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Well, I suppose the funny parts were not really consciously intentional, but rather just...happened. They'll continue to be there, though. Can't stay away from my writing style.
^.^ Another reason for me to wait all the two weeks+. I hope you're right, but almost everything is better than a half-dying, wounded Sabrina (okay, almost everything- a dead Sabrina is of course worse). Yayayayayay!!! Another part makes me really, really happy! (I had a feeling that you wouldn't stop here, but knowing it for sure now is definitely good!) Hm, now I wonder what the plot will then be about! ^^ |
Haha - this is cool ^^ Sabrina was always my favourite - Abra and family & Ghastly and family are my favourite pokemon too, so I guess it goes hand in hand? :D
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You're welcome to join, Starom, as are all! (Speaking of which, when will Alakazam return? Please come back!)
Two weeks? You don't have to wait more than two minutes... I gave in and copied my story from ff.net to my mom's computer, and thus wrote Chapter 15 there. So, unless this computer goes down too (knock on wood), I'll keep on writing. Sabrina-centric chapter, BTW, and of course I know you'll love this one. |
Welcome, Starom! Have fun here, post a lot and stay as insane as possible. 0=)
Well, Zammy is online (not right now, but I talked to him several times over the last days) and I told him he should post here again. Which he didn't. >> Hmpf. Since that's ontopic...small announcement. Due to problems with the phone company, I might not be able to get online for 2+ days, starting tomorrow. ;.; Sorry about that. Did you post that chapter already, CPF, because you said 'two minutes'? If that's the case, then I seem not to be able to see it on ff. net. >< |
That's strange, because I can see it... I wonder why the new chapter isn't showing up for you. I hope it shows up soon.
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Even stranger, when I try to access it through your ff. net profile, it works. It doesn't when I just browse through Pokemon.... Hm....nevermind, I got it now. ^^ Review now or after my possible downtime? XD
Edit: Just started reading....GOD I KNEW IT!!!!!! XD I'M PSYCHIC!!!!!! (ehm, okay, sorta) ^^ Yes, we're going to see little Roxette now!!!! (one day) Zammy will...ehm...be angry? XD |
I guess I must give away too much, because you were able to guess it. We won't actually see the baby until story #5, but at least we know it's coming. And yes, apparently Sabrina does not have the power to foresee her own pregnancy.
Edit: Chapters 16 & 17 are up, 18 is written, and I'm thinking about writing #19 right now. Oh, and look at my signature. I'm beginning to like her more and more all the time (so much that I'll let her win???). |
XD *takes a bow*
Wow, I guess I was missed, eh? Well I guess I didn't really know what to say as of late. I am really bad at reading(and to a lesser extent writing), heh, but I'd like to get caught up on your work, CPF. From what I hear from P*A, it's getting interesting(despite imminent PsychicShippiness =P). As for Multiverse Chronicles, I am partially through the next chapter, and I hope to finish it up shortly. Thing is...I'm sick at the moment, and I tend to dislike writing while I'm coughing up junk. >_< And as for the Japanese in your sig, I know the last three katakana letters say "Shirona," but I can't make out the first two. =P |
The Japanese was a little blurry; I tried changing the color to make it clearer. Maybe now you can take a guess...
I'll be looking forward to seeing where Sabrina ends up next in your fic. I know she was with Naruto recently, and it ought to get even more interesting now that she's met him. Meanwhile, I went nuts writing today and wrote three chapters, including the penultimate one, where someone's gonna die I won't spoil it yet. I'm going to wait to post each chapter until P*A gives me a review on each, because it's more fun that way. I already got too far ahead of her as it is. |
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Hm, she hasn't met Naruto yet, but that'll come soon. My next chapter is actually going to stray away from following one character for its entirety, instead focusing on nearly everyone for a short bit. And while I may get on it tonight, I'll probably do it tomorrow(hoping I'll feel better then). |
Well, truth be told, I don't know how to pronounce what I typed in there myself. I just plugged in a certain word (*hint hint*) and I copied what came out.
I hope you feel better; I want to see your story! |
See there, the P*A is back. =D And as soon as I re-appear, the psychicshipping-hater (aka Zammy) is back, too....carnival is getting to me I know.
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Continuation in next post, as this one might seriously get too long. >< |
Haha, quite a review you have there, P*A. *is danced upon*
And I'm writing Chapter 16 now myself, and I'll hopefully have it finished this afternoon. =D And I assume it means "Queen Shirona" then CPF. =P |
^ afternoon? It's almost night for me. *ggg*
Yeah, continuation now...x.xGod I feel tired, but I want to finish this so I can read new chapters so CPF feels happy. ^^ BTW, I overread this first...SOMEONE'S GONNA DIE???!?!?!?! OH NOES!!!!!! O.O *faints* Quote:
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*sighs and faints* Finished. Seven pages in word. Next chapters please. |
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On other matters, yes, it does say "Queen Shirona," as she would love to be called. Have you noticed that Erika always calls Cynthia "Queen Cynthia"? If you haven't, it's a good time to point that out right now. The epilogue has been written, so this one is as good as done. I've got to keep on this writing kick and start the fifth one as soon as possible. It'll be really clear from the epilogue where the series is going. |
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Oh, and I can't wait to see Cynthia pop up in your fic. Will my Cynthia have an effect on the way you wrote yours? That'll be so interesting to see. |
^^ Okay then. I have scipped over chapter 18, and I have to say, I started to 'hate' it when I saw the title and that only continued. >>;;;;;
(DON'T KILL LIZA&WILL PLEASE!!! XD) I have seen Star Wars Episode one, but the chance that I know the title is slim. Probably not. ^^;;; I have my own image of Cynthia and that one won't be destroyed so easily. BTW, her first appearance will be in Chapter two. Together with Lucian, too. I rather think the way you described Will& Sabrina influences my story quite strongly. Actually, that's a bit sad, I hoped I could make them a bit different, but well, maybe I manage that over the sequel...lots of backstory for Will there, btw. ^^ |
Keep in mind, I like Cynthia. Or more accurately, I love Cynthia. So my intention isn't just to make her some supervillain with no feelings. That's why I include all her love scenes with Lucian... she really cares for him. And as you may have read, he really cares for her. But she is a little power-hungry too, and that hunger for power could lead to something bad happening to someone... all that, coming up (possibly) tomorrow.
BTW, Alakazam, I'll read your next chapter pretty soon. |
Dear CPF, did you wait for me or why are you online now? XD Nah, just kidding. It's actually a first for me to go here before checking all the other forums...today with reason, of course.
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All right, I'm glad you like it. The highlight of this chapter was writing about Lucian's love for Cynthia. I was trying to explain why he lets her have the power, and basically why she even lets him hang around. She really loves him, and I hope her humanity isn't lost in her evilness.
Now for the most important chapter in the whole story... Chapter 19. |
^.^ Well, I don't want to spoil it, but with thinking about why and how Cynthia loves, you've come quite close to my story, too. (man, either Zammy gets onlien today or I'll post that thing without beta-reading. >>)
I'll read the chapter once it's up. ff. net is quite slow again today. >> I've thought about who could be the one who dies (if there's anyone who does), but so far, I haven't really found an answer. It can't be anyone who appears in the epilogue, and that are quite a few persons. The only ones I can't spot so far are Karen and Lucian....hm... I'm surprised I never asked this....do you actually like my reviews? ^^;;;; I try to put effort in them, but since I have my own style of reviewing, I assume not everyone likes it.... |
No, I love your reviews. I write each chapter just hoping to see how you're going to review them. Seriously, if you didn't review, I wouldn't want to write as much. So please, please keep reviewing!
Oh, and very important: you must remember that this story occurs "half-past" the epilogue. The Pokemon League tournament actually occurred before this story. The only thing that occurred during/after this story was Roxette's birth. |
*blush* Really? Thank you so much! ^.^
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Finished. ^^ |
So no one died, I just threw that in there to throw you off. Maybe next story someone important will die, in this case all we lost were three Sinnoh Elite and a bunch of police officers and about 100 people in the Celadon Department Store (that's all!). Poor, poor Cynthia, I feel so bad for her ending up like this, but remember: another story's coming up. If she's not dead, then obviously she has a chance at returning... and when she does return, I think you'll have a soft spot for her again.
Originally she was going to get poisoned, put to sleep and possibly cut by Janine, but I decided she was too beautiful to have those things occur to her. Her crying in jail while thinking about Lucian is just so cute... see, it's possible to love a villain, after all. She really loves him, and next story you'll see how much. And yes, Liza and Will survived. It's a big chapter for both of them in the epilogue... we know Will's becoming a father, what big thing is happening for Liza? You'll see in the epilogue, which is pretty much a bridge to story #5. I'll start writing it probably on Monday. The epilogue will be posted tomorrow. |
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