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Shiro-Cynthia flashbacks--> possible ways for me to re-interpret this in yuri ways. Hehehe...
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....heheh, didn't know that. XD Originally, I wanted to say Shirona, but then, a certain someone would have used my trademark cry again, so I changed it in the middle. Didn't know that it would turn out so funnily. XD
...she did. >> No, Sabrina will not like this very much. Niehter will she like being awaked and immideately be killed by Cynthia because now certain queen knows that she's still alive. Will is, for once, dumb. Very dumb. Argh. >< Lossing his wife over a simple kiss that didn't really need to be mentioned. >.< |
Well, he's not just letting her out over that, he's letting her out because he misses her. He's gone three months without seeing her. And besides, maybe he can hide the kiss from her long enough that it won't be a problem...
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I know, I know, but he will miss her even more if Cynthia kills Sabrina just because her FRIGGIN STUPID HUSBAND let her out just to see her again when it was their WHOLE FRIGGIN plan to let her stay in as long as danger, aka Cynthia, is out there. >>
Yeah, he hides it from her for two minutes, then Cynthia comes in and kills her. Problem solved. >> |
Hey, you're acting like the writer is incompetent here... relax, I've got it all under control.
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No, no, no, not the writer is incompetent, the character is! XD It's kinda stupid f Will to do this, that's what I mean. It has nothign to do with your writing, since writer =/= character. =3 (Though sometimes I wish I were Will...you know why...0=) )
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So basically you plan on blaming Sabrina's imminent death, if there happened to be one, on Will. Makes sense, though I think you'd have to blame the writer first. I'll post that chapter sometime when I'm on my computer.
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Well, yes, I would blame it on Will and Cynthia, but that one is obvious, there's no one else who would/could kill her that easily..
Thing is....characters do stuff that authors don't approve. At least that's my philosophy. I got attacked for something one of my characters did (opening a grave and stealing something from it) by a reader and that's when I formed this rule for myself. My characters do things I would never do, either because these thigns digust me, I don't approve them, I don't want to break rules, I'm too shy, or heck, just because I don't want to. I'm not my characters and they can do whatever they want (kinda). So that's why I blame Will, and not you. ^.^ |
Okay, I'm glad you won't blame me. It is my fault that Cynthia is evil, though, that's something that no one thought of before me. But you're right, my characters a lot of times do things that I would never do.
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XD Of course not, why should I blame yo---wait, does that mean that Sabrina *will* be killed? Oo Okay, in that case, I might get a bit angry at you...XD!
...or they do things you would like to do? 0=) |
Sorry, I can't find the pictures of those Sabrina cosplayers.
Do you want me to post the new chapter today? I think I have it ready if you want to see it. |
Ah, no problem, I will find some Sabrina cosplayers one day. Or rather, some more cosplayers, as I have already found a few on deviantart. But, so far, only there. >> (And weird other internet sources I cannot name, because they lack a name. o,o)
...why do you even ask me if I want to see the new chapter? XD Isn't my answer kind of obvious? |
Okay, it's up now, maybe you've seen it by now.
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I guess some part of the review will have to come here...*mutters something quietly about a certain husband she still believes to be completely stupid*
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Other part in the other fanclub. =3 |
So Sabrina survives, and actually it did not even cross my mind, the thought of her dying, through this whole chapter. I began to miss her, which is why I had Will take her out of the ball. Maybe this will keep me from thinking of killing her off in the future...
Sabrina will always bow to Cynthia and her family. Also, I couldn't bear to see Sabrina and Will break up, so I quickly had Liza come in and straighten things out. She can be helpful at times, like this one. |
...o,o it didn't even cross your mind?! WTF?!?!? And all this time, I have been worrying about Sabrina. >>
Okay, if missing her keeps you from killing her, then let Will force her into that ball a few more times. XD! Every chapter that Cynthia tries to kill her in, best. =3 No, she won't always bow to them. 0=) I couldn't have beared to see this, too (heck why they quickly got together in my fic, too- plus, it gives you the chance to write amazing cuddle and fluffy scenes 0=) ), so that's why I patted Liza this time. She's not as bratty as she seems to be...at least today. XD |
She's probably not going back in that ball for the rest of the story... and I almost gave away something about the next chapter here, because I forgot it wasn't up yet.
Yes, she will! We got some fluffy scenes as well as an argument, so I'd say it was a pretty good chapter for the development of their marriage. |
Hm, so her not going back is a important plot thing? Hopefully, not her death... Meh, I rather guess the ball gets destroyed or something. That would at least by the best solution for me, no danger of dying for sweet Sabrina. 0=)
No, she won't. XD Well, I would have spend a few chapters on this development, knowing my tendency to write ten sentences where one would be enough, but I won't complain about fluffy scenes and marriage development. *g* There's no way to tell which way's better. ^^ |
What makes you think Sabrina's going to get her way against Cynthia and stop bowing to her? Cynthia's going to be around a long time...
Yes, but if there were a few chapters of the argument, it would slow down the plot, and it would possibly be a really bad argument that wouldn't be so easy to recover from. So I like the way it turned out better. |
(Before I post anything, just let me say that school killed me, I got a nasty headache AND I feel ill. x.x If you want a review for any soon-to-be-posted chapter or something, don't expect it any sooner than Tuesday. x.x)
Well, first, Cynthia won't be around forever and second, who says that Sabrina will get her way against her? Heheh, drama, baby, drama! (No one will recognise this....>>). I love playing with people's love, and I love seing it being played with. Well, at least as long as I know that they will end up together again. ^.~ It usually ends up with even more romantic, fluffy scenes, just like it happened in your fic (and in mine). |
Didn't Cynthia become immortal? Or are you going to do something to break her immortality?
It's always nice for a little fluff. Sometimes, though, I have to move on to other parts of the plot. And I guess I'll wait until Tuesday to post the next chapter of my fic. |
Yes, she did become immortal, but will she be immortal forever? Or is immortal simply a synonym for forever young? Is this even a hint? You'll have to wait until I friggin finish Spring's Revenge and start The Golden Prince.
Meh, I wish I could read the chapter to cheer me up, yet, I can understand that you want the review directly after the chapter. I'm so sorry that I feel too ill to write one right now, but even if I tried, it wouldn't be such a good review. On the topic side...well, the hottest new topic right now is OF COURSE HG/SS. Any idea on the 'new' Sabrina there? =3 |
Hopefully Sabrina has dark green hair and looks like her anime self. Then hopefully she's one of the strongest people in Kanto - I remember that she was one of the first Kanto gym leaders to go down in Gold/Silver, because you arrive at Saffron sooner. And what if, *gasp*, we get some background information on her life? Even just a couple sentences, a small hint? It would be epic.
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