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The Kanto/Sevii League
Here is my first comic on PC. enjoy. More come later. Special Comics do effect the storyline and should be viewed by readers.
PLease review if you read. Season 1- Starting the Adventures Comic 1:http://*.com/f21028.png Comic 2:http://*.com/f210cg.png Comic 3: http://*.com/f210d5.png Comic 4: http://*.com/f210ex.png Comic 5: http://*.com/f210g3.png Comic 6: http://*.com/f2j5g2.png Comic 7:http://*.com/f21lvk.png Special Comic 1:http://*.com/f21lw6.png Comic 8:http://*.com/f21lwi.png Comic 9:http://*.com/f2kegx.png Comic 10: http://*.com/f2kewp.png Comic 11: http://*.com/f2kf1y.png Comic 12: http://*.com/f2myv5.png Comic 13: http://*.com/f2ngb9.png Comic 14: http://*.com/f2piti.png Comic 15: http://*.com/f3awr4.png Comic 16: http://*.com/f3b3x4.png Comic 17: http://*.com/f3c5t3.png Comic 18: http://*.com/f3c7kh.png Season 2- New Friends and New Rivals Comic 19: http://*.com/f3cp34.png Comic 20: http://*.com/f3dgnp.png Comic 21: http://*.com/f3dyu0.png Comic 22: http://*.com/f3eveh.png Comic 23: http://*.com/f3fksj.png Comic 24: http://*.com/f4jr76.png Comic 25: http://*.com/f4jpqg.png Comic 26: http://*.com/f4jr4k.png Comic 27: http://*.com/f4kzkp.png Comic 28: http://*.com/f9r42r.png Comic 29: http://*.com/f9r477.png Comic 30: http://*.com/f9r49i.png Comic 31: http://*.com/fcqoae.png Comic 32: http://*.com/furq6u.png Comic 33: http://*.com/huqfs6.png Comic 34: http://*.com/ifzm8p.png NEW!!!Comic 35: http://*.com/jgl3ww.png -------------------------------- Trainer Cards: (Note: Can contain spoilers!) Mac: http://*.com/i50x6v.png Allana: http://*.com/f3gdna.png Felix: http://*.com/f3fkm8.png ----------------------------- Credits: Avatar VGmaps.com SPriters Resource Coronis Pokesho Fusionboy Seth who gave me Skunx!! Beco Neopolis3 ----------------------------- Wanna be in the comic? No open spots at the moment... |
I enjoyed them except they're too big... You you resize them or something?
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Really good and Coolmaster is right, its too big.
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I like the size and it gives me more room to put bigger speech bubbles.
THanks for the comments. |
I also have no problem with the size. I like this comic and it has great potential. The only flaws I see are the cussing and the trainer sprites. The Traienr sprite could be done a little bit better, but I still like them, and also, try to tone down on the s-h-i-t and f-u-c-k. I also learned that cussing isn't that attractive in a comic. an occasionally d-a-m-n or h-e-l-l is alright, but not the biggies, so just tone that down. overall, it is an awesome comic. 9/10
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Yeah i better cut down but i like the idea of H-E-L-L.
hehe. BTw which trainer sprites do you mean? The sprites or the overworld? Cause i know they ain't very good. EDIT: Fresh of the press's is Comic's 9,10 and 11. Read my first post. EDIT 2: Woo! 4 stars! Thanks guys Edit 3: Come on guys reply!!! Comic 12 is up. more to come. |
Yah nice comic I give it an 8/10 and trust me I've read over 100 comics it's a good grade lol.
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Yay. A good grade! That's good enough.
EDIT: Comic 13 is in. Go on! Read it! |
*raises hand*, when are you going to resize them?
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Look leave the size as is it's fine, trust me if the size is the only problem in this comic then that’s good thing.
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Like i said before. I don't intend to resize them. I've seen a lot of big comics and no one complains about them.
Maybe if i ever make another comic i'll have smaller squares. End of discussion. |
Hey,cool comic can i join?heres my spirte sheet:
My Spirte Sheet,DAH! |
Your in. You'll appear when i can put u in. Maybe a rival or something. unless u say otherwise.
Any pokemon request? |
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How about a Gym Leader of Water? If u want to part of the main cast you'd have to give me walking sprites.
New comic guys: http://*.com/f2piti.png |
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Here are the other options for you Rayquaza:
1. Elite 4 of Dragon 2. Guy who is out to catch all dragon/legendary pokemon alive in Kanto. 3. Guy that pops up to fight every now and then. 4. One of the Elementalis. |
{2. Guy who is out to catch all dragon/legendary pokemon alive in Kanto.)PLz,and thank u!And Toddile!WEEEEEEEEE!
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The comics are pretty good. I can't wait to see the next!
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Next one (Or 5) up tommorow. until then. wait.
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can i be a gym leader if i can can i be the last one and il be the water gym leader
name:KT (sprite sheet in attachment) pokemon:kygore lvl49 ,feraligatr lvl41,shadpedo lvl35 |
Thanks for the offer but my water gym is my 2nd gym the gang will go to.
EDIT: Comic 15 is up. And 16. And 17 and 18. Season 1 has ended. EDiT 2: Comic 19 is up. Season 2 has begun. Comic's 21 and 22 to come. 20 is up. |
woot! My char will be coming in soon, his name is Leon just so everyone knows, he is basically me, anyhow hope you guys like him. Go Mattthegreat, you’re doing great.
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really good eppys Mattthegreat
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