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Recknin December 2nd, 2005 5:01 AM

nWo
 
heres a comic that i made while i was banned its about an organisation that
wants to take over the world and use it as they want to plus the ANF the
American national force wants to stop them,cointains extream violance and
language,rated PG 13
credits to BadassBill and stivy_McDemic from the
spriters resource and Wolf for the motorbike
Theme

1.What The...
2.whos the american bada$$
3.pikachus are pikachus
4.whos the boss5.Bush gets angry6.night of the fight7.look it the gangsta's8.VIvA NEW YORK9.Live or die10.its a gun
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/nwod.jpg


http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/nwo.jpg

Flaming Quilava December 2nd, 2005 5:33 AM

Um its wierd i give it a 3/10

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 5:37 AM

yeah its kinda weird at the start
coz it the 1st 2

adwajr December 2nd, 2005 8:14 AM

I wouldn't say it's good... like #~Dragon~Master~ said 3/10 keep it up though

Roy-Kun December 2nd, 2005 9:21 AM

Man, those are really weird o.o 2/10

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 9:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Red-Kun
Man, those are really weird o.o 2/10

got an update..hu whats this one doing it's realy weird
coz it's a comic that's got nothing to do with pokemon
some people are obsesed with pokemon comics

Roy-Kun December 2nd, 2005 10:22 AM

Not really o.o

The thing is that including real life pics well... is... weird... (for me o.o)

Edit: Including such a really foul language, this should be for just Older than 14 o.0

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 10:37 AM

yeah the language is a bit high
so people if you're not confortable
with naughty words plz dont watch
it

Esupio December 2nd, 2005 10:38 AM

this is rubbish it doesn't even deserve a 1/10 theres nothing funny or decent.. its crap kay.

the RL pics don't work and the plot doesn't make sense...

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 10:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blazin Espio
this is rubbish it doesn't even deserve a 1/10 theres nothing funny or decent.. its crap kay.

the RL pics don't work and the plot doesn't make sense...

F***k you kay and stopp spaming my thread or else i'l
spam yours

Roy-Kun December 2nd, 2005 11:04 AM

Err... you must not lose control, if he says that, then try to make it better, not to lose control just for that.

Esupio December 2nd, 2005 11:22 AM

thats not spamming learn to take critisim dude... use it to improve ¬¬;

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 11:32 AM

saying that a comic is rubish and crap will help
i could say the same thing about yours,u did'nt
even tell me what to improve on hen

Esupio December 2nd, 2005 11:35 AM

try and cut down on the swearing up the age rating take out the real life pictures. use overworld sprites for the pokemon and MAKE IT MAKE SENSE

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 11:47 AM

fine i'l reduce the swearing a bit,i was out of internet so i could'nt
get a pikachu overworld,i'l take out the real live pictures later coz some
of my comics alredy has them,and IT DOES MAKE SENSE its just the
first's eppies

Karasuma December 2nd, 2005 1:36 PM

These are so so ruby. I like that Goerge W. Bush sprite...LOL! Now the real life pics are so-so, but this would be great if you can make some Sadam Huseein sprites.

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 4:46 PM

yeah i'm still working on some sprites

~Amethyst_Callista_Moon~ December 2nd, 2005 4:55 PM

I think this is your revenge for being banned! It has too many bad words in it! 0/10.

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 5:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~Amethyst_Callista_Moon~
I think this is your revenge for being banned! It has too many bad words in it! 0/10.

how can it be my revenge for being banned,i just did a comic
to Entertain you people do you think i would bother to do
them if it was for revenge,and plz dont view it u'r only 10

pikachu592 December 2nd, 2005 5:32 PM

the third one keeps on cusin' why the heck did you make it cus

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 5:35 PM

what do you mean??

pikachu592 December 2nd, 2005 6:03 PM

It Keeps On Cusin' Doya Know What Cus Means Or Are You Dumb?!!!

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 6:09 PM

no i dont now what cus mean am not
fe texas

Flaming Quilava December 2nd, 2005 6:13 PM

The third one is ok but use a icon not a huge sprite..5/10 your improing

Recknin December 2nd, 2005 6:21 PM

ma net was out i could'nt find
a pikachu overworld

Draginis December 2nd, 2005 6:34 PM

Hrm... I think I'll throw in my two cents.
Firt off,
Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruby-adams
F***k you kay and stopp spaming my thread or else i'l
spam yours

Temper temper. You don't wanna get banned again, do you? Like Blazin Espio said, that wasn't SPAM, it was criticism. Which I think you better start reflecting on instead of flamming the critic. And even if it was SPAM (Which it wasn't) you don't SPAM back.

Secondly,
Quote:

Originally Posted by pikachu592
It Keeps On Cusin' Doya Know What Cus Means Or Are You Dumb?!!!

Uncalled for. And kinda SPAMMY.

As for the comic, I truly don't like the first 2. The last one's OK, but man, work on your grammar. Really. =(
*Post above was crit, not SPAM or flamming*

pikachu592 December 2nd, 2005 6:47 PM

CUS MEANS WHEN YOU SAY STUFF LIKE F... AND A.. AND ALSO P... AND ALSO S... YOU GET IT?! I said lots of bad words they were examples.

Recknin December 3rd, 2005 5:43 AM

yeah well i'l reduce the swearing a bit

Foxâ™  December 3rd, 2005 9:09 AM

pikachurandomnumber, cussing is known as swearing in England, which is where he lives.

Quite frankly I dislike the crude humour, sprite quility isn't excellent, nor is your grammar.

Recknin December 3rd, 2005 10:49 AM

got an update Blair makes an aperance
at this one
U spelled GRAMMER wrong

Recknin December 4th, 2005 9:28 AM

another eppy this one bush fights with a monkey

Recknin December 5th, 2005 1:31 PM

got to update this one is the best so far

Karasuma December 5th, 2005 1:32 PM

Some funny cursing there Ruby-Adams, um can I use the Gorge W. Bush sprites and the saddam sprites as well?

Recknin December 5th, 2005 1:50 PM

yeah sure you can use them,i think i might add the mafia later on

Karasu December 6th, 2005 11:29 AM

There's a lot of cursing... O.o

Roy-Kun December 6th, 2005 11:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shadow Scizor
There's a lot of cursing... O.o

Well in fact that there is a lot of cursing, man this would be rated "R" because too many cursing, it sounds like South Park to me o.o

Recknin December 6th, 2005 3:49 PM

new eppi kay,it's the politicians v the gangsta's

Recknin December 7th, 2005 3:35 PM

the banner is finally compleat U like IT

pikachu592 December 7th, 2005 8:00 PM

You're double and triple posting stop please. Oh and I give you a 1/10.(Even though I'm 9 I still give it that becase IT SWEARS)!

Signomi December 7th, 2005 11:59 PM

Yeah, I'll just repeat what I said in another thread, Please try not to double post, ok? :) If you want to let anyone know of any kind of update you've made, but the last post in the thread was by you, simply delete the post and repost it, that way you can inform people of any updates without having to double post :)

Well, keep at it with your comic! ;)

Draginis December 8th, 2005 12:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruby-adams
got an update Blair makes an aperance
at this one
U spelled GRAMMER wrong

Actually no. It's spelled "grammar"
And this comic is beginning to make less and less sense to me.... And maybe you should stop writing in all capitals and check your spelling. v.v
And it doesn't look like you toned down the cursing much at all.
And congrats on becoming a mod, Signomi ^.^

Recknin December 8th, 2005 9:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pikachu592
You're double and triple posting stop please. Oh and I give you a 1/10.(Even though I'm 9 I still give it that becase IT SWEARS)!

for some people that did'nt get this
you view
you comment
you post
i think
i create
i update you got that?

Karasuma December 8th, 2005 9:28 AM

Okay all we got to chill...well the swearing is okay, the comics are okay, no need to fight now ^__^, keep, it up, can't wait to see what George Bush will do next...LOL.

Recknin December 8th, 2005 10:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MysticTrunks
Okay all we got to chill...well the swearing is okay, the comics are okay, no need to fight now ^__^, keep, it up, can't wait to see what George Bush will do next...LOL.

atleast someone knows what a good comic is, and
not obssesed with onlly pokemon comics

[_DarkDragon_] December 8th, 2005 1:04 PM

for someone who is used to watch south park and movies like team america I'm fine with the swearing, I specially liked the monkey and the eddie guerrero ones XD

PS: I didn't know we were allowed to use cursing on our comics but apparently we are :o (not that I'll use it in excess when I start mine)

Recknin December 8th, 2005 2:29 PM

lol the monkey one was suposed to be a special,i also wanted
to add Eddie guerrero coz he was a quality wrestler

Recknin December 9th, 2005 2:21 PM

sorry for double posting but
i've got an update

Roy-Kun December 9th, 2005 2:38 PM

Try to wait until someone post, don't double post

Whoa, more foul language o.o this hurts x.x

Recknin December 9th, 2005 4:34 PM

¬¬; meh...thanks for atleast posting here
anyway new comik tomorow

Karasuma December 9th, 2005 4:37 PM

Lol, once again another good comic with the swearing...I wanna know what happen with Saddam...

BTW will you put in Bin Laden as well in your comic?

Recknin December 9th, 2005 5:49 PM

saddam is dead he got his head choped of lol
bin laden will make an apearance later on

Recknin December 10th, 2005 4:09 PM

New banner you like it?? and
new comik tomorow

pikachu592 December 10th, 2005 4:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruby-adams
atleast someone knows what a good comic is, and
not obssesed with onlly pokemon comics

are you acussing me of what I say then don't speak to me if you want to be that way stop that attitude now or you're going to end up being banned.

Recknin December 10th, 2005 4:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pikachu592
are you acussing me of what I say then don't speak to me if you want to be that way stop that attitude now or you're going to end up being banned.

¬¬; dude i did'nt even rember you existed and i was'nt
speaking to you

Draginis December 10th, 2005 4:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pikachu592
are you acussing me of what I say then don't speak to me if you want to be that way stop that attitude now or you're going to end up being banned.

Well... With the horrible grammar that was pretty much gibberish. And if you want him to stop speaking to you,(which he clearly wasn't) why'd you post? O_o
Anywho, it's not like I don't like the swearing, it's fine with me. Just it seems alittle much for a Pokemon forum. O.O
It's actually going out a bit better now, but it's not that the crits are obsessed with only pokemon comics, just that this one needs improvement. o.O

Roy-Kun December 10th, 2005 6:09 PM

Well the only problems with the comic are he real life pics and the spelling, all in mayus?

And Recknin, many people told you: DO NOT DOUBLE POST >_>

pikachu592 December 10th, 2005 7:07 PM

how rude I don't like where this is going I'm 9 and if you don't want me to exsist THEN I WON'T BE HERE FOR A MONTH!(oh and I don't know what grammar means).

Draginis December 10th, 2005 7:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pikachu592
how rude I don't like where this is going I'm 9 and if you don't want me to exsist THEN I WON'T BE HERE FOR A MONTH!(oh and I don't know what grammar means).

Well, if you're only nine it'd be best for you to stay out of this topic.
He didn't say he doesn't want you to excist, just he forgot you even posted.
Calm down. o.O
And please, for the sake of your comic, work on your spelling.

pikachu592 December 10th, 2005 8:11 PM

sorry I'm in 4th grade I don't know to spell that way I'll try to calm down I'm a little better I'm going to enter the spelling bee so I'll try to work on it.

Draginis December 10th, 2005 8:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pikachu592
sorry I'm in 4th grade I don't know to spell that way I'll try to calm down I'm a little better I'm going to enter the spelling bee so I'll try to work on it.

Ok, good. ^^ We can stop going off-topic now. And I wasn't saying for you to work on your spelling, I was saying for Recknin to so his comic looked better.
I'm actually getting interested in this comic...

Recknin December 11th, 2005 2:20 PM

yeah well am not realy good at spelling and pikachu592
no one is telling you to leave nuff said,new comik

Recknin December 16th, 2005 3:49 PM

OMG forgot to uptadate *updates*

Roy-Kun December 16th, 2005 4:09 PM

you should not double post, we had told you that many times >>

WTF?? A mew is the owner of a shop??? xD

Recknin December 16th, 2005 4:58 PM

lol its a special mew,new eppie tomorow


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