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Pokemon: Unknown Mysteries
Welcome everyone to my new comic... and hopefully my best yet
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/617/pokemonunknownmysteriestitle9p.png Story A young girl named Tara starts her journey form pallet town, not knowing the many mysteries of her past and the dangers out there. She is joined by her somewhat rival Shylocke. They face many battles during their journey so stay tuned to see what happens Characters To be displayed Comics Season 1: Back to Work [1] [2] [3][4][S1][6] [7] [8] [8p2][9] Pokemon: Clash Of The Swords (Movie 1) http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/3010/pokemonmovie1title0ho.png http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/4526/characterlist5hz.png Intro [1][2][3][4] Season Two: A New Life New Layout Intro [1][2] Credits: Layout: Mattthegreat Jessie and James sprites: Pokecommunity Manga page Tara sprites: Signomi Mystictrunks sprites: Mystic trunks Pokeball scene: Adwajr Pokeballs: Dark Dragon Rei Sprites: Crystal Lilly Breeze William Sprites: Adwajr Pixel Art: Signomi Overworld's: Avatar If you would like to be in the comic please use this form Name: Age: sprites: Info: Season One Finished Season Two Apps accepted |
This is boring, grammar mistakes, word bubbles can be very confusing, this is definately not funny, Jessie and James overworlds look bad, you didn't give credit to who made the Jessie and James trainer sprites, ages for Jessie and James don't seem right, and a journey comic is cliched. A 3/10 is your grade.
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He also didn't give credit to Signomi for the Tara Trainer Sprite -o-
4/10 Work on storyline, grammar, speach placement and other things... |
I'll join.
Name:Psychic Age:11 Sprites:http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b355/Suicune_Trainer/349nt.png Info:She is a Psychic Trainer. Her pokemon is Pichu. |
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hey man tell me where you got those jessy and james sprites they look better than the ones I use.
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I'll join.
Name: Serenity Aura (Rei is what she's called) Age: 14 Birthtown: Lilycove City, Hoenn Current Home City: Saffron City, Kanto (But is known to wander and not stay in her house for long) Status: Psychic Trainer Info (psychic powers): Her powers are a bit unstable, known to blow a fuse box every now and then. So the only thing that is safe for her to do is lift any thing that weighs about seven pounds or less and to make a pretty light show of purples. So her powers are the same as every other run-of-the-mill psychic. The only thing that she does different from every other psychic is that she does not gloat or say that they forsee something but they don't. Pokemon: Espeon (Lea, Female) Kirlia (Faye, Female) [Those pokemon are the only ones that I like and would appreciate if included into her team. You can use their basic stages in the begining of the comic, and I wouldn't care if you gave her more pokemon. Just please use those. Plus, Eevee was her starting pokemon.] Sprites: http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/8056/blackwearerrei0jd.png Other: I'll tell you once, Rei is not a cheery person, nor is she a goth. She's a normal person with average emotions, but keeps rather quiet. |
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Guess I'll join as well:
http://x11.putfile.com/11/30717193467.png My only pokemon: http://x12.putfile.com/12/33616020841.png Venustoise |
I like the layout...hehe.
Overall I think it is okay. A bit confusing but still okay. Jesse and James look good. Keep it up. Dont forget to put credits to whoever helped you with maps or anything. (Spriters Resoucre, Vgmaps etc). And just for fun I'll join: Name: Ollie Anderson Age: 14 sprites: http://*.com/i50qj5.png Info: Ollie was bron and raised in Lavender Town and after he recieved his starter he started off on a journey to Pallet Town... Pokemon: Phanpy, Abra |
ok yes sorry everyone for the credits and stuff but i had to get ready for a party so i will put the credits up for them now. And MT do you mean the trainer sprites or the OW sprites.
EDIT: Latias Fan i am really sorry but i cant really use one standing sprite it will be a bit difficult sorry if you get some more please come back. and CLB can you get the sprites in a lighter background because when i get rid of the black background everything goes with it. EDIT2: Dont worry CLB i have them using the psychic ones lol |
Nisama~ Merely click on CLB's link and press Print Screen, then Paste onto Paint. That would save you trouble with the Black Background~
Well, this comic looks nice. Though there are a few typos about, but I suppose we all make mistakes, even I do, but it would be preferable to make sure that once you finish an ep. that you revise through the text within it to see if there is no typos~ Rating? Nah, too early in the comic, though you have left us off with wanting more~ Keep it up Nisama, can't wait for the next ^^~ |
il join bro!
Name:KT Age:10 sprites:http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/5774/kt3xq8ge.gif Info:KT is 10 but that doesn't mean he's weak so best not to get on his nerves or he soak u with water with his kyogre Pokemon:quilava and kyogre |
ok welcome bro and thank you niichan yes i will revise it but i had to et ready last night so i posted it so you could read it
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Well whatever floats your boat~
But remember, try not to rush any episodes, even if you feel you're under pressure, take your time. Quality work comes out of spending enough time on it, otherwise when rushed, you'll find that the eppy won't really be up to your standard~ |
thank you niichan... can i just ask how old is Jessie and james? i'm really confused lol sorry. I am checking over the comic now
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Late teens I suppose, judging by what I've been reading on Fansites~
I don't know their exact age though~ |
so 17 18 would be good their teens.... ok thanx niichan
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I can't say much about this comic, but the grammar could use some work and the speech bubbles should have better order, I think... I also think you should make your own cast, but that's just my opinion... But what bugs actualy bugs me is, that you let someone with a legendary pokemon join the comic -.- Well, keep at it anyway ^_^
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ok you have made a good point rival man... KT can i make it so you catch Kyogre later on in the story
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Oh... I didn't know that transparent background automatically changes to a color background... I have it right here with a blue background... http://img492.imageshack.us/img492/7772/blackwearerrei19fj.png |
thank you CLB i will get to work now
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hang on i'll put them up in a sec
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oh! can I put 2 people in (poke'mon)? My cariter is Blaze:
Name:Blaze + Brisk Age: Lv.49 + Lv.27 sprites: Blaze:http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/emespr/emespr255.png http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/rsicons.html ~the Torchic Icon in this link. Brisk: http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/emespr/emespr200.png http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/rsicons.html ~ Misdreavus Icon in this link Info: Blaze: always jolly and happy, but in battle lets just say he's a little ruff...MALE Brisk: Modest mostly only battles if Blaze is with her.FEMALE |
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I posted my sprites so that people could use them for their fan projects (be it games, comics, or anything else) NOT so that I could get them stolen. You of all people I do not want to hear that from. |
Hey hey hey dont start arguing in my thread!!!
mystic trunks here are the sprites give credit to the Pokecommunity Manga thread... thats where i go them from??? http://img277.imageshack.us/img277/2512/trjames3sx.png http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5268/trjessie5mr.png |
okay, this is the most very time where there is a blade of quiet...*waits*
oh, by the way, avatar, if someone steals your sprites, Contact someone quick. http://img277.imageshack.us/img277/2512/trjames3sx.png http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5268/trjessie5mr.png these are very interseting. Are these used in firered and leafgreen? |
no... they should be lol it's from the manga thread which has sprites of everyone from the film
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2. Are u talking to me or Squall? 3. I dont remeber claiming it as my own. Just the idea of the character. 4. If u want me to give credit: 'THanks to Avatar for suppling me with the materials I used for my character.' |
breaking News
comic 2 Is Up |
comic three is up now so get reading ;)
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Lol~ I like how Tara got angry there, Nisama!~
Keep up the good work ^^ And don't double post please ^^; If you want to update your comic but you were the last one to post in the thread, simple delete your post and repost again saying that you've made another update~ Anyway, keep it up! ^^ |
ooops ok thank you niichan and yes i will do that next time...
I am going to be open for suggestions for the comic if anyone wants to give any... |
Yo Squall your comics keeps getting better, I can't wait till you present MT.
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yh umm about that... i jave changed his overworlds to make him look like a pokemon over world... is that ok?
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lol ok and thank you for the comment... any suggestions?
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Ehrmm don't know...But you got talent, I'll rate you one you make five comics^^
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It's is a good comic, you're getting better at making them. It's a might bit early to rate, I'll have to see like 5-10 comics before I do that... (^_^;; I think you forgot to give me credit for giving you my sprites, but that's okay.)
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ok everyone and CLB i'll put the credits up now ^^ just starting work on comic 4
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I like the updates. It was a small battle though. ****it. I like long battles.
I like too see my character more. But i still love it. keep going. |
dont worry he's appearing alot more now
COMIC 4 IS UP |
hey nice comic there Shylock, the way MT is commanding the others..so Lol, well, keep up the good work.
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thanks MT.... more news.... COMIC 5 IS UP AND READY TO ROLL!
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Name: Adam & Holly
Age:12 sprites:http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a220/adam148/Mynewspritesheetsaga2.png Info:As twins these guys know an awful lot about pokemon, they're from the future and they have powers, but they don't like to use them in public... The guy at the bottom is Adam when he and Mew go into shadow mode, hyper mode, (psychic shinanigans). |
welcome in adamski thats a good description
Comic 6 is up Adam i put down that you and holly were 10 because i forgot... is that ok? |
Good ep dude, and you did a good job on the venustoise sprite, its so cool.
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thanks mt... it only took a minute to make lol... but yh the fued is definetly startin.
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Lol, how dare they call MT a purple hair kid..nice one there..
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thank you thank you *bows* wow theres a lotta people in here
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Thats because is getting popular..I wish mine was this popular...Lol
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it should be.... you got a lot more pages than me
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You haven't improved one bit. The word bubbles make it confusing, some of the sprites suck, funny... never, effects suck, black eyed peas joke... been done, grammar mistakes, that night background sucked, also some of these episodes can be rather confusing. You haven't improved, you've actually gotten worse, 2/10.
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well if i've gotten worse... thats the same grade you gave me last time and if you odnt like it why are you reading it?
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Cause I'd like to see if you ever improve, and plus the last time I graded your comic you only had one. So I decided to read the new episodes and grade it again.
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ok then... If anyone really wants me to improve that bad please post your suggestions for storylines and what i need to do to make the comic better.
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This comic is a little wierd to start out with. The biggining is kinda rushed. you should work on the night background. ill give it a 6/10:D.Try to improve.
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thanks dragon... how does everyone do the night background?
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Whell im finding this very interesting but i can visit as much now coz my computer time has been a bit short
also do u want a better wes sprite coz ive got one if u need one |
Well I can show it to you...and I will give you a link...uif you want to make it dark.
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so's mine lol...so i log off for a bit to make the comics and then come back to post them.
EDIT: Yes thank you Rock Lee that would be great EDIT2: Comic 7 is up |
what has happend to me?did I die?
o yeah u know how i get kygore can i catch it out side seafoam island (the place where artacuio) |
yup sure ya can KT... no he's not dead i'm just working on that actually;)
Edit:UPDATE: COMIC 8 IS NOW UP GO AND CHECK THE FIRST PAGE |
Name: DC
Age: 10 sprites: http://www.jhgghyu.com/images/overworldofme1.PNG(thanks, TDT) http://www.jhgghyu.com/images/rubycharizardsheet.PNG Info: A ruby Charizard in the form of a human, she used to be XD but got purified somehow. She's hotheaded, smart and clumsy, and she prefers human form to her own so as not to draw attention. As for her Pokémon, she uses every kind of fully evolved Dragon-type, Charizards and Milotics. |
welcome dragon chan I will put you in when I start the next one.
~Shylocke~ |
Can't wait for the new eppy!
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It will take a few days. BEcaus ei have to rip the maps from Elite map and then make the comic it's self with the non-transparent speech bubbles. So it's quite difficult but I will do it in a few days.
~Shylocke~ |
Hey if you want another good site for maps I can PM it to you, this comic is getting interesting.
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thanks Rock Lee yes that would great.
~Shylocke~ |
Sorry to double post but there is Chapter 8 being put up right now...
and you can't close this because it ahsn't been over a month... just sayin |
Well just on time Shylocke. You've could've told me so that I can revive it..
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ok and now I am not using speech bubbles anymore because there is so much talking and not enough space so I am putting speech at the bottom. The Key for each characters colour is at the top.
Comic 8 Part 2 is up |
For some reason, it won't let me see it. Its very tiny. Can you fix it?
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ok comic 9 is up. Comic 8 part 2 is playing up so when I can get it up I will. I am going to make a movie soon So if you have any other sprites you want in it... Fill this out
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whell i like the new part so is wes gonna catch the pikachu or snt he?
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Ahh we'll see later in the movie ^_^ I am putting the intro to the Movie up now enjoy
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I'm liking the new movie intro shylocke, keep it up.
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thankies ^_^ I am going to get to work on the next bit in a bout 20 mins... after my dinner XD toodles
Part One of the comic is up. |
20 minutes eh whell hopfully you can get it done toaday
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Name: Ultimate Latios
Age:Unknown Sprites:http://*.com/mc6539.png Info: Ultimate Latios Is Latios From Other Dimension. He Is Very Brave And Smart, And If Someone Attacks His Friends, He Is Not Afraid To Use His Devasta Ray Attack. |
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ok am putting part two up in a min... umm OL... I'll put you in but it might not be until season two as the movie has already started and I'm not quite sure where to put him but if i find a place he'll be in there.
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This is turning like a sword fight.
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yeah Soul Calibur is a ps2 game with swords and weapons... so what I'm gunna do is have i like that ^_^ oh and the battle screen is like Final Fantasy.
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I got another character you can put in the comic!
http://img24.exs.cx/img24/1504/sunflora_azumarill_fusion01.gif Her name is Sunflorazumarill. She can use any attack that either Sunflora or Azumarill can know. She also has the power to split into a regular Sunflora and Azumarill; like this: http://www.pokeschool.com/videogames/rubysapphire/sprites/337.gifhttp://www.pokeschool.com/videogames/rubysapphire/sprites/056.gif You should have a comic where she does that. http://*.com/bhzhwp.png And here's her overworld and backsprites. Oh and if necessary, she'll wait until season two. |
ok thankie's Sunflorazumarril You'll be in season two If I can't fit you in here, which i probably wont be able to because this movie is using swords and that.
Movie Parts 3 and 4 are up A new title for season two is up and a little speech for the new layout with a survey inside... go and check. |
cool, i like this series.
but how did you make it look like night time? |
I used Paint Sho Pro. And I just lowered the brightness. hehe.
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no fair i havet said anything in ages any reson why?
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eep sorry bro I will make you see something in the next one ok ^_^ I think I'll make him the main character in the next part.
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When Will Ultimate Latios Appear? ^^
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soon ^_^ very soon OL In fact when my little bro finishes his homework I will start making it.
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I noticed you're using quite alot of sprites that are based on mine, and I'd appreciate it if you gave credit.
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Didn't I do that!? Ooops so sory I'll do it right now!
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lol don't worry about that cos I have used some LAtios sprites from Pokesho and recoloured them.
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