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Frazzler November 13th, 2005 4:50 AM

overcoming the journey. A pokemon adventure!
 
This is my first pokemon adventure comic so bare with me. please crits and coms.

Background: Liam has lived in Hinto all his life. with his mother he resides in the town of ratio. Untill the time comes for him to beguin his quest..

Bios:

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1755/leepic3fq.pngLiam.
Despite his pale appearance this obediant active boy is just yurning to be great. But his limited knowlage of pokemon will prove a weak spot in his development as a trainer.

http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/5799/frazpic2op.pngfraser. Quite stern and mysteriouse. He is a supposed friend of the professor. he always seems to watch over liam but is by no means an angel. Rumor has it he's an ex team magmar mamber but every one knows for a fact he's a superior battler.

Episode1http://img434.imageshack.us/img434/4314/j15db.png
Episode2http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3893/j29nz.png
Credits: avatar

Master Ben November 13th, 2005 5:00 AM

It's ok.... but I suggest you introduce EVERYONE....

Avatar November 13th, 2005 5:09 AM

Several spelling errors, cliché plot, same boring sprite comic with text under panels. Originality anyone?

Besides that, there is no credit for my sprites, *cough* Either give my credit or remove my sprites from your comic entirely.

Master Ben November 13th, 2005 5:15 AM

Now that is one thing you people always forget to do!! Give credit to the owner of the sprites.

Frazzler November 13th, 2005 5:17 AM

sorry i didnt know it was yours. My friend from serebii sent me a random overworld sprites sheet. Come to think of it he has a reputation of steeling sprites sorry. ill give credit.

Adam_148 November 13th, 2005 5:17 AM

2nd comic sucks I can't see it, next time save as a PNG file.

Frazzler November 13th, 2005 5:20 AM

i saved it right. but image shack found it to big and photobucket and tiny pic resize it and make it blurry.

Fixed it!

Master Ben November 13th, 2005 5:24 AM

O.k i didn't understand that.

Adam_148 November 13th, 2005 5:27 AM

Still can't see it, (save as a PNG file before putting it on Photobucket/Image Shack/Tinypic

Master Ben November 13th, 2005 5:37 AM

Me neighther. I can't see it.

Frazzler November 13th, 2005 5:37 AM

:D leave your mouse over the pick and wait for an icon to appear on the bottom right corner. click it and it resizes and becomes un blurry.

Recknin November 13th, 2005 7:13 AM

i dont realy like it but it's your first so it looks ok, i've seen
worse comics than this before

jc_rcw November 13th, 2005 9:18 AM

Looks good, but the hair is too bright.

Frazzler November 13th, 2005 9:44 AM

thanks yall. ill work on some more episodes

Dragon-Chan November 13th, 2005 9:58 AM

Cliché plot, tons of grammatical and spelling errors, and text-under-panels. Also, the panels need to be closer together. At least you didn't save as JPEG.


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