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Munashii October 29th, 2005 1:06 AM

Oh,I'm kinda nervous about this, but I'll try. Here's a story my friends and I made up a few monthes ago. I hope the stories don't have to be pokemon or anything:


There was once a young boy who always liked to listen to radio. He would stay up all night and listen. One night, when he had the radio on, everything suddenly went silent. He fixed the reception, but it was still silent. His hopes rose again when he heard a dot, but then he a heard a voice from it, saying, "I shall come to you and suck out your soul in four days!"

The next night, he had a Jazz channel unlike the country channel he had been watching the last night, hoping he had only heard things the last night. But at the middle of the night, 12:00 AM, he heard, "I shall come to you and suck out your soul in three days!"

Now he was scared. The next night, he listened to the classical music channel, hoping there would be no inturruption. But soon he heard, "I shall come to you and suck out your soul in two days!"

The next night, he asked if he could sleep in a different place, but still have the radio. In the middle of the night, he suddenly heard, "In one more day I shall suck out your soul!"

The next day, when he came back from home, a terrible storm struck. His family went to refuge, and when they came back, their home was gone. They took all day to find a friend who would house them.

The next night, there was no radio, and the little boy was happy, until the middle of the Halloween night, when a shadowy man appeared next to him. The man said, "I was delayed, but tonight, it is time for me to suck out your soul!"


Opinions?

Dragon-Chan October 29th, 2005 1:00 PM

A small village huddled on the edge of a swamp. Every day, the men would go into the swamp and cut peat, but when the sun began to disappear below the horizon, they'd quickly leave, for it was said that strange creatures came out in the swamp at night. Everyone in the village was afraid of them except for a young man named Tom. On his way home from work, he'd shout to his friends and point, "There's one!" And they'd all jump and run away, and Tom would laugh. His friends were getting sick of his jokes, though, so one day they challenged him, "If these monsters are so fake, then why don't you go into the swamp at night?"
"Sure I will," said Tom. "Then i'll prove that there's nothing to be afraid of."
The next night, Tom took his lantern and went into the swamp with a few men following slowly behind. For a while, nothing happened, and Tom's lantern bobbed up and down and he hummed. When they reached the end of the boardwalk that led into the swamp, a sudden gust of wind blew out Tom's lantern and the moon went behind the clouds. A blood-chilling moan sounded throughout the swamp. When the moon came back, they could see that Tom was leaning against a tree, arms up as if fighting an invisible something off. The clouds covered the moon again and the men shivered. Then the moon came out, and Tom was leaning and trying not to fall into the bog. Coming up from the murk, there was what looked like a rotting, moldy hand with a fast grip on Tom's wrist. Then with one final wrench, whatever had hold of Tom jerked him into the muck. That's what the men said. Then the clouds blotted out the moon again, and that was it for the men. They scrambled back out, tripping and falling into the bog numerous times and at last they made it back. They told the village elders what had happened. They just shook their heads.
"Poor old Tom," said one. "He let his pride get the better of him."

About a week later, Tom's wife came crying and wailing from the swamp. She asked several men to follow her and they did.
At the end of the boardwalk, Tom sat against a tree, pointing with one hand at something only he could see and groaning and gibbering as if he'd lost his mind. Where his other hand should have been, there was nothing but a ragged stump oozing blood. The hand had been ripped clean off.

That's my UNscary story. D=

Dogboy2709 October 29th, 2005 3:21 PM

Okay, it’s my first time writing a story, but I will give it my best try.

Once Upon a dark and cloudy Halloween night there was a boy who had to Rake the leaves as a job. When all of a sudden, a toy Airplane with a Ghostly Green Aura Around it flew over the boys house. The Airplane crash landed nose first in his back yard. Then The Ghostly Aura then transferred to his house. “Oh well,” the boy said “Probably just a hoax, or a crazy dream.”
However, it was no hoax or crazy dream, it was real. “I need a Break from that imagination take over” said the boy, still thinking it was a Hoax that he could also prove. Then he went to watch some TV. When he pressed the power button, he saw the ghostly green aura again. He tried pressing the power button again, but that did not work! He tried to break it, but that did not work ether! “NOTHING WORKS!” he said!
The ghost energy started to spread to the other objects in the house such as computers, pencils, CDs, shirts, pants, and beds. They all came alive and evil. The boy was scared so much that that he died of fear. Now, the ghosts haunt his body to this very day. The only way the ghosts and the boys’ spirit can rest peacefully now is for someone to get the toy Airplane out of the backyard, and insert it into a pumpkin INSIDE the house.
Over the centuries, people try to seal the ghosts. However, everybody who goes in to his yard has never come back!
Some people say that the people who go inside are now dead and the sprits haunt them now, others say that then ran so far and so fast that they died running. Most people say that the ghosts have a prison in that house and they lock the people in that prison. No one knows for sure, but only one thing is certain…..NO ONE HAS EVER CAME OUT!

so how do you think it is?

Cybex Mewtwo October 29th, 2005 3:39 PM

Halloween. A time for celebrations. A time for candy and fun....but it is also a time for fright. Jon was afraid of this day for many reasons. Ghosts were one of em. He had a fear since he was a child. It all started when he and his family bought a house cheaply from a realter. He always saw one particular ghost of a little boy. He would always do the same thing. Hhe'd walk up to his bedroom door, knock 3 times, then vanish. He could never figure it out. And it always happened on Midnight November 1st. It seemed odd, but it never hit him as to why it always happened. He put it off.

Today was October 30th. The day before Halloween. Some called it simply the day before Halloween. For Jon, it was doomsday. But this year, he was determined to find the reason behind his haunting. Forget trick or treating, this was more important. He spent the day preparing himself for Halloweens end, and it was the night he would never forget.

Halloween. The day of Reckoning. He sat in his room awaiting his visitor. He turned to his clock. 3 p.m. He still had a while before she arrived. So he decided to nap. In his dreams all he saw were flames. Burning and searing flames. He awoke in a stupor and looked at his clock. 6 pm. Still a quarter of the day left. He laid back down. This time, he drempt of an explosion. Something so powerful it tore through him like tissue paper. This time he awoke shivering. He walked to his heater, plugged it in, and turned it on. He looked at his clock. 9 p.m. still 3 hours until she arived. So, he laid back down. This time, his dream was that of sadness. A man was consoling a woman in front of a burned builing. A fireman walked to her and handed her an article of clothing and whispered something to her. When he woke up, he looked at his clock. It was 11:55. Five minutes before she did anything. He sat there and waited patiently. Time seemed to slow down. He looked back at the clock. 11:58. He soon grew bored, and went downstairs to get a drink. Then, he heard the same knocking. He ran back to his room, and saw the same little boy who was just in his dreams. Was it a sign? He watched him. He knocked 3 times, but this time he turned and looked at Jon. His icy white eyes pierced him. He glided over and Jon ran away. He ran outside and hid by a large oak tree. Then his room exploded in a firey inferno. He looked at a watch he had in his pocket. It read 12:00. Midnight.

A day later he was looking at the remains of his house. His mother was in tears and his father was shaking his head in disbelief. But Jon was still lost upon the woman. He asked some of the neighbors. Th elderly couple who lived 5 houses down told him of a family. There was a mother father and son. One night she walked to his room and knocked a few times to wake him up. They always went to the front yard and fired a few sparklers to celebrate the end of Halloween, but that night he was dead tired and slept. So she went outside to hang wih her husband. The sons room exploded just like it did now. As far as the elderly couple was concerned, the ghost is what saved his life, for on Midnight on the end of Halloween is when it happened, and its the anniversery of the sons death.

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eh. I'm not a storywriter but what the heck right?

Ciro October 29th, 2005 4:38 PM

Heres my story, its a story I heard from a book called twisted tales... but theres a few changes, such as some of the names are changed....

School Games

Chunk looked outside, class was almost over. Sash leaned over to whisper into Chunk's ear "hey Chunk, me and the guys are going to play lone survivor at recess, are you gonna play with us?"

"Sure..." Chunk whispered back to him, the bell rang and everyone rushed out the door. Chunk, Sash, Chris and Kyle ran to the monkey bars, they wanted to get there first so they could play their game, the monkey bars were in the shape of an arch, with sand all around and undernearth it. Sash was the one who came up with the game 'Lone Survivor' to win the game you had to knock off the other players. Sometimes they would put water on the sand to make it into mud, all of them climbed onto the bars.

"Ok, lets start!" Kyle yelled, all four of them started hanging from the bars, Sash nd Chris attacked Kyle, they wrapped their legs around his waist and began pulling on him. After a few rounds Chris made a suggestion

"Lets make the game more interesting, lets say theres a sand demon who wakes up every hundred years to eat. His front half of his body is in the shape of a lizard, he has two long forked tounges and two rows of sharp teeth. His other half is part fish, also he has no legs, he doesn't need legs since he only swims in the sand. Once we fall off the bars we have to cover ourselfs in sand and stay like that for the whole game. Ok let the game begin!" All four of them started to hang off the bars, then Chunk saw it.....

"Guys..." Chunk kept staring at the ground

"What is it Chunk?" Kyle asked

"The sand just moved!"

"Ya right..." Sash said, then he started to slip, he grabbed onto the bars but it was too late, Sash fell to the ground. A huge fish like creature jumped out of the sand, it lunged at Sash, Sash started to scream. The fish opened it's mouth and tore at Sash's face. It dived back into the sand, blood went around Sash's body, he was still screaming, but he had no skin on his face, only raw flesh and his bones. The creature lifted its head out of the sand and bit into Sash's body, it dragged him down, down, down into the sand.

Everyone screamed, the lifted themselfs onto the bars and sat down "ITS REAL!!!" Kyle yelled, he looked at Chris "Did you know it was real!?!?!"

"I-I-I-" Chris was in shock, his best friend just got dragged into the sand and was now inside that creature's mouth or stomach "I didn't kno- know it was re- real..." Chris stared at the blood that was now sinking into the sand.

"We have to get to the grass! Chris you said it yourself! That thing can't walk on land!"

"I'll go first!" Chunk said

"No... I will" Chris lowered himself, he gripped the bars tightly and started to rock back and forth.The creature jumped high into the air, it opened its mouth and closed it....

Chunk and Kyle looked at their friend, his lower half missing. Chris was dead, his hands slipped and he fell onto the sand, the creature pulled him down into the sand.

"Chunk, we have to get to the grass!"

"But how?!?!"

"Chris made it up! He made it real! Now if we can think it away, then we can get to the grass!"

"Are you insane!?!?!"

"Maybe... But do you have any better ideas!!"

"No..." Chunk looked at Kyle "Ok.. I'll try...." Chunk and Kyle closed there eyes and thought about the creature dissappearing. "Is it gone?"

"Only one way to find out..." Kyle and Chunk lowered themsevles down and started swinging. Soon they were flying through the air, both of them landed on the grass "Its gone..." Kyle said

"Ya.. Good thing Chris said it didn't have legs" Chunk and Kyle started walking towards the school. The creature followed them on its new four legs.....

Hope you like my scary story! MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *choke* ack ~.O....

Stewert90210 October 29th, 2005 7:13 PM

I Hope This Screws With Your Mind!
 
I'm making this up on the spot but I've been told I have a twisted mind!!!

Here is a helpful part to tell some of the story. His dad died from drowning in a pool. Timothy would of helped, but he couldn't swim then. His dad was teaching him. "Come on Timothy, we all float in here!" A few minutes later his dad had a heart attack and drowned in the pool. Blood filled the pool and Timothys' father look as he was floating in his own blood.

Hell in the Head
One day a a black Halloween night a 14 year old teenager named Timothy woke up to go to the bathroom. When Timothy went to wash his hands he heard something call his name. "Come to me Timothy, come now, we all float in here, IN HERE IN OUR OWN BLOOD!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!" Timothy suddenly fell to the floor as the sink started overflowing with blood, screaming, Timothys' mom came in the bathroom to see what was wrong.

"Whats happening Timothy?" Timothys' mom said as she came in. "Lo-look i-in th-th-the sin-sin-sin-sin. He couldn't even finish his sentance. Timothys' mom slowly started to the sink. *pheww* There's nothing there Timothy! Oh my God you scared me to death!" But Timothy still saw the blood, it was still coming out. How come his mom couldn't see it? Nobody really knows if that is what he really saw. Later that night he died.

When his mom found him the next morning he was in his bed, floating in his blood. Later in an autopsy, they found out that one of his blood vessels popped in his throat, and filled his lungs with blood, and somehow kept flowing until it came out of his body. In a few hours he was floating in his own blood.

Well what you think? Good, bad, screwed up?

Dark Quill October 30th, 2005 4:20 AM

It was ok.... but I wouldn't say it was good, in a freaky way. My cousin actually died because of something very similar, except it was in his brain.
If you think that'd classify as a scary story, then I'll post it. Just remember that it is true...

Chibi-chan October 30th, 2005 10:28 AM

OOC: This is Pokemon based...sorta ^^ Oi...kinda disturbing o.o BEWARE

"Pori, Kaylie...that Berryblender is haunted...you know that. Let's use the one over there..."

Kaylie, already nervous about using the blender said, "Yeah...I heard that trainers used to actually blend Pokemon eggs in here to make blocks...how horrible..."

Pori gave a snort. "Shut-up Hera. You too, Kaylie. I'm not going over there with that old man. Do you believe EVERYTHING you hear? People just say it's haunted so they can hog it...it's supposed to make the best Pokeblocks ever! ♥"

Hera backed away from the blender and Pori's horrible snarling face. "You two go ahead then. I....I don't want to."

Kaylie looked down. She didn't want to do it, but she didn't want Pori to hate her. Pori just shrugged her shoulders. "Fine then. You be a wuss. Common Kaylie! Let's Berryblender!" And so they did. The results were spectacular, just about the perfect pokeblocks. Hera still felt the whole situation was horrible. By the time Kaylie and Pori were out of berries, they began to head home.
~~~~~~

The time was about 1:13 AM. Hera lay snug under her sheets, fast alseep. There then came a piecing cry coming from her closet. With sudden alertness, Hera woke up, and looked the way of the noise. The lightswitch was too far away to reach. The sound began to move from the darkness of her closet...to the side of her bed. Hera gasped, clinging to her covers. What the hell was going on?! Then, from the side of her bed rose a girl with a distorted face. Her skin pale and her eyes clouded and rolled into the back of her head. Her hair was clotted and tangled in what seemed to be large clumps of blood...and intestines. There seemed to be nothing but a black hole where her mouth should have been that seemed to stretch more than it was supposed to.

The girl grasped onto Hera's sheets, as if she would fall into the pits of Hell if she let go. Her hands...they looked as if something had torn of the flesh, which left stains of blood where ever the girl touched.

"Hera...." the demon wailed, "Why didn't you....why can't you come with me?" The sound was shrilling as Hera felt as if she was going faint anytime now.

"Who are yo-"

"Those Pokemon Hera.....I should have listened...they have done...I can't be forgiven..." With that, the girl gave another piercing screamed and convulsed as she began to disintegrate from the head down, until she was nothing...and the room was silent. Hera's eyes were wide open, as she began to murmur things to herself....
~~~~~~
TOP STORY

Today, Oct 13, a strange occurrence has happened to three girls, all seeming to be connected. Pori Catoris and Kaylie Himming both age fifteen have been reported missing, while Hera Oslot has gone into a state of extreme psychotic paranoia and is now located in Shuppet Mental Hospital. The three were last seen at BerryBlender ID#131313, which supposedly has its own horror stories. The disappearance and sudden hysteria of the situation may seem disturbing, but rest assure, BerryBlender ID#131313 is perfectly harmless.

eX.A.K.R. October 31st, 2005 6:32 AM

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Originally Posted by Chibi-chan
OOC: This is Pokemon based...sorta ^^ Oi...kinda disturbing o.o BEWARE

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I'm liking the way you put that bit of commedy and psychoness in the ending, especially the part about "Shuppet Mental Hospital" (although "Ludicolo Mental Hospital" may be more appropriate :P ).

_Aftermath_ October 31st, 2005 3:29 PM

I'll give this a shot

Story:

Its halloween mourning,the mourning dew sets a disturbing mood through the air.A young male possibly the age of 15 who goes by the name of Joshua has just made his way out of his house and was now walking on the pavement of his drive way,as he looked around himself for his friend that usually occupied him on his way to school,he didnt see him in sight,what he did see was the evil grins of the trees around him,now normally trees cant grin or make any expression but Joshua was a boy easily frightend,his mind would usally play tricks on him like the previous night on hallows eve.As Joshua was making his way over to his bed tail of an unknown being was seen escaping into his closet door,as he hurried to examine what it was,it was gone...

Joshua made his way around Dillard St. where the bus stop was.As his others friends came into view as he rounded the corner he hurried to meet them.They talked and chatted about all the high school gossip and football team,then the subject of Joshua's friend,pryce came into the conversation.

"What do you mean "Missing"?"Joshua asked his friend looking rather scared

"Yep,last night on hallow's eve,just around midnight,or so his parents tell us,hey Josh you live right next to him you sure you havent seen anything during the night or heard a noise?"One of the male friends asked

"N-no.."The thought of the tail exacping into his closet popped into mind and Joshua got firghtened but he didnt know why after all it was just a tail,and his mind was playing tricks on him again right?

The bus rounded the corner and as the teenagers lined up on the edge of the road,the bus opened its doors.The day went on normally for Joshua just usual pranks being pulled and what not,but that was until he came to P.E. class (Physical Education).As he was about open his locker to change from his school clothes to his gym clothes something smelled awful as he came up to his locker.

"Geez Josh did you not take your clothes home and wash them?"One of the P.E. students said laughing

Josh turned his attention back to his locker and opened it,what fell out was disturbing.An index finger with a ring around it fell onto Josh's foot,the finger covered in blood.Before anyone could see it Josh picked it up and hurried to the restroom not wanting to cause a panic among the facilty and sutdents.

"S-senity..?"Josh was reading the enscription on the gold ring,he couldnt really figure out the words until it hit him.This was the name of Pryce's girlfriend,this was the ring she gave him for christmas last year.

Could this m-m-mean...hes been hurt? Josh wondered to himself as he stuffed the finger into his pocket.

The day from that point on was okay,since one of the coaches in his sixth period wanted to talk to Josh about the upcoming football game this weekend,Josh missed the bus ride home.Since the walk wasnt very far he decided to walk home.But Josh wasnt feelings all that up to it,after all he did find his best friends finger in his locker.As he walked down Marrow Dr. he saw dercorations on all the house's all put up to try and frighten the kids that would go trick-or-treating,of course Josh has outgrown this method in halloween.

It was starting to get dark outside and Josh was getting worried,he was lost...He continued to walk and started to see porch lights come on to signal the people that they have candy.The time now was 8:00 p.m. and Josh has left school at 2:50 p.m.,he was getting really worried because now he was walking through a lonley erie dark part of the neighbothood that was only lighted by the holes in the tree tops.

A sound came from behind him and he shot a glance back A-a wolf??Or coyote??,but the noise suddenly departed and Josh was back to the uncomfortable feeling of silence....as he camp upon a road he saw head-lights coming his way he stepped off the street and into the curb as the car came to a slow halt,Josh was nervous..

"Hey kid are you lost?"A man said from the car window

"N-no im alright"Josh replied

"Oh ok then.."The man drove off

Josh continued down the road and something caught his eye,he apporached it and it was a watch,but it wasnt just any watch it was Pryce's watch!It had the initals of Pryce on it.But it was covered in what appeared to be blood!Josh looked closely at it and there was a nail broken in the center of the watch

W-What the hell!?What is this doing all the way out here,and w-...who could of done this to him? Josh was now getting more scared and he started to jog until a new set of headlight fell upon him.He stepped off the road again and onto the cirb as the car came to a slow halt just as the previous one.

"Josh!What are you doing out here in the middle of nowhere!?!"It was his mother

"Mom,thank goodness i was lost and wonded up here"Josh boarded the car

For some reason Josh did not tell his mother about anything that happened today,he did not want to worry her.

They came upon their house and Josh followed his mom into the house,Josh asked his mom if Rex,there dog,was around,and she simply replied that he must be in the backyard.Josh walked to his room and there was a strange odor in the room,he put down his belongings and started to sniff the air for the resource.

His nose fell upon his closet door he was getting real nervous right about now.He opened the door and a leg fell out onto his floor Oh my god!!What the hell is this!? it was bloody and blood stained the floor as well as Josh's foot's,he was petrified now.He simply got into bed,put his covers over his head,and drifted himself to sleep scaed half to death.

Hafl-way through the night as 12:00 am,Josh was awoken by a strange crunching noise.He looked out from under his covers and was trying to find the source of the noise.His eyes fell upon the closet again...

He got up and opened the door,what he saw was terrifying,a gigantic beast that was six feet high.It eyes were glowing red and its teeth was drenched in blood,it was furry all over,an-and it had the same exact tail as the animal he saw the previous night!He looked behind it and saw the head of Pryce in the corner,eyeballs rolled back and covered in blood.Josh edged over to the door and opened it slowly as the beast watched him.

"Re-Rex come here boy!Come here now!"Josh yelled frantically

The huge beast twisted his face in disgust and leveled his head so that it eyes were connected with Josh's it opened it mouth and let out a terrible sound that scared Josh to death,as the beast's mouth opened it tryed to talk

"I...am....Rex"As soon as those words were emitted the beast leaped on Josh tearing his flesh from his skin,and tearing open his chest to reveal his beating heart as the monster ripped it out and devoured it whole.

The rest of the night Josh and his family were devoured and tortured.That concludes this halloween's story who knows what will happen next time.

Dream Illusionist October 31st, 2005 4:58 PM

Well, I'll give it a go...

It was 8 AM. The bright sun was shining high in the sky. Ken was still quiet, sleeping in his bed, under his pokéball adorned sheets. It was Halloween day, the day he hated the most, because it was also the day of his father's death, someone who he had much esteem for...
He could still remember that horrid, putrid day.... that haunted day.

----------------------------------------------------2 YEARS AGO------
This is told as Ken remembers it.
Ken was at Philip (his best friend)'s place with a large group of teenagers their age, for a dreaded Halloween party.
-We should make a spooky treasure hunt!
-No, a masks contest!
-I know -said Philip- why don't we go to the house down the road to spend the night?
-No way! -Ken replied- It's said that its haunted by mysterious creatures!
-Don't go then, you wuss! -Benjamin (The brute fella of the gang)- We don't need chicken to go with us!
-I'm not a wuss, and I'll prove it!-Ken shouted, already up.
So it was decided. They would go to the 1950 Mirabelle Road- The Thgirf's Home. No-one knew what this name meant, the people of this tranquility village only knew that the previous owners of this lot, as all before them, had mysteriously vanished.
Ken, knowing this, was terrified, but he wanted to act strong in front of his comrades, so they entered this spooky place.
They opened the door, as it emitted a large sound of its old, rotten timber cracking. They dispersed through all of the house. All seemed calm until... a scream was heard on the top floor. A scream , belonging to...
-Benjamin!!!
Everyone ran to the top floor. Benjamin was lying down on the floor, pointing to a floating, pale, transparent person, or whatever it was. It had a blank stare. A ghostly figure. Ken and Philip ran as fast as they could to hide. In the end... they heard a quite sonourous scream. They got the courage, and ran to the hallway. There, they saw Benjamin, with a black, shiny tridentstuck in his vest, with mucky red blood dripping all over.
-Benjamin, he's dead...
They, frightened as they could, ran as fast as they could to their places.
Ken, now hiding under his sheets, could still hear screams of pain and terror coming from the house... but now, when he thought he was safe... he heard some crawling sounds by the window. And then, a demon with the black trident this child had seen before, came to try t pierce Ken's flesh. Luckily, his male parent heards such commotion and ran to his room. There, he battled with the unspeakable terrifying demon, ending his life to save his only son. Ken could nt believe it, and swore to never return to that spooky place. The Thgirf Manor, now known to be the Fright Manor.

-------IN THE CURRENT DAYS------------------------------------------

Ken couldn't remember that well the story that happened in the lot, as he was oo frightened at the time, but something he would remember: The astonished face of benjamin, now one of that place's lost soul, and the look on his father's face, who now Ken sees near him at all of Halloween nights... But the Fright house still exists, so might Ken be freed from danger?
Night had fallen, and Ken was by his window again, awaiting his father. Suddenly, a new scream was heard from the house, and...

THE END

My first story, and was made in quite a hurry. I hope you all like it...

Chibi-chan October 31st, 2005 6:29 PM

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Originally Posted by eX.A.K.R.
I'm liking the way you put that bit of commedy and psychoness in the ending, especially the part about "Shuppet Mental Hospital" (although "Ludicolo Mental Hospital" may be more appropriate :P ).

Lol...Ludicolo XP the first thing that came to my mind was Shuppet when I thought of a dark sinister pokemon :\ Meh, I'd rather not change it now...I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^__^ *hopes she wins*

Stewert90210 November 1st, 2005 3:45 PM

Thanks
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Dark Quill
It was ok.... but I wouldn't say it was good, in a freaky way. My cousin actually died because of something very similar, except it was in his brain.
If you think that'd classify as a scary story, then I'll post it. Just remember that it is true...

I tried to make it sound real and nothing like a 300ft giant ripped open the roof and played tittely winks. Do you think i should have made it longer? I did make it up on the spot!

I also heard how that could happen in your brain (sry bout your cousin)


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