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heres a comic that i made while i was banned its about an organisation that
wants to take over the world and use it as they want to plus the ANF the American national force wants to stop them,cointains extream violance and language,rated PG 13 credits to BadassBill and stivy_McDemic from the spriters resource and Wolf for the motorbike Theme 1.What The... 2.whos the american bada$$ 3.pikachus are pikachus 4.whos the boss5.Bush gets angry6.night of the fight7.look it the gangsta's8.VIvA NEW YORK9.Live or die10.its a gun http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/nwod.jpg http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/nwo.jpg |
Um its wierd i give it a 3/10
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yeah its kinda weird at the start
coz it the 1st 2 |
I wouldn't say it's good... like #~Dragon~Master~ said 3/10 keep it up though
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Man, those are really weird o.o 2/10
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coz it's a comic that's got nothing to do with pokemon some people are obsesed with pokemon comics |
Not really o.o
The thing is that including real life pics well... is... weird... (for me o.o) Edit: Including such a really foul language, this should be for just Older than 14 o.0 |
yeah the language is a bit high
so people if you're not confortable with naughty words plz dont watch it |
this is rubbish it doesn't even deserve a 1/10 theres nothing funny or decent.. its crap kay.
the RL pics don't work and the plot doesn't make sense... |
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spam yours |
Err... you must not lose control, if he says that, then try to make it better, not to lose control just for that.
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thats not spamming learn to take critisim dude... use it to improve ¬¬;
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saying that a comic is rubish and crap will help
i could say the same thing about yours,u did'nt even tell me what to improve on hen |
try and cut down on the swearing up the age rating take out the real life pictures. use overworld sprites for the pokemon and MAKE IT MAKE SENSE
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fine i'l reduce the swearing a bit,i was out of internet so i could'nt
get a pikachu overworld,i'l take out the real live pictures later coz some of my comics alredy has them,and IT DOES MAKE SENSE its just the first's eppies |
These are so so ruby. I like that Goerge W. Bush sprite...LOL! Now the real life pics are so-so, but this would be great if you can make some Sadam Huseein sprites.
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yeah i'm still working on some sprites
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I think this is your revenge for being banned! It has too many bad words in it! 0/10.
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to Entertain you people do you think i would bother to do them if it was for revenge,and plz dont view it u'r only 10 |
the third one keeps on cusin' why the heck did you make it cus
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what do you mean??
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It Keeps On Cusin' Doya Know What Cus Means Or Are You Dumb?!!!
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no i dont now what cus mean am not
fe texas |
The third one is ok but use a icon not a huge sprite..5/10 your improing
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ma net was out i could'nt find
a pikachu overworld |
Hrm... I think I'll throw in my two cents.
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As for the comic, I truly don't like the first 2. The last one's OK, but man, work on your grammar. Really. =( *Post above was crit, not SPAM or flamming* |
CUS MEANS WHEN YOU SAY STUFF LIKE F... AND A.. AND ALSO P... AND ALSO S... YOU GET IT?! I said lots of bad words they were examples.
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yeah well i'l reduce the swearing a bit
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pikachurandomnumber, cussing is known as swearing in England, which is where he lives.
Quite frankly I dislike the crude humour, sprite quility isn't excellent, nor is your grammar. |
got an update Blair makes an aperance
at this one U spelled GRAMMER wrong |
another eppy this one bush fights with a monkey
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got to update this one is the best so far
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Some funny cursing there Ruby-Adams, um can I use the Gorge W. Bush sprites and the saddam sprites as well?
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yeah sure you can use them,i think i might add the mafia later on
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There's a lot of cursing... O.o
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new eppi kay,it's the politicians v the gangsta's
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the banner is finally compleat U like IT
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You're double and triple posting stop please. Oh and I give you a 1/10.(Even though I'm 9 I still give it that becase IT SWEARS)!
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Yeah, I'll just repeat what I said in another thread, Please try not to double post, ok? :) If you want to let anyone know of any kind of update you've made, but the last post in the thread was by you, simply delete the post and repost it, that way you can inform people of any updates without having to double post :)
Well, keep at it with your comic! ;) |
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And this comic is beginning to make less and less sense to me.... And maybe you should stop writing in all capitals and check your spelling. v.v And it doesn't look like you toned down the cursing much at all. And congrats on becoming a mod, Signomi ^.^ |
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you view you comment you post i think i create i update you got that? |
Okay all we got to chill...well the swearing is okay, the comics are okay, no need to fight now ^__^, keep, it up, can't wait to see what George Bush will do next...LOL.
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not obssesed with onlly pokemon comics |
for someone who is used to watch south park and movies like team america I'm fine with the swearing, I specially liked the monkey and the eddie guerrero ones XD
PS: I didn't know we were allowed to use cursing on our comics but apparently we are :o (not that I'll use it in excess when I start mine) |
lol the monkey one was suposed to be a special,i also wanted
to add Eddie guerrero coz he was a quality wrestler |
sorry for double posting but
i've got an update |
Try to wait until someone post, don't double post
Whoa, more foul language o.o this hurts x.x |
¬¬; meh...thanks for atleast posting here
anyway new comik tomorow |
Lol, once again another good comic with the swearing...I wanna know what happen with Saddam...
BTW will you put in Bin Laden as well in your comic? |
saddam is dead he got his head choped of lol
bin laden will make an apearance later on |
New banner you like it?? and
new comik tomorow |
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speaking to you |
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Anywho, it's not like I don't like the swearing, it's fine with me. Just it seems alittle much for a Pokemon forum. O.O It's actually going out a bit better now, but it's not that the crits are obsessed with only pokemon comics, just that this one needs improvement. o.O |
Well the only problems with the comic are he real life pics and the spelling, all in mayus?
And Recknin, many people told you: DO NOT DOUBLE POST >_> |
how rude I don't like where this is going I'm 9 and if you don't want me to exsist THEN I WON'T BE HERE FOR A MONTH!(oh and I don't know what grammar means).
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He didn't say he doesn't want you to excist, just he forgot you even posted. Calm down. o.O And please, for the sake of your comic, work on your spelling. |
sorry I'm in 4th grade I don't know to spell that way I'll try to calm down I'm a little better I'm going to enter the spelling bee so I'll try to work on it.
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I'm actually getting interested in this comic... |
yeah well am not realy good at spelling and pikachu592
no one is telling you to leave nuff said,new comik |
OMG forgot to uptadate *updates*
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you should not double post, we had told you that many times >>
WTF?? A mew is the owner of a shop??? xD |
lol its a special mew,new eppie tomorow
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