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[-~Crystal-Aurora~-] December 16th, 2005 1:34 PM

*New* Teh Adventures Of Randomness. Emu.
 
Hey everyone, I'm here with my First Comic...

Teh Adventures Of Randomness!

Update Every new Episode as soon as i've made. it's Supposed to be a Comic O_o dunno if it will be funny or not but at some parts it's Serious and Humerous.

Chapter 1 :

Episode One
Episode Two (Link Now Works.)

Bios

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/9474/bios4no.png

Sorry About the Overworlds looking nothing like the Characters, i'm not good at overworlds.

[-~Crystal-Aurora~-] December 16th, 2005 1:57 PM

2cnd Episode : Stupid Prof Oak!

Roy-Kun December 16th, 2005 3:17 PM

Two things:

First, i can't see the 2nd comic

Second: Do not double post!

I won't rate it yet because it doesn't haves a plot, and doesn't haves enough comics for a rating.

Flaming Quilava December 16th, 2005 3:28 PM

A few things that your missing:Bios,Plot.Also cant see the and comic2

[-~Crystal-Aurora~-] December 17th, 2005 3:28 AM

I've updated with BIOS and working link, Plot Coming.

Signomi December 17th, 2005 3:30 AM

Also, care to give credit to Coronis for the Trainer sprites? :)

Spectrum December 17th, 2005 3:34 AM

Lacks humour. :\ And the first one's too repetitive.

[-~Crystal-Aurora~-] December 17th, 2005 3:45 AM

O sorry, i forgot to give Credit. and Episode three is coming up.

.Socks December 17th, 2005 7:29 AM

I thought it was pretty good. I'm working on mine too...
You people are so persnikitty! lol

Recknin December 17th, 2005 11:20 AM

the comic is funny keep it up

Allstories December 17th, 2005 11:27 AM

The comic does not make any bloody sense.

Draginis December 17th, 2005 11:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Airashii
Lacks humour. :\ And the first one's too repetitive.

Agreed completely o_O
Also that the text doesn't fit in the speech bubbles. ¬¬*It's too early to rate though.

jambo January 2nd, 2006 12:16 PM

Still early days...
calls for improvement:
>Plot
>lack of charecters
overall
>Graphics- 9/10
>Humor-8/10
>charecter Bios 6/10
Total 23/30 = 7/10 = 70%
Keep it going! (dont be like me)


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