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Crazy Packers Fan November 16th, 2008 9:03 AM

Sorry I've been away for so long... it's been a rough couple weeks... anyway...

All the scientists in the Pokemon world are too obsessed with Pokemon to care about other humans. For that matter, judging by the games and the anime, all the humans in the Pokemon world are too obsessed with Pokemon to care about other humans. If it weren't for the manga and for fanfics, there would be no such thing as trainers having feelings for each other. Just look at any game where you come up to some random person and they talk about their Pokemon.

Sexycheese November 17th, 2008 7:04 AM

Weird isnt it?
plus you never seem to encounter anyone that doesnt do a job related to pokemon in some way

Crazy Packers Fan November 19th, 2008 10:08 PM

What the heck is going on here? P*A, you can't disappear, you're the heart and soul of this club! Alakazam and I can't go on without you...

Anyway, I almost went crazy when I searched fanfiction.net for Sabrina stories... there seriously was a story featuring a Sabrina and Gary. Unfortunately, that was a Sabrina, not the Sabrina. One of my biggest pet peeves with fanfic writers is when they name an OC after a character who actually exists...

Oh and BTW, Alakazam, I searched "will x sabrina" on Google Images and it came up with the Sailor Venus from your former sig and text from your signature underneath it. I didn't know you were that much of a PsychicShipper after all!

One more important Sabrina thing I just found... look at the biography of Lisa Ortiz, Sabrina's English VA... scroll down to where it says "Episodic." There of course it tells of her playing Sabrina and Sabrina's mother in the two episodes we all know and love. But go down a little further...

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voice of Sabrina, "Saffron Night," episodes of Pokemon Magical
voice of Sabrina, "Pokemon the Sunset Challenge," Pokemon 2001
I can't find anything online about any of these things mentioned, but according to that, Sabrina appeared in episodes of... well, something, but I can't figure out what. "Saffron Night"? That has to be the Sabrina. I really, really want to know what these episodes are, if they exist, and if they do, if I can watch them. I have a feeling, though, that this will turn into the biggest anime-related mystery next to my search for the identities of the singers of the Tenchi Universe theme song (the mysterious duo "Sonia").

Psychic*Absol November 20th, 2008 9:35 AM

*bows to everyone* I'm sorry about my absence, but university life kinda kept me from posting....plus, my beta-reader *coughZammycough* has kinda not sent me my fanfic back *pokes him hard*, so I couldn't post it either, which pi-, annoys me to no end. >>;;;;; I've already started the third chapter!
(He's a psychicshipper? I. KNEW. IT. XD!)

Hm, Gary x Sabrina? Name please? 'Cause on my list, over 200 fics are from fanfiction net alone. ^^ So I might know it. (Actually, the chances I know it are pretty high. XD)

Hm, many, many, years, Rebecca aka Satine told me about these 'episodes' as well. We discussed them and I think we came to the conclusion that someone was only making fun of Pokemon or it was some kind of fanfic, because we couldn't find any more information on them, aside from the site they were from. So I suppose it's fake.
Not to mention our thoughts about an episode called "Saffron Nights".....

Crazy Packers Fan November 20th, 2008 9:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4134506)
Hm, Gary x Sabrina? Name please? 'Cause on my list, over 200 fics are from fanfiction net alone. ^^ So I might know it. (Actually, the chances I know it are pretty high. XD)

It actually shouldn't be on your list, because that was not Sabrina, just an OC named Sabrina. That's why I was so mad, because I thought it was an actual Gary x Sabrina fic, but it was just some OC "Sabrina."

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Hm, many, many, years, Rebecca aka Satine told me about these 'episodes' as well. We discussed them and I think we came to the conclusion that someone was only making fun of Pokemon or it was some kind of fanfic, because we couldn't find any more information on them, aside from the site they were from. So I suppose it's fake.
Not to mention our thoughts about an episode called "Saffron Nights".....

Oh... that disappoints me. Then again, I guess we would have known about them by now. Still, it makes me wonder... if only it did exist, any more Sabrina would be better than none. And even if Sabrina would return to the anime, she couldn't be voiced by Lisa Ortiz in English, thanks to that firing of all their voice actors a couple years ago. (She was spot-on as Sabrina.)

Also, I have to wonder... if I were to write another Pokemon fanfic to my series, would you be interested in reading it? I've begun thinking about it again, because of difficulties with coming up with a Bleach storyline.

Psychic*Absol November 21st, 2008 5:58 AM

Hm, okay then. I just thought it could be there because I do have some Gary x Sabrina (the real one) on my list and sometimes, none real ones also get on it because I forget to check them. >>;;;;

I was also a bit sad, because I thought these were fanfics at first (XD), but well, we should not give up hope yet. Agatha appeared in the end, Wallace did...heh, we can even hope Will appears some time! *silent prayer*
Besides, we can always think/discuss what these episodes could have been about. And no, I won't post my thoughts on Saffron Night. XD
Haha, you're lucky. When German Ash first changed his voice, everyone was like WTF?!?!?! because he sounded so different. Now, I think May's, Max's and Jessie's voices in movies are different too, but I can't confirm it. And Lance got a new voice. He sounds better now. o,o And Giovanni! OMG, Gio's new vice. ><;;;;
Ehm, this is the voice actor discussion club, right? *g*

Is that a question, CPF? *sarcastic voice* Of course! If I find the time. ><

BTW *shameless advertising here* Posted new chapter. Thanks to Beta-Reading-slave's speed-beta-reading. XD!

Alakazam17 November 21st, 2008 11:59 AM

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Oh and BTW, Alakazam, I searched "will x sabrina" on Google Images and it came up with the Sailor Venus from your former sig and text from your signature underneath it. I didn't know you were that much of a PsychicShipper after all!
XD, how is that even possible? My sig had nothing to do with Will and Sabrina....It must be the PokeGods messing with me. >>

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(He's a psychicshipper? I. KNEW. IT. XD!)
Heck no, XD. I am a CanadianShipper. =D

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BTW *shameless advertising here* Posted new chapter. Thanks to Beta-Reading-slave's speed-beta-reading. XD!
I beta-reading slave. I beta-read. I no do anything else, master. XD

Crazy Packers Fan November 25th, 2008 12:33 AM

I get the feeling that the makers of the Pokemon anime have all but forgotten about Sabrina and anyone else from Kanto who appeared once or twice. After seeing one of the more recent movies the other day, something about Lucario and Mew, I don't know how to take it serious anymore. Ash telling Pikachu "I love you"? Wow. My hopes for Sabrina returning are zero.

Great chapter, P*A... I notice Sabrina isn't quite as reserved as I'd expect. Then again, she's not supposed to be shy... I still can't get over the awesome way you made Janine's character.

Psychic*Absol November 27th, 2008 9:38 AM

*prays to the pokegods* Now, if you could not only mess with Zammy's sig, but also with his mind a bit...

So what am I then? A Germanyshipper? >>;;; (Very bad name... hm ... HackedAbsolShipping? XD)

*pats Beta-Reader-Robot-Slave* I still have the whole Discovering series which need beta-reading before being re-posted. Of course, this will require me to re-write them before...>>

Well, Gary has appeared, Prof. Oak, Ash's mom...back in Johto, Duplica and Aya appeared...I think that's it.
I liked Lucario and Mew. o,o Very much I did. Ash being 'psychic' (=aura)= good, very good idea. (Yes, alls Anti-Riolu guys can kick me now, but I love that puppy. >>)

^^ Not in this fic, at least. And I'll try to include Janine's character more. ^.~

sabrina_diamond November 29th, 2008 8:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4146118)
I get the feeling that the makers of the Pokemon anime have all but forgotten about Sabrina and anyone else from Kanto who appeared once or twice. After seeing one of the more recent movies the other day, something about Lucario and Mew, I don't know how to take it serious anymore. Ash telling Pikachu "I love you"?.

*is smiling/laughing histerically about Ash and Pikachu* Wow, that's the coolest thing I've ever heard! XD *needs to look up more Pokemon movies* Of course, they can't have Ash saying it to anyone else *shifty eyes*

About Sabrina, yes its sad that the Pokemon anime writers had forgotten the coolest and gothic gymleader ever to hit the small screen. I wish the Ash gang could at least mention or visit her once in a while, but nooooo. They'll just move onto the next region. *facepalm and sweat* Would it kill the writers just to mention her name once in a while? And we need Kadabra back.

Alakazam17 November 29th, 2008 8:55 PM

They prefer new trainers, heh. As far as I know, the only gym leaders to appear out of the season they were introduced in are Brock and Misty. XDD

Though I haven't made it to the Battle Frontier episodes, so I may be wrong here. But for some reason I doubt it. >_<

But to look on the bright side, if they put Sabrina in it again, they may ruin her to an extent where we don't like her anymore(unlikely), or else ruin some of our fanfics by creating contradictions to our fanon(likely). >_<

Crazy Packers Fan November 30th, 2008 6:15 AM

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Originally Posted by Alakazam17 (Post 4159725)
But to look on the bright side, if they put Sabrina in it again, they may ruin her to an extent where we don't like her anymore(unlikely), or else ruin some of our fanfics by creating contradictions to our fanon(likely). >_<

So true. I'd hate for Sabrina to be made into a super-happy, character-of-the-day type who is just like every other girl Ash has met since season 3 (well, besides Casey, one of the few good characters to come out of the anime since Johto). And they could ruin all of our fanon by making Sabrina have a crush on Ash (ugh).

Psychic*Absol November 30th, 2008 9:35 AM

*pokes Zammy* Ya online, darlin'? XD!!!!!
First, news up. Part 1 of Chapter 3 (yes, I'm separating it into parts as otherwise, Chapter 3 would be about 20 pages long. >>;;;;) is complete, but I can't post it because my beta-reading-slave-robot-guy is malfunctioning (aka, having exams). Anyone else here willing (and having enough time) to beta-read? Otherwise, you'll have to wait till the 10th of December...

And now, on topic. If Ash's more mature, I could see him with Sabrina. *ducks* Only then. If not...well, there's always Anabel. 0=)

*mumbles again about a certain BF episode that p-...annoyed her to no end* No, you won't kill the writers, you'll be a nice girl P*A, no heads will be rolling, no, no...

*thinks hard* Yes, I think you are right, Zammy. Though, that depends if you see Agatha and Wallace as gym leaders, because they did appear outside their respective regions.

I doubt too that the writers can ruin her so much that we won't like her anymore (although, it's DP, anything is possible...*sarcasm*), they would really have to have a very bad day to do that (again, possible). And contradicting our fandom ideas...very possible. (Considering how crazy some of our ideas are.) Although, if one of us can snuggle into the writer's office...ehm...0=)

Crazy Packers Fan December 1st, 2008 7:42 AM

Ash sure has the girls fall for him, doesn't he? But I don't think he'd have Sabrina fall for him... and considering that we've been waiting about 10 years for Ash to mature, I don't think he's going to quite get there to Sabrina's maturity level.

If there ever was an episode that ruined Sabrina for us, we'd just have to use our own discontinuity and refuse to accept the "canon" being forced on us.

Sexycheese December 2nd, 2008 1:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4163317)
Ash sure has the girls fall for him, doesn't he? But I don't think he'd have Sabrina fall for him... and considering that we've been waiting about 10 years for Ash to mature, I don't think he's going to quite get there to Sabrina's maturity level.

If there ever was an episode that ruined Sabrina for us, we'd just have to use our own discontinuity and refuse to accept the "canon" being forced on us.

Im just happy sabrina has some sense, why does all the girls fancy Ash, hes not even good looking! Misty looks great compared to him and lets face it, she makes Grimer look hot!

Psychic*Absol December 5th, 2008 9:03 AM

*apologizes for yet again not being online often* I wish I had an excuse...aside from being tired, that is. >>

I'm not sure...how many 'girlfriends' does Ash have, again? Misty, Melody, that girl from Johto League, 'Latias', Anabel...for a main character, that's not so much over the span of 10 seasons...*looks at Negima and sighs*
Besides, he doesn't seem to age at all, so aside from fanfics, no maturing for him apparently. An adult Ash might look hot. All black haired persons are looking hot. 0=)

I would so gladly make my own fics canon. And no, just not because of Psychicshipping (I AM looking at you, Zammy...whereever you are, hopefully studying hard), just because I think fans who really try to get deep into the person's character are better than a bunch of writers who create a new character almost every week and drop the others. >>

BTW, CPF, I found the Gary x Sabrina fic you were talking about and I was just as frustrated when I read the first chapter. >>

Edit: @Zammy: Ehm, you quoted yourself in your sig? 0=) (And you're online when you're supposed to learn! Imbecile!)

Alakazam17 December 5th, 2008 9:17 AM

Hehe yes, I am a procrastinator. And while I have sworn off MSN until exams are over, I haven't quite done the same with PC(or anime, actually-just watched yesterday's episode of Naruto, foxswt). But starting now, I won't log in to PC again-or watch anime-until my calculus exam is finished on Wednesday. =D

By then I'll have a new episode of One Piece, a new episode of Bleach, and several episodes of Pokemon to get caught up on. =D

Hehe...with Pokemon I've gotten to the Battle Frontier episodes. They were in Saffron City for several episodes, and even managed to go to the Fighting Dojo. Would it have hurt anyone to just go next door for a bit? >_<

All right, there. Now I'm gone until Wednesday. 0=)

Psychic*Absol December 5th, 2008 9:24 AM

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Originally Posted by Alakazam17 (Post 4171767)
Hehe yes, I am a procrastinator. And while I have sworn off MSN until exams are over, I haven't quite done the same with PC(or anime, actually-just watched yesterday's episode of Naruto, foxswt).

Way to go, boy, way to go. >> Seeing as you have over 1,100 posts now...I know what you spent your time with. 0=)

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But starting now, I won't log in to PC again-or watch anime-until my calculus exam is finished on Wednesday. =D

We hope. Or rather, you hope. And we'll see. XD

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Hehe...with Pokemon I've gotten to the Battle Frontier episodes. They were in Saffron City for several episodes, and even managed to go to the Fighting Dojo. Would it have hurt anyone to just go next door for a bit? >_<

'Tis is what I've been complaining about for almost two years. >> I was so excited when I found out about the episode, but no....I was ready to kill the writers, thinking that they had wanted to irritate especially me. Yes, I am that irrational. 0=) Come on, you do know me all.

Alakazam17 December 5th, 2008 7:32 PM

Heh, new stipulation: I can't be on PC from the hours of 1 AM to 10 PM. :D

Yeah, I've tried 100% school work before, and it just doesn't work. Just as long as it's 90%+, I'll be fine. :D

Yeah, I heard you complaining about it, but just recently have I been able to complain about it. XD

Though I also noticed that that was the last episode dubbed by 4Kids. Serves them right! (although they didn't create the anime....they just destroyed it)

Crazy Packers Fan December 6th, 2008 1:40 AM

Okay, I have some exciting news that ought to spark some new topics in this club. It's about a fanfiction featuring Sabrina written by... me. Yes, it's #4 in my series, available right here. It involves Sabrina, her views on Dark Pokemon, Will... and some other people of course. Of course it's only Chapter 1 of what I hope becomes another 46-chapter epic. I hope you like it...

Psychic*Absol December 6th, 2008 10:28 AM

*forcefully ignores Zammy's post for the time being* REALLY, CPF?!?! *___* **just about to faint of happiness* Somebody please tell me why the heck I did not notice this earlier because I DO check fanfiction. net every day...maybe because Sabrina recently died in another favourite fic of mine...>>;;; Yeah...in a fight with Will....*growls* But I still smell hints of psychicshipping's awesomeness there...I'm obsessed....
Btw, I'm talking about "Grasping the Moon", M-rated fic on fanfiction. net for everyone who wants to check. (Zammy might, as it's mostly anti-psychicshipping for those who search for it...)
On the positive side, that fic gave me another plotbunny for a psychicshipping fic.
As for one I already started, I couldn't write the last days, so Part 2 of the third chapter is still non-existing. ^^;;;;
Ehm, yeah.
...
Will post review later. ^^;;;

*goes over to Zammy's post* @[email protected] If university life includes +90% school work, I want to quit, now.

I will probably still complain about it on my death bed. *sees herself +90 years old, b*tching about Japanese anime writers as her grandchildren and great-grandchildren sweatdrop and wonder if she's yet again talking about that 'psychic lady'...*...>> They ruined the best chance they had. >>;;;

*sighs and shrugs* Don't even get me started about our dubbing company here...*cough using English pokemon names cough*

Crazy Packers Fan December 6th, 2008 10:35 AM

I already got someone criticizing my story for, of all things, capitalizing "Pokemon." (Not to mention criticizing the plot because they assumed something that isn't the case.) Are you serious? Some people on fanfiction.net are awesome, and some are just looking to cause trouble.

More anti-PsychicShipping? That means we have as many anti-shippers as shippers for such a little-known shipping... not good news.

Psychic*Absol December 7th, 2008 10:31 AM

...I haven't even finished my review for the first chapter and you already post the second one, argh! XD You're so much faster than me...

You mean Farla? Yeah, I know some of her fics...she is a good writer, but maybe she has a big...ehm...ego...^^;;; (Because a vice-president can kinda not get fired so easily and criticizing someone for listing the ages...ehm...yeah...got nothing better to do?)

^^ Well, small shippings suffer from this fate, I guess. It's not exactly anti-psychic shipping, since Will is the baddy (Yes, Zammy, you can start celebrating now...) and Sabrina's the goody, so they're on opposite sites and that makes them fight. You should read it yourself, it's really a good fic if it wasn't for Sabrina getting killed so cruelly. ><;;;;

Crazy Packers Fan December 8th, 2008 4:46 AM

Oh, I see, so it wasn't so much anti-shipping as it was just having those two on opposite sides. Where's the poetic justice, though, if the good Sabrina gets killed? And why must they kill off our beloved character? That just seems so unfair...

Psychic*Absol December 9th, 2008 9:55 AM

*shrugs* When there's war, people die. That's one thing I do expect from a serious pokemon fanfic. You can't have the world all goody-happy-pinky whatever. And that fic is dark, so some deaths are inevitable. I was pretty much expecting her to die sooner or later....
But that it had to be in a fight with Will...>>;;;
Okay, I did hope for something along the line of the legend between Achill and Penthesilea (I might dig that thing out and explain it to you if anyone wants, pretty good and romantic story, though I'm not sure about the spelling. XD).
Hm, judging from my fic list, she actually gets killed alot in fics. With that, I don't mean that she dies in every fic, but in the ones where she does, she is always killed in some way. >> Haven't found a fic (aside from my own) where she dies from old age yet...

Crazy Packers Fan December 9th, 2008 10:20 AM

Oh, come on, P*A, no review of my fic? I'm really looking forward to seeing what you think of it so far...

Psychic*Absol December 10th, 2008 10:21 AM

^^;; Sorry, technical problems. When I wrote the last post, I was at university and I couldn't view fanfiction. net properly, so I thought I should try it on my mobile...but that didn't work either, so, yeah...>>;;;;
But now I'm at home and I can review. First chapter only right now. ^^;;;;

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to his wife Sabrina, who actually was the one who had the final say on whether an item would make it to the market.
Why doesn't this surprise me at all? *g* Sabrina's the in charge of this family, I suppose. 0=)

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given her sparkling record in matches over the last three years (only 3 total losses, all in the Pokémon League tournament
*glares at a certain boy*...poor trainers. I suppose the unofficial gyms around Saffron get flooded with them.

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“After all, a good trainer shouldn’t be so weak against one particular type that she’s scared of them.”

Sabrina gave Will a look of rage.

*g* Way to go, boy. 0=)

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“It’s because Dark types are evil!”
o,o I feel offended. I am a dark type...sorta. And I like them. Just as I like psychic types...

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Giselle would defend me,” he responded.

He then thought about his own comment closer. “Actually,” he added, “Giselle would have won.”

*g* I like it how the girls/women in your fic defend their boys/men/husbands. Very feministic. 0=)
And d'oh, Giselle's the brat champion, of course she would win.

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She stared down at her hands, which had a strange dark radiation emanating from them.

What is this? she thought to herself, quite worried about whatever this energy was.

Me knows! Me knows!...of course, I have read Chapter two, so...^^;;; But me likes that idea very much! ^^

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“Your blonde hair is so precious,” Lucian told Cynthia, running his hand through her hair.

*sighs* I so wanna be Lucian right now...but wth, you did not only include my four(!) favourite characters, but also made them a couple?!?! I love you, CPF!!!!! ^.^...ehm, platonically speaking, of course. XD

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she had been awakened to her psychic powers recently
Recently? o,o I remember her being a psychic for quite a while now...

Did you just kill almost all of Sinnoh's Elite Four? o,o Great...

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The entire inside of the building is empty now,
I wonder how 'empty'...Empty as in, no furniture and people, but still existing walls and floors or empty as in, pure black, nothingness...

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“We psychics can work together to beat even our biggest nemesis.”
*mumbles about how she's sorta a dual type*....

Edit: I just noticed...I guess little Roxette isn't born yet? 0=)

Crazy Packers Fan December 10th, 2008 12:27 PM

Thanks so much for the review, I feel like writing again! But yeah, this fic is set somewhere in between Sabrina and Will's wedding, and the epilogue that follows it. Some things have happened (Silver-Jasmine marriage, rebuilding of Violet and Mahogany), others haven't (Giselle-Joe marriage???). And I guess Cynthia "recently" becoming psychic is relatively speaking, mainly for those who know that she wasn't a psychic in the games.

Anyway the goal of the first chapter was for Sabrina to finally show something she feels weak against. That might be an ongoing theme...

Chapter 3, unwritten as of yet, should feature Falkner (and maybe Janine too).

Psychic*Absol December 11th, 2008 10:05 AM

^^ No problem. I'll review the second chapter asap. (hopefully tomorrow *sweatdrops*)
Hm, I noticed, after all, only about a year has passed (I noticed the age differences of the characters). Maybe some things will happen...
Meh, me not cares about Giselle&Joe being married...I don't like her. XD
XD! Maybe she should have been psychic in Platinum (would be another reason for me to buy that thing...).

...I'm not sure if I should like this plot idea or not...

^.^ Cool!

...I'm waiting for Zammy to return so I can finally post my Chapter 3 *annoyed*

Crazy Packers Fan December 11th, 2008 11:11 AM

I would say that not even a year passed, because remember Sabrina turned 21 in a chapter I wrote almost exactly a year ago (one of your favorites if I remember correctly). I'm glad to see you like Snazzyshipping (Lucian x Cynthia), and they should be a more prominent pairing in this story.

ToshiroSato December 11th, 2008 11:16 AM

Which Sabrina are we talking about? The anime Sabrina or the manga Sabrina.

I likes the manga Sabrina, she is so cool. You can count me in on this group :)

Alakazam17 December 12th, 2008 1:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Durial666 (Post 4186419)
Which Sabrina are we talking about? The anime Sabrina or the manga Sabrina.

I likes the manga Sabrina, she is so cool. You can count me in on this group :)

First off, welcome to the club!!

We talk about Sabrina in all her forms: Manga, Anime, Game, and our own FanFic versions. =D

And P*A, I am kind of free now. Though heh, I don't have Internet at home right now. However, I am going to see what I can do to change that over the weekend. And I hope to be around school then as well, so how about you email me that Chapter Three? ^^

I could even save it on disk and bring it home to beta-read. :D

Psychic*Absol December 13th, 2008 10:06 AM

Which is why I said 'about a year'. ^^ I dunno, I just got the feeling that it might be close to 'one year later', maybe because of the other characters and their birthdays...meh, me and my assumptions. XD
Yes, it was. 0=) I wonder if one of the new chapters will be able to beat it....

..I will review in my next post, but for now, I'm busy reading Chapter 3. 0=)

I like pairing my favourite characters (and, on the other hand, my not so favourite ones, too). Didn't know about the shipping name, though. Snazzyshipping, it is? Anyone care to explain to me what snazzy means? ^^;;;;

And now...*takes deep breath* ZAMMY!!!!
You're back, finally! No, I did not only wait for you because I want to post that damn chapter, no, of course not. 0=)
But thanks in advance, of course. Will mail it immediately. ^.^

Oh, and welcome, Durial666. Nice to have new members.

Crazy Packers Fan December 13th, 2008 2:30 PM

"Snazzy" is a word meaning fashionable, and it works because both Lucian and Cynthia have interesting tastes in fashion. It's probably American, definitely slang, but certainly the right name for the shipping.

I don't know if any chapter will ever beat Sabrina's engagement to Will... after all, they're married now, it's hard to get much more romantic than that.

Psychic*Absol December 14th, 2008 10:59 AM

*rubbing her cold fingers* Just came back from Christmas Market...cold, oh so cold...

Thanks for the explanation. ^^ I think it fits the shipping quite well. Both look great, fashionwise. (Although Will does, too.)

I think it would be wrong to assume that there is no romance in marriage, otherwise, people wouldn't stay married for so long (ehm, I know many don't, but well...). I think it's more of an 'everyday' romance and not as fiery and blazing as it was in the beginning.

Now, to the review of Chapter 2...

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as Giselle usually couldn’t go a few hours without bragging to him about something.
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As she reached out to grab Joe’s face and kiss him, he pulled on her right glove, taking it off. And when he did, he noticed something strange on Giselle’s hand.

“It’s… it’s a black hole!” he shrieked.
When I first read that, I did come as a surprise to me....because..Giselle? Dark powers? One the one hand, I do see her as dark enough, on the other...it's Giselle...>>;;
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He couldn’t keep his eyes off the purple-haired beauty in a bikini.
*g* No comment.
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“I still don’t know why you hate her so badly,”
*sighs* Don't get me started....
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Lance took the phone, looked at it, then turned it off.
I was already grinning here, imagining Lance's *SHOCK* impression. But...
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“Look, I finally figure out how to use a cell phone, and you do something like that to me!” she screamed.
THAT cracked me up. It really did. XD!!
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“Or, perhaps, if they cannot control them…”
*thinks*...

No I'm glad I know at least about Diamond and Pearl, otherwise I would have had to ask who Cyrus is. XD
That, and he appears in an episode with Cynthia...0=)
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On the screen before him appeared a league champion.

*A* league champion? Argh, could be anyone...let's see...Giselle? Eh, unlikely, though I would HOPE it is her (I'm a bit like Lance...) Steven? More likely. Cynthia...me not want. >< *kicks your former plot idea of Cynthia being the villain* Anyone I forgot? XD

Crazy Packers Fan December 15th, 2008 8:11 AM

Thanks for the review of the chapter... and yes, you're pretty safe in assuming it's one of those three league champions.

And don't worry, Sabrina and Will's romance is still strong, even now married... although I can't spring a surprise engagement chapter ever again.

Psychic*Absol December 16th, 2008 12:29 PM

Hm...so at least I 'guessed' right...I'll just have to see who out of the three it is (no telling me- I wanna find out by myself =) ).

XD Well, you can, if you make them divorce, then re-marry. But if that's romantic anymore...I doubt it.
At least the romance only (already?) started in my fic and can still very well bloom. ^.~ *insert obvious hint about new chapter/part of chapter 3 here*

Crazy Packers Fan December 16th, 2008 3:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4199553)
At least the romance only (already?) started in my fic and can still very well bloom. ^.~ *insert obvious hint about new chapter/part of chapter 3 here*

Awesome, I can't wait to see it.

Thomas December 16th, 2008 6:24 PM

I love Sabrina, I will have to join this club. I never join clubs anymore, but she was my favorite gym to battle in on Pokemon Blue, and one of my favorite episodes was her gym battle with Ash in the first season!

Alakazam17 December 16th, 2008 6:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Thomas-san (Post 4200613)
I love Sabrina, I will have to join this club. I never join clubs anymore, but she was my favorite gym to battle in on Pokemon Blue, and one of my favorite episodes was her gym battle with Ash in the first season!

Welcome to the club, Thomas-san! :D

Yes, Pokemon Blue...I was playing that when I first met her and fell in love. XD

And P*A, I assume you've found it, but in case you haven't, I'll tell you that I've emailed you the beta-reading stuff. ^^

Psychic*Absol December 17th, 2008 12:16 PM

@CPF and Zammy: Ehm it's right there. *points somewhere*...I mean I posted it. So I got your email. Without it, I couldn't post the chapter, right? Or could I? Ehm....

Welcome, Thomas-san! Another member! ^^ I own Pokemon Blue too (just don't ask me in which corner it's sulking right now), but when I first played it, my love was Mewtwo, not Sabrina. *sweatdrops*

Crazy Packers Fan December 18th, 2008 8:12 PM

I posted a review of your story, P*A, another great chapter. And I also posted chapter 4 of my story. It mainly features Giselle, but there is one scene with Sabrina and Will you may like.

Psychic*Absol December 20th, 2008 11:24 AM

Thanks for the review, CPF, I'll reply in the other thread.
First, I need to review Chapter 3, then (sometimes) I can come to Chapter 4...but I know which scene you mean and yes, it was soooo cute. ^.^

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In an instant, Janine appeared behind Jenny, holding a shuriken to her neck.
Maybe you noticed, but my Janine is much weaker. Hehe, maybe because I depict as still being a rookie. ^^;;;;
On the other hand, ninja girls who threat other girls are quite cool.
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I never saw him leave the building himself… I don’t know what happened to him.”

“He probably had his own escape route,” Janine replied.
Some kind of dark teleporting, I suppose.
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“He’s obviously innocent, and besides, he can help me in stopping the real criminal.”

“Sorry,” one of the officers replied. “Not until we’re sure of his innocence.”
Sadly, if I were the police officer in charge, I would think the same. >< No innocence proven yet. But you have to let the people go after a certain time, I remember. At least that's how it is in Germany.
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“That’s right, I created all of these, with my own two hands,” she remarked. “Am I happy about it? No. Did I have control over them? No. But this is the way I am now. You either love me or leave me.”
Whoe, that's the Giselle I know. (And hate).
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“We’ve got to do something to heal you.”
Reminds me of one of the X-Men movie plots.
I wonder why Giselle's dark powers only developed now...

Hm, short review. ><

Crazy Packers Fan December 20th, 2008 2:15 PM

Don't worry, lots of Sabrina coming up in Chapter 5. She comes up with an idea, and either she's brilliant or completely fooled.

Edit: Chapter 5 posted, very Sabrina-centric. You will NOT like this chapter, P*A, I warn you!

Psychic*Absol December 21st, 2008 12:48 PM

Too late, CPF, too late. >< I always check fanfiction. net before I check PC, so, yeah...
....
...I HATE YOU, KAREN!!! I SO HATE YOU FOR VARIOUS REASONS I DO NOT WANT TO NAME HERE!!!

I think Sabrina was both. >>;;;
And yet again you manage to overrun me. I haven't reviewed Chapter four yet and you post Chapter five...
And to continue with the bad news, Zammy's at home, where no internetz iz, so he can't beta read. Which he couldn't anyway, because Part 2 is not finished. ><
(On the 'bright' side, I have holidays now too, so I have time to write. I hope. And Christmas songs are so romantic inspiring...)

Crazy Packers Fan December 21st, 2008 1:11 PM

I promise you, if you review these chapters by Christmas Eve, I'll post Chapter 6 by Christmas, where (maybe) there will be a happier outcome for Sabrina over the holidays.

And yes, I went back to my original plot idea of Cynthia being the villain... you may end up hating her worse once all is said and done (*evil laugh*).

Psychic*Absol December 22nd, 2008 10:14 AM

o,o By Christmas? *looks at Christmas calendar* Ehm, two doors left...WAHHHHHH!!!! Two days for two reviews! x.x...okay, I'll take up the challenge!

...I noticed you were making her the villain. >> And I was not amused. Certainly not. But I'll try to deal with it.
I'll never stop loving her, I promise you. 0=) Stories are just fiction.

And now, review number four... I WILL MAKE YEAH, YES, I CAN! XD

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Giselle heard knocking on her door, again. She knew how much Joe loved her, and she really hated ignoring him. In fact, this was one of the few things she felt badly about, having to stay away from Joe, but it was for his own good.
You'll not make me like her, no, you won't. ><
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Sabrina not speaking up for him, he felt helpless.
lol....Sabrina not speaking for him. Typical Will. 0=)
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Sabrina giggled while Will’s face turned bright red.
Too cute...especially behind his mask. ^.~
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“Oh, sure, make fun of me,” he said. “Maybe I’ll just have James’s father repossess your ring.”
So she did get that ring in the end?
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Sabrina looked down at the large, beautiful, yellow-orange engagement ring Will had gotten for her well before their wedding. She knew how Will was hard at work trying to pay off the extraordinary amount it cost. So she gave him a little kiss on the cheek, knowing it would be enough to cheer him up.
Awww....see, romance can still exist in marriage!
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“We are meeting to discuss whether you shall remain as champion of the Pokémon League.
Am I the only one who thinks that removing her as the champion would do NOTHING about the black holes even if she was the one behind? >> Much better to get someone who could teach her to control them, methinks.
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“If we do choose to eliminate you as champion, you will no longer have your rights which allow you immunity from arrest,”
Cool. I think politicians have the same rights, right? *hides from her former politics teacher*
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“And just in case you do pull anything, we’ve got everything under control,” Lance added.
Gezz, Lance, in which way? >>;;;
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“You just cooked your own goose,” Agatha added. “By voting to remove your girlfriend, you just got rid of the one person who could save your position.”

“No! This isn’t fair!” Joe shouted.

Now this just makes me hate the other elite four. >>
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The Pokémon League, they all agreed, was now in good hands.
Me does NOT agree even though I very much like Cynthia. ><

Crazy Packers Fan December 22nd, 2008 10:21 AM

Thanks, P*A, and Chapter 6 promises to be an exciting one, at least the beginning of it. I figured it would be too hard to hide Cynthia's state as the villain forever, so I figured it was time I just gave it away. She doesn't seem so villainous right now, though, does she? Just wait...

Psychic*Absol December 23rd, 2008 10:23 AM

*assumes CPF just talks so much about Chapter 6 to tease her....* I'm not exactly immune to that.
Not? o,o Sneaking her way into two (!) league offices is very villainy, I think.

Chapter five now...
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“Giselle, our enemy?” Sabrina questioned.

“I never trusted her,” Will replied. “She was always so arrogant, it only figures that she’s the one behind all of this.”

On the one hand, I sorta wish Giselle was the one behind, on the other, you told me about Cynthia being the baddy, so yeah...>>;;;
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Sabrina stared at Will coldly.
Ouch. Romance gone. *g*
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reaching for her knee-high boots, which she began to put on.

“Ooh, the boots,” Will said. “That means you mean business.”

Me certainly likes this scene. ^.^
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“No,” he answered, causing Sabrina to groan.
lol. Another 'typical scene of that marriage' here.
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“I think you’re just jealous,” Will replied, getting an angry glare from his wife. “You want that position so badly, don’t you?”
Sounds almost like from my fanfic. *g*
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Will focused his mind on hers,
I guess he still can't teleport that well, hm?
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being greeted by the same person as before.
*coughCynthiacough*
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“Cerulean?” he asked. “Why there?”

“Fear tactics,” the person replied. “We need their gym leaders to panic.
Which isn't exactly hard, knowing, ehm, *cough* the three...
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“I’m doing a lot of work myself, mind you!”
Yes, of course. Kicking out Giselle is hard work, ya know?
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“What is this?” Giselle asked. “Am I being followed?”
Yes, Will and Sabrina are your new stalkers who want an autograph...*shakes head*
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“Oh, it’s nothing much,” Giselle replied. “I just got kicked out of the Pokémon League.”
It is nothing much. For me, for example.
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“What’s very clear?” a clueless Will asked.
The clueless wasn't needed here, as Will is always clueless *giggles*.
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“Someone with the dual powers, Psychic and Dark.
...My main character in my old fic, Amelie, is sorta one of these. She uses both Dark and Psychic Pokemon. Not to mention myself, who is a Psychic/Dark Absol...0=) Me likes this combination very much! Though I fear the first real Dark/Psychic pokemon will be ugly. x.x
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I still don’t know if you’re right about this, Will telepathically told Sabrina. If you’re wrong, we could be in a boatload of trouble.

I’m not, Sabrina replied. Trust me.

Everytime she says 'Trust me', Will should get alarmed.
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Fine, then, if it’s for the good of our land, then perhaps I will have to go above the law on this one.
Easy for her.
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“Where did your girlfriend go?” Jenny asked.

“She’s my wife,” Will replied.
“I don’t care!” Jenny shouted. “Where is she?”

“You expect me to know everywhere Sabrina teleports?” Will responded. “I could make a bet, though…”

Lol, just as funny as before, Will not knowing much about his wife...
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“Why should I?” Karen snapped. “Maybe I just want to stay here in jail.”

You know, even without the luxury she apparently has there, I can think of Karen as a person who would like to stay in prison. Dark attitude, I suppose.
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“Oh, so that’s it,” Karen replied. “Well, here’s a fact that you may want to know… he was my first love.”

“What does that matter now?” Sabrina snapped.

Considering that in Karen's eyes, Sabrina 'stole' her boyfriend...it does matter...btw, do you mind if I steal this plot element for a possible sequel of my current story? 0=) (If not, I have to think of another girl, but Karen fits that position just well...)
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The ball of dark energy engulfed Sabrina, and she found herself trapped inside.
Just a dark ball, not black hole, right? Right?!
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“Want to make a bet?” Jenny responded.
Lol, even Officer Jennies are teasing Will.
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If Will’s smart, he’ll get Karen away from here,
Sadly, Will is not that smart. *g*
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“Your girlfriend was helpless against me. You aren’t any stronger than her, are you?”
No, he isn't and I'm starting to hate this chapter.
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“You don’t know Lugia’s power, do you?” Melody replied. “Just wait and see.”
Now I'm intrigued, too. I want to know what Lugia has to do with this, of all the legendary pokemon...(wouldn't Darkrai be so more fitting?)

Phew, long review, but I managed. ^^ Now, Chapter 6, plz!!!

Crazy Packers Fan December 23rd, 2008 10:56 AM

Okay, Chapter 6 will be coming soon. Chapter 7 was written but then completely scrapped after I realized I was being too cruel and making Cynthia out of control. It will be rewritten after Christmas to make more sense.

Finding something that Sabrina's weak against isn't too easy, but that's sort of the point of the story, so that Sabrina actually has a formidable foe. We can't have her being all-powerful, can we?

Psychic*Absol December 24th, 2008 10:58 AM

Hm, well, making Cynthia quite powerful is not wrong, I think. She is a champion, after all, and quite a good one nonetheless.
0=) The last sentence proves this, I think. Now she's having a REAL fight. Hm, yes, I like that. Makes the victory even more wondrous. ^.^
You haven't answered my question. Can I use that plot element (Karen being Will's former girlfriend) in my fic, too? (Sorta, of course, she won't be his FORMER girlfriend...)
Short post, 'cause it's Christmas for me already. ^.^
Ehm, yeah...
HAPPY CHRISTMAS TO EVERY MEMBER OF THE CLUB, EVEN THOSE WHO HAVEN'T POSTED IN CENTURIES! XD!!!

Crazy Packers Fan December 24th, 2008 11:16 AM

Oh, absolutely. If it's in my fanon, it makes it even better if it's in your fanon. I originally had planned on Will and her being a couple, before of course changing it to PsychicShipping.

And I don't mean to be hogging up the group, I don't want Alakazam not to feel welcome... we need you to post too!

Psychic*Absol December 25th, 2008 10:26 AM

*back from playing with presents Christmas dinner* You only notice how many relatives you have once a year...
Really? Thanks, thanks! That way, I may have a plot up for a sequel...of course, the plot is very thin, but I've been writing a lot for the current chapter (part 2 is now over nine pages long x.x and VERY psychicshippy, you'll love it), so I think that story might be finished before my birthday and then, I may start the sequel....
CPF, you've really influenced me with your continuous sequel writing. XD
Hm, my original pair for him was Janine, then my original character and well, now it's always Sabrina. ^^ (with a bunch of fangirls behind, trying to rip her apart *g*)

Well, Zammy's home right now, so we've got the club for ourselves and we can talk about Psychicshipping as much as we want to. Zammy won't can't mind.

Crazy Packers Fan December 26th, 2008 9:32 PM

I look forward to seeing it, anything Psychicshipping is always a good thing. I'm not sure how long it will take me to write the next chapter, I'm getting worried that I can't get Cynthia right... either she's too powerful or too weak. I want her to be stronger than Sabrina, though, but not *too* much...

It's also awfully hard to write something "dark" with Pokemon when I'm playing the new Mystery Dungeon game, which is ten times as cute as anything in the normal games.

Psychic*Absol December 27th, 2008 9:30 AM

Part 2 is finished, just have to wait till Zammy comes back. ^.^ It's in the end thirteen pages long, but I was too laze to split it up yet again. XD So if everything goes right, Part 3 will be the last + possible epilogue + possible sequel. ^.~
And it ended up so full of shippiness that I fear Zammy will collapse once he beta-reads it...

Hm...hm....that's a serious problem. Making Cynthia too weak would look unreal and cheap, making her too powerful would make Sabrina look a bit helpless which isn't good for us loyal fans. I can't really give you any advise, giving advise to other writers is always fishy, because it's their story and you shouldn't mess too much with it. All I can say is that Cynthia should indeed be more powerful than Sabrina, because she's a league champion (okay, okay, Sabrina won once again her, but still) and a dark/psychic, very powerful opponent if you ask me. And she seems to be quite intelligent.

*lol* I know. Try to write a mature scene between two persons in Pokemon *hint, hint* is not easy at all.

Crazy Packers Fan December 27th, 2008 10:50 PM

It sounds really great, if it's got that much Psychicshipping. Now I'm hoping you'll review Chapter 6, because I had a feeling you would like the beginning part of it. You know, the return of the character who's become like a sister to Sabrina...

Psychic*Absol December 28th, 2008 11:53 AM

^^ Believe me, it has. I rewrote the end because I didn't like how it first turned out and now it's even more shippy-full, with a twist, though. ^.~ I'll give you a small hint...if a red rose is a sign of love, what is a black rose then? *hides*
Reason I didn't review before was because I feared the review would be too big for me to write it while online, so I copied the chapter and started to write it in word. ^^;;;; I'll post it now though.
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He helplessly just stood there, not knowing what to do, as his teleporting powers would not work.
He is a weak psychic, after all...*open mouth but refrains from saying anything about her fic*
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“Hello!” a cute little voice shouted.
After that line, I just knew it was Liza. And you know what? I had waited for her to reappear, cause I had started to miss the little brat teaser...0=)
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“Then let’s get this party started,” Karen remarked.
Got bad feeling about this...>>
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Sabrina, Will and Liza sat in the dining room of Sabrina and Will’s mansion, with the wife of the house giving a death glare to her husband.

“I’m sorry, okay?” Will said.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO....oh, poor, poor Will. Not. XD
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“She thinks that there couldn’t possibly be a stupider psychic in the history of psychics,” Liza told Will. “And she also wonders exactly how you would have paid for her ring if the two of you were trapped in those dark energy balls.”
Uhm, instalments? XD Uh, dear, so funny...
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“She thinks that you picked a very poor woman for your first ‘love,’” Liza added.

“We were just boyfriend and girlfriend, nothing special, okay?” Will said.
*Just* boyfriend and girlfriend? I think even that is stretching it...
And still, that paragraph was so funny I couldn't stop laughing. And so typical for them and their marriage. XD!
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“So would you!” Will protested.

“Don’t make me angrier,” Sabrina responded.
Otherwise? 0=)
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“Apparently Will’s old girlfriend is a member of a new Team Rocket.”

“Please don’t call her that,” Will requested.

“Karen revealed to me that-” Sabrina started to say.

“I know, I know!” Will shouted.

lol I can so imagine how Will is acting here, frantically trying to keep his wife from ripping his head off...*giggles*
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“But I can’t be friends with someone who’s ready to suck people into a black hole, can I?”
Oh, you can be everything if you try to...
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“Nothing,” Cynthia responded. “I’ve got it all under control.”
Very self-confident, she is.
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“You do realize that Dark-types are immune against Psychic attacks, don’t you?” Giselle lectured.

“What does that matter?” Melody asked. “Lugia’s stronger than any of those limitations!”

I doubt that. Okay, I did win with my espeon against Karen's umbreon because my pokemon was highly overlevel, but that was the game.
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“How strong could that possibly be?” Melody asked. “Surely they couldn’t hold that in forever?”
Depends on Cynthia's stamina, I suppose.
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Her own dark powers were able to deflect the power of the black hole, and she was able to cause the black hole to completely stop pulling them at all.
Whoa, Giselle's already getting stronger...
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2,125… 2,126… 2,127… 2,128. The last of the spectators walked into the building,
Whoa, Cyrus can count quite well, I would have given up by now. XD And so the real plan was to attack the water show and not only the gym leaders? Clever, clever.
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“Uh, like, excuse me?” a voice came from nearby. “Like, uh, what are you doing?”
Like, like, like...XD And Richie! My, I almost forgot about this guy. 0=)
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How is this helping Team Galactic, really? Cyrus thought to himself, as he helplessly was carried off to the Cerulean police station.
More like it's helping Cynthia. >>;;;
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He was placed in a jail cell with Fighting-type Pokémon holding onto his hands and feet to prevent him from doing anything.
Wouldn't a stell cell be less...um...difficult to arrange?
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“You’re probably right,” Lance replied.

“As always,” Lorelei said with a smile, mirroring another beautiful woman’s response to her husband.
*wide grin* 0=)
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“I wish my hatred of Giselle hadn’t blinded me from seeing through this plan,” Lance remarked.
*mumbles about her own hatred*...yeah, I like Cynthia more, but not as a villain...
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“Probably because… you’re right, again?” Will asked.
*falls down from her chair, laughing* Oh, Will, why even bother to ask?
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“Oh, come on, Will, I expect you to resist Sabrina’s ideas a little more than that,” Liza teased.
*g* No chance, absolutely no chance.
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Liza grinned. “Come on, Will, you scared?” she asked.

“Yes, yes I am!” he exclaimed.
No surprise here. Even though he should know that he gets into trouble every chapter by now. 0=)
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“So am I,” Sabrina added. “And when that’s the case, there’s reason to worry.”
Much surprise here. And yes, much reason to worry. ><

Crazy Packers Fan December 29th, 2008 9:54 PM

I guess it would have made more sense for it to be a steel jail cell for Cyrus... so thanks for the review again. Always fun to focus on the Sabrina-Will relationship with Liza finding a way to bother them. And I'm probably the only fanfic writer in the world who doesn't just squeeze Liza and Tate together as one identity, instead focusing just on Liza.

And of course Chapter 7 is up, though you probably realized that by now.

Psychic*Absol December 30th, 2008 9:16 AM

XD I know how weird it is, sometime you need reviewers to point out your flaws because you can't find them out yourself *coughs*.
There were moments in chapter 7 were I wanted to hug Liza...and moments where I wanted to strangle her. 0=)
Hm, I can't say I'm free of this crime. >< I mostly use their game characters, as the anime, uhm...well, let's just say I did not like at all how they were portrayed. And in the game, Liza & Tate are mostly one 'person', with their speech pattern and so...
I did notice. 0=) I'm not sure if I'll be able to review tomorrow, New Year's Eve after all....(and I have to cook. o,o;;;;;;;; Bring the antidotes, plz.)

Crazy Packers Fan December 30th, 2008 9:51 PM

I don't like Liza and Tate just being thrown together as one person, although that's pretty much how most people view them. I've made Liza Sabrina's "little sister" in a way, and she's found her way into the Saffron family. Maybe it's not too fair to Tate that his sister gets all the attention in my story, but at least he's not combined with her as one entity.

Alakazam17 December 31st, 2008 7:39 AM

Well, I'm back, folks. And look at all this Psychic-Shippiness that's been thrown around while I was away....XD

I didn't white write as much as I thought I would, heh. Ironically enough, I haven't been worked on a Sabrina-centric chapter....because I'm writing a Will-centric chapter! =O But of course, I shall be working on his evil side, making a certain someone want to poke his eye out. XD

And you can email me the new chapter, P*A. I promise not to collapse if you promise not to collapse from reading my Will-centric stuff. =D

Psychic*Absol December 31st, 2008 8:55 AM

Maybe it is shafting Tate a bit, CPF, but hehe, his sister is fun enough to watch. 0=) She really has become a member of this (weird) family.

@Zammy Well, if you're not around to restrain us...0=)
O,O You, writing a Will-centric chapter? *collapses* *g*
Certain someone? You mean yourself? 0=)

^.~ Already did. And no, I won't collapse (again). How could I, if you write about such a cutie as Will? ^.^

Happy New Year to everyone! (Probably will be my last post this year, if Zammy doesn't beta-read with the speed of light. 0=)

Crazy Packers Fan December 31st, 2008 12:46 PM

Nice to see you back, Alakazam. We've made things all nice and PsychicShippy while you've been gone, please feel free to join in the fun!

Psychic*Absol January 1st, 2009 10:41 AM

Happy New Year everyone again...*yawns*....stayed up till three am....*dozes off*...
Meanwhile, here's the review for Chapter 7, CPF.

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Lucian gulped. “Cynthia, you aren’t the same woman I knew when I first fell in love with you,” he remarked.

Then he smiled evilly. “You’re so, so much better,” he added, kissing her again.
Hehe, almost caught me there. For a second, I thought Lucian was going to break with her, but, of course not. 0=)
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“How will we know if there’s an emergency?” Will asked her.

“You’ll be able to feel it,” she replied.
Of course. ^.^ Teh cuteness!!!
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“This could be very dangerous,” she said. “It’s very possible… I could have something very bad happen to me.”

“Sabrina, don’t say that,” Will responded.

“I’m serious,” Sabrina continued. “Now listen to me… if anything happens to me you’ve got to take over the gym in my absence.”

“That’s crazy talk,” Will replied. “I’m not even thinking about it.”

Sabrina then kissed him on the lips.

OMG, omg, omg...so romantic! *dies*...but Sabrina didn't dare to say 'die', too...just that something may happen to her. And of course, nothing too emotional, just 'take care of the gym'. Typical Sabrina. But at the time, so unbelievably cute. ^^
Of course, Will's reaction is cute, too. He doesn't want to think of it...awww...
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“Why is she talking like that?” Will asked Liza.

“I think she’s just trying to scare you, that’s all,” Liza replied.
I, for one, don't think she is. o,o
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She had been blocking Cynthia from reading her thoughts; had Cynthia somehow read right through her?
*If* Cynthia's Dark/Psychic, then that's useless.
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He knew that Cynthia’s expressions were always the opposite of her moods;
Hm, interesting idea...I might use that aspect for my version of Cynthia, too.
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Cynthia gave a warm laugh, then smiled innocently at Sabrina.
Prove that she's ready to explode.
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“Why yes, Sabrina, it is me,” she told her.
When someone tells you that so freely, it's obvious they feel superior to you. And if you are Sabrina, or another damn strong psychic, then it's obvious they ARE superior to you...
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“They couldn’t,” Cynthia responded. “I allowed them to escape, because I still have hope for Sabrina, that she will turn to become my accomplice. She knows exactly how powerful I am now. She will not have any choice but to join me.”
Team Rocket tried the same several times and failed. That's one thing Cynthia is dumb about. Sabrina would rather die then let herself be used. *nods*
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“I saved you, Sabrina!” Liza exclaimed. “Aren’t I special?”
Remember that I told you there are scenes in this chapter I want to hit Liza with a big, big mallet? This is one of them.
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“If you can’t beat her, join her!” Liza joked.
This is another.
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Will groaned. “You just think everyone’s out to use you for your powers, don’t you?” he asked his wife.
I think she's right about that. >> Power corrupts.
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“You don’t know anything about Pokémon!” Giselle snapped. “Lugia’s a Psychic-type, utterly weak against Dark-types and Dark powers! Even the most powerful Psychic Pokémon is hopeless against a powerful Dark barrier!”
Ah, the good old brat Giselle with the ego the size of a Whailmer is back.
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“But what can stop her, then?” Joe inquired. “If Psychics can’t, and Fighting-types can’t, what can?”
Bug? 0=) Both psychic and dark are weak to it. I should know. >>;;;;; (arachnophobia...>.<;;;)
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It was a pretty bizarre scene in Sabrina’s house: Sabrina staring blankly into the distance, without an emotion on her face; Liza chattering non-stop into Will’s ear; and Will looking like he would rather be anywhere but here at the moment.
Very bizarre, indeed. o,o
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“You know, I’m starting to become powerful, I’ll soon be more powerful than Sabrina,” Liza said. “This Cynthia thinks she’s something, let me at her! I’ll show her who’s boss around here. There’s no way I’m letting her get away with this!”
Misty, your mallet please.
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“I know,” Sabrina replied in a monotone voice.

“Well, what are we going to do?” Will asked.

“I don’t know,” Sabrina responded, in the same voice.
o,o Scares me somehow.
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“Come on, show a little emotion,” Will said.
Well, it's Sabrina we talk about, and we know how she emotional she gets...on the other hand...
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He tried reading her mind, but she blocked him.

“Oh, what is it now?” he asked. “Why do this to me?”
Ah, just like the old times now. Will should be used to this by now, he's freaking married to this woman! XD
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“Karen!” Will exclaimed.

The very mention of the name was enough to snap Sabrina out of her emotionless spell.

“What’s the meaning of saying that name?” she snapped. “You still like her?”
*ggg* Sometimes, Will just has the perfect ability to say exactly the wrong thing.
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“How? By rebuilding Team Rocket?” Sabrina asked angrily.

Will thought about it for a moment. “Exactly!” he cried.
o,o Big, fat WTF?!?!? here.
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“Wait a minute, I make the decisions around here, right?” Sabrina asked.
lolrofletc. So quoteworthy. ^^
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“Liza, you’d better come,” Sabrina said. “Just in case Will gets us trapped in balls of dark energy again.”
...*after Will's plan failed and Liza got trapped in a dark ball too* Sabrina: *...*ready to rip his head off* Who's gonna save us now, hm? >>;;;; Will: *meep* XD!!!!!
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“Don’t become power-hungry, Liza,” Sabrina commanded.

“Why not, Sabrina?” Liza questioned. “I just want to be like you.”

“You don’t want to be like me,” Sabrina replied.

*nods* Not again, Liza. You had to be saved last time...(but if no one should want to be like Sabrina...me is not sure...)


Well, and now, just a small request...Zammy, if you have read the chapter and NOT died because of an overdose of psychicshipping, then send it, I know you're online (at least were when I started this post).
If you HAVE died, then...um...RIP. 0=)

Crazy Packers Fan January 2nd, 2009 12:26 PM

I hope you use that for your version of Cynthia... bonus points if you make Cynthia a villain!

Yet another case of Liza being annoying and energetic, while Sabrina remains emotionless (until a certain someone is brought up). I haven't worked on the next chapter, though, but I'll make sure I go to work on it soon.

Psychic*Absol January 2nd, 2009 12:37 PM

XD I'm afraid I won't try to get these bonus points...ehm, do I get any if I make her bad but not a villain? You'll see in which way (once I write that sequel and IF I already include Cynthia in there)....

XD Definitely. As if she's high on something... I guess Sabrina is quite jealous. Of course, if Will is stupid enough to WANT to go back to Karen (not in that emotional way, though)...
Chapter 3 b is also still on its way...>>;;;

Crazy Packers Fan January 4th, 2009 11:00 PM

Okay, BIG BIG bonus points if you make Cynthia what she's made herself in Chapter 8. Now I'm absolutely serious about Cynthia being power-hungry, and at the same time, the type of woman I'd love to date (minus the dark powers). Of course, there's no doubt that Sabrina hates this whole idea, which makes a Sabrina vs. Cynthia rivalry a reality at last.

Psychic*Absol January 5th, 2009 10:22 AM

You know where I read your new chapter today? At university! During a lecture! Hooray for mobile phones with internet connections and the uni's W-LAN. XD!!!
Ehm, yeah...I hope Sabrina doesn't kill Will when she wakes up again. Because I fear that she will. *ggg*
o,o I'm not so sure if I want my precious Cynthia (mind you, she's my second favourite girl!) that...immoral. I don't know, the way I describe her is already very dark (I can't tell you any examples or you would get spoilered, but let's say she doesn't care at all about the emotions of others) and I'm not sure if I can make her any darker without starting to turn her into a hateful character, which is something I don't want. >>;;; Let's just see how she turns out in the end...of course, I could make up a little rivalry between her and Sabrina, I have my ways...0=)
But...Queen Cynthia...anyone told you that this sounds quite sexy? XD
BTW, chapter 3 part 2 is (FINALLY) up. 0=)

Crazy Packers Fan January 5th, 2009 2:28 PM

This Cynthia you're describing seems like she'll be an awesome character in your upcoming story... of course mine is already villainous enough. I can't wait to see your review of this chapter... obviously Sabrina's about to kill Will because she's so angry, but before that, they found out how powerful Cynthia truly is.

Psychic*Absol January 6th, 2009 10:38 AM

Third rough day in a row...never before in my life I hated snow so much...x.x Well, I'm quite tired, so my review will be a bit shorter than usual. Sorry. x.x

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Silver and Jasmine sat in the living room of their house in Olivine City, enjoying a peaceful afternoon.
Whoa, had almost forgotten these two. ^^Nice you included them again.
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“Hello, you may know me as the new champion of the Pokémon League, Cynthia,” she announced. “But as of now I have a new title: queen.”

Lucian then walked into the room, placing a crown upon Cynthia’s head.

Wasn't there some guy in history who did the same? Napoleon? Sorry, my last history lesson was months ago...XD But cool. And have I mentioned that this title is quite sexy? Have I? XD
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How does someone just go and make themselves a queen? That doesn’t seem right,” Silver said.
The pokemon world's government is a joke, so...I would call myself lady or something, too...(btw, just noticed...in my story, I call Karen a 'queen'...whoa. double title once Cynthia appear! XD)
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“Maybe the time is right,” Jasmine remarked.

“It’s never right,” Silver mumbled.
Agreed. >>
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“If anyone should be queen, it should be me!” she exclaimed
*sighs* Same old Giselle.
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“I’ll gain back my position, and just for the sake of fairness, I’ll become the new queen of this land!”
>>;;; Not exactly a thing this land needs right now.
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“Yes, and we intend to join her!” Will yelled.
Right time for me to scream: WTF?!? again?
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Sabrina gulped as she looked down at the “R” on the shirt Karen handed her. What the heck is Will thinking? she thought. Doesn’t he know how much this hurts me?
>>;;; Have to agree, very unscrupulous from him. >> But sympathy is not a threat many men posses...

Not quoting the whole quarrel between Sabrina and Will, but...whoa. o,o This is serious. She's going to rip his head off. Or get divorced. Or both. Can't say that Will's plan was that smart, but I hoped myself that it would work some way (for Will's sake, as he's the one always getting overpowered by his girls[yes, I say girls, for Liza's as good as a member of this family ^^]). Now I can only say...omg, she's going to be pi angry when she wakes up. Very angry. Very, very angry.
Where are the atomic-proof holes, again? *gg*
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She pulled out a camera, snapping a picture of the five trainers.

“Well, isn’t that a shame, Team Rocket has been caught on camera, trying to invade the Pokémon League,” she said. “Now all the television networks will have something interesting to put on the air, a bunch of Pokémon trainers who tried to take down the queen.”

Ouch, ouch. Me not like this at all. ><;;;; Karen&Bruno deserves this, but not the three sweeties! ><

Crazy Packers Fan January 7th, 2009 5:55 AM

Hopefully I haven't made Cynthia *too* powerful, but I'm certainly making her stronger than Giovanni was last story. Obviously Sabrina will escape (right?), the question will be whether Will escapes after Sabrina's finished yelling at him.

Psychic*Absol January 7th, 2009 10:47 AM

No, no, not too powerful, just..uhm...power-addicted? Too power-addicted? But well, that's okay, I think. ^^
Sabrina *will* escape and Will will escape Cynthia too...it's rather the question if he escapes Sabrina! XD

Crazy Packers Fan January 8th, 2009 7:47 AM

So, do you like my new sig? I figured with a new story, a new sig was necessary... at least while she's in her current position. I don't think Cynthia is viewed as a villain in any other fanfics out there, so if someone were to see that sig out of context they may have no idea what it means.

Psychic*Absol January 8th, 2009 10:19 AM

^^ I noticed it (but forgot to mention it in my last post lol). Yeah, it's cool. Maybe you might include some song made by "Queen", *g*.
Hm, now, haven't seen such a fic yet, but then again, I only know a few other fics with Cynthia.
BTW, new question for the club (came up with this randomly): If you could be any one of Sabrina's pokemon, which would you be?
Which reminds me...have we scared Zammy off or why doesn't he use his high post count here? XD

Alakazam17 January 8th, 2009 1:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4262478)
^^ I noticed it (but forgot to mention it in my last post lol). Yeah, it's cool. Maybe you might include some song made by "Queen", *g*.
Hm, now, haven't seen such a fic yet, but then again, I only know a few other fics with Cynthia.
BTW, new question for the club (came up with this randomly): If you could be any one of Sabrina's pokemon, which would you be?
Which reminds me...have we scared Zammy off or why doesn't he use his high post count here? XD

I'd be an Alakazam, of course! :P

And no, you aren't scaring me, XD. I just haven't been finding any good ways to jump into the conversation. That is, until just now. ^^

Crazy Packers Fan January 9th, 2009 5:26 AM

I guess I'd be Abra, rather quiet and not so much of an attacker. I certainly wouldn't be a Mr. Mime!

Alakazam17 January 12th, 2009 8:01 PM

Hehe, I finally have a new chapter up. Will has a bigger part in it than Sabrina though! ;_;

As for your chapter, P*A, that's very high on my priority list(even higher than English homework :D). Will try to finish it tomorrow afternoon before I even start Chapter Twelve. ^_^

Psychic*Absol January 13th, 2009 10:36 AM

New chapter? With Will? Squeeewww...^.^ Will read asap. Will see if I can review it today (otherwise, tomorrow...or sometime).
XD!! Higher than English homework? I wonder if I should feel flattered or scolding you for that. Not my fault if you get in trouble, right? 0=)

Alakazam17 January 13th, 2009 1:41 PM

Hehe, it won't get my in trouble. I'm lax with English stuff anyways...and so is the prof! Considering what little homework I did(reading 3/12 chapters from the book), I still managed to be ahead of the majority of the class-professor included. 0=)

And hehe, the next chapter will have more Willies-and of course, some more Sabrina-esque stuff. But first, on to your chapter! I'll email it to you once it's complete, and then get cracking. :D

Psychic*Absol January 14th, 2009 12:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Alakazam17 (Post 4277268)
Hehe, it won't get my in trouble. I'm lax with English stuff anyways...and so is the prof! Considering what little homework I did(reading 3/12 chapters from the book), I still managed to be ahead of the majority of the class-professor included. 0=)

lol Similar to my English teacher, I guess. XD We talked about Japanese culture during course when we were supposed to talk about mental disorders....0=)
Not to mention my social psychology teacher...scripts =/= blank pages, Madam. >>;;;;;

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Originally Posted by Alakazam17 (Post 4277268)
And hehe, the next chapter will have more Willies-and of course, some more Sabrina-esque stuff. But first, on to your chapter! I'll email it to you once it's complete, and then get cracking. :D

*cracks up with laughter* Thank God you do not know what "Willies" means here in Germany...ahem....*gggg...*
Yeah, why is it called Sabrina's story again if there's like a dozens other characters? The only ones that are needed are Sabrina and Will.
Why get cracking? o,o *does not get*

Alakazam17 January 14th, 2009 1:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4279686)
*cracks up with laughter* Thank God you do not know what "Willies" means here in Germany...ahem....*gggg...*
Yeah, why is it called Sabrina's story again if there's like a dozens other characters? The only ones that are needed are Sabrina and Will.
Why get cracking? o,o *does not get*

Well I told you what Willies meant, so "to get cracking" means "to get started." :D

And I called it Sabrina's Story because it wasn't supposed to be a Crossover when I started it, XD. That just happened in the 2nd chapter, when I realized that the crossover story I had wanted to work on for so long would work much better with Sabrina as a main character. See, it was originally going to start with Naruto, XDD.

Psychic*Absol January 15th, 2009 10:07 AM

And I told you what Willis mean in German...don't you think you should edit your post now? XD It creates thoughts in my mind I so want to banish....
...now I know why it's called 'crack'...
*ggg* If it hadn't turned into a Crossover fic, then what? Just Will and Sabrina fighting again and again? (not as if I would have minded that so much...0=) )
And while we're on the topic of fanfics...on the bright side, I'll post chapter 3c after I finish this post. On the negative side, I think the sequel will be delayed. >> I still have no plot bunny for a sequel, even though I'm desperately hunting one. In contrast to that, I got attacked by one on the train, which might end up by me starting a new fic that has almost nothing to do with Sabrina *gasp, surprise, shock*, though I'm not sure right now if I will do that in the end or not. XD

Crazy Packers Fan January 15th, 2009 1:16 PM

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And I called it Sabrina's Story because it wasn't supposed to be a Crossover when I started it, XD. That just happened in the 2nd chapter, when I realized that the crossover story I had wanted to work on for so long would work much better with Sabrina as a main character.
Ha ha, I thought the same thing, why is it called Sabrina's Story? I guess it makes better sense with its new name, although I wonder how many people (outside our little group here) would pick Sabrina as the main character of a multi-universe story.

Which reminds me, I better go back and continue on my story. It's probably going to end up like my 2nd story with about 20 chapters or so... I'm my own harshest critic, so I already hate this story (usually it takes a little while for me to hate my own story, there are maybe only three of my FF.net stories I don't hate!).

(Edit: "Leader" is a swear word. Seriously, try putting it in your user title. It got ******-ed out.)

Psychic*Absol January 16th, 2009 10:17 AM

It got a new name? Man, I'm behing schedule...reminds me that I wanted to give my fic a different name, too. >>
Hm....hm...I think I did read a crossover fic- no wait, three!!! with her. Only one with her as the main character, though. (Crossovers were with Ranma 1/2, Dragonball and Harry Potter, iirc)
You should. >>;;; I've been waiting for it. *pokes*
Only 20 chapters is okay, I mean, I can't even write ten chapters...
XD Try loving your storis, that's the only way you can improve! *nods*
It is? o,o Hm, ruins my plan to make myself the Sabrina club leader. XD!
BTW, I can't see the pic in your sig. ;.; But I want to know what the hint is about, plz!

Crazy Packers Fan January 16th, 2009 10:22 AM

P*A, I just updated my sig, and my story, like within seconds of you posting. Chapter 9 is up!

And Sabrina's reaction to Will is so much different than you'd expect.

Psychic*Absol January 16th, 2009 10:29 AM

Thanks! ^.^ Now I'll think over the possible hint and its consequences and everything else...and....UPDATE?!?!?!? YAY!!!!!!!! ^______________^
Different? Oh, must read! XD I guess she doesn't rip off his head, eh? XD

Crazy Packers Fan January 16th, 2009 10:33 AM

Yeah, I decided to go in a different direction with Sabrina's response. Meanwhile, with this potential plot point, there are so many ways it could go, but one thing's for sure: Erika is now important, in some way.

Psychic*Absol January 16th, 2009 11:24 AM

>>;;; Fanfiction. net is quite slow. It only showed your update now...
The title already tells me alot. ^^
...hm, the little mind blocking thing seems to be a common problem in psychic/psychic relationsships. XD
omg....I find it so amusing that all it takes Cynthia to lose control is a kiss....better not go any further, Lucian....
*g* Omg, Liza....that's so typical of you....violant little spy...
Sabrina ending up ripping his head off= normal --> Sabrina not doing anything= not normal Conclusion: Will&Liza should be seriously worried.
Ouch. Yes, Will should better think before speaking.
I think I know who said person is. 0=)
Erika being in charge of the gym leaders is a manga plot, iirc.
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the one, Erika felt, could probably get everyone out of this mess.
Or not.
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“Sabrina, life isn’t all about gaining as much power as possible.
I doubt she grasps that...she is Sabrina, after all.
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That person may not have their powers fully developed now, but in time they will develop them and be able to use them to defeat her.”
Sounds like Giselle to me. Next paragraphs seem to prove me right. XD
No, no, no monarchy, plz. >>
*wants to slap Will* Oh, dear....sometimes, he's just dumb. Or insensitive.
Angry Sabrina= back to normal. XD
o,o Plan B?...
Yeah, took me quite some time to review...0=)

Alakazam17 January 16th, 2009 11:40 AM

"Leader" is banned because in the past people have used it to pretend they were mods. I found this out when I wanted to use it, heh. Likewise, you can't use "Moderator" or "Administrator." >_<

Crazy Packers Fan January 16th, 2009 3:12 PM

So even Sabrina needs a little bit of counseling from time to time, which is what this chapter was about. Whether she gives up on trying to stop Cynthia, and what Erika has to do with the whole situation, are other matters altogether. It's always fun for Sabrina to be upset at Will when he screws up, which she was, but I thought that it was worth showing a different side to Sabrina, one where she felt a little down because of not having all the power.

I figured that was the reason for "leader" not being allowed, though it seems to me that it's easy enough to tell who the moderators really are anyway.

Psychic*Absol January 17th, 2009 9:35 AM

While I agree that Sabrina can't always solve the problems alone, I'm not sure if I can like this new side of her. For me, it's really a new side, as I rarely see a 'weak' Sabrina and tend not to write about one, either. (If she's weak in my fanfics, it's because of being mentally unstable, not actually psychically weak. XD)
I suppose she'll fight Cynthia in a more passive way, like guarding Giselle, who (not to my pleasure) has a bigger chance of defeating the other champion. And what Erika has to do with that...no idea. XD I'll see what happens and judge later. XD

Crazy Packers Fan January 19th, 2009 5:51 AM

But if Sabrina was all-powerful and had no weaknesses, I don't think she'd be someone to cheer for. She'd be more like Cynthia, someone to cheer against. Remember my first story where Sabrina cried after losing, and it turned into one of the most romantic Will-Sabrina moments? It's definitely possible for Sabrina to show a different side and still be likable.

Psychic*Absol January 20th, 2009 12:06 PM

^^;;; I guess so...I guess the romanticness of the moment overshadowed Sabrina's loss so much I didn't care for it much. (It was a great romantic moment, I might add. I miss these...okay, we just had another great moment when Sabrina was telling Will to take care of the gym...argh, I'm a helpless romantic when it comes to these two. >>;;; [And other, special pairings.])
Or I might have been influenced a bit too much by 'Grapsing the Moon'...>>;;;
BTW, final chapter will be up tomorrow. ^.~ Special date, ya know?

Crazy Packers Fan January 20th, 2009 1:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4297235)
^^;;; I guess so...I guess the romanticness of the moment overshadowed Sabrina's loss so much I didn't care for it much.

You didn't care for it much? ... So you didn't like it?

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4297235)
I miss these...okay, we just had another great moment when Sabrina was telling Will to take care of the gym...argh, I'm a helpless romantic when it comes to these two. >>;;;

Actually I originally planned for Sabrina to be captured in that case for a longer period of time which would have made Will actually have to take over the gym for a while, but I completely junked that chapter.
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[And other, special pairings.])

Which ones?
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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4297235)
BTW, final chapter will be up tomorrow. ^.~ Special date, ya know?

Special date? What possibly could be special about it? Give me 19 guesses...

xMeowthz January 20th, 2009 7:16 PM

I like Sabrina; She's my fav. gym leader of all time:cool:

*joins the group*

Alakazam17 January 20th, 2009 7:31 PM

Hehe, I wholeheartedly agree with that statement. :D

Welcome to the club, From The Depths Of Dreams.

And Happy Birthday, P*A! :P

Psychic*Absol January 21st, 2009 10:54 AM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4297480)
You didn't care for it much? ... So you didn't like it?

I meant 'not care' like 'not being too depressed about it, not crying over it, etc.'. I loved it, but I didn't end up frustrated and thinking of different endings *cough like with Grasping the Moon cough*.

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4297480)
Actually I originally planned for Sabrina to be captured in that case for a longer period of time which would have made Will actually have to take over the gym for a while, but I completely junked that chapter.

Whoa. o,o I don't think that would have been a bad idea, no, not at all. Rather great plot idea! ^^

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4297480)
Which ones?

Too...many...Cynthia x Sabrina, Sabrina x ocs, Cynthia x ocs, a bit Abilityshipping...

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4297480)
Special date? What possibly could be special about it? Give me 19 guesses...

lol Zammy already spoiled it.

Crazy Packers Fan January 21st, 2009 1:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4299950)
I meant 'not care' like 'not being too depressed about it, not crying over it, etc.'. I loved it, but I didn't end up frustrated and thinking of different endings *cough like with Grasping the Moon cough*.

Oh, okay. That's what I thought you mean, actually. It was one of my favorite moments that I've written, right alongside Will's proposal.

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4299950)
Whoa. o,o I don't think that would have been a bad idea, no, not at all. Rather great plot idea! ^^

Yes, but I think I was a little too cruel to Sabrina in the junked chapter, and made Cynthia a little too powerful, so I changed it to be nicer to Sabrina.

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 4299950)
lol Zammy already spoiled it.

I knew it, too... why else would I ask for 19 guesses?

Kay Ryu January 21st, 2009 1:54 PM

woooo Sabrina~ Count me in

Crazy Packers Fan January 21st, 2009 1:57 PM

Welcome, Kay Ryu!

By the way, Alakazam, I always knew you were a Psychicshipper... and I'm saving your story just so you can never say you weren't one. That was awesome. Somehow though I think Sabrina's one of those girls who wouldn't wear a bikini, I'd think of her as more modest... though she does wear those knee-high boots, so maybe not.


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