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nWo
heres a comic that i made while i was banned its about an organisation that
wants to take over the world and use it as they want to plus the ANF the American national force wants to stop them,cointains extream violance and language,rated PG 13 credits to BadassBill and stivy_McDemic from the spriters resource and Wolf for the motorbike Theme 1.What The... 2.whos the american bada$$ 3.pikachus are pikachus 4.whos the boss5.Bush gets angry6.night of the fight7.look it the gangsta's8.VIvA NEW YORK9.Live or die10.its a gun http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/nwod.jpg http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/nwo.jpg |
Um its wierd i give it a 3/10
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yeah its kinda weird at the start
coz it the 1st 2 |
I wouldn't say it's good... like #~Dragon~Master~ said 3/10 keep it up though
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Man, those are really weird o.o 2/10
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coz it's a comic that's got nothing to do with pokemon some people are obsesed with pokemon comics |
Not really o.o
The thing is that including real life pics well... is... weird... (for me o.o) Edit: Including such a really foul language, this should be for just Older than 14 o.0 |
yeah the language is a bit high
so people if you're not confortable with naughty words plz dont watch it |
this is rubbish it doesn't even deserve a 1/10 theres nothing funny or decent.. its crap kay.
the RL pics don't work and the plot doesn't make sense... |
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spam yours |
Err... you must not lose control, if he says that, then try to make it better, not to lose control just for that.
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thats not spamming learn to take critisim dude... use it to improve ¬¬;
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saying that a comic is rubish and crap will help
i could say the same thing about yours,u did'nt even tell me what to improve on hen |
try and cut down on the swearing up the age rating take out the real life pictures. use overworld sprites for the pokemon and MAKE IT MAKE SENSE
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fine i'l reduce the swearing a bit,i was out of internet so i could'nt
get a pikachu overworld,i'l take out the real live pictures later coz some of my comics alredy has them,and IT DOES MAKE SENSE its just the first's eppies |
These are so so ruby. I like that Goerge W. Bush sprite...LOL! Now the real life pics are so-so, but this would be great if you can make some Sadam Huseein sprites.
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yeah i'm still working on some sprites
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I think this is your revenge for being banned! It has too many bad words in it! 0/10.
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to Entertain you people do you think i would bother to do them if it was for revenge,and plz dont view it u'r only 10 |
the third one keeps on cusin' why the heck did you make it cus
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what do you mean??
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It Keeps On Cusin' Doya Know What Cus Means Or Are You Dumb?!!!
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no i dont now what cus mean am not
fe texas |
The third one is ok but use a icon not a huge sprite..5/10 your improing
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ma net was out i could'nt find
a pikachu overworld |
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