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I don't think that she was exactly under the doll's spell, because, hm, I think she sorta 'created' the doll herself (like in the fanfic). So I don't exactly think that the doll was 'evil', either. If there's one that was evil, it was Sabrina herself, but adjectives like 'evil' can't describe someone who has lost his feelings completely. And since ten years (+/- a few years) are a long time, we can assume that this will influence her later life...
Depressing thoughts, aren't they? *goes to corner where CPF thinks about his current Sabrina* |
Well, how about some positive thoughts? As in, I don't know, a new chapter?
I think you'll like this one. It's a very Sabrina and Will-centered one. Something about a wedding... |
...I was thinking today about posting "When will the next 'beep' chapter come out?!?!?" and then I went to ff.net....and went blank...and...5...4...3...2..1...
*happiness explosion* And you know what? Right know as I'm posting, I'm reading as well, so...I'll read and review at the same time! XD (Which makes the review quite longer...) *stares at title, giggles and tries to get bad thoughts out of her mind* Drug abuse, anyone?! XD ...btw, did we ever get to know anything about Will's parents? I know from the manga that he's an orphan, you said so in your fanfic too, but Blue also found her parents later, not to mention Silver... *imagines Sabrina nervous* XD She's probably getting on the nerves of the other girls as well... Liza knowing what she's going to do is a paradox in itself... I bet Liza's gone missing. >>;;; Would fit her. .....XD!!!!!!!!!! The scene with Will was great. Hope he doesn't fall asleep during the ceremony, too...0=) o,o Will likes Sabrina worrying? Okay, the tables have turned... No, Silver, you don't want to understand Will. You're going to understand him once you're going to be married, too... Tate's just like his sister. Sibling's genes, I guess. Then, who paid for the rings? Sabrina, her parents, Frodo,...? *LotR joke here* Awww, just like in my fanfic. ^^ My husband for her also takes her last name. ...eh, what was Will's last name before? o,o() I knew Liza was going to make a big show out of her disappearence...>>;;;; ...isn't there any other song than just "Here comes the bride"?...I remember that I used another song in my fanfic...a *cough* modern song...(techno, rock and all the stuff...XD) If the judge's not psychic, there's a lot he's going to miss. ...*smiles* I also skipped a lot of the judge's word. (Because I don't know what the heck he's supposed to say...*hides*) Awwww....the kiss!*wipes tears from eyes and falls into Zammy's arms, who's already dieing inside at the sight of Sabrina and him getting married* O,O Kids?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Oh, uh, eh.....^^;;;;;;; *jumps into wedding cake* Not a Cubone, but an Absol this time! XD Jippie!!! ^^ Shirona did appear!!! Easy to find Giselle, really easy...and if you follow the trail of nosiness, you're going to find Liza. XD *stares at Steven and Tabitha....* Sharing, maybe? Awwww....another wedding! *jumps again into the cake* ....*sniffs* I'm the third-most happiest person in the world right now. ^^ (And Zammy's the unhappiest, but who cares?) Please hurry up with the epilogue!!! ^.^ |
I sort of knew you'd like this one... of course, being the self-critic that I am, I can only think "it could have been better"... but I think it turned out okay, I guess. Maybe I'm just sad that it's all ending... it was a lot of fun to write the dialogue between Sabrina and Will over the course of these stories, I'll say that. As for the epilogue, I want to put some time into it in making it a worthy ending, so it may not be up for a little while... sorry...
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D'oh...not hard to guess that I would like this chapter...^.^
I'm no better, I think...authors are their best and worst ciritcs. I can imagine...XD These two are fun to read, too. It's okay. ^^ I can wait...I hope I can wait...I'll just have to force myself to wait... |
This chapter probably won't be for a while... I want to make sure I get it right. After all, it is the last one...
It's kind of hard for me to imagine Sabrina and Will married, actually... it just seems like it all happened so fast... and yeah, I know I'm talking about my own stories, but I guess I can surprise even myself. |
Like I said, I'll force myself to wait...I don't have another choice, have I? ^_^
XD You're talking like some parents do when their kids marry...it's all happening so fast, one moment they're small and next, they're married and stuff. But heh, they're adults, and you've been writing on this story for more than a year now, so it's not happening that fast... You should hear myself talking about my stories...generally, when I wrote a good one, I didn't know more than bits of the plot before. For example, when I started to write "Discovering..." I only knew that the child would be a girl and I knew how Sabrina's past should look like. The rest was all surprising, also for me. (Not to start talking about my big story...I bet more than 400 pages out of the 540 were written spontanously...) |
I can't believe what I just saw. I was reading my own story on FanFiction.net, when it hit me: FanFiction.net took out all the nice little ----------'s that I used to separate different sections of each chapter. So all this time I'd been thinking that my story had nice, separate sections, while it hasn't. So I'm sorry to have made you read chapters where different parts of the story run into each other with no warning, as that was never my intent.
Now see, this is one mistake Sabrina never would have made. It would have been nice to borrow her psychic power for this instance. |
Hm, ff.net's been known for eating up formatting, I know...most forums aren't any better. (Which is why I look up my stories after posting them...something always goes wrong.)
But since I didn't know that they were supposed to be there, I didn't miss the lines, I guess. ^^ It wasn't that confusing to see the different parts. Yes, sometimes it would be very useful to have them. XD No need to study for big tests anymore, just read the teacher's mind... |
Well, that's good to know, that you weren't confused. It probably would have made things easier with the lines, but oh well.
Of course, with powers like Sabrina's, maybe life would get a little too boring... knowing things before they happen would be awful for a sports fan like me. So, I'm going to give you a look at something related to my story's epilogue... it's the bracket for the Pokemon League tournament that ends up taking place. Maybe you can even try to pick who you think will win... but anyway, here it is: 2008 Pokemon League Tournament |
Yeah, I think with the lines, it would have been easier to see where a new part starts, but the context makes it quite clear, too.
Depends again wheter one thinks she has the power to look into the future or not...and, if she indeed has these powers, if she intends to use them. *checks link* O,O Uhh...looks confusing. But I'll try anyway...Sabrina winning against Daisy is a given. (If it's anime Daisy.) Chuck and Morty...fighting and ghost. Uh...I'll just be random and say that Morty wins, because I like him more. XD! Conclusion: Sabrina would have to fight against Morty...uh...in my fanfic, she fights him and wins, but that's because she has a (hacked) espeon...I should make such a bracket for my fanfic, too... And out of the other four...Agatha as an experienced Elite 4 trainer is likely to win, same with Ritchie. He doesn't have any water/plant pokemon that I know of, but he'll win against Roxanne, I think. So then, it would be Agatha versus Ritchie...hm, tough decision, but again, I'll say Agatha wins. Age beats youngster. XD (Which would mean that either way, Sabrina has to fight a ghost trainer...uh....) |
Once the chapter is complete, I'll relink to it, where every match's result will be given. Of course, the winner of the tournament will be revealed anyway, but that's just a little bonus, as I won't go into detail of every match like I did in my first story.
Of course, I put up the top trainers against some of the worst, which is why Giselle and Sabrina go against Cerulean sisters. It turns out that adding the Sinnoh trainers didn't give me too many for the tournament, because several of them either got killed off (Blaine, Aya) or kicked out (Karen, Bruno). I'll say this, though: no chance Sabrina goes down in the first two rounds, for sure. |
Cool. ^^ I already tried to find out who the winner could be (my final match was Cynthia versus Silver- but only because I wanted to kick out Giselle as soon as possible and because I made Sabrina lose against Agatha XD). Going into detail again isn't necessary, I think. You don't want to write +40 chapters again...0=)
Normally I would say that isn't fair, but I'll keep shut this time...after all, it is Sabrina going against Daisy --> Sabrina will definitely win. ^^ You know, there are two trainers I'm missing: Will and Ash. Will, well, I can understand ( or at least I have my guesses why he isn't competing). But Ash? Is there something that happened to him I forgot? ^^;;;; |
Sorry, my computer's been down for a while, so I haven't gotten a chance to reply... I guess we'll just have to find out why those particular trainers aren't in it when the final chapter rolls around... and that won't be until I get my computer back from repair (hopefully my story won't have been accidentally deleted...).
Cynthia vs. Silver, though... that's not a bad prediction... |
Aw, I'm sorry. I know how hard it is to be without internet connection/computer. ...after all, I had to survive a week like that, too...*sighs*
And Zammy's not posting either...he's afraid of Will, that coward. XD *nods* Yes, we'll...WE'll....? You're the author, you should know!!! I'll have to wait, but you should know... I just hope you get your computer back soon. I know I can wait, I am patient, but it is the last chapter...the very last chapter...>< I don't know anymore what my prediction for the semi finals was, but I think it involved Lance...hm... |
The real reason why we will find out why Will and Ash didn't make it is... I forgot them. There wasn't any good reason for them being left out, I just simply forgot them, and didn't realize it until you said so. But instead of going back and changing the whole bracket, I'm going to conveniently think of some excuses of why they missed the tournament.
(Oh, and by the way: spoiler alert... clicking the link to that tournament bracket will reveal the winner... so be careful...) |
Offtopic: *pokes Zammy* I *KNOW* you're online, so post!!!!! >>
XD!!!! Well, at least I reminded you...maybe you can include Ash as the host, or the presenter, or...the pizza boy. And Will...hm, maybe his wife forced him to stay out, as she wants him to run the household (or alternatively and more romantic, she doesn't want to battle him). ...argh, now you're being mean! I don't know if I should click and spoil myself or not...><;;;;;; |
Actually I filled out the bracket with all the winners because I was in the middle of writing it and I wanted to make sure I got everything right in the story, before my computer with the story on it went down and forced me into writing hibernation. I'm only telling you that so you don't go back and look at it and find out who won by mistake... unless you want to, of course.
The reason Will does not enter will be neither of those... you'll just have to find out when I get my computer back... |
I'm baaaack! It's holidays for me, so I have penty of time to chat about Sabrina...
How did you guys miss me? XD :P Oh, I just realised something... You know how Abra is quite had to catch because of Teleport? What is the best method of catching an Abra in Pokemon FireRed? I have an Arbok on my team, but it still escapes. And how did Sabrina get Abra as her first Pokemon? I think maybe her parents gave her one before she became a gymleader XD |
I'm still not sure if I want to...depends on how long I have to wait for the next chapter. If I decide that it's too long even for a patient person like me, I might just take a look at it...
Hm...I don't want to go into the more depressing corner and say that he might be ill, or missing, or dead, or...dead is worse enough. >> Maybe he's just not in the mood to fight. XD XD! Right now, I'm rather missing Zammy...*pokes him again* By the time he'll return, he'll have a sore side. Actually, I can't remember how I got my abra...I suppose I made him asleep so he could not use teleport. As as for Sabrina...maybe psychics have their own way of catching their pokemon. |
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And on another note....ouch, my side hurts. XD And on another another note, I have good news and bad news, followed by some potential good news: 1) I updated a fanfic! foxomg 20th sign of the apocalypse! 2) Sabrina is not in the update! *hides as P*A pulls out grenade launcher* 3) I'll be putting Sabrina in future chapters if I don't get killed by P*A in the meantime. *still hiding* And yeah, glad to be back, XD. Lemme be active again, Willies or not. ^^ |
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So I'm sorry I haven't posted lately. I got my computer back, so it's only a matter of time until the final chapter is posted. I was at an anime convention this weekend... I saw Ash, Misty, Brock, Pikachu, Plusle, Minun, even Suicune... no Sabrina, though (not like I expected to see her).
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*dances around* Yippieh!!! Now I don't have to wait much longer! Since no other fanfic was really updated meanwhile, I was quite bored...*pokes Zammy* You know why! >>
Hm, let me think...in three years, I saw Ash, Misty, Jessie, James (a very femine version of James o_o) and Pikachu. Well, not much (and of course no Sabrina...although, whith my hair being longer now, I guess I could cosplay Sabrina if I wanted to...). |
Pokemon was surprisingly popular, I think there was even a Richie there... and quite a few girls as Pikachu. One of them even had a big plush Master Ball.
But anyway, can you think of any Sabrina topics? Or have we absolutely used up every single possibility? |
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