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...*does not want to comment*....XD
Okay, okay, enough people that died. though I did not care in the least about it Yeah, another story, another chance for her. 0=) Although, if she gets another chance...hell on earth, I suppose. She won't be brought down again that 'easily' again, so on the one hand, I don't want her to suffer so much, on the other, her being free is quite dangerous for the other characters. Quite dangerous. XD Good, I'm suddenly reminded of Snowwhite (sp?), or Sleeping Beauty....Cynthia kinda fits that role. I'm not sure if poisened or put to sleep would have been a worse fate. At least she could be together with Lucian (in death...how romantic...). I never said it's impossible to love a villain (or did I?). Though....since she threated my Sabrina so bad....I feel not so well when thinking nicely about her. Hm, so Roxy will be born in the epilogue, nice. 0=) Wouldn't have minded if there were some chapters inbetween (pregnant Sabrina is fun to write about...see Discovering), but I'll see how/if/whatever I'll like it. And how Roxy's character will be like. If baby's have a character. *g* Something big for Liza? hm....hmn....hm.....her brother returning? Getting a boyfriend? Getting into Elite? I don't know, I'll have to see. Tomorrow. ^^ |
Liza's already in the Hoenn Elite, if you'll recall the last story's epilogue. She replaced outgoing Drake, who retired. So it's something else...
And Cynthia being free will be... well, interesting. That's if she gets free, right? And boy will it be interesting when if she does. I'll give you some hints about story #5: it's going to focus more on a land I haven't paid much attention to. It's going to have a title very similar to one of the Lord of the Rings books. And one thing you suggested is going to happen... wait and see what it is! |
^ Kanto Elite Four, I meant. When you recall how much time she spends with Sabrina & Will in Kanto, she can go for Elite there, too, I suppose...
*glances at crossed out word* .....no, I won't say anything. I want to see Cynthia free and yet I don't For a second I wanted to scream 'Orre', but then I was reminded that there are a whole bunch of lands now...what's the ranger's land called again, Almia? And that mysterious pokemon world in PMD....omg, too many to guess. x.x o,o.....*lightbulb* Return of the Queen King? (Thank God I watched at least the movies) Oh no~~~...... I'll go with both. XD Liza is fifteen, she's old enough for a boyfriend. *ggg* Question is...who? 0=) |
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Anyway, sorry that you won't get to see Sabrina's baby today, or anything else, because fanfiction.net is experiencing a "technical glitch" that won't let me log on. So that epilogue won't be up until ff.net gets their act together. |
Yeah, onto straciatella flavoured ice cream...*coughs*
*glares* I've stayed up for three hours (though PC logged me out) and then...*sighs* Well, okay, at least two other fics got updated today. And for me, ff. net is working, though I'm no member, so that doesn't say anything... Edit: I guess since we both are a bit annoyed, I might cheer you up with saying that I'll post chapter two now after finishing this post. |
Oh, all right! I can't wait to read it... please tell me my sweet Cynthia appears...
I'm pretty excited about getting to write the beginning of the new story tomorrow... I've already got so many ideas for it... and the land it's going to focus on isn't one of those you guessed, but it's still one I've ignored for the most part. |
XD I noticed. (You were already there when I posted...but remember, it takes some time to get the breaks between the chapters and any italic words...)
^^ Beginnings of new storys and finals always are easy to write and I mostly finish them in one 'try', as that happened with most of my stories. When that happens, I tend to write three or more pages at once.... Hm...then there's only Hoenn & Sinnoh left, I suppose. Johto had its chapters... Or a land I do not know. XD |
Wow, I finally heard Cynthia's English voice for the first time, and it is absolutely terrible. She's too... nice! Actually that's not it, she sounds too immature. Her voice needs to be deeper, sounding more like the 25-or-so year-old she is. I'll make sure to block that out when thinking of her... I usually imagine her with a voice like Lorelei/Prima. Compare that to Sabrina's English voice, which was perfect.
Oh, yes, and it's one of those two, Sinnoh or Hoenn. I'll have some fun with some gym leaders who I haven't touched yet. |
I just heard Cynthia's English voice for the first time, too (*kisses youtube*), and I have to say it's better then the German one. XD (Tells you a lot about the German one, eh?) Of course, my interpretation of Cynthia is perfectly nailed there, because I think of her having a light, young and nice voice, but remember...Cynthia is one of my favourite characters in the NICE department. I don't like seeing her evil. ><
If I had to choose...Sinnoh. The gym leaders there are cooler. ^^ |
Well, it looks like another day without being able to post the epilogue. Stupid ff.net is really screwed up. I don't know what's wrong with it, but it's about time they get it fixed.
I don't mind her voice sounding nice, the problem is that it's too high. She needs to sound a little more mature, after all, she is the champion, not some random over-energetic trainer. But I don't think there's been anyone who's sounded good on the show since they changed the voice actors a few years back. Meanwhile, the new story is 10 pages in and (hopefully) looking good! |
*sighs* I noticed when I went there. No updates since 21st. (Though there was one story that did get updated on the 22nd, but that could be before the 'crash' or whatever it was).
XD The German vice actors have changed a few times now (only the main cast with exception of Ash kept their voices), but I have to say I don't care much about the voices. Maybe you're right, maybe Cynthia should sound more mature, but then again, watch her personality in the anime...the ice cream scene should tell you everything. 5 pages for chapter 3 now and 2 1/2 are with Cynthia&Lucian. 0=) |
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Sabrina having a baby isn't as good as it seems... I mean, it's great for her, but not so easy for me because I have to take that into account every time I write about her. Unless of course Will takes care of the baby... |
XD This is what I expected, so I mentioned it especially for you. I hope you'll like my Cynthia &Lucian, as they're quite different from your two...
*ggg* Well, theoretically, no more adventures for her, eh? Or they always split up, one taking care of the baby, the other doing the work. Or they get a babysitter all the time *cough Liza cough*. Or, easiest way...her parents. ^^ |
Oh, yeah, I forgot about Sabrina's parents... somehow they disappeared from the picture after the wedding. She may have missed out on the last fight vs. Cynthia but there's no way she'll miss out on the... oops, don't want to give too much away.
Just wondering, is Cynthia in control of this relationship as well? You know how much I love writing relationships where the girl's in charge (Sabrina, Giselle, Cynthia...) |
LOL I asked (somewhere in one of my neverending reviews) if her parents know that they'll become grandparents, but since you didn't answer, I supposed you forgot about them as well (I forgot about them until I thought- wait, parents-grandparents!!!).
Not to mention that I asked about Will's family, too, somewhere... *raises eyebrow* Misses what? Hm... Hm, I'm really not sure how to tell you without spoilering anything.... In chapter three, it's Cynthia who has control of the relationship, but Lucian is not a man to be ordered around. Sorry, can't say much more. ^^;;;;; |
What Sabrina misses she probably wish she would, that's as far as I'll go.
And since you can't see the final chapter, I will give this away... it includes this year's Pokemon League tournament. You know how I've had these massive tournaments with 64 trainers, and Giselle always winning? Well, here's this year's... http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/IndigoLeague2009Part1.jpg http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/IndigoLeague2009Part2.jpg So now you can try to guess who ends up winning... and why some certain people aren't even in it! |
...will wish she missed out? ....argh, now I wish the title of the next part would be The two Towers
Let's see...first surprise there...Will's there!!! --> must have won at least one set of badges--> possible that he beat his own wife! XD!!!!! Second surprise....Sabrina's not there! Was she p*ssed about always losing against Silver? Or was it Roxy testing out her new teeth on her mother's pokeballs? Third....well, no surprise there. No Lucian & Cynthia. D'oh. She's still in prison. Is she? PLEASE TELL ME SHE IS!!!! Another surprise? Hm, well, Tate's there, but that's no surprise. ^^;;;;; |
I've sort of decided on a timeline to my stories, where all of that occurred somewhere in summer of 2008, and then the tournament and much of the epilogue takes place in 2009. It's not particularly right, because it comes out to Sabrina being pregnant for less than a year, but I screwed up somewhere along the line and either I'd have to retcon something, or I have to accept it the way it is.
So you can probably guess what's going on with Lucian and Cynthia in the epilogue, from their absence from the tournament. That's not to say anything about Return of... I mean, the next story, where the key words are "liberty" and "freedom." And for that matter, "Celadon police stupidity," but that's another matter... |
Summer 2008= well, let's say, June/July. +nine months= February/March 2009 ^.^ (funny for me, because I randomly decided that her birthday would be March 1st. XD)
Return of the Queen, we know it by now. XD If you don't randomly deicde to change it too Fellowship of the Pokering last second.... *groans* May I scream *NOOOOOOO!!!* now? Or something like *?!)="=!?=")=!?=!!!?"@@ßß POLICE*..... And liberty and freedom? Freedom from neverending monarchy (paired with Giselle's ideas about it), I guess... |
Oh, it's nine months that a pregnancy lasts? Oh, okay. See, I don't know these things. I may know all these awesome little things like Erika being in charge of the gym leaders of Kanto, but I don't know anything about pregnancy. So that works out perfectly! After all, the third story (The Elite Eight) finished shortly after Sabrina's birthday in May, and then this story came right after it.
No, the freedom is for two people who may or may not deserve it. The question I have for you is: is there any way Cynthia could ever be redeemed as a character in my story? She's killed quite a few people, plus ordered Cyrus to kill many more... is there anything she could ever do to make up for it? Not that she's going to turn good anytime soon, of course. |
LOL Okay, no comment there. 0=) We pokefreaks are our own kind, knowing nothing about real life.
Though, I did write about it, too.... .... I hope I know who you mean, but that doesn't mean that I have to approve it. XD Cynthia redeemed? One part of me that sees her kicking Sabrina screams: Never!!! The other part, the one that likes Cynthia as a character wishes for her to find some way to get a better reputation...she's a champion, after all. And she once helped Sabrina. *nods to herself* Turning good would probably be way too ooc for her by now. XD |
Okay, I'm glad to hear your opinion on it. You hold more sway in what happens in my stories than anyone else, you know...
We can only hope that Cynthia doesn't get a second chance to attack Sabrina, right? |
No problem. ^^ I like to help if I can.
And talking about swaying....my plot likes to change like a Ditto, too....*glares at sequel* >>;;; Yeah, we have to hope. But only one of us knows, hm? |
If I talk any more, then both of us will know. So far, I've written 12 pages of the new story, which should sum up a long Chapter 1. Don't worry, there's some time with Sabrina in there, though mainly the one land that I've forgotten about up until now. Too bad you'll have to keep on waiting to see it thanks to these ff.net problems.
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Aw, come on, we were just talking so nicely....(and really, any other topic we can discuss? XD)
I don't know how long my third chapter will be...probably again five pages...like I said, a week maybe, so maybe next sunday. Yeah, I was just talking to Zammy about them, too...no logging in, either, he says. ...Zammy? o,o I should convince him to post here, too. |
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