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*New* Teh Adventures Of Randomness. Emu.
Hey everyone, I'm here with my First Comic...
Teh Adventures Of Randomness! Update Every new Episode as soon as i've made. it's Supposed to be a Comic O_o dunno if it will be funny or not but at some parts it's Serious and Humerous. Chapter 1 : Episode One Episode Two (Link Now Works.) Bios http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/9474/bios4no.png Sorry About the Overworlds looking nothing like the Characters, i'm not good at overworlds. |
2cnd Episode : Stupid Prof Oak!
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Two things:
First, i can't see the 2nd comic Second: Do not double post! I won't rate it yet because it doesn't haves a plot, and doesn't haves enough comics for a rating. |
A few things that your missing:Bios,Plot.Also cant see the and comic2
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I've updated with BIOS and working link, Plot Coming.
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Also, care to give credit to Coronis for the Trainer sprites? :)
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Lacks humour. :\ And the first one's too repetitive.
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O sorry, i forgot to give Credit. and Episode three is coming up.
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I thought it was pretty good. I'm working on mine too...
You people are so persnikitty! lol |
the comic is funny keep it up
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The comic does not make any bloody sense.
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Quote:
Also that the text doesn't fit in the speech bubbles. ¬¬*It's too early to rate though. |
Still early days...
calls for improvement: >Plot >lack of charecters overall >Graphics- 9/10 >Humor-8/10 >charecter Bios 6/10 Total 23/30 = 7/10 = 70% Keep it going! (dont be like me) |
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