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overcoming the journey. A pokemon adventure!
This is my first pokemon adventure comic so bare with me. please crits and coms.
Background: Liam has lived in Hinto all his life. with his mother he resides in the town of ratio. Untill the time comes for him to beguin his quest.. Bios: http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1755/leepic3fq.pngLiam. Despite his pale appearance this obediant active boy is just yurning to be great. But his limited knowlage of pokemon will prove a weak spot in his development as a trainer. http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/5799/frazpic2op.pngfraser. Quite stern and mysteriouse. He is a supposed friend of the professor. he always seems to watch over liam but is by no means an angel. Rumor has it he's an ex team magmar mamber but every one knows for a fact he's a superior battler. Episode1http://img434.imageshack.us/img434/4314/j15db.png Episode2http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3893/j29nz.png Credits: avatar |
It's ok.... but I suggest you introduce EVERYONE....
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Several spelling errors, cliché plot, same boring sprite comic with text under panels. Originality anyone?
Besides that, there is no credit for my sprites, *cough* Either give my credit or remove my sprites from your comic entirely. |
Now that is one thing you people always forget to do!! Give credit to the owner of the sprites.
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sorry i didnt know it was yours. My friend from serebii sent me a random overworld sprites sheet. Come to think of it he has a reputation of steeling sprites sorry. ill give credit.
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2nd comic sucks I can't see it, next time save as a PNG file.
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i saved it right. but image shack found it to big and photobucket and tiny pic resize it and make it blurry.
Fixed it! |
O.k i didn't understand that.
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Still can't see it, (save as a PNG file before putting it on Photobucket/Image Shack/Tinypic
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Me neighther. I can't see it.
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:D leave your mouse over the pick and wait for an icon to appear on the bottom right corner. click it and it resizes and becomes un blurry.
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i dont realy like it but it's your first so it looks ok, i've seen
worse comics than this before |
Looks good, but the hair is too bright.
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thanks yall. ill work on some more episodes
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Cliché plot, tons of grammatical and spelling errors, and text-under-panels. Also, the panels need to be closer together. At least you didn't save as JPEG.
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