. >< (On the 'bright' side, I have holidays now too, so I have time to write. I hope. And Christmas songs are so romantic inspiring...) |
I promise you, if you review these chapters by Christmas Eve, I'll post Chapter 6 by Christmas, where (maybe) there will be a happier outcome for Sabrina over the holidays.
And yes, I went back to my original plot idea of Cynthia being the villain... you may end up hating her worse once all is said and done (*evil laugh*). |
o,o By Christmas? *looks at Christmas calendar* Ehm, two doors left...WAHHHHHH!!!! Two days for two reviews! x.x...okay, I'll take up the challenge!
...I noticed you were making her the villain. >> And I was not amused. Certainly not. But I'll try to deal with it. I'll never stop loving her, I promise you. 0=) Stories are just fiction. And now, review number four... I WILL MAKE YEAH, YES, I CAN! XD Quote:
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Thanks, P*A, and Chapter 6 promises to be an exciting one, at least the beginning of it. I figured it would be too hard to hide Cynthia's state as the villain forever, so I figured it was time I just gave it away. She doesn't seem so villainous right now, though, does she? Just wait...
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*assumes CPF just talks so much about Chapter 6 to tease her....* I'm not exactly immune to that.
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Phew, long review, but I managed. ^^ Now, Chapter 6, plz!!! |
Okay, Chapter 6 will be coming soon. Chapter 7 was written but then completely scrapped after I realized I was being too cruel and making Cynthia out of control. It will be rewritten after Christmas to make more sense.
Finding something that Sabrina's weak against isn't too easy, but that's sort of the point of the story, so that Sabrina actually has a formidable foe. We can't have her being all-powerful, can we? |
Hm, well, making Cynthia quite powerful is not wrong, I think. She is a champion, after all, and quite a good one nonetheless.
0=) The last sentence proves this, I think. Now she's having a REAL fight. Hm, yes, I like that. Makes the victory even more wondrous. ^.^ You haven't answered my question. Can I use that plot element (Karen being Will's former girlfriend) in my fic, too? (Sorta, of course, she won't be his FORMER girlfriend...) Short post, 'cause it's Christmas for me already. ^.^ Ehm, yeah... HAPPY CHRISTMAS TO EVERY MEMBER OF THE CLUB, EVEN THOSE WHO HAVEN'T POSTED IN CENTURIES! XD!!! |
Oh, absolutely. If it's in my fanon, it makes it even better if it's in your fanon. I originally had planned on Will and her being a couple, before of course changing it to PsychicShipping.
And I don't mean to be hogging up the group, I don't want Alakazam not to feel welcome... we need you to post too! |
*back from playing with presents Christmas dinner* You only notice how many relatives you have once a year...
Really? Thanks, thanks! That way, I may have a plot up for a sequel...of course, the plot is very thin, but I've been writing a lot for the current chapter (part 2 is now over nine pages long x.x and VERY psychicshippy, you'll love it), so I think that story might be finished before my birthday and then, I may start the sequel.... CPF, you've really influenced me with your continuous sequel writing. XD Hm, my original pair for him was Janine, then my original character and well, now it's always Sabrina. ^^ (with a bunch of fangirls behind, trying to rip her apart *g*) Well, Zammy's home right now, so we've got the club for ourselves and we can talk about Psychicshipping as much as we want to. Zammy won't can't mind. |
I look forward to seeing it, anything Psychicshipping is always a good thing. I'm not sure how long it will take me to write the next chapter, I'm getting worried that I can't get Cynthia right... either she's too powerful or too weak. I want her to be stronger than Sabrina, though, but not *too* much...
It's also awfully hard to write something "dark" with Pokemon when I'm playing the new Mystery Dungeon game, which is ten times as cute as anything in the normal games. |
Part 2 is finished, just have to wait till Zammy comes back. ^.^ It's in the end thirteen pages long, but I was too laze to split it up yet again. XD So if everything goes right, Part 3 will be the last + possible epilogue + possible sequel. ^.~
And it ended up so full of shippiness that I fear Zammy will collapse once he beta-reads it... Hm...hm....that's a serious problem. Making Cynthia too weak would look unreal and cheap, making her too powerful would make Sabrina look a bit helpless which isn't good for us loyal fans. I can't really give you any advise, giving advise to other writers is always fishy, because it's their story and you shouldn't mess too much with it. All I can say is that Cynthia should indeed be more powerful than Sabrina, because she's a league champion (okay, okay, Sabrina won once again her, but still) and a dark/psychic, very powerful opponent if you ask me. And she seems to be quite intelligent. *lol* I know. Try to write a mature scene between two persons in Pokemon *hint, hint* is not easy at all. |
It sounds really great, if it's got that much Psychicshipping. Now I'm hoping you'll review Chapter 6, because I had a feeling you would like the beginning part of it. You know, the return of the character who's become like a sister to Sabrina...
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^^ Believe me, it has. I rewrote the end because I didn't like how it first turned out and now it's even more shippy-full, with a twist, though. ^.~ I'll give you a small hint...if a red rose is a sign of love, what is a black rose then? *hides*
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I guess it would have made more sense for it to be a steel jail cell for Cyrus... so thanks for the review again. Always fun to focus on the Sabrina-Will relationship with Liza finding a way to bother them. And I'm probably the only fanfic writer in the world who doesn't just squeeze Liza and Tate together as one identity, instead focusing just on Liza.
And of course Chapter 7 is up, though you probably realized that by now. |
XD I know how weird it is, sometime you need reviewers to point out your flaws because you can't find them out yourself *coughs*.
There were moments in chapter 7 were I wanted to hug Liza...and moments where I wanted to strangle her. 0=) Hm, I can't say I'm free of this crime. >< I mostly use their game characters, as the anime, uhm...well, let's just say I did not like at all how they were portrayed. And in the game, Liza & Tate are mostly one 'person', with their speech pattern and so... I did notice. 0=) I'm not sure if I'll be able to review tomorrow, New Year's Eve after all....(and I have to cook. o,o;;;;;;;; Bring the antidotes, plz.) |
I don't like Liza and Tate just being thrown together as one person, although that's pretty much how most people view them. I've made Liza Sabrina's "little sister" in a way, and she's found her way into the Saffron family. Maybe it's not too fair to Tate that his sister gets all the attention in my story, but at least he's not combined with her as one entity.
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Well, I'm back, folks. And look at all this Psychic-Shippiness that's been thrown around while I was away....XD
I didn't white write as much as I thought I would, heh. Ironically enough, I haven't been worked on a Sabrina-centric chapter....because I'm writing a Will-centric chapter! =O But of course, I shall be working on his evil side, making a certain someone want to poke his eye out. XD And you can email me the new chapter, P*A. I promise not to collapse if you promise not to collapse from reading my Will-centric stuff. =D |
Maybe it is shafting Tate a bit, CPF, but hehe, his sister is fun enough to watch. 0=) She really has become a member of this (weird) family.
@Zammy Well, if you're not around to restrain us...0=) O,O You, writing a Will-centric chapter? *collapses* *g* Certain someone? You mean yourself? 0=) ^.~ Already did. And no, I won't collapse (again). How could I, if you write about such a cutie as Will? ^.^ Happy New Year to everyone! (Probably will be my last post this year, if Zammy doesn't beta-read with the speed of light. 0=) |
Nice to see you back, Alakazam. We've made things all nice and PsychicShippy while you've been gone, please feel free to join in the fun!
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Happy New Year everyone again...*yawns*....stayed up till three am....*dozes off*...
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Well, and now, just a small request...Zammy, if you have read the chapter and NOT died because of an overdose of psychicshipping, then send it, I know you're online (at least were when I started this post). If you HAVE died, then...um...RIP. 0=) |
I hope you use that for your version of Cynthia... bonus points if you make Cynthia a villain!
Yet another case of Liza being annoying and energetic, while Sabrina remains emotionless (until a certain someone is brought up). I haven't worked on the next chapter, though, but I'll make sure I go to work on it soon. |
XD I'm afraid I won't try to get these bonus points...ehm, do I get any if I make her bad but not a villain? You'll see in which way (once I write that sequel and IF I already include Cynthia in there)....
XD Definitely. As if she's high on something... I guess Sabrina is quite jealous. Of course, if Will is stupid enough to WANT to go back to Karen (not in that emotional way, though)... Chapter 3 b is also still on its way...>>;;; |
Okay, BIG BIG bonus points if you make Cynthia what she's made herself in Chapter 8. Now I'm absolutely serious about Cynthia being power-hungry, and at the same time, the type of woman I'd love to date (minus the dark powers). Of course, there's no doubt that Sabrina hates this whole idea, which makes a Sabrina vs. Cynthia rivalry a reality at last.
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You know where I read your new chapter today? At university! During a lecture! Hooray for mobile phones with internet connections and the uni's W-LAN. XD!!!
Ehm, yeah...I hope Sabrina doesn't kill Will when she wakes up again. Because I fear that she will. *ggg* o,o I'm not so sure if I want my precious Cynthia (mind you, she's my second favourite girl!) that...immoral. I don't know, the way I describe her is already very dark (I can't tell you any examples or you would get spoilered, but let's say she doesn't care at all about the emotions of others) and I'm not sure if I can make her any darker without starting to turn her into a hateful character, which is something I don't want. >>;;; Let's just see how she turns out in the end...of course, I could make up a little rivalry between her and Sabrina, I have my ways...0=) But...Queen Cynthia...anyone told you that this sounds quite sexy? XD BTW, chapter 3 part 2 is (FINALLY) up. 0=) |
This Cynthia you're describing seems like she'll be an awesome character in your upcoming story... of course mine is already villainous enough. I can't wait to see your review of this chapter... obviously Sabrina's about to kill Will because she's so angry, but before that, they found out how powerful Cynthia truly is.
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Third rough day in a row...never before in my life I hated snow so much...x.x Well, I'm quite tired, so my review will be a bit shorter than usual. Sorry. x.x
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Not quoting the whole quarrel between Sabrina and Will, but...whoa. o,o This is serious. She's going to rip his head off. Or get divorced. Or both. Can't say that Will's plan was that smart, but I hoped myself that it would work some way (for Will's sake, as he's the one always getting overpowered by his girls[yes, I say girls, for Liza's as good as a member of this family ^^]). Now I can only say...omg, she's going to be pi angry when she wakes up. Very angry. Very, very angry. Where are the atomic-proof holes, again? *gg* Quote:
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Hopefully I haven't made Cynthia *too* powerful, but I'm certainly making her stronger than Giovanni was last story. Obviously Sabrina will escape (right?), the question will be whether Will escapes after Sabrina's finished yelling at him.
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No, no, not too powerful, just..uhm...power-addicted? Too power-addicted? But well, that's okay, I think. ^^
Sabrina *will* escape and Will will escape Cynthia too...it's rather the question if he escapes Sabrina! XD |
So, do you like my new sig? I figured with a new story, a new sig was necessary... at least while she's in her current position. I don't think Cynthia is viewed as a villain in any other fanfics out there, so if someone were to see that sig out of context they may have no idea what it means.
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^^ I noticed it (but forgot to mention it in my last post lol). Yeah, it's cool. Maybe you might include some song made by "Queen", *g*.
Hm, now, haven't seen such a fic yet, but then again, I only know a few other fics with Cynthia. BTW, new question for the club (came up with this randomly): If you could be any one of Sabrina's pokemon, which would you be? Which reminds me...have we scared Zammy off or why doesn't he use his high post count here? XD |
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I guess I'd be Abra, rather quiet and not so much of an attacker. I certainly wouldn't be a Mr. Mime!
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Hehe, I finally have a new chapter up. Will has a bigger part in it than Sabrina though! ;_;
As for your chapter, P*A, that's very high on my priority list(even higher than English homework :D). Will try to finish it tomorrow afternoon before I even start Chapter Twelve. ^_^ |
New chapter? With Will? Squeeewww...^.^ Will read asap. Will see if I can review it today (otherwise, tomorrow...or sometime).
XD!! Higher than English homework? I wonder if I should feel flattered or scolding you for that. Not my fault if you get in trouble, right? 0=) |
Hehe, it won't get my in trouble. I'm lax with English stuff anyways...and so is the prof! Considering what little homework I did(reading 3/12 chapters from the book), I still managed to be ahead of the majority of the class-professor included. 0=)
And hehe, the next chapter will have more Willies-and of course, some more Sabrina-esque stuff. But first, on to your chapter! I'll email it to you once it's complete, and then get cracking. :D |
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Yeah, why is it called Sabrina's story again if there's like a dozens other characters? The only ones that are needed are Sabrina and Will. Why get cracking? o,o *does not get* |
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And I called it Sabrina's Story because it wasn't supposed to be a Crossover when I started it, XD. That just happened in the 2nd chapter, when I realized that the crossover story I had wanted to work on for so long would work much better with Sabrina as a main character. See, it was originally going to start with Naruto, XDD. |
And I told you what Willis mean in German...don't you think you should edit your post now? XD It creates thoughts in my mind I so want to banish....
...now I know why it's called 'crack'... *ggg* If it hadn't turned into a Crossover fic, then what? Just Will and Sabrina fighting again and again? (not as if I would have minded that so much...0=) ) And while we're on the topic of fanfics...on the bright side, I'll post chapter 3c after I finish this post. On the negative side, I think the sequel will be delayed. >> I still have no plot bunny for a sequel, even though I'm desperately hunting one. In contrast to that, I got attacked by one on the train, which might end up by me starting a new fic that has almost nothing to do with Sabrina *gasp, surprise, shock*, though I'm not sure right now if I will do that in the end or not. XD |
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Which reminds me, I better go back and continue on my story. It's probably going to end up like my 2nd story with about 20 chapters or so... I'm my own harshest critic, so I already hate this story (usually it takes a little while for me to hate my own story, there are maybe only three of my FF.net stories I don't hate!). (Edit: "Leader" is a swear word. Seriously, try putting it in your user title. It got ******-ed out.) |
It got a new name? Man, I'm behing schedule...reminds me that I wanted to give my fic a different name, too. >>
Hm....hm...I think I did read a crossover fic- no wait, three!!! with her. Only one with her as the main character, though. (Crossovers were with Ranma 1/2, Dragonball and Harry Potter, iirc) You should. >>;;; I've been waiting for it. *pokes* Only 20 chapters is okay, I mean, I can't even write ten chapters... XD Try loving your storis, that's the only way you can improve! *nods* It is? o,o Hm, ruins my plan to make myself the Sabrina club leader. XD! BTW, I can't see the pic in your sig. ;.; But I want to know what the hint is about, plz! |
P*A, I just updated my sig, and my story, like within seconds of you posting. Chapter 9 is up!
And Sabrina's reaction to Will is so much different than you'd expect. |
Thanks! ^.^ Now I'll think over the possible hint and its consequences and everything else...and....UPDATE?!?!?!? YAY!!!!!!!! ^______________^
Different? Oh, must read! XD I guess she doesn't rip off his head, eh? XD |
Yeah, I decided to go in a different direction with Sabrina's response. Meanwhile, with this potential plot point, there are so many ways it could go, but one thing's for sure: Erika is now important, in some way.
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>>;;; Fanfiction. net is quite slow. It only showed your update now...
The title already tells me alot. ^^ ...hm, the little mind blocking thing seems to be a common problem in psychic/psychic relationsships. XD omg....I find it so amusing that all it takes Cynthia to lose control is a kiss....better not go any further, Lucian.... *g* Omg, Liza....that's so typical of you....violant little spy... Sabrina ending up ripping his head off= normal --> Sabrina not doing anything= not normal Conclusion: Will&Liza should be seriously worried. Ouch. Yes, Will should better think before speaking. I think I know who said person is. 0=) Erika being in charge of the gym leaders is a manga plot, iirc. Quote:
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No, no, no monarchy, plz. >> *wants to slap Will* Oh, dear....sometimes, he's just dumb. Or insensitive. Angry Sabrina= back to normal. XD o,o Plan B?... Yeah, took me quite some time to review...0=) |
"Leader" is banned because in the past people have used it to pretend they were mods. I found this out when I wanted to use it, heh. Likewise, you can't use "Moderator" or "Administrator." >_<
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So even Sabrina needs a little bit of counseling from time to time, which is what this chapter was about. Whether she gives up on trying to stop Cynthia, and what Erika has to do with the whole situation, are other matters altogether. It's always fun for Sabrina to be upset at Will when he screws up, which she was, but I thought that it was worth showing a different side to Sabrina, one where she felt a little down because of not having all the power.
I figured that was the reason for "leader" not being allowed, though it seems to me that it's easy enough to tell who the moderators really are anyway. |
While I agree that Sabrina can't always solve the problems alone, I'm not sure if I can like this new side of her. For me, it's really a new side, as I rarely see a 'weak' Sabrina and tend not to write about one, either. (If she's weak in my fanfics, it's because of being mentally unstable, not actually psychically weak. XD)
I suppose she'll fight Cynthia in a more passive way, like guarding Giselle, who (not to my pleasure) has a bigger chance of defeating the other champion. And what Erika has to do with that...no idea. XD I'll see what happens and judge later. XD |
But if Sabrina was all-powerful and had no weaknesses, I don't think she'd be someone to cheer for. She'd be more like Cynthia, someone to cheer against. Remember my first story where Sabrina cried after losing, and it turned into one of the most romantic Will-Sabrina moments? It's definitely possible for Sabrina to show a different side and still be likable.
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^^;;; I guess so...I guess the romanticness of the moment overshadowed Sabrina's loss so much I didn't care for it much. (It was a great romantic moment, I might add. I miss these...okay, we just had another great moment when Sabrina was telling Will to take care of the gym...argh, I'm a helpless romantic when it comes to these two. >>;;; [And other, special pairings.])
Or I might have been influenced a bit too much by 'Grapsing the Moon'...>>;;; BTW, final chapter will be up tomorrow. ^.~ Special date, ya know? |
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I like Sabrina; She's my fav. gym leader of all time:cool:
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Hehe, I wholeheartedly agree with that statement. :D
Welcome to the club, From The Depths Of Dreams. And Happy Birthday, P*A! :P |
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woooo Sabrina~ Count me in
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Welcome, Kay Ryu!
By the way, Alakazam, I always knew you were a Psychicshipper... and I'm saving your story just so you can never say you weren't one. That was awesome. Somehow though I think Sabrina's one of those girls who wouldn't wear a bikini, I'd think of her as more modest... though she does wear those knee-high boots, so maybe not. |
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