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Flaming Quilava December 8th, 2005 6:32 PM

Pokemon Hoenn XDA
 
Hey heres my comic! I hope you like it! btw this is my first comic. I hope you have a fun time reading it!
~Rules~
1. Dont spam.
2.Follow the main rules.

There are 8 opened spots on this comic! If you have any ideas pm me!

Ok and here are the eposodes. I will fix the grammer in the first one later. Plz rate it!

Intruduction:http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Polt.png

Sesion 1:The biggining

Comic1 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/X_Comic_X_1.png
Comic2 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA.png
Comic3 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA3.png
Comic4 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA4.png
Comic5 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA5.png
Comic6 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA6.png
Comic7 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA7.png
Comic8 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA8.png
Comic9 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA9.png
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Bois
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Charecter.png
Name: Philip Speed
Genger:Male
Age:12-13
Hometown: A private island
Nature:Brave
Bio: Philip is a kid who would give up being inside somewhere for a chance to go outside. He went on a journey to get some fresh air and adventure.
Trainer Card: http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/TCXD1.png
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Charecter2.png
Name: David Casprin
Genger:Male
Age:13
Hometown:Littleroot town
Nature: Timed
Bio: David was born in a rich family. He went on a journey to prove to his family that he doesnt need money to be sucsesful kid.
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Cradits:
Rad hair guy:kenada morspeed.
Island place {biggining}:[ DarkDragon ]
Most of the overworlds: Avatar
Template for tc's: Bhreg
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Kaneda Morspeed December 8th, 2005 6:36 PM

Umm... Did I say you could use my Overworld in that way? NO! I demand an explanation, and that you take out those episodes, or at least find another Overworld.

Flaming Quilava December 8th, 2005 6:38 PM

I said if i can change the name and occupation tho

Kaneda Morspeed December 8th, 2005 6:41 PM

No, I meant that you change the name from that back to the original.

Flaming Quilava December 9th, 2005 5:23 AM

Nah i rather get a new overworld.

Signomi December 9th, 2005 7:58 AM

Please remember to give credit to people you borrow any kind of sprite from, otherwise it's considered stealing. Some spriters would prefer it if you PM them for their permission to use their sprites in your comic, in which I'd recommend doing. Always give credit to the spriters whom you borrow their sprites from. Remember that before you use a sprite from somewhere else in the future~ :)

Also, kindly please give credit to Avatar for most of those overworld sprites, as he was the person who made them~ :)

Well, keep at it with your comic! ;)

Roy-Kun December 9th, 2005 10:26 AM

Where's the credit for the sprites? o.o

Also, i don't understand the history, try adding a plot, then Bios, that would make it understand.

Flaming Quilava December 9th, 2005 12:12 PM

O i added the credit. Ill add the plot later. Where do i get the pictures for bois O.O?

Edit: Done with the plot.

Matt Silver December 10th, 2005 4:15 PM

I like this comic a bit. The battles are ok and the panels are good sized.
There is a lot of spelling mistakes which I HATE!
But all in all keep at it. Just.

Flaming Quilava December 10th, 2005 5:12 PM

Thanks matt. And i know that i misspell alot. Im trying not to do that anymore.:D

Shijuukara December 10th, 2005 5:23 PM

Ok, its a good comic but you need to work on it a bit.

1. I can barely understand what's going on. Its kind of rushing
2. A lot of spelling and grammar errors
3. Where the plot of the story
4. Where are the bios and introducing the characters
5. Try to put each screen closer together and then crop it.
6. If you are going to use speech bubbles you need to work on them a bit try using a box at the bottom just until you can make better Speech Bubbles.

I'm sure this'll be a great comic if yuo can tidy it up more a bit.

Flaming Quilava December 10th, 2005 5:28 PM

I put the plot in the biggining. The "intruduction" Also thanks for the suggestions!

Flaming Quilava December 10th, 2005 7:15 PM

Woot Update comic 4 is up!!

Matt Silver December 11th, 2005 3:46 PM

Yeah the new comic is kinda rushing ahead and there are too many panels. Keep going thoguh.

Flaming Quilava December 12th, 2005 9:05 AM

O ok i made this one with less panels. Comic 5 is up!!
EDIT: Comic 6 is up!!!

Karasu December 12th, 2005 12:01 PM

The comic's ok, but there's alot of spelling errors and you should try to do battle scenes like in the games.

Flaming Quilava December 12th, 2005 1:56 PM

Ok i will update soon!!!!:D :D :D :D :D

Matt Silver December 12th, 2005 2:04 PM

Season is spelt wrong. Anyway, nice, shorter update.

Flaming Quilava December 12th, 2005 6:03 PM

Woot Update!! Comic 7 is up!! Ill update the bio for david later.
Edit: Bois added!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Flaming Quilava December 16th, 2005 1:32 PM

Woot comic 8 is up!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Post your suggetions!!!!!!!!!!!!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D

StarryLatiasGirl December 16th, 2005 1:45 PM

The link doesn't work...

~Ho-Roudon

Flaming Quilava December 16th, 2005 1:57 PM

What do you mean it does..... I checked even...:\

Matt Silver December 16th, 2005 2:11 PM

It does for me.
Nice of you to correct some spelling mistakes but in your character Bios:

Timed is Timid right?
ANd jurney is spelt Journey.
Just though id correct ya!

Flaming Quilava December 16th, 2005 2:18 PM

Ya im been trying to make less speeling mistakes on my comics.:D
O and i fixed the bios.:D

Flaming Quilava December 16th, 2005 5:22 PM

Update: comic 9 is up!!!!
Update2: Phillips card is up!!!

Post your suggetions!!!!!!:D :D :D :D :D


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